FanFiction Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya SwaSan/RagLak Part23 Updated (Pg26) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Goldie... the last part was so emotional...
Hope the four of them jaldi hosh mein aa jaye
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
can't wait for nxt part...nd thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
yaar..goldie i aready crying after reading a ff of SwaSan n my mood is off..n again u made me emotional..but hats off to u dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Loved it yaa...specially the way sanlak scolded swaragini
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thnk u Guyz fr Liking My Accident wala Part in FF.So nw Here is ur Nxt Part i.e Part 11.Hope u Like It :).

Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya

Part 11

In this Part the Scene Starts frm OT where all the 4 Leads r being Treated for their Big Accident.There Inside all 4 were going through a Very Bad Condition as Tym Passes n mean while Outside the OT Entire Family Members of SanLak n SwaRagini were going through The Most Difficult Tym in their Live maybe more dan any Business Crises they had Ever Suffered.

DP : Shekhar maine Zindagi main bahut se Bure Pal dekhege hai kbhi Business main toh kbhi Ghar main lekin aaj ka din unn sab bure dino se bhi bahut bura din hai jaha mere chaaro bacche iss halaat main pade hue hai aur main kuch nhi karsakte ( crying like he lost his life seeing his all the Kids together in such a Critical Condition ).

Shekhar : Haa DP Ji..aapne sahi kaha.aaj main bhi apne aapko bahut bebas feel karraha hu.apne baccho ke liye kuch bhi nhi kar paraha mai ( he is too crying bery badly after seeing his Kids inside OT fighting fr their Lives ).

Doctors Cones out n tells them that they r going to give a Cardiogenic Shock.

Doctors : Hum abhi Chaaro ko Cardiogenic Shock dene jaarahe hai agr iske baad bhi unhe hosh nhi aaya toh hum kuch nhi karsakte.Aaplog bas Dua kariye ki yeh Last Treatment kaam karjaye.

Shekhar n DP : Haa Doctor aapko jo karna hai kariye bas humare Baccho ko bachalijiye..hum sabke aapke shukarguzar hoge.

Doctors : Haa Shekhar Ji.humse jo hoga woh hum zarur karege.aap bas Uper wale se Dua kariye.

Saying this Doctors went inside da OT n instructed da Nurse to Prepare fr Cardiogenic Shock Treatment.Doctors gave dem Cardiogenic Shock fr thr First Time bt No Response at First.den he looked Out side through the OT Door's Window n singaled No Response frm anyone among da 4.then he gave the Second Cardiogenic Shock agn no Response.Entire Family Outside the OT were Praying very badly fr SwaRagini's n SanLak's Safety.Then Doctors gave them the Third Cardiogenic Shock bt still No Response by this time Doctors had Lost Hope fr their Survival n Singaled the Family Members Outside the OT with Sad Face.And everyone Outside the OT were Shocked n were Blank n had no words to say as if theor own lives were taken away frm them..

AP n Sujata : Ji yeh Doctor Sahab kya kehrahe hai.aisa nhi hosakta. .humare bacche hume chodke aisa ek saath nhi jaasakte.jhuth hai yeh sab..aap toh SanLak ko jaante hai na .. ( fumbles n tries to control her Pain ) ki unki bachpan se satane hi aadat hai.toh isbaar bhi main jaanti hu ki yeh dono hume satarahe hai aur iss baar dono ne Humari SwaRagini ko bhi shaamil karliya hai.main jaanti hu ( cries very badly n falls down in pain )

Shomi : Shekhar kuch toh bolo..aisa nhi hosakta na.arrey hume apni dono bacchiyaan abhi abhi toh mili thi..aise kaisi hume chodke jaasakti hai yeh dono.arrey Swara toh bachpan se hi aisi shararaate karti rehti hai lekin yeh Aaj yeh Ragini bhi shaamil hogayi.jaake daaado na Shekhar un chaaro ko.yeh koi tareeqa maazak karne ka ( fumbles while crying )

DP n Shekhar n RP were also Heart Broken n had No Words to say seeing their Childern bt inside the OT Lifeless bt they were Controlling their Pain so as to Manage their Wives.Bt jst as The Doctors were abt to put the White Clothes on 4 of dem Doctors heard 1 Voice among da 4 of dem.

Sanskaar : Haahhh !! Swaarra ( the first Name or Word she told was Swara,his Life )

Doctors : Yeh Kya ?? Nurse jaldi se Machines On Karo ... aur Oxygen laagao ( were shocked bt were happy too )

Then Doctors heard the Second Voice.

Ragini : Haaahh..Laksh.. ( the first Name or Word she told was Laksh,her Life ).

Doctors were Happy to see Sanskaar n Ragini In their Somewat Senses bt they were Sad too seeing Swara n Laksh.they were breathing bt still they were like a Lifeless Body,so they kept Swara n Laksh on Medical Machines hoping to see them also bak in their Lives jst Like Sanskaar n Ragini . Doctors Came n saw everyone Heart Broken n Lifless.

