*Rang De Tu Mohe Gerua* SwaSan Two-Shot Part 2 (Final) Page 1

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Lovely finish, I liked everything in the finale part, Even i thought what if Sanskaar mistake her confession is done out of sympathy or guilt, that why i was kind of okay that they are dragging the confession in the show. But her reply here was spot on and i really liked it. She realized how he must have felt when she insulted his feeling.

I always love Swara giving it back to Laksh and Ragini , The whole confession part was awesome, and the ending with them finally together had made my day. How many days we have to wait for such scenes in the show is a huge mystery too me.

Do continue to write more , you are really talented . And PM me too i would love to read it .

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Beautiful ending.:))

of misunderstandings...and readimg too much into each other's sentences...of unfulfilled hopes..and unmet expectations..of love which has been accepted--but the news of the acceptance has not reached the sender.

and of course...the trust which had cracked yes..but not broken.

They came out stronger than ever before. aag ka dariya hai..doob ke jaana hain.:)

beautiful shonali.

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Thank you everyone for reading and leaving comments. I will reply to each and every comment once I am done with my final on the 16th.

Thank you so much once again😃

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Homeslice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

This is stinking adorable! Loved it.

I decided to take a break from studying for finals and this totally made my night.

Thank you!!

Nisha

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Kelly08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

2nd part of this OS,you nailed it girl...
swara's dialogues to sanskar in midnight ...it really moved me...she is now able to realise his pain :)
i felt sad when swara got so emotionally drained & fainted ,aww u know?! i totally imagined them 😃so it was really touching ,sanksar finally had to take care of his sweet wife..😉.embracing part was so cute...

kinda pissed off when laksh barged inside her room.😡...why cant this fellow be invisible ,hate to find him around swara argh...

wish you unleash more of ur thoughts into OS...keep pming them..

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
omg this was awesome
swasan scene was emotional
arghhh this raglak don't they hve their own works
i loved swara here d way she gave bck was awesome
n d last scene swasan so damn sweet n romantic
thanx for d pm

Thank you so much Prachi for reading and commenting.

I am so glad you liked it!!

I have always wanted to see the Jhansi ki rani Swara back in the show and thats what I tried to portray here!!

Thanks once again

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Tapathi
No words... Iam not even getting words to praise...mindblowing...swara bursting out her feelings was brove...awesome...iam expecting may be same situation ayega in show coz...sanskar is not giving or letting her complete her words one fine day she definatly...brust it out...superb yaar...superb...

Awww, thats really sweet of you!!

I am hoping the same as well since Sanskaar is not giving her any chance to speak and cutting her mid way all the time

But thank you so much for reading and commenting.

I am so glad you liked it!!

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Great followup to the first one Shona!

Ye lo! Matlab sirf garden tak hi gayi thi swara madam 🤣 That day bekar mein I was worried ke ab ye kaha chali gayi😆

Show Swara learn something from this Swara! THIS is how you tell your husband that you love him. When he isnt in the mood to listen you shout/ scream, continue talking anyway...HAQ hai aapko😆 You definitely dont waste time drawing silly smileys🥱

Again show Swara learn from this Swara!😆 What mast jawab she gave to Laksh & Ragini. To actually ask them both to get out and to even tell Ragini that she will no longer interfere in her life & matters👏👏👏 This is indeed my dream for Swaragini😛

Shru, my love🤗

Yes, just garden🤣. Actually i was gonna write something completely different by showing her go to the baadi. But that would have made it way too long and draggy and it might have gotten boring. So changed my story last min. The confrontation would have been similar with Sanskaar and Ragya but the place and situation would have been different.

I so want the Jhansi ki Rani Swara to be back with a bang and gives it to Ragya. Its due big time anyways.

I know. Swara needs to learn on how to jatao haq on her pati. She cannot just keep crying!!😆

Thank you love for reading and commenting