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Ananna Islam

@M_Annu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awwiiee...

love you girl

awww..so sweet of u..

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#852

Hey Nimmi when are you putting up the next chapter??

Pretty eager to read it..

Do try and update it soon..

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue
Hey Nimmi when are you putting up the next chapter??
Pretty eager to read it..

Do try and update it soon..

Updated Kashmi🤗
Happy reading girl.

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#854

Hi Nimmie!

The soft subtle chapters till the storm hits the shore...wow!

I really enjoy the fear/hate/admiration Apte has for his enemy, he is kind of a wise man I guess to realize although he has no other way out now, he is heading for a clear dead end. I appreciate his concern for Lakshya.

Ram Prasad who at the start gave me a vibe of a brilliant master mind now seems a wounded lioness guarding an unworthy kitten (Not meaning Swara you know) he is so blinded by his love for his nephew that he doesn't see the clear facts around him.

So the prince is heading for danger unknowingly huh? I want Lakshya to suffer the fear of knowing the death is coming before he faces it himself...if that is possible.

For Swara and G, I see the slowly developing awareness here. The gradually increasing care. It was so beautiful and soft for a dark story like this one. She is safe around him and he is doomed to protect her I guess...nice line BTW😊

The garage and Maxie, stole the chapter for me. Your side characters are so mind blowing Nimmie, I haven't still forgotten Bonzo, dragon and Rana either. Too good background people they are.

So Durga and Rana are unaware of the storm around them. I thought so too.

Anyway for how long will this calmness remain is something worth watching...reading I mean.

Continue soon!

Edited by Sakura24 - 9 years ago

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#855

Wohooo *whistles in glee*

Nimmi this was a patakha chapter I loved it.

Yet again it was short why ohh why do you do this to me, all I want to do is read on and on when you update I drown in sorrow when I see it ending blahhh..

Max is one funny guy crap I was LMAO reading the entire sequence between Gabriel, Swara and Max. Max's reaction on the battered condition of the sportscar and Gabriel's responding reaction was so funny. Not to forget Swara's perky smart ass monologues in her brains they make me laugh like crazy..

You've got a flourish with writing it comes naturally to you and that was proved by how you beautifully portrayed Swara and Gabriel's monologues about each other at the end they were beautifully done literally..

Swara thinks would be safe with Gabriel and he thinks he'd be doomed with her around him.. Plain beauty those lines were good job Nimmi keep writing and the next time lamba waala update with some sprinkle of romance..

Love,

Kashmi

P.S: thanks for the pm dear.

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SIMI

@simsen23

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#856

Nimmi...
Update on wednesday...you keep your promise...
Ya it was short but sweet...
Apte's tention for laksh..hah...he deserves that...stupid man
Maxie..the guy is amazing..but a crazy car lover..
The words between gaby and max was kind of funny
Really ..men are men
😉
Last two lines of swara and gabriel were awesome...
Ah...i am so excited for this upcoming update...cant describe you...
Waiting for next update
love
simi 😊

Edited by simsen23 - 9 years ago

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TRPS

@TRPS

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#857

update!!!!!!
well, never saw this much overwhelming love for cars. hayee!!is pavitra prem ki paavaan dhaara dekhkar meri to aakhein bhar aayii. *sob sob* you know, something out of the world , along with Swara me too was quite amazed. 😆
err!! does Lakshya has slightest idea what he had done or in which world he had put his feet?? childish and foolish !!!
I thought Gaby has understood already that someone is helping him, let's see what will be his reaction after finding those people???
and yeah, Gaby and his kitten's thought process in quite similar yet quite different. ahh!! eagerly waiting to see if Swara is a trouble or angle for Gaby boy!!!
Continue soon Nimmi!! 🤗
PS- thought to greet you with our guy's quote, 😉 then refrained from annoying you... 😛

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#858

I never expected a update today and when i got the PM , honestly it was a pleasant surprise.

Loved it Nimmi, It was not short per se but even if you write for pages i would want to read more so the end result is almost same . I want the chapters not to end 😆

Loved how vastly their thoughts differ for now , Swara feels safe with him , while Gabriel thinks he is doomed . Poor Guy .

I like how Swara is kind of adopting to the underworld without too much dilemma about right and wrong. I like that this Swara is not lecturing Max or Gabriel on law . Actually i love this Swara.

Do continue soon Nimmi, and Thanks for the PM .

Edited by NitaMikealson - 9 years ago

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#859

Awesome ... loved it.

thanks for the pm ...

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#860

MACHI... 🤗
Love you...for this yaar
I love the fear ...in eyes of Ram&Apte...
Laksh is underground... Must needed..
Machi u won't blive re the same dialogue...
I wrote for Sanskaar POV in my story...
Now I have to change...
You love cars...I don't have any knowledge about vehicles re...tow wheeler...Four wheeler..that's all I know... But bro is a racer and he do stunts...
Fabulously written yaar...as usual...
I want to see face off of Gabriel and Laksh...
JAPPIS ...Machi...

Lol...

Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago

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