FanFiction Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya SwaSan/RagLak Part23 Updated (Pg26)

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Hi Frnds M Goldie.n this My First FF.,Not First,Exactly,bt First FF written by me Completely.Hope U All will like it :).The Title of the FF will be Disclosed Later while posting the 1st Part.

If u Liked my Intro n My FF ( After Reading Part 01 ) den add me in ur Buddy List so that i cn Send u A PM fr my FFs Update 😊😛.

Small Note : Here GF is also a Rich Family same like MF (GF means Gadodia Family n MF means Maheshwari Family ).

The story Takes Place after Ragini's Truth Revelation n Ragini was regretting n was Forgiven by both MF n GF n Den Story Takes a 8 Months Leap . SwaRagini left MM after Divorcing SanLak.

So the Story of Love strtd after their Divorce. So Lets see hw will SwaSan n RagLak realise their Love fr eachother :p.

So frnds if u liked the Intro.I will Post the First Part.

#Goldie

Index
Part 01

Part 02

Part 03

Part 04

Part 05

Part 06

Part 07

Part 08

Part 09

Part 10

Part 11

Part 12

Part 13

Part 14

Part 15

Part 16

Part 17

Part 18

Part 19

Part 20

Part 21

Part 22

Part 23 ( Last Part )

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update it soon...waisey be I never heard like this divorce honey k baad bi agn..pyaar wayar marriage can happen kya? I mean same ppl who married and divorced and agn love..hosakta hai kya?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

Nice update it soon...waisey be I never heard like this divorce honey k baad bi agn..pyaar wayar marriage can happen kya? I mean same ppl who married and divorced and agn love..hosakta hai kya?


Its jst a fiction..so fiction main kuch nhi hosakta hai 😉.will update the 1st Part v.soon..Stay Tune..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey goldie you are here also with this ff...thank god i can read it now from part 1...by the way, i hope you got me..its me Ananna.
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Originally posted by: Goldie93


Its jst a fiction..so fiction main kuch nhi hosakta hai 😉.will update the 1st Part v.soon..Stay Tune..

okay update it soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: M_Annu

Hey goldie you are here also with this ff...thank god i can read it now from part 1...by the way, i hope you got me..its me Ananna.


Ohh i cc !! Good u r here also..😊
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Hello Guyz, Here is the First Part of my FF.The Title of my My FF is "Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya".Do Read n Reply Me ..if any Suggestion or Criticism den b frnk n dnt hesitate to help n improve my FF.

Nw Read On Leave ur Comments 😊

8 Months Later...One Morning.

Sanskaar was Sleeping in his Room wen Swara entered with Cup of Hot Tea for Sanskaar.

Swara : Wake up Sanskaar.its alrdy 7am n u need to go to Office na..

Sanskar : Nhi Shona.aaj mann nhi karraha Office jaane ka.so let me sleep today.

Swara : Kya matlab Man nhi karraha ka ?? Tum kabse bahane dhundne lage Office nhi jaane ke liye ??

Sanskaar : Jab se tum meri lyf main aaye tab se ( in naughty bt yet Sleepy way ).

So Swara gets an idea.

Swara : Accha aisa nhi uthne wale tum.abb dekhti hu kaise nhi uthe tum ( thinks in her mind n gives a Naughty Smile ).

She then takes Sanskaar's one Finger n takes near The Hot Tea n Dips his Finger in the Hot Tea n leaves Sanskaar's Finger wen he wakes up.

Sanskaar : ( in Pain ) Aaoow !! yeh kya hai Swara ?? Yeh koi tareeqa hai uthane ka ??

Swara : Abb main kya karu Sanskaar? Tum hi nhin uthare the toh mujhe yehi tareeqa suucha ( winks to Sanskaar ).

Sanskaar : Accha ji !!! Yehi Tareeqa suucha abb main batahu ruko tum..

SwaSan runs the whole room while laughing n enjoying that moment wen suddenly Swara hits her Leg to the Bed Corner while Running.She was abt to fall wen Sanskaar hold her at nick of tym.They both r lost in their Eyes completely n looks at eachother every romantically.

