FanFiction Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya SwaSan/RagLak Part23 Updated (Pg26)

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Thnks fr all ur Appreciation Guyz..it means a lot..Hope u like This Part too 😊

Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya

Part 04

Party Ended at both the Families i.e MF n GF Left fr their respective Houses.DP instructed SanLak to Drop SwaRagini at their Homes Safely.

SanLak : Ok Papa n Bade Papa.

SwaRagini were Happy bt controlled their Happines.

In RagLak Car

Ragini was having little Pain in her Legs as she got Hurt in Mandir n she Danced too..

Ragini : ( in pain bt controls her pain ,bt Laksh by suddenly applies Sudden brk,so she cud nt control her n pain n screamed ) Ouch !! Laksh Ahista Plzz ..

Laksh : Ohh Kk M Sorry Ragini.woh actually saamne ek Billi thi toh usse bacchane ke liye sudden brk lagana paadha..

Ragini : Its Ok Laksh..

Laksh had an Ointment in his Car for Pain Relief so he applies on her leg,wen Ragini Intreprupted.

Ragini : Laksh yeh aap kya karrahe ho..aap mere legs kyoun chirahe ho ??

Laksh : Toh kya hua Ragini ?? Tumhe pain horaha hai toh isiliye Ointment lagaraha hu..aur tumse kisne kaha ki Males Ladkiyoon ke legs nhi chicte ?? Main khali thodi chiraha hu .. ek wajeh se chiraha ho na..toh its ok.

Ragini was touched by his words bt she knew dat Laksh is saying all these as a frnd only ( Sad )..

In SwaSan Car

Swara was sitting beside Sanskaar ( they were in mid of the road waiting fr Green Signal ) in Car n moved her Hands towards da tape recorder to on it..n wen she swtiched it on a song Played n they had a Small Eye Lock

Dehleez Pe Mere Dil Ki

Jo Rakhe Hain Tune Kadam

Tere Naam Pe Meri Zindagi

Likh Di Mere Humdum

Haan Seekha Maine Jeena Jeena Kaise Jeena

Haan Seekha Maine Jeena Mere Humdum

Na Seekha Kabhi Jeena Jeena Kaise Jeena

Na Seekha Jeena Tere Bina Humdum...

Wen Suddenly Green Singal came n ppl at bak strtd pressing their Horns loudly.then they came in their senses.

Sanskaar : Kya tumne Apna Music School Open kiya jo tum karne wali thi ??

Swara : Nhi Sanskaar.woh open nhi karsaki.woh actually itna sab kuch hogaya tha aur woh bhi itni jaldi ki tym hi nhi mila iske baare main sochne ke liye.

Sanskaar : Ohh toh aap plan karo na.waise bahut tym hogaya uss bure waqt ko Jaake.so i think u shud think abt it ??

Swara : Haa u ryt ..lets see Sanskaar ( Smiles ).

Swara : Waise tumne aaje kya socha hai ?? I mean shaadi waadi karni hai ya nhi ?? ( she was expecting a No frm Sanskaar ) ( Wink Similey ).

Sanskaar : ( Understood her Talks ) Haa..waise Mom n Badi Maa dhundh rahi hai Ladki mere aur Laksh ke ki liye.kyounke unhe lagta hai ki hume aage badh jana chahiye.

Swara: ( sad face ) toh kya tum maan jaoge agr Mom aur Badi Mom ne Ladki pasand karli toh ??

Sanskaar : Tumhe kya lagta hai ?? Main Maan jaoga kya ??

Swara : Main kya bolu isme ?? Its ur life na ( sad n unhappy face )

Sanskaar : Haa karlunga ..kyounki abb tum toh hoo hi nhi mere saath jiske liye main jeetha tha..aur waise bhi pehle bhi maine apni khud ki marzi karke ghar walo ka Dil bahut dukhaya hai.isiliye abb jab sab theek hogaya hai aur sab mere liye ladki dhund rahe hai main kyoun mana karu aur unka Dil dhukhaao.

