*Rang De Tu Mohe Gerua* SwaSan Two-Shot Part 2 (Final) Page 1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Dplee
I got goosebumps reading the second part!! So well written. I hope Swara in the serial gets Sanskar asap. Both of them were hurt and miserable and only love can sooth them to the core.

Thank you so much Dlpee for reading and commenting😃

I am so glad that my TS had that effect on you. Even I hope that they re unite soon now. Cannot see two of my babies suffering like this

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: --Anna--
Beautiful Shona! 🤗

Wonderfully written second part. Loved the confrontation between Swara and Sanskaar, beautiful lines. 👏 👏👏

This one is my favorite

Dil hamari nahi sunta, hume hi dil ki sunni padti hai. Aur pyaar ek essa ehsaas hai, jo paaani ki tarah, kahi se bhi apna rasta banakar, apni sahi jagah pohoch hi jata. Tumhara pyaar kab mere dil ki deewaro ko lang kar mere dil main bas gaya, pata hi nahi chala.

I really wish something like this was possible in the show instead of the BS we are watching these days. 😡 Also absolutely loved Sanskaar's realisation of Swara's feelings and how deeply in love she is with him now. So beautiful! 👏👏

Loved the confrontation between Ragini Laksh and Swara. It was SO needed and is it still SO needed in the show. I love this Swara who gives two hoots about Laksh and Ragini and asks them to realise what all they have done in life and how they have wasted it all. This was very well written. 👏

The ending, Sanskaar scolding Swara for not taking care of herself because she has no right to hurt his swara - poignant.

Loved it! Great work! 👏

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Anna

Anna🤗 ❤️

The line that you have highlighted is my favorite as well!! And you know when I was imagining SwaSan's confession and reunion, this was the first dialogue that came to my mind followed by the one where she says that even if he doesn't agree, she knows that their feelings for one another will never change. This two dialogues had such an impact on me that I just craved out a plot for that and came out with a TS.

The worst phase of their life actually brought them the pure and blissful happiness that they both have been craving for each other since ages.

I have always wanted to see my Sherni Swara back who will always fight for her self respect especially with Ragini and Laksh. I think it is really high time now that Swara just gives up on Ragini. And i am glad they are now showing that in the show.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting again Anna. Hope you are feeling better too.. I am so glad you liked it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Shona! Xoxo
Part 2 was truly amazing! It literally contained everything in it, it was almost a whole series condensed so well into this part. I absolutely loved this mature Swara who took total responsibility and then dealt with Sanakaar so well, managing to finally diffuse his rightful anger. This was the sort of mature and totally real conversation I genuinely yearn to see. The whole of Swara's confession was so beautifully done, Sanskaar's dawning comprehension and delight.
Uuurghhh RagYa! But what a reply Swara finally have them both, such much needed home truths we all so wanted to hear from Swara but never get. And what a way to cement to Sanskaar that her love is true and sound!
Then we had the whole romance which was so dreamy. Swara being ill and Sanskaar's pain and guilt and the whole of their journey coming to a perfect full circle. The ending was so soulful and how much it cheered me in these times hope for this for our SwaSan some day. As you know I thought you'd made a great start but with part 2, I feel you really came into your own. There were some really lovely bits here i wish I could quote but am hampered by my phone! Suffice it to say, it was a pleasure to read and I hope to read more from you! Love ya xoxo

Shruts!!!🤗

I am so very glad that you liked it as well. Was eagerly waiting for your comment as well!!

Mature Swara is my dream as well. I wasnt sure when CVs would fulfill that dream of mine but I thought I should just do it by myself in the TS. Swara did realize her mistake and she had to face it, confront it and then make him realize how she feels about him and that her feelings are totally genuine for him. And this outbursts in a way did help Swara for her feelings to touch and melt Sanskaar's heart and heal him as well.

RagYa, I don't have hopes for them and thats why I showed Swara giving them a tight verbal slap on their faces for them to realize what the hell have they done.

The emotional turmoil took a toll on her health and in a way worked in her favor for Sanskaar to completely melt for her and reunite for her as he cannot bear her in pain no matter how upset he is.

I am so so so glad that you liked it and thank you so much for reading and commenting while you were enjoying with your family!!! Love you too!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: asexualflower
Hey Shonali,
Sorry I've taken so long to comment on part 2. But I really did enjoy it. I loved how upfront and understanding Swara was. And that little plot twist with her getting a fever was nice. I mean of course we wouldn't want our Swara to be sick. But if it makes Sanskaar forgive her faster, I'm sure we can deal with it better. I'm sure Swara would agree too 😆. Anyways I loved the caring Sanskaar. Thanks for the PM.

- Sapna

hey Sapna,

No need to say sorry love!! Even i have been so busy lately that I have hardly gotten a chance to even check the replies!! But thank you so much for reading and commenting. I am really glad you liked it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Shona... 🤗
This story is so amazing... The characterization...you have done is amazing. During that track, How I had wished that we could get something like this. but alas we get something totally illogical and disturbing which we are tolerating till now. The way you penned down Swara is so amazing... this is the way I would have loved to see Swara after the revelation.😉 Actually... SwaSan here brings back the feelings that I had for SwaSan initially... their bond is so strong here... they were separated yet their heart was together and they solved their problems.😳
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Nitz😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: ..NightDragon..
Shona... 🤗
This story is so amazing... The characterization...you have done is amazing. During that track, How I had wished that we could get something like this. but alas we get something totally illogical and disturbing which we are tolerating till now. The way you penned down Swara is so amazing... this is the way I would have loved to see Swara after the revelation.😉 Actually... SwaSan here brings back the feelings that I had for SwaSan initially... their bond is so strong here... they were separated yet their heart was together and they solved their problems.😳
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Nitz😳

Nitziii, my love🤗

I am so happy to see your comment on this one!!! I didn't know you will dig this one out as well!!😆

We all would love to see this SwaSan always Nitzi!! I mean the crap that they are showing right now!! its just ruining the charm.. I am just trying to come up with my versions of few tracks so that I can just have that in my memory!! Seriously!!

Thank you very much love for reading and commenting😃