When Suddenly someone Knocks the Door and Swara n Sanskaar wakes up frm their Sleep n found themselves alone in their Respective Rooms ( i.e Swara in Baadi n Sanskaar in MM ) n realizes dat its their Dream n gets Sad.

Swara opens da door n sees Ragini in front of her.

Ragini : Good Morning Swara..hogayi tumhari Subah ..

Swara : Haa Good Morning Ragini.

Ragini : kya hua Swara ?? Itni late kyoun hui Door Kholne ??

Swara : Kuch nhi Ragini bas main woh Sanskaar ka ... ( stops in middle as she realizes wat she was going to say ).

Ragini : Kya Sanskaar? ?

Swara : Kuch nhi Ragini .. ( in nervousness n Chnges the Topic ).

Ragini : Theek Hain Swara..Tum jaldi se Ready hoke neeche aajao.Sab Brkfast main wait karrahe hai aur phir hume shopping ke liye bhi toh jaana hai aaj shaam ke Party ke liye.

Swara : Ok Ragini.give me 10 Mins.i will be down.

And she Closes da door n turns bak hits her head while smiling n Blushing ( bt she is Confused too y is she thinking abt Sanskaar too much n dat too in dis Romantic Manner )

In MM

Sanskaar too pens da door n Sees Laksh in front of him.

Laksh : Bhai itna tym kyou laga diya door Kholne main ??

Sanskaar : Kuch nhi Laksh main toh bas woh chaai.. ( Laksh Interrupts in middle )

Laksh : Chaai ?? Aur abb ?? Lekin Bhai aap toh Naashte se pehle toh koi Chaai nhi peete ?? Aur abhi tak ready bhi nhi hue..toh phir Chaai kaise ??

Sanskaar : Kuch Nhi Lucky.main bhi na Pagaal hogaya hu.tu chod yeh sab..tu bhi toh ready nhi hua abhi tak.hume jaana hai na Official Kaam se ??

Laksh : Haa bhai main bhi wohi Yaad dilane aaya tha..

Sanskaar : Ok Lucky Thnks.Main ready hoge aata hu.tu bhi jaa ready hoja..

Sanskaar closes da Door n sees his room n feels da presence of Swara in his Room as he did nt chng anything in his room.den he comes out of his Sadness n goes to washroom fr getting ready.

SwaRagini n SanLak had their Brkfast n Left their Respective Houses.b4 SwaRagini n SanLak wud leave DP n Shekhar reminded them abt todyz Party.

SwaRagini : Ok Baba
SanLak : Ok Papa n Bade Papa.

SwaRagini at Shopping Mall

SwaRagini r in Clothing Brand Shop n Shops fr their Dress.Swara is looking fr a Dress in Blue Color ( As Blue is Sanskaar's Fav Color n on ther Side Ragini searches fr a Red Color Dress ( as obivious it's Laksh's Fav Color ).

SanLak r in the Cafe of the Same Mall wid Clients discussing abt their Official Matter.

SwaRagini finishes there Shopping n was abt to Leave the Mall wen Swara's Cell rings n she gets a Call from one of her Frnd.

Swara : Hii Riya.

Riya : Hii Swara.suno i wanna meet u ryt nw.cn u Meet me plzz ??

Swara : Haa Sure Riya.waise bhi hume bahut din hogaye nhi mil ke.

Riya : Haa Swara. I wanna meet u b4 leaving this Country.

Swara : ( In Confused manner ) Leaving ?? Wat do u mean b4 Leaving ??

Riya : Dnt tell me Swara u forgot dat m leaving fr USA tonite.

Swara : ohh God Riya !! M Reallly Sooo Sorry Yaar.i really Forgot abt it.

Riya : It's ok Swara. Mujhe bura nhi laga coz i knew it u wud forget it coz tum jab se MM chodke aayi ho Sanskaar ke elawa kuch aur hi nhi suchta.