Doctors : DP Ji n Shekhar Ji.aaplog abb khush hojayiye.humne Sanskaar aur Ragini ko bachaliya hai.hum toh Umeed haar chuke the lekin shayad aapke Pyaar ne aapke do baccho ko wapis laaliya.

Everyone were Shocked n cud nt believe their Ears bt after sometym they were Glowing n were Happy n were Unaware abt Swara's n Laksh's condition.

Shomi : Dekha Shekhar maine kaha tha na ki humare baccho ko kuch nhi hosakta. Main jaanti thi (Happy n was nt able to Control her Happines )

Shekhar : Haa Shomi. .tum as usual hamesha ki tarrah sahi thi aaj bhi tum hi sahi nikli ( he was also damn happy n cud nt control his happiness n hugged Shomi )

Everyone were Happy hearing that Sanskaar n Ragini r Bak n bt their Happiness were Broken by the Words that Doctors said them.

Doctors : Lekin...(Sad Face )

DP n Shekhar : Lekin kya Doctors Sahab..( were scared agn )

Doctors : Humne Sanskaar aur Ragini ko toh bachaliya lekin Swara aur Laksh ko ... (was abt to complete their sentence bt were interrupted by DP n Shekhar )

DP n Shekhar : Nhi aisa mat boliyr Doctor..aapne jaise Sanskaar aur Ragini ko Bachaliya waise hi plzz humare Swara aur Laksh ko bhi bachalijiye na. ( pleads the Doctors )

Doctors : Haa hum puri koshish karrahe hai.hume unhe Ventilator pe rakha hai kyounki woh dono saas toh lerahe hai lekin truck se zaada chotte ( wounds ) lagne ke wajeh se unki halaat bahut kharaab hai. Isiliye agr unhone in 24 hours main Hosh main nhi aaye toh hum kuch nhi karsakte.

Saying this Doctors went to their Cabins.

Shomi : Shekhar Swara aur Laksh ko hosh nhi aaya toh hum Sanskaar aur Ragini ko kya kehige.humare bacche toh jeete ji hi marjayege ( cries very badly )

Everyone r Happy fr Sanskaar n Ragini bt at the Same Time Tensed n worried fr Swara n Laksh.

After 4 Hours ...

Sanskaar n Ragini r in Conscious State in their Respective Rooms n r looking very weak n stares at everyone n searches fr Swara n Laksh ( Sanskaar fr Swara n Ragini fr Laksh ).All the Ladies r in Ragini's Room n All Males r in Sanskaar's Room.

In Sanskaar's Room

DP : Kasie ho Tum beta ? Theek toh hona ??

Sanskaar : Haa Bade Papa main theek hai lekin Swara kaha hai ?? Woh theek toh hai na ?? Mujh usse milna hai abhi ke abhi .( he is in pain bt still asks fr Swara )

Everyone r Quite n has no words to say.

In Ragini's Room

Shomi : Ragini Beta ..tum theek toh hona ?? Zaada takleef toh nhi horahi hai na tumhe ??

Ragini : Haa Maa nain toh theek hu lekin Laksh toh theek hai na ?? Kaha hai woh hume milna hai unse.hume unke pass leke chaliye na.

Everyone r Quite n has no words to say.

Doctors comes n chks Sanskaar n Ragini one by one on their respective rooms.

Doctor : Dekhiye kehne ko toh Sanskaar aur Ragini bacch gaye aur unhe hosh aagaya lekin abhi unki ki Tabiyaat sambhli nhi hai abhi bhi they r soo weak.toh dhayam rahe ki unhe kuch bhi sadma na lage.

Saying this Doctors Leaves frm there.And Everyone r tensed thinking wat will happen wen Sanskaar n Ragini asks abt Swara n Laksh agn.

AP : Ji kya karege abhi hum.ek taref iss baath ki khushi hai ki Ragini aur Sanskaar itne bade accident se bachgaye aur dusri taref gham bhi hai ko ussi accident main Swara aur Laksh ki halaat na ke barabar hai. hum kya kehinge Sanskaar aur Ragini se jab woh dono hume puchige Swara aur Laksh ke baare main. ( cries thnking abt the conditions of all the 4.)

Sanskaar n Ragini hears everything n r shocked n only one lines said by AP revolves around their head .

AP : ussi accident main Swara aur Laksh ki halaat NA ke barabar hai.

They Fall on da Floor n gets unconscious agn.

Precap : Sanskaar n Ragini r in OT sitting near Swara n Laksh respectively n r Heart Broken.

So Guyz this was another Part of Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya. Hope u Like it.Do Leave urComments in the Comment Box Below :).

#Goldie

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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
lovely...yaar mujhe kya rolana chahti ho...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: M_Annu

lovely...yaar mujhe kya rolana chahti ho...



Hahahahaha..lol..dnt worry will b fyn soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Superb
Sanskar and ragini saved but please save swara and lucky also
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
emotinal updt..
hope swara & laksh ko kuch na ho.
sanskar & ragini k pyar undono ko bacha le.
thnks 4 pm.cnt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Dat was a emotional update
Hope nothing happens to swara n Laksh

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