FF: Angel. (Request : Page: 140) - Page 84

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Loved it

Can adjust with weekly twice updates but not less than that

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

Swetha..
🤗

This is cute..😆.
Thank you so much ra.

Originally posted by: TRPS

Jai hind Nimmi! ;) my God !! won't forget this!! Gabriel "the Angel" and Kitten at their Best. just loving them. starting from very beginning, I just couldn't understand Lakshya, (no need there is! :P) he should be thankful to his dad, chant his name 1000 times a day because he didn't drag him onto his world, and see, nonsense ,couldn't understand this, took honour in his father's doing and wanted his throne that too without earning the position and above all took rivalry from " THE GABRIEL" without any reason... well in starting, I feel sorry for him as his father never gave him the love and attention he needed but not now .. not at all..
and Ram prasad and Apte instead making him understand the gravity of situation, they supported him.
and then came Gabriel!!! naah!!! he is THE GABRIEL.. The one of his kind. angel of dark world. man of his words. love aloofness and quite mysterious. if I keep aside the fact that he is assassin, I found him a wonderful human being. he is the best in everything.. I just love where you mentioned that you can talk with him on each and everything, be it Geetaa , this really raised my brow in admiration. I really liked this fact. and yeah, guitarist too. now, this arose a question in me, what is he actually as a person if we read him from inside ,who isn't Gabriel but he is... is insaan ko kya naam doon..
and then came sunny, bubbly one of her kind.. Swara. angel of colorful world. brings instant color in the story and I guess, in Gabriel's life too.. and their camaraderie is the one which I am liking the most. well, I love each and every conversation between them except boy!! he literally strangled her. err!!.. then again!! this is Swara.. no anger for this act and again on the rent of interview.. I was taken aback by this act of her. that nok -jhonk...I just couldn't forget this one what if I fainted on your door.. I will toss you and roll you something something... :)) .. then came the promise of Gabriel to his kitten , that is going to build the future story.. I am eagerly waiting. *rubbing my hands in excitement*
then came Bozo!! love the friendship of him and Swara "shrimp". really funny. him screaming at Gaby that because Swara loves him ,so don't throw him out.. he was so sure that because of Swara, he won't throw him out. *very smart* yeah, last Gabriel's dialogue for you from my side to Bozo..
well, Nimmi, you have etched and every character so nicely and cleanly ,those also whom I haven't mentioned. And scenes are perfect and well written. violent scenes made me shiver and those light hearted scene cracked me up. Perfect. :))there is more to say but commenting from my mobile" literally words ab atak atak ke type ho rahein hain ." 😆 and yeah, you are an awesome writer, one of the best on forum. continue soon as fast as you can 😛 , fast updates keep us in the touch and essence of the story. 😉 and keep writing dear. 🤗 I won't forget this story specially Gabriel's sense of humour , so praiseworthy ,well indirectly it is yours. :)) now, signing off dear. JAI HIND. 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: M_Annu

i just love the ff from crore of my heart...i always wait for ur new update..u r amazing dear...todays one i just loved it.

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

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WOW Toshi..
such a heartwarmingly beautiful comment.❤️.

how could i possibly reply to something so beautiful.. i am terrible in commenting part anyways. i tend to get overwhelmed soon and lose my words; the ones that could explain how touched i am.

so at the risk of sounding lame and inadequate.. i say.. Thank you dear girl.
you really made my day and inspired me to do better.
and i mean it.

🤗 for this..
and yeah.. to quote our guy.. Jai hind..Muah!

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Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

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Annu..
🤗

Thank you so very much for such a sweet comment..
and beautiful compliment.. ❤️.

really Annu.. thank you dear.
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Originally posted by: foresight

loved loved loved it. their entire interaction just clicked with their characters. so now swara is going to be accomplice ...interesting. i love how apte has gotten frustrated. looking forward to seeing things get worse for him. so swara and gabriel in close proximity...and alone finally. looking forward to this ride. sad to read that your kitty of updates is down. will miss reading them everyday.

Originally posted by: Meself

Slow down speed racer!! I still have one more exam to go and this Angel is distracting me to no end...how on earth did you make me fall for an assassin?? Oh I so love my Gaby boy!!😆

Originally posted by: -Jamina

Going Great...
Another mindblowing update 👏
Loved trio conversation
Continue soon