SwaSan was Silent for few minutes n they had a eye lock.

Sanskaar : ( he broke da Eye Lock ) Waise bhi Maine jiss kisi se bhi Pyaar kiya tha un dono ne mera saath chodiya aur lagta hai kismat ko bhi mera pyaar karna manzoor nhi tha aur na hai. ( was feeling like to laugh seeing Swara's Face,bt controlled it )

Swara : ( Was left heart broken by his words n felt bad for him ).toh kya tum usse apne life main ek wife ke ryts de sakooge ?? I mean ki..

Sanskaar : Haa..i mean shuru main thodi prblm toh hogi bt jaise tym beete ka i will accept it.kehte hai na ki Waqt bade se bada zakham bhar deta hai.toh phir yeh dil toothne wali baath toh mere liye ek aadat si bangayi hai .

Swara : ( cud feel his Pain ) Haa Sanskaar.i guess u shud move ahead ( she was nt fully happy wid his decision )

SwaSan n RagLak reached baadi n sanLak went home after dropping them.

In Baadi n MM

SwaSan Scene ( in their own respective rooms in their respective Houses )

SwaRagini were Missing SanLak Very Badly n were thinking abt the recent Moments ( like their Dance, n their Car Scenes )

Swara : ( speaking in her own Mind ) Yeh mujhe kya horaha hai yaar.mujhe kyoun bura lagraha hai yeh jaanke ki Sanskaar shaadi karne ke liye ready hogaya hai. AISA KYA JAADOO CHALGAYA mujh pe Uska ( Confused )

Sanskaar : I knw Swara ki tum bahut Confuse ho aur thoda Ghussa aur Heart Broken sa feel karrahi ho.bt Shona ( wen Sanskaar called Shona,there in Baadi Swara felt like someone Very Close Called her wid her Pet Name ) M Sorry fr hurting u i have to do this fr making u realize u ur Feelings fr me .

Swara : Aisa kyoun lagraja hai ki mujhe kisi ne bulaya hai Shona bolke ( Feeling Uncomfortable n turning here n there on Bed n Missing Sanskaar alot )

RagLak Scene ( in their own respective rooms in their respective Houses )

Ragini : Kyoun Laksh ?? Aisa kyoun achanak se ?? Pehle toh app meri shakal dekhna pasand nhi karte the aur abb achanak ?? Kyoun meri takleef bada rahe ho aap ??

Laksh : i knw Ragini ki abb tum bahut takleef main hogi yeh socch socch ke ki main aisa achanak itna polite kyoun hogaya hu tumhare saath.bt Ragini tumhe Mera Pyaar ka Ehsaas dilane ke liye i have to Hurt u Ragini. M sorry Jaan ( wen Laksh called Jaan,Ragini toi left that someone close is calling her,Laksh Feeling Sad for Hurting her )

Ragini : Aisa kyoun lagraha hai ki mujhe kisi ne bulaya hai Jaan bolke ( Feeling Uncomfortable n turning here n there on Bed n Missing Laksh alot )

All 4 of them Missing eachother Very Badly n turning on Bed here n there.

BG Song :

Jaado Yeh Kya Chal Gaya

Jaanu Na Kya Ho Gaya

Jadoo Yeh Kya Chal Gaya...

Halki Halki Uljhan Hain

Bekaraar Si Dhadkan Hain

Kya Yeh Dil Usi Ka Ho Na Chaahe..

Kya Wahi Woh Apna Hain

Kya Wahi Woh Sapna Hain

Aksar Dekhti Hain Jo Nigaahe

Ek Ajnabi Ne Kya Kar Diya

Ehsaas Dil Mein Yeh Kya Bhar Diya..Khoyi Rahe Din Raina Subh Ho Shaam

Hoga Iska Jaane Kya Anjaam

Ho Ho Ho...

Jaadu Yeh Kya Chal Gaya

Jaanu Na Kya Ho Gaya...

