FanFiction Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya SwaSan/RagLak Part23 Updated (Pg26) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Hey just read both of ur chapters
Ur doing a great job
Can't wait to see how both couples fall in love
Plz could u pm me wn u update

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: alisha17

Hey just read both of ur chapters

Ur doing a great job
Can't wait to see how both couples fall in love
Plz could u pm me wn u update


Ya sure..will definitely PM u wenever i post the next update .n thbks fr the Compliment. It means a lot 😊
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Originally posted by: alisha17

Hey just read both of ur chapters

Ur doing a great job
Can't wait to see how both couples fall in love
Plz could u pm me wn u update


Thnks fr the Compliment.it means alot n yes sure will definitely PM u wenever I post the nxt part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice...😊mast hai...I don't knw more Hindi songs I knw little bit songs...that songs which u have used was Soo beautiful...continue soon...
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

Nice...😊mast hai...I don't knw more Hindi songs I knw little bit songs...that songs which u have used was Soo beautiful...continue soon...


Ya Sure :) n thnks. .😊
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Thnk u Guys fr Appreciating My FF.Ot means a lot 😊.

Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya

Part 03

While all 4 of them were thinking abt the Recent Moments someone Knocked the Door of their Rooms.

In Baadi :

SwaRagini staying in one Room.So they both came to their Senses after hearing the Door Knocks Ragini opened the Door.it was Shomi.

Ragini : Maa Aap...yahan iss waqt ??

Shomi : Haa Beta.main yahan tum dono ko yaad dilaneaayi thi kiaaj Party hai.

Ragini : Haa Maa Hume Yaad hai.
.hum abhi tayar hojate hai.

In MM :

Sujata n AP goes to their respective Son's rooms n tells them to get ready fr the Party.

In Sanskaar's Room :

Sujata : Sanskaar Chora, Darwaza Kholo.

Sanskaar : Kya hai Mom ??

Sujata : kuch na beta.bas yeh kehne aayi thi ki tayar hojao.Party ka Waqt horaha hai ..

Sanskaar : haa Mom ok..

In Laksh's Room

AP : Laksh Beta. . Kya hua Tayar nhi hue abhi tak ?? Kaha the itne tym tak ??

Laksh : ( no words to say ) woh Maa..Mandir Gaya tha . isiliye tym lag gaya.

AP : theek hai.woh sab chodo.tum tayar hojao.tumhare Papa aate hi honge Office se..aur agr dekhlege ki tum tayar nhi ho abhi tak toh dhaand dege.

Laksh : Ok Maa..abhi ready hoge aata hu.

AP n Sujata Left..

In Baadi

SwaRagini were searching for their Packets in their whole room n in their House.bt cud nt find it.

Swara : Arrey Ragini. Kaha gaye humare packets.humara saara saaman usme hi hai.

Ragini : Haa Swara.main bhi yehi Socchrahi thi (both r soo scared n r nt able to think wat to do ).

Meanwhile in MM.

Sanskaar n Laksh found 2 packets in their respective rooms n were confused n thinking whose packets r these.So they both were going to meet each other.bt wen Sanskaar was abt to Leave his room Laksh enters his room.

Laksh : Bhai..

Sanskaar : Main abhi tumhare paas hi aaraha tha.

Laksh : Kyoun Bhai ?? ( he sees da Packet in his hands too ). Arrey Bhai aap ke paas bhi packet ??

Sanskaar : aapke paas bhi hai kya matlab ??

Then both of them understands n says

Sanskaar : Swara ??

Laksh : Ragini ??

They both were going to Baadi to give their Dresses bt then the Packets falls frm their Hands n their Dresses comes out of the packets.they both sees da Dresses were Shocked to see the their Fav color Dresses n were Happy.

In Baadi

SwaRagini were tensed n den suddenly remembers n Speaks together

Swara : Sanskaar? ?

Ragini : Laksh? ?

So they both immediately called them on their respective phones.

SwaSan Convo.

Swara : Hello Sanskaar

Sanskaar : Hello Swara. Main tumhe hi call karne wala tha..tumhara Packet mere Gaadi main rehgaya tha aur Driver ne mere room main rakhdiya.

Swara : ohhh ..accha hua tumhare hi pass hai warna main dar gayi thi ki kahi Mall main toh nhi chud gaya.waise tumne kholke toh nhi dekha na ( she doesn't wanted Sanskaar to see the Dress of his fav.)

Sanskaar : ( understood n says No,kyoun aisa kya hai packet main.kahi mere se related toh nhi,naughty way )

Swara : ( Shocked n fumbles while Talking ).aisaa..kuch nhi hai Sanskaar.arrey ladies ka packet hai toh kuch bhi hosakta hai.isse tumhe koi matlab nhi hona chahiye.