Swara : aisa kuch nhi hai Riya ( in Scaredness ).accha main abhi City Mall main hu tum waha ke Cafe maik aake milo kyounki yehi tumhare ghar ke Near hai.

Riya : Rehne Do Swara i knw ki tum kitna sacch bolrahi aur ho aur kitna jhooth ( in Amger ).Anywys Ok . main abhi Aarahi hu.

Swara : Ok ( and hangs da call ).

Swara : Suno Ragini meri ek Frnd mujhse milba chahti hai toh tum ek kaam karo ki tum ghar jao main baadmain aajaungi.

Ragini : Ok Swara.waise main abhi Mandir Jaarahi hu jo ki is Mall ke paas main hai.Jab tumhare milna khtm hojaye toh call kardena phir hum dono saath main jayege Ghar.

Swara : Ok Ragini.Good idea. Bye Ragini.

There in Cafe SanLak's Meeting is over n were abt to leave bt den Sanskaar Suddenly he saw his one of his Old Frnd n thot to meet him.

Sanskaar : Lucky tu Ghar jaa mujhe yahan mera ek Frnd dhikha hai.main usse milge aata hu.

Laksh : Ok bhai.lekin jaldi aana main Mandir Jaaraha hu.phir wahi se ghar chala Jaunga.Bye Bhai

Sanskaar: Ok Lucky..Bye..

Swara Enters da Cafe n Sanskaar feels like someone close has entered da Cafe n feels da Presence of Swara.Swara too feels dat someone Very close is present in this cafe n remembers Sanskaar.Then Swara Gets a call frm Riya.

Riya : Suno Swara.M Really Sorry.Main nhi aasakti kyounki last min meri flight ka tymchnge hogaya hai aur i Have to leave fr Airport Ryt nw.

Swara : WHAT ??? tum abhi ke abhi jaarahi ho ? Bt I wanted to meet u yaar.

Sanskaar was abt to go to meet his Frnd bt by the tym he wud reach near his frnd's table, his frnd had left.So he also thot to leave bt den He dashed a girl n da girl fell on Sanskaar's Arm. (To knw who is da Girl in Sanskaar's arm,wait fr the nxt Part :p ).

In Mandir

Ragini was Praying in front of Idol and at Same Time Laksh stands beside Ragini.Ragini Feels da presence of Laksh bt ignores n den Laksh on the other side too feels someones presence i.e Ragini ( they both cud nt see each other as a lady was standing in middle of dem ).

Ragini was abt to turn n go bt jst then she hits a rock in da Mandir n gets Hurts n she was Bleeding.jst then listeninf da girl's Voice he went to Ragini ( unaware dat the gal is non other dan Ragini ).


Ragini : Ouch !!! ( she eas crying ) n remembers da day hw Laksh applied Medicine wen she fell frm da stool while keeping a bag on top of almari.

Laksh : Aap theek toh hai na ??

Ragini : (Comes out of her flashbak n says ) Haa main theek hu. ( den she takes her eyes up n sees Laksh.

Laksh too sees dat the girl is non other dan Ragini, n was shocked, Happy n Angry as well.

Ragini : Aap Laksh yaha aur Mandir main ??

Laksh : haa.tumhe kya ( in anger ) main kaha bhi jau tumhe isse koi rishta nhi hai. ( after saying this he was abt to Leave Mandir in anger leaving Ragini in pain.But...) ( wait fr the nxt part to knw wat happens :p ).

PreCap : Shekhar n DP meets eachother along with MF n GF.

#Goldie


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Hello Frnds here is the 2nd Part of FF "Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya".

Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya

Part 02

In Cafe In Mall.

The Girl was Abt to Fall as Sanskaar Dashed her bt at nick of tym Sanskaar catches her n da Girl falls on Sanskaar's Arms.Sanskaar Remembers da Dream Sequence hw Swara was abt to Fall by hitting da bed n hw he caught her n hw Swara fell in his Arms ( the same way This Girl Fell in his Arm ).

Swara : Ouch !!! Hello Mister !!! Dekhke nhi chal sakte kya ?? (Did nt look at Sanskaar n keeps on Shouting ).