They Sleep while Thinking abt Eachother ( i.e Swara n Sanskaar abt SwaSan Moments n Ragini n Laksh abt RagLak Moments ) their Recent Sweet Memories along wid Past Sweet Memories.

The End !!!

Hope u Guyz liked my 4th Part of "Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya".Tried My Level Best to make it Romantic n To Express their Feelings .Hope u like it 😊Do Leave ur Comments 😊.

Precap : SanLak talking to their Girls College Frnds n SwaRagini getting Jealous .

#Goldie

Edited by Goldie93 - 9 years ago

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rinku95

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Superb
Jealousy factor always works
Continue soon

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radha 🦚

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome awesome awesome.. floor breaking yaa..
Excited to see swaragini getting jealous..

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Goldie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: rinku95
Superb
Jealousy factor always works
Continue soon

Thnks alot 😊.ya sure will continue soon 😊

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Goldie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove
Awesome awesome awesome.. floor breaking yaa..
Excited to see swaragini getting jealous..

Thnks alot 😊..it means alot..

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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RagLak car scene was sooo sweet & SwaSan scene was sooo awww I wanted to laugh at Swara's reaction to him accepting to move forward and marry someone...
And their bedroom scenes were also adorable

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

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awsm update

i luved swara sanskar moments regarding his marge

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alisha17

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome update

Can't wait for next part

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Tapathi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nice update yaar...eager for next part

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Goldie

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Hello Guyz Thnks fr all ur Appreciation it means alot :).Here is the Nxt Part of my FF.Hope you Like it :).

Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya

Part 05

Next Morning

In Baadi

SwaRagini wakes up n gets ready to go down n den they recieve a call frm their old College Frnds fr a Small Get Together in a Near By College Cafe..

SwaRagini : ( Swara gets a call on her phone bt she keeps it on Speaker so that Ragini cud also hear ) Hello Zoya..kaisi ho ?? Long Time !!!

Zoya : Haa Hii SwaRagini..m fyn..he r u both ??

SwaRagini : We r fyn Zoya :) (super happy to talk wid Zoya after a really Long Tym ).

Zoya : Accha suno we r planning to meet all our College Gang in near by College Cafe ..so tum dono bhi aajao...then frm there we cn go College n meet our Teachers n Head Master..

SwaRagini : Woow !! Zoya good Idea..haa we will surely come..waise bhi we r getting bored at home daily..

Zoya : Toh theek hai.b ready n reach the cafe by 4pm..

SwaRagini : Ok Zoya..we will b there on tym..dnt worry ...

They Hung the Call..

In MM.

SanLak wakes up n gets ready fr the Office n goes down to have a Brk Fast.

In Hall at Dinning Table

SanLak n entire Family Members are on Dinning Table fr Brk Fast.When Adarsh strt teasing SanLak fr Last Nyt's Dance..

Adarsh : Waise Parineeta,Kal ki Part kitni Acchi thi na ?? Mujhe toh bahut maaza aaya tha ( winks at Parineeta n singals her to join her in teasing SanLak ).

Parineeta : (she got Adarsh's Motive n decided to join him in that n winks him bak) Haa Adarsh Ji..aap theek kehrahe ho..Kal ki party kitni acchi thi.mujhe bhi bahut maaza aaya tha.kash Party aur thodi daer tak chalti.l

Adarsh : Haa Pari..aur woh Dance kitna accha tha..aisa lagraha tha ki 2 Raj Kumar apni Rajkumariyoon ke saath naach rahe hai.

Parineeta : Aur haa Adarsh Ji..Maine chaaro ghar se bahar milte hue bhi dekha tha..Un chaaro main se 1 couple Airport chalegaye n dusra Couple Mandir..

After Listening the Airport n Mandir talks SanLak while eating gets a cough n food comes out their Mouth in Nervousness

Adarsh n Pari along with entire Family smiles n control their Laughs..

Sanskaar : Kya bhaiyya..aaplog bhi ..kya bekaar ki baate lege baith gaye..aur waise main Jaan bhuj ke Swara ko Airport nhi leke gaya tha.

