FanFiction Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya SwaSan/RagLak Part23 Updated (Pg26) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Thnku for the pm
Precap seems interesting
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: neelzzz

Are wahh aj to 2 2 updates
Thanku

Nice 1


Thnks alot :). N my pleasure.will update 2 parts wenever m free
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thnks..n yes will update 2 parts today if possible.😊
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Thnk u Guyz fr Appreciating n Liking my Wrk.Keep Liking n Appreciating My Wrk n I will Entertaing u wid more FFs on SwaSan and RagLak.

OK Guyz here is the Nxt Part i.e Part 07 of My FF Jadoo Yeh Kya Chal Gaya.Hope u Like this Part too :).


Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya

Part 07

At Mumbai Railway Station

SwaRagini n SanLak Reaches Mumabi.They r Soo Tired as the Train Journey was soo Tiring n Too Long.

Swara : Haayee !!! Ragini atlast after a sitting in Train fr Looonngg tym we reached Mumbai...Main Bahut thak gayi hu.jaldi chalo Hotel.I cnt stand here anymore longer.

Ragini : Haa Swara..chalo..main bhi bahut thak gayi hu.

As they were abt to leave the Station fr Hotel.They See SanLak.

Swara : ( Rubs her eyes after seeing Sanskaar ) Ragini dekho waha Sanskaar ko dekha maine ..

Ragini : Kaha Swara.Sanskaar yaha thodi aayege..Shayad tumhe koi ghalat fahmi hui hai..abb chodo yeh sab aur chalo Hotel.

Swara : nhi Ragini. Mera wahem thodi hai yeh..maine sacchi main Sanskaar ko dekha.

And at the Same tym Ragini too sees Laksh n is Shocked n she too rubs her Eyes.

Ragini : Swara ..maine bhi abhi Laksh ko dekha yaha..

Swara : Kaha Ragini..nhi hai yaha Laksh.aur Laksh yaha kyoun aayega.Sanskaar ka toh Business hai yaha toh woh aasakta hai..perr..Laksh i dnt think so Ragini..

Ragini : Haa Swara.shayad u r ryt.Laksh yaha kyoun aayege..main hi socch rahi thi shayad..

Swara : Haa Haa.abb toh Laksh hi dhikhege tumhe..aakhir Pyaar jo karti ho usse. ( she teases her n Tickles her on her side )

Ragini : Kya Swara..tum bhi..kya kehrahi ho.. ( she blushes n Gets Sad coz she knws dat she cn never get Her Love Laksh bak in Her Life,she tries to divert the Topic ).Mera toh samajh aata hai ki kyoun mujhe Laksh dhikhte hai lekin tumhe kyoun Har jagah Sanskaar dhikhrahe hai..kahi tumhe unse Pyaaarr toh nhi hogaya ??

Swara : ( Blushes ) Haa Ragini Nhi mera matlab... ( she is confused ) nhi Ragini. .kya kehrahi ho tum ?? Abb chodo yeh sab chalo Hotel chale thoda aaram karte hai phir practice bhi toh karna hai hume.

SwaRagini finally leaves the Station ny Smiling n Blushing inside.

SanLak too sees SwaRagini bt they Smile n Ignore thinking dat they r thinking abt SwaRagini here also .

Sanskaar : Laksh. .mujhe yaha Swara dhikhi abhi..lekin aachanak ghayab hogayi.. ( shocked n confused )

Laksh : Kaha Bhai..yaha aur Swara ?? Nhin Bhai shayad tum Swara ko kuch zaada hi yaad karrahe ho ( teasing )

Then Laksh also sees Ragini.

Laksh : Bhai..wait..shayad maine bhi abhi Ragini ko dekha hai.lekin woh bhi achanak se ghayab hogayi ( he is too shocked n confused ).

SanLak then Laughs n Pats eachother n leaves fr the Hotel..

SwaRagini n SanLak Finally Reaches The Mumbai Grand Hotel.They see eachother n r shocked to see them here.Then Hotel Bags Picker comes n Welcomes Mr n Mrs Sanskaar n Laksh Maheshwari. All four of them r Shocked n stares at eachother n remembers their Marriage Day n their sweet Moments.Then they cones out of their Thots.

SanLak : Excuse me..i guess u r mistaken we r nt married nw..

SwaRagini : Haa .. hum married nhi hai abhi..aapko koi ghalat fahmi hui hai.

Hotel Man : Ohh M Sorry Mam n Sir. Actually hume inform kiya gaya tha ki Kolkata se 4 Log aayege Maheshwari Family ke Naam se jiski abhi abhi Shaadi hui hai..toh we thot ki its u 4..We r Extremely Sorry fr the Misunderstanding.

SanLak n SwaRagini : Its ok..hume apne kamre main leke chaliye..

Then they go to the Reception n asks the Receptionist fr their Room's Keys.

SanLak n SwaRagini : Hume humare kamre ke Keys dedijiye.

Receptionist : Ok Mam n Sir..Aaplog Apna naam bataiye..