Sanskaar understood dat she strts loving him bt is nt aware abt her own feelings .

Sanskaar : Ok baba..chill..main abhi Driver se Packet bhijwata hu.

Swara : Haa ok thnk u :).

RagLak Convo.

Ragini : Hello Laksh.

Laksh : Hello Ragini

Ragini : Woh laksh humara Packet aapke car main rehgaya hai shayad.

Laksh : Haa Ragini . tumhara packet mere haath main hi hai.waise main tumhe hi dene aaraha tha.

Ragini : ohh kk Laksh..waise Laksh aapne Packet khola toh nhi na ??

Laksh : Nhi Ragini.Main thodi hi dekhu ga tumahra packet kholke. ( in anger bt nt in Anger too ) waise bhi mera koi ryt nhi hai abhi ki main tumhari cheeze chk karo.

Ragini : ( feels sad bt hides her sadness n tears wear coming frm her eyes ) haa Laksh.u r ryt.ok den Bye Laksh.

Laksh : haa bye Ragini

Laksh understands her pain n understands that ki she is is hiding her pain n her love fr him jst coz he dnt want her in his life.

So both SwaSan n RagLak hanged their Call..

In MM

Sanskaar : ( is sooo happy n feeling on top of the World ) Laksh m soo happy today..aaj mujhe pata chala ki Swara bhi mujhse Pyaar karne lagi hai bt usse realize nhi hua.

Sanskaar is soo happy in his happiness dat he did nt see at laksh's face n his sadness.bt Suddenly he realizes it.

Sanskaar : Kya hua laksh ?? Main yaha itni daer se apni khushi bata raha hu aur aur tum ?? Kahi tum aaj bhi Swara se ... ??

Laksh : Nhi Bhai.main Swara se pyaar nhi karta abb.woh mera Past tha jisse main trust nhi kiya ( in sad face ).

Sanskaar : phir tu itna Udaas kyoun hai ??

Laksh : Woh Bhai actually aaj maine Ragini se mila tha aur mujhe yeh Ehsaas hua ki Ragini bahut badal gayi hai aur mere khushi ke liye woh apna pyaar aur apna dard mujhse chupha rahi hai.

Sanskaar : ohh God Laksh..dnt tell me ki u r also falling in love all over agn n dat too this tym wid Ragini? ? ( he is soo happy fr Laksh n fr himself ).

Laksh : Haa Woh,Nhi Bhai ...

he is confused,so he finally closes his eyes n tries to see a face whom he loves n finally after soo much try he found Ragini's face,he was shocked bt still soo happy .n finally in Happines he said.

Laksh : Haa Bhai u r ryt.i m in Love agn n dat too wid Ragini.

Sanskaar : Wow !! Lucky..hum dono ki ek hi prblm hai.humari Ex Wives n to be Wives ( in naughty manner ) ko realize karwana hoga ki we want them in our Lives bak.

Laksh : haa bhai u ryt.so hume pehle humari To be Wives ko patana hoga.toh kal se shuru karte hai "Mission Biwi Patao" ( wink )

Sanskaar : Yes Lucky..ok abb chodo yeh baate..driver ke haatho yeh packets bhijwa dete hai baadi aur ready hojaate hai Party ke liye.

Laksh : Haa Ryt Bhai.

In Baadi after sometym Driver comes to give SwaRagini their packets n fortunately Only SwaRagini were there in Hall.so they took da packets n went to get ready.

At Party Venue

Both GF n MF reached the Venue n met Eachother n were reminded of past events bt still greeted Eachother.DP n Shekhar were still frnds n still had some hope dat one day their Kids wud come together.

DP : Namaste Shekhat Ji

Shekhar : Namaste DP Ji.Kaise hai Aap ??

DP : Hum theek hai Shekhar Ji ..Aap aur humari do betiyaan Swara aur Ragini kaisi hai ??


As soon as DP asked abt SwaRagini.they came in front n greeted DP n entire MF.

SwaRagini : ( they were Shocked bt Happy to see entire MF after really a long tym ) Hum theek hai Papa n Bade Papa.app kaise hai ??

DP : haa beta hum theek hi hai.bas tum dono apne ghar wapas aajao phir hum puri tareh se theek hojaye ke.hum sab aaj bhi tum dono ka Intezaar karrahe hai.

SwaRagini were left widout words n were Sad.n were searching fr SanLak.DP n Shekhar notices it they also knew dat both SwaSan n RagLak met Eachother bt were pretending as if they dnt knw.n they also knw dat SanLak r planning to bring their respective Wives bak in their Lives.

Den SanLak enters n SwaRagini's Sad Face Lighted like a Blub.SanLak n DP n Shekhar notices it n were Happy to see SwaRagini Happy.

