Hey Shonali...
Really, you are one Rumpelstiltskin with the ability to spin gold from the hay of the current track. (Let's forget for a moment he was an ugly man, I was talking about the power only...)
Really...this is too good!
Now coming to part one, bitter and painful, like the darkest hours of night. But some times the purest of gold is extracted by melting on high flames right? This was needed...much much needed, for their bond to find its steely end result.
I hate Sujata, she's just eating his head! No idea how a mother can be so blind towards a child's happiness. Maybe...there are certain types of mothers, who have less brain and too little of heart. Anyways, let's leave her at that.
I love Uttara, the sweet sister-in-law conversation, is too good. This was more of what I want her to be...she is disappointing me day by day in the serial, no wonder when she would match up to my expectations there.
Then, Sanskar, of cause he's fed up, poor soul...but he should at least listen to her a bit.
On Lakshya...no comments, this comment might get deleted if I vent my exact feelings here!!
Swara, oh my baby! I feel for her...but this is the result of your own actions darling so go on, chase him a bit more!!
Coming to part two...Awesome, would be the word!
Again on RagYa, I'm glad Swara said most of the things I wanted her to. These two needs to get a life, I mean who cares actually what they does.
Her conversation with Sanskar was pure, utter gold, what else would I say?
Then the fever...oh, poor girl, she feels too deep and too hard when she does right? Sanskar's broken to a edge he almost cut my heart too...I had tears in my eyes in these paras.
Of how he thought he would lose his love again. God, I don't think he would even survive the thought, let along the actual experience!
Loved the ending, cute!
All around, good work... Enjoyed it a lot. Keep it up!
-Love Sakura
PS; I actually read this earlier, but then I wasn't home and I didn't want to write a short comment from my phone. It wouldn't have been justice to this. Then when I came back I had some other tasks at hand and completely forgot this. Thanks for the PM, and forgive the delay!
Ishaani
Cricket