Sanskaar comes out of his Thoughts.

Sanskaar : m really Sorry Miss.. ( n was shocked to see Swara ).

Swara : ( too was shocked seeing it was Sanskaar ). Sanskaar tum aur yaha ??

Sanskaar : haa yahan main Office ke Kaam se aaya tha Lucky ke saath.

Swara : ohh Accha.. aur batao tum kaise ho ?? ( sh3 is feeling scared n is really shocked to see Sanskaar really Weak )

Sanskaar : ( in Sad Tone ) Kaise hosakta hu tumhare bina Swara ?? Bas jii raha hu jaise Zingadi chalarahi hai mujhe.

Swara is Sad n Has no words to say.

Sanskaar : Khair Meri chodo. .Tum kaisi ho ?? Aur tum yaha kya karrahi ho ??

Swara : woh Actually main yaha Shopping ke liye aayi thi Ragini ke saath aur phir meri frnd se milna tha lekin uski Flight ki tyming chng hogayi aur woh abhi jaarahi hai .lekin mujhe usse milna tha ( Sad Face ).

Sanskaar : Ohh !! Toh theek hai i will Drop u to Airport.If u dnt mind..

Swara : No its ok Sanskaar..i will Manage.

Sanskaar : No,Swara..its ok i will Drop u.

Swara : Ok Sanskaar.Thnks :).

In Mandir

Laksh Turns bak hearing Ragini's Voice in Pain n Runs to Her.

Laksh : Dekhge chalna chahiye na tumhe.tum hamesha se aise hi karti ho.yaad hai woh almari wala incident.khayal rakho tum apna .. ( he realizes wat he said jst nw n was quite ).

Ragini : ( Shocked n Happy ) Laksh aapko Yaad hai woh Incident ?? Hume laga ki app bhool gaye hume.

Laksh : ( In Nervousness n Anger ) haa main bhool gaya tha tumhe lekin aaj tum mere saamne aake tumne mera zakham phir se taaza kardiya .aur rahi baath woh incident ki.usse main kaise bhul sakta ho.ussi din toh mujhe tunhari Sacchai pata chali thi ..

Ragini gets Sad n Cries in Pain bt nt fr her Pain bt fr the Pain wich Laksh is suffering coz of her.

Laksh : abb chalo main tumhe Hospital leke jaata hu aur phir ghar chodeta ho ..

Ragini : Nhi Laksh..aapko fikar karne ki zarurat nhin hai.main ghar chali jaungi.

Ragini was abt to get up bt falls down coz of Pain.

Ragini : Ouch !!

Laksh : Dekhna tumhe dard hua na.tum meri baath sunti kyoun nhi ho.apni marzi kyoun karti rehti ho tum ??

Ragini was abt to say something bt den Laksh stops her n carries her in his Arms.

Ragini : Nhi Laksh.aisa kuch nhi hai.hum chale...

Laksh : Chup.abb bilkul Chup. ( Laksh carries Ragini in his Arm n looks in Ragini's Eyes n gets lost in her eyes )

BG Song :

Aankhon Main Teri Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hain Ho,
Aankhon Main Teri Ajab Si Ajab Si Adaayein Hain,

Dil Ko Banade Jo Patang Saansen
Teri Woh Hawayein Hain,
Tere Saath Saath Aisa Koi
Noor Aaya Hain...

SwaSan Scene in Mall.

SwaSan sat in carn left for airport.

They have a Small eye lock

BG Song

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi me aana

Dheere dheere se mere dil ko churaana

Tum se pyaar humein hai kitna

Tumse milkar.. tumse milkar milkar..

In Mandir

RagLak sat in car n Ragini was trying to put her Seat Belt bt was nt able to put in Pain as she has to turn a bit to take her belt frm bak.

Ragini : Aaoow !!

Laksh : Abb kya hua ?? ( sees the belt n understands ).

Laksh : rukho main lagata hu.

so he goes near Ragini n is too close to her dat she he hear her Heart beat,so he takes the Belt n puts fr Ragini.They r having a eye lock ..