SanLak : Mr Sanskaar Maheshwari n Mr Laksh Maheshwari.

SwaRagini : Miss Swara Gadodia n Miss Ragini Gadodia.

Receptionist : ( Gets confused ) Lekin yaha toh aisa koi naam se booking nhi hui hai lekin haa Mr n Mrs Sanskaar Maheshwari aur Mr n Mrs Laksh Maheshwari ke naam se hui hai booking.

All of them ( SwaRagini n SanLak r Confused n doesnt knw wat is happening wid them ).

SanLak : Kya ?? Aise kaise hosakta hai ??

SwaRagini : Haa..arrey jab hum married hi nhi hai toh hum Mr n Mrs kaise huwe ?

SanLak : ok koi baath nhi shayad koi misunderstanding hui hai ek kaam kariye aap ki naam chnge karke Mr n Mrs Sanskaar Maheshwari aur Mr n Mrs Laksh Maheshwari ke jageh aap Mr Sanskaar Maheshwari n Mr Laksh Maheshwari aur Miss Swara Gadodia n Miss Ragini Gadodia Kar di jiye.

Receptionist : Sorry Sir we cnt chng the names.its agnst our rules.

Actually DP n Shekhar already called n informed them abt all these,so the Receptionist n Entire Hotel staff were following DP's n Shekhar's instructions.And this Hotel belongs to Shekhar only wich was opened few months ago n SwaRagini was unaware abt this Hotel belongs to them.


SanLak : Kya ?? Iska matlab hume rooms bhi SwaRagini ke saath dhare karna hoga ??

Receptionist : Haa Sir..we cnt help Sir.We r extremely Sorry bt hum chahke bhi aapki koi help nhi karpayege.

SanLak n SwaRagini are Tensed n thinking dat going to someother Hotel is waste coz its A Wedding Season n all the Hotels will b booked in advance. So finally they Agree n decides to share the rooms ( i.e SwaSan in One Room n RagLak in One Room ).

SanLak n SwaRagini : Theek hai Keys dedi jiye..

Receptionist : Ok Sir Mam.Here r ur keys . Have a Pleasant Stay :).

SanLak n SwaRagini : ( Smiles n Says ) Thnk U.

Then as soon as SanLak n SwaRagini Left .Receptionist calls Shekhar.

Receptionist : Hello Sir..everything is done as per ur instructions Sir :).

Shekhar : Wow..dats Gr8 Naina ( Name of the Receptionist ).Good Job !!!

SwaSan n RagLak Enters their respective Rooms.

In SwaSan Room

Swara was entering the Room wen her Leg hitted the Door step n she was abt to Fall bt at Nick of tym Sanskaar came n Holded her Waist n Safed her frm Falling down.They both have a Eyelock n Swara felt Sanskaar's touch on her waist.

BG Song

Jaado Yeh Kya Chal Gaya
Jaanu Na Kya Ho Gaya
Jadoo Yeh Kya Chal Gaya...
Halki Halki Uljhan Hain
Bekaraar Si Dhadkan Hain
Kya Yeh Dil Usi Ka Ho Na Chaahe..
Kya Wahi Woh Apna Hain
Kya Wahi Woh Sapna Hain...

SwaSan Comes out of the Eyelock n Sanskaar Releases Swara.

Sanskaar : Tum theek toh ho na Swara ?? Sambhal ke chalo zara..

Swara : (she fumbles n is nervous ) Haa..main theek ho..Thnk U ..

In RagLak Room

RagLak Enters the Room n they settles Down n sits fr sometym to take rest.Laksh was sitting on bed n Ragini was jst a few distance away frm him.When Ragini was abt to get up n go to WashRoom fr freshen up her Dupatta gets Stuck in Laksh's Watch.She gets scared n holds her Dupatta n turned bak n saw Laksh.Laskh was also Nervous n goes near Ragini.they too Had a Eyes lock.

BG Song

Jaado Yeh Kya Chal Gaya
Jaanu Na Kya Ho Gaya
Jadoo Yeh Kya Chal Gaya...
Halki Halki Uljhan Hain
Bekaraar Si Dhadkan Hain
Kya Yeh Dil Usi Ka Ho Na Chaahe..
Kya Wahi Woh Apna Hain
Kya Wahi Woh Sapna Hain...

RagLak comes out of their Eyelock.

Laksh : Sorry woh Actually meri Ghadi har jagah aatak jaati hai..usse theek karne ka tym hi nhi milta.

Ragini : Its Ok ..Np.

In Kolkata

In Baadi

Shomi is still tensed n nervous thinking abt the Falling of SwaRagini's Photo while cooking.

Shekhar : ( sees her in her thots n speaks lil louder ) Shomii.. ( as Milk was falling frm the Kettle n she was going to touch da hot milk kettle widout any cloth ).

Shomi : ( Comes out of her thots bt she had already touched da hot kettle ) Aaaouuch !!!