Laksh : Haa Adarsh Bhai..maine bhi Ragini ko Jaan bhuj ke Mandir nhi lege gaya.infact main usse Mandir hi nhi lege gaya..we meet there in Mandir aur waha se i took her to Hospital..

SanLak bursted the Entire Truth in Nervousness.

Adarsh : Kya SanLak tum dono Swara Aur Ragini se kab mile kal ?? Tum dono toh Office ke Kaam se gaye the na ??

Parineeta : Haa Bolo kab mile..aur hum dono ki baate sunke tum dono itna kyoun khabra gaye ?? Hum dono toh apne frnds ki baath karrahe the jo kal Party main aaye the ( Adarsh n Pari Winked at eachother )

Actually DP n Shekhar told everything to their Entire Family b4 leaving fr Home frm Party Venue.And dat tym SwaSan N RagLak were left frm the Venue.

SanLak were confused n were nervous hw to Handle this Situation.

Then DP after seeing their Faces signaled Adarsh n Pari to Stop the Joke..Pari n Adarsh gustured OK..

DP : Chalo abb nashta karlo jaldi aur Office ke liye tayar hojao.

SanLak n Adarsh : Ji Theek Hai Papa n Bade Papa.

All the Males Left fr Office in MM.

In Baadi

Shekhar n Shomi were talking abt SwaRagini n their Future..

Shomi : Shekhar yeh sab imtihaam humare bacchiyoon ke jeevan main hi kyoun hai ( feeling sad n tears rolling frm her eyes )

Shekhar : Aisa kyoun bolrahi ho tum..Hum hai na Humare Bacchiyoon ke saath.hum unka saath deke jab tak hum hai.

Shomi : haa Shekhar mainwoh hi kehrahi hu.Jab tak hum hai hum khayal rakhege lekin humare jaane ke baath kaun rakhega.Hum zindagi bhar toh nhi rehege na un dono ke saath ( Crying Very Badly n hugs Shekhar ).

Shekhar : ( He too hugs her bak ) Fikar mat karo Shomi humare Daamand hai na unka khayal rakhne ke liye.haa main jaanta ho ki abb un chaaro ke beech kuch bhi theek nhi hai.

Shomi : ( Was going to say something,bt Shekhar Intreprupts in b/w ). Lekin Shekhar. ..

Shekhar : Lekin kya Shomi..Kal tum ne dhekha nhi ki woh chaaro kitne acchi tarrah se ek dusre ke saath dance karrahe the aur kitne comfortable the..aisa lag hi nhi raha the ke woh chaaro 8 mahine ke baad mile hai.aisa lagraha tha ke woh log kbhi alag hi nhi hue..

Shomi : Haa Shekhar. .tum shayad theek kehrahe ho.Main shayad kuch zaada hi socch rahi thi..hume thoda aur waqt dena chahiye SwaRagini ko.

Shekhar : Haa Shomi..u r ryt.dekhna jaise aaj Sanskaar aur Laksh try karrahe hai na Swara aur Ragini ko manane ka waise hi ek din Humare Betiyaan bhi karegi..

Shomi : Haa Shekhar. .

Shekhar : Abb toh Bas karo Shomi rona aur muskurao.warna phir se tumhari Naakh ( Nose ) moti hojayegi.aur phir tumhe dekhge SwaRagini bhi royegi aur unlogoke bhi Nakh Moti hojayegi. Aakhir tumhari hi toh betiyaan hai woh dono

Shekhar Teases her n Shomi while wiping her tears laughs n hits Shekhar bak in Masti Way.Then they see SwaRagini coming down n wipes their tears.

Shomi : Arrey Beta..tum dono kahi kaarahe ho kya iss waqt ??

SwaRagini : Haa Maa. Woh Actually Subah Zoya ka call aaya tha aur usne kaha ki hum sab small get together rakhrahe hai ..toh isiliye ...

Shomi : Ohh accha..theek hai jao lekin time se pehle aajaana.

SwaRagini : Ok Mom thnk u Mom.