DP : Shekhar Ji chale ( gesturing towards all 4 of them n telling him let us leave them alone )

Shekhar n entire MF n GF understood DP's point n left frm there wid Happy faces.

SanLak were mesmerized to see SwaRagini in their Fav Color Dresses n were Totally Lost in their Beauty.

Sanskaar : Swara tum bahut acchi lagrahi hu ..

Swara : Thnk U Sanskaar ( Blushes ) aur waise tum bhi acche lagrahe ho ..

Sanskaar : Sacchi ?? Jab se tum gayi ho meri dressing style khrb hogayi hai.warna jab tum thi jab tum hamesha mere kapde nikalke rakhi thi ..

Swara : ohh haa hm ( No Words to say n remembers their Moments n Smiles )

RagLak convo.

Laksh : Ragini tum bahut acchi lagrahi ho tum ..

Ragini : Thnk u Laksh Ji.

Laksh : waise tum mujhe Sirf Laksh bula sakti ho.

Ragini : ( Blushes ) per kyoun ?? Mera matlab main kaise ??

Laksh : haa Ragini. Abb main tumse naaraz nhi hu.tumhe Maaf kardiya hai maine.

Ragini : ( super happy n shocked ) kya ?? Sacchi Laksh ji. ( gets emotional n thinks in Mind ) mere liye itna hi ki aap ne mujhe maaf kardiya.atleast mere sir se bhooj toh kaam hua..

Laksh : ( Listens to Ragini's Mind ) Main jaanta hu Ragini ki tum kya socch rahi ho.yeh hi na ki maine tumhe maaf kardiya aur woh hi badi baath hai tumhare liye aur iske elawa tum mujhse koi aur umeed nhin rakhugi.Bt Ragini I Promise ki main tumhe apne life main wapas lake hi rahuga.

All 4 ( i.e SwaSan n RagLak ) have Long Eye Lock n BG song


Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai, Thoda Hai Baaki
Thoda Sa Pyaar Hua Hai, Thoda Hai Baaki
Ham To Chahenge Tujhe
Ham Toh Chahenge Tujhe, Jab Talak Jan Hai Baaki..


DP calls them n all of them comes to their Senses.The host is Mr Mehra ( to whom Swara Scolded wen Sanskaar was talking on phone to him while Driving ).


Mr Mehra : Hello Swara Mam. Kaise hai aap ??

Swara : M fyn Mr Mehra.n m Sorry fr scolding soo Badly


Mr Mehra : its ok Mam.i knw ki aap Sanskaar Sir ki fikar karrahi thi.aur waise har Wife ka kaam hi hai hota hain ki apne Husband ka khayal rakhne ka .

Swara felt bit uncomfortable bt still was quite.

Swara : Haa.

Mr Mehra : ohh m sorry Mam.i forgot abt ur Divorce.waise Mam agr aap Bura na maane toh ek baath bolu? ?

Swara : Haa boliye na Mr Mehra .

Mr Mehra : Mam aap sir ke life main wapas aajao.woh aapko bahut miss Karte hai.jab woh Office main Free hote hai hai na toh aapki Photo ko dekh te hi rehte hai aur aapki yaad karte hai.

Sanskaar along with Entire MF n GF were listening to Mr Mehra n Swara's Convo.

Swara was left all silents n tears rolled frm her eyes n fell on Sanskaar's palm he felt the tears n wiped her tears n had a Small eye lock

Pyar Humne Kiya Hai, Pyar Tumne Kiya Hai
Yar Phir Imtihan Kyon, Jamane Ne Liya Hai
Pyar Humne Kiya Hai, Pyar Tumne Kiya Hai...

The Host ( Mr Mehra ) calls a da ppl fr dance.

DP n Shekhar Forces them (SwaSan n RagLak ) to go n dance.firstly they refuse bt later they Agreed.

SwaSan : Ji Baba n Bade Papa
RagLak : Ji Papa n Baba

They went to Dance

Sath Ham Denge Tera
Sath Ham Denge Tera Tujhse Vada Hai Saathi
Dard Jitna Milega Pyar Utna Badhega
Apni Chahat Ke Aage Ye Jamana Jhukega
Dil Se Dil Mil Hi Gaye
Dil Se Dil Mil Hi Gaye, Apna Milna Hai Baaki.

They Danced very passionately ehile Lookingin eachothers eyes.

SanLak kept their one hand on Their Respective wives waist n the other in their hands n pulled them towards them n SwaRagini kept one hand in their respective husband's hand n the other on their Shoulders.

Precap : SwaRagini Missing SanLak very Badly.

#Goldie
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
awsm...luved it...
nd plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Amazing chapters!!!!
Loved swasan and raglak 😳
Plzzz give next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Cool yaa..gr8..
Loved Laksh's nakhrein..n swasan was also cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
I was smiling all over it yaa..😳

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