Shekhar : ( Immediately brings ice n applies on Shomi's Hands ) kya karahi thi..dhiyaan kaha tha tumahra? ? ( in full anger )

Shomi : woh Actually. ...( fumbles,bt Shekhar understood )

Shekhar : Woh Photo Frame toothne se pereshaan ho na ??

Shomi : Haa woh...

Shekhar : Dekho Shomi aisa kuch nhi hota..yeh sab bekaar ke baate hai.aur tumkabse in sab main maane lagi ?? Tum toh khilaf thi na iss sab ke ?

Shomi : haa Shekhar. .aaj bhi ho..bt pata nhi kyoun Shekhar mera Dil bahut ghabraha hai..mujhe ek baar meri betiyoon se baath karwado. ( hugs Shekhar n cries )

Shekhar : Accha baba..ruko aabhi baath karwa tha ho.( wipes Shomi's tears )


Shekhar calls Swara's Number.SwaSan n RagLak were sitting in Hotel's Cafeteria.

Swara : Hello Baba..kaise hai aap ?? ( fumbles as she was lil scared of hiding da matter dat she is staying wid Sanskaar in one Room).

Shekhar : Haa beta.main toh theek hu lekin tumahri Maa.


Swara keeps da phone in speaker so that Ragini cud also hear the Convo.

SwaRagini : ( Got Scared n Shocked) Ka hua Maa ko Baba ?? Boliye na??

Shekhar : offo !! Tum aur tumahri ek dam ek jaisi ho.jaldi react kardeti ho.

SwaRagini : Matlab? ? ( Shekhar explains the whole story to SwaRagini ).

SwaRagini Laughs listening this n gives Hi Fi to eachother.

SwaRagini : accha Baba.aap Maa ko phonedijiye him baath larte hai unse.

Shekhar : Ok wait Beta. ( he gives to Shomi)

SwaRagini n Shomi had a talk n cuts the call bt still Shomi is nt convinced bt still hides her concern.

In Mumbai

SwaSan n RagLak r in their Respective Rooms.

In SwaSan Room

Swara was Arranging Sanskaar's Bed to sleep n was thinking abt the Sweet Moments wen they stayed together in Room in MM n was Smiling.When Suddenly Aftet Swara completing the wrk on Bed turns n sees Sanskaar in front of her n get scared n falls on bed wid Sanskaar on top of her.Sanskaar's Hands were on Swara's Shoulders.Swara felt his touch on on her Shoulder n was Blushing n they have lonngg n passionate romantic eyelock too.

BG Song

Jadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiya Hai,Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaau Kaha,
Dekhatee Hai Jis Tarah Se Teree Najare Mujhe,Mai Khud Ko Chupau Kaha
Jadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiya Hai, Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaau Kaha...


Sanskaar was abt to kis her Lips n Swara instead of stopping him she closed her eyes n was waiting fr Sanskaar to Kiss her bt Sanskaar comes in his senses n stops himself frm Kissing her n gets up frm her top.Swara opens her eyes n realizes wat she was going to do n blushes n goes to Sleep by putting a Blanket on her.Sanskaar Sees this n Smiles n goes to sleep.

In RagLak Room

Ragini was standing in Balcony alone staring at the Stars n thinking something wen suddenly she heard a Scary Voice n Hugged Laksh who was opening his shirt to chnge . Ragini left dat he was widout shirt bt due to fearness she did nt leave him n they both too had a lonng n Passionate romantic eye lock.

BG Song

Zindagi Se Chura Ke,Zindagi Mein Basa Ke,Zindagani Banaya Hai Tujhe,Roothe Rab Ko Mana Ke
Aasmaan Ko Jhuka Ke,Zindagani Banaya Hai Tujhe,

Mehfooz Tu Mehsoos Kar,Tere Paas Hoon Main Sada
Tujhse Nahi Ho Sakta Main Pal Bhar Bhi Ab Juda..

Laksh was abt to Open Ragini's Bak Dori of her Dresss n Touched her bak.Ragini felt his Touch n both of them were abt to Kiss wen Laksh came in his Senses n realized wat he going to do . Ragini to came to her Senses n ran towards her Sleeping place took a Blanket over her n slept while Blushing.Laksg saw this n he too Smiled n went to Sleep.

Precap : SwaRagini talking to some Boys to Make SanLak Jealous bt were Unaware dat Those Boys were actually a Bad Boys.

So Guyz this was the Part 07 of Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya.Hope u Liked it.M sorry if it was too Romantic bt ppl requested fr some Romance so added it.Hope u liked it :).

#Goldie
Edited by Goldie93 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Thnku for the pm
Awesome update
Hope nothing happens to Swaragini
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: alisha17

Thnku for the pm

Awesome update
Hope nothing happens to Swaragini
Can't wait for next part


Thnks fr Appreciating..will update the nxt part asap 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
superb update...
nd thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
u r a master piece goldie dear...just loved ur ff..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: M_Annu

u r a master piece goldie dear...just loved ur ff..


Thnks alot 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Loved this...love their scenes... how cute...
Precap looks interesting...waiting...

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