Shekhar : Accha Ji.sab Maa se puchliya aur Baba se kuch nhi haa ( asks in Masti way ).

SwaRagini : Awww Baba..We r Sorry..aap na hume Cafe chodijiye.. ( laughs while saying this n gives Hi Fi to eachother )

Shekhar : ( In anger mood ) accha ok.abb hum sirf yehi kaam ke liye hai na..

Then All 4 ( i.e Shekhar Shomi n SwaRagini has a Family Hug n a Sweet n Cute Gadodia Family Moment ).

Then SwaRagini were dropped near the cafe by Shekhar.

SwaRagini : Thnk U Baba..

Shekhar : U r Most Welcome my Princesses.

SwaRagini : ( Looks at eachother n smiles and says ) We Love U Baba..Muwaah !!!

Shekhar : I Love u too Beta...Muwwah !! Take Care Beta aur haa jaise Maa ne kaha tym pe aajana.

SwaRagini : Haa ok Baba..dnt worry.

Shekhar leaves frm there.then SwaRagini sees SanLak wid some Girls who were talking to them very freely n behaving like as if they were their GFs ( Here GF means Girl Frnds nt Gadodia Family )

Sanskaar : ( Laughing n Enjoying ) Haa Piya..u r ryt.woh din bahut Acche the..i cn never forget those dyz.

Laksh : Haa Bhai..aap toh uss tym pe bahut chupe rustam the.aapko yaad hai ki aap Piya ke peeche rehte the hamesha ..

Sanskaar : Haa Laksh. .yaad hai..accha tu mujhe tease kaaraha hai.tum apna kaise bhulsakte ho..main toh sirf Ek Ladki ke peeche tha lekin tu toh My God !! Najaane kitne ladkiyoon ke peeche tha..i guess 15 to 20 toh honge Max. ( Laughing n Enjoying the Talks )

There on the other side SwaRagini were Getting Jealous n was bcoming Red like Anything .

Swara : Dekho Ragini..kitne haste hue un ladiyoon se baath karrahe hai yeh log..

Ragini : Haa Swara..yeh log aise baath karrahe hai jaise hume alag hoge saalo hogaya hai.hume bhulgaye in 8 mahino main..

Swara is feeling damn Angry n goes Near Sanskaar n those Girs n where as Ragini is Feeling bad too bt is nt able to say so meting coz she knws dat Laksh will nt accept her..

SwaSan Scene

Swara : ( in Full Anger Mood ) Yeh Sab kya horaha hai Sanskaar. Tumhe aaj Office nhi tha kya ??

Sanskaar : Ohh Hello Swara..kasi ho tum ?? Aur tum yaha kya karrahi ho?

Swara : Meri Chodo..tum yahan in ladkiyoon ke saath kya karrahe ho? Aur woh bhi itna ...

was going to completeher sentence bt b4 she could say something Sanskaar kept his one Palm on Piya' Palm.

Swara : ( getting nore angry ) Sanskaar ..yeh kya karrahe ho tum. .chodo uss ladki ka haath..

Sanskaar : wat Swara ?? Yeh Piya Hai meri College ki Best Frnd Ever..tum itna over react kyoun karahi ho like a wife ?? We r nt Husband n Wife Anymore Swara.aur waise bhi tum mujhe chodke gayi main nhi.toh tumhe kyoun itna farw padhraha hai ...

Swara : Haa Sanskaar u r ryt.main hi tumhe chod ke gayi thi mujhe koi rq nhi padhna chahiye ( in full anger ).

RagLak Scene

While SwaSan were fighting Laksh was talking to anothet Girl Named Sushmita ( bt was calling her Sush ).He was sitting too close to her n was going to keep his Hand on her shoulder.bt then Ragini comes n stops him on time.

Ragini : ( In full anger..coz she cud nt control her anymore) Laksh yej kya karrahe app ?? Hadd hoti hai Badtameezi ki .

Laksh : WTH Ragini . .hw dare u ??

