*Rang De Tu Mohe Gerua* SwaSan Two-Shot Part 2 (Final) Page 1

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

I got goosebumps reading the second part!! So well written. I hope Swara in the serial gets Sanskar asap. Both of them were hurt and miserable and only love can sooth them to the core.

Quote

BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: kaku17
This was way too beautiful dear...

This "Swara" is my dream as in how I want my "Swara" to be, with whom I can happily fall in love and dance with her in happiness and cry with her when her heart is breaking...sadly the show's swara has not yet touched that chord in my heart...well may be after yest maha episode I did feel a bit of tugging in my heart for her and I do believe that in due course the show's swara will make me root for her as well...amen to that...and that day isn't far...

Swara felt each and every pain, her realisation what sanskaar might have gone through when she was at her stupid, nave, illogical best...and she reeling with that pain was stupendous...she with her quiet dignity telling sanskaar not to term her love as guilt and sympathy was brilliant...this is the swara I want to watch on the show...

and yes I did her somersault when swara showed the mirror to both ragini and lakshya...gosh how I wish we would be treated to that on screen as well...

the story was brilliantly executed...the right mix of everything...lovely...do write more...

Thank you so much for a beautiful comment. I am touched!!

I really want this Swara to be back. Full on in Jhansi ki rani mode where she is not scared of anything and especially not scared of saying the truth and isn't so much blind folded. Hopefully, CVs won't ruin this show for us.

Yes, my main goal of this confrontation was to show how they both have hurt each other unknowingly and how they finally understand and realize the love they both share for each other. If Swara doesnot have the right to insult Sanskaar's feelings, the same applies to him as well!!

Ahh, I am waiting for that golden day as well when Swara gives it back to RagYa the similar way I have shown in my OS.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
part2
😭👏
its very beautifully written.
the pain of both of thm portreyed very well.thy r in so much love also so much in pain.
swara said all those her feelings & sanskar...wht to say,i love him.
oh yes!i so wanted tht in serial also swara thnk ragini to get marraied with laksh & let swasan marraid...😆
aww!i want my personal sanskar now,why z he so much understndng,careing,how much he love swara..
sanskar tk cr of swara...thn thr mutual confessn..oh!parte parte kab khatam ho gaya pata hi nehi chala.i wnted more..it likes a dream..
cherry on the cake was thr sweet & loving kiss...
i love love love love it...⭐️
now greedy me,want another piece of swasan 4m u...😛

Sonu🤗

Thank you Sweety for reading and commenting!!!

I am glad you liked it. Yup, they both are in pain and they both unknowingly became the reason of each other pain. That was my main goal to show it in this TS. How they both realize it, both understand and fight it and become one again. And that too forever.

I just really want RagYa's chapter to be completely over from SwaSan's life.

Thank you once again for reading and commenting.

Quote

BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: luvakanksha
Beautifully concluded
Loved sanskar's care for swara especially the dialogue "no one has the right to hurt my swara not even you"
Loved it 👏

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Oo, thats one of my favorite line as well.😉

Quote

BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Rumadiv
Awesome yarrr in serial we knw tat we ll not such stories si easily n reading ure os we get satisfied n joying it... continue it if possible

Aww, thank you so much. I am glad you liked it!!

I will write to bring in more stories. This one is already over!! Sowwwiiee

Quote

BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: kulsum_5
wow Shonali...amazing..👏
sorry to say.. but i loved part 2 more than part 1...😉

swara's confession to sanskaar was the best part..😊

loved loved it..😃

kisne kaha that you r not good in writing.. you r fab.. continue..😳

Thank you so much Kulsum. If you have liked part2 more than part1, than I am really very glad because thats what I have wanted. So don't say sorry. I am really happy to hear that!!

I wil try and bring in new stories.😃

Thanks once again!!

Quote

BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: princess_tara
Awesome update

Thank you so much Tara for reading and commenting!!!

Quote

--Anna--

@--Anna--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Beautiful Shona! 🤗

Wonderfully written second part. Loved the confrontation between Swara and Sanskaar, beautiful lines. 👏 👏👏

This one is my favorite

Dil hamari nahi sunta, hume hi dil ki sunni padti hai. Aur pyaar ek essa ehsaas hai, jo paaani ki tarah, kahi se bhi apna rasta banakar, apni sahi jagah pohoch hi jata. Tumhara pyaar kab mere dil ki deewaro ko lang kar mere dil main bas gaya, pata hi nahi chala.

I really wish something like this was possible in the show instead of the BS we are watching these days. 😡 Also absolutely loved Sanskaar's realisation of Swara's feelings and how deeply in love she is with him now. So beautiful! 👏👏

Loved the confrontation between Ragini Laksh and Swara. It was SO needed and is it still SO needed in the show. I love this Swara who gives two hoots about Laksh and Ragini and asks them to realise what all they have done in life and how they have wasted it all. This was very well written. 👏

The ending, Sanskaar scolding Swara for not taking care of herself because she has no right to hurt his swara - poignant.

Loved it! Great work! 👏

Love

Anna

Edited by --Anna-- - 9 years ago

Quote

tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Shona! Xoxo
Part 2 was truly amazing! It literally contained everything in it, it was almost a whole series condensed so well into this part. I absolutely loved this mature Swara who took total responsibility and then dealt with Sanakaar so well, managing to finally diffuse his rightful anger. This was the sort of mature and totally real conversation I genuinely yearn to see. The whole of Swara's confession was so beautifully done, Sanskaar's dawning comprehension and delight.
Uuurghhh RagYa! But what a reply Swara finally have them both, such much needed home truths we all so wanted to hear from Swara but never get. And what a way to cement to Sanskaar that her love is true and sound!
Then we had the whole romance which was so dreamy. Swara being ill and Sanskaar's pain and guilt and the whole of their journey coming to a perfect full circle. The ending was so soulful and how much it cheered me in these times hope for this for our SwaSan some day. As you know I thought you'd made a great start but with part 2, I feel you really came into your own. There were some really lovely bits here i wish I could quote but am hampered by my phone! Suffice it to say, it was a pleasure to read and I hope to read more from you! Love ya xoxo

Quote

Sapna

@NainoMeinSapna

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Hey Shonali,

Sorry I've taken so long to comment on part 2. But I really did enjoy it. I loved how upfront and understanding Swara was. And that little plot twist with her getting a fever was nice. I mean of course we wouldn't want our Swara to be sick. But if it makes Sanskaar forgive her faster, I'm sure we can deal with it better. I'm sure Swara would agree too 😆. Anyways I loved the caring Sanskaar. Thanks for the PM.

- Sapna