In SwaSan Car.SwaSan r on the way to Airport n they r on highway wen Sanskaar's Phone Rings.

Sanskaar : Haa Hello, Mr Mehra.

Sanskaar has his talk abt office while Driving.Swara seeinf Sanskaar talking on phone gets worried n Angry n snatches da phone n talks to Mr Mehra.

Swara : Hello Mr Mehra, Maine aap ko kitne baar bola hai ki jab Sanskaar baahr gaadi chala rahe ho toh call mat kariye ( in anger ).

Sanskaar : ( Shocked n confused ) Swara yeh kya karrahi ho tum ?? Phone do mujhe ..

Swara Scolds Me Mehra n cuts the call.

Swara : Aur Sanksaar tum ( in anger n in worriebdbess fr Sanskaar ).tum bhi nhi samajhte na ki Drive karte waqt Phone pe baate nhi kiya karte.kitne baar bolo tumhe ?? Tumhe kuch hojata toh ??

Suddenly Swara realizes wat is she saying n is confused too ..n on the othet Side Sanskaar is too Shocked n is lil happy dat Swara still cares fr him.

Sanskaar : ok baba chill..y r u overeating as a wife ?? We r nt Husband n Wife anymore.so relax.

Swara feels hurt wen Sanskaar says that they r nt Husband n Wife anymore :(.

Both RagLak n SwaSan r having some sweet bt hesitate Moments as they r meeting after a really long tym ( after 8 Months ).

While going to Airport n Hospital ( SwaSan to Airport n RagLak to Hospital ) they have a sudden brk n Swara n Ragini Falls on their respective Partners in their respective Cars ).

SwaRagini : Aaow !! ( Convo in their respective cars ).

SanLak : Tum theek toh ho na ?? ( Convo in their respective cars ).

Swara : Haa Sanskaar. ( Convo in their respective cars ).

Ragini : Haa Laksh.( Convo in their respective cars ).

Den Sanskaar sees dat Swara is still on his shoulder n her Hairs r on her face so he moves his hand towards Swara's Face n touches her hairs n puts it bak of her ears. ( Swara feels his Touch n Blushes n is comfortable by his touch so she keeps quite,she is happy n blushes )

In RagLak Car.

Ragini gets hurt n Laksh reacts to her pain as if he felt the pain n he got hurted.

Laksh : M sorry Ragini.tum theek toh ho na ??

Ragini : Haa Laksh m fyn.

Laksh is rubbing Ragini's Palm n Kisses her Palm as she got hurt frm the Gear while falling on his shoulder.Laksh is unaware way he is doing.

Ragini : ( Shocked n Happy bt still tells ) Laksh yeh kya karrahe hai app ??

Laksh : ( Comes in his senses ) ohh M sorry Ragini.pata nhi mujhe kya hogaya tha ( he is feeling good after touching Ragini after really n long Time n is nt feeling any Hesitation).

Finally All 4 reaches their Respective Houses after finishing their wrk i.e Baadi n MM.

All 4 r in their Respective Rooms n thinks abt the recent Moments n All 4 r smiling n Blushing

BG Song (while all 4 oof them Thinking abt todyz moments)

Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya

Uth Rahi Hain Koi Hulchul
Khil Raha Hai Saara Aalam
Ghul Rahi Hai Saanson Mein Ansuni Si Ek Tarunnum
Ek Ajnabi Ne Yeh Kya Kar Diya
Ehsaas Dil Mein Yeh Kya Bhar Diya
Dil Ki Baatein Ja Ke Kis Ko Kahe
Lagne Lage Hain Saare Rang Na.


PreCap : MF n GF meets eachother n SwaSan n RagLak Dance :).

Hope u all Likes my FF.Do Leave ur Comments :).

#Goldie


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Amrtina thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ITs wonderful
Plz continue soon
Read all together
Very interesting
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Originally posted by: Amrtina

ITs wonderful

Plz continue soon
Read all together
Very interesting


Thnk u soo much..ya sure will :).

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