Ragini : Kya Hw dare u ?? App ek respectable Ghar ke ladke hai aur respectable ghar ke boys ki yeh sab accha nhi lagta.

Laksh : Dekho Ragini. Yeh meri Life hai.main isse kaise jiyo tumhe kya ??

Ragini : Haa Laksh..aap sahi kehrahe hai..hume isse kya ? aap jaise bhi jiye ( tears coming out of her eyes )

Then SwaRagini took their Sandles out of tjeir legs n strd hitting da Girl's . Girls ran frm there seeing SwaRagini in Angry Mood.

SwaRagini : Aap logo ne sahi kaha ki isse hume koi farw nhi padhna chahiye ki aap log kisse milte hai aur kaise milte hai.bt aaplogo ke family members ko farw padhta hai.isiliye aap logo ko khayal rakhna chahiye apne family name ka aur apne elders ke reputation ka.

Saying this SwaRagini went home wid Tears in their Eyes. They were left heart Broken by SanLak' Harsh Words.

Sanskaar : ( Looking at Laksh n Strtd Laughing Loudly ) Dekha Laksh..itna hal bhunrahi thi yeh dono.

Laksh : Haa Bhai.u r ryt..main tohpagaal horah tha apni Hassi Control karke.Swara ko maine kbhi itna Over Possessive nhi dekha jitna aaj dekha hai...Ohhh God Bhai !!! She LOVES YOU sooo much..

Sanskaar : Haa Laksh..Pyaar th Karti hai lekin pata nhi realize kab karegi ( Sad Face ).

Laksh : Karegi Bhai..patience. .abhi toh shuruwat hai realization ka..aage aage dekho hota hai kya (winks a Sanskaar )

Sanskaar : Haa Lucky. ..aur Ragini ko dekha..apni feelings usne family ke zariye se dekhti lol...uper Swara bhi Family ka hawala deke chali gayi. ..

Then SanLak goes to those girls n gives them some Money n Apologise those Girls fr SwaRagini's Mis Behaviour (by this tym u all myt have understood dat all these was a Plan of SanLak to make SwaRagini Jealous :p ).

SwaRagini goes to Baadi in Anger n goes to their Room n closes the Door.

Swara : Samajh te kya hai Sanskaar apne aap ko ?? Kehne ko toh kehta hai ki mujhse bahut Pyaar karta hai .toh abb woh kaise aisakarsakta hai aur Shaadi ke liye bhi maan gaya ..hw cn he do this to me ?. (Crying very badly )

Ragini : M Sorry Laksh.i knw ki over reacted n mera koi haq nhi hai aape aur aapki Life pe. Bt pata nhi i cud nt control myself..main jaanti hu ki aisa over react karke maine aapko apne aapse aur door kardiya hai ( crying very badly ).

In MM

SanLak r too very upset in their Respective Rooms.

In Sanskaar's Room

Sanskaar : i Kne Swara i Hurted u soo mich today.bt i also knw ki jab tumhe sacch pata chalega ki maine yeh sab kyoun kiya tum mujhe maaf kardogi ( he is also crying in his heart n feeling lonely )

In Laksh's Room

Laksh : I Knw Ragini i Hurted u soo much today.bt i also knw ki jab tumhe sacch pata chalega ki maine yeh sab kyoun kiya tum mujhe maaf kardogi ( he is also crying in his heart n feeling lonely )

BG Song fr all 4 of them

Tere Bin Nahi Rehna, Nahi Rehna

Tere Bin Nahi Rehna

Yeh Zindagi Toh Tere Bin

Lagti Hai Jaise Ek Sazaa

Oh Nashtar Si Chubhti Har Khushi

Khanjar Sa Chubhta Har Mazaa

Tu Hi Meri Hai Roshni

Tu Jo Nahin Kuch Bhi Nahi

Tujh Bin Toh Ab Har Pal

Barse Mere Naina...

Shekhar n DP Notices da Duo ( Shekhar sees SwaRagini Crying Very Badly in Baadi n DP sees SanLak Crying Very Badly in MM).