FF: Angel. (Request : Page: 140) - Page 85

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

Nimmi..

I absolutely am in love with this chapter and officially in love with this story like seriously..

Kashmi..
🤗

Thank you so very much girl.

The plot is getting better and better with every chapter..

The way you described Apte's frustration, his pent up rage and his bloodlust for Sanskaar it was described with finesse..

thanx again dearie.. Apte.. poor guy. he is left with no choice now. since the day he made that devil of a choice.

Then the conversation between Swara Bozo and Sanskaar. Bozo is hilarious, he went on chastising Gabriel unaware that Swara's angel Gabriel and then his reaction on knowing the same lolwa.. Hehehe he is one funny man..

Bozo is quite a popular figure here. hopefully these two guys; Gabriel and Bozo interact in future too. Sparks😆.

I loved how Swara convinced Gabriel to take her along with him for her safety and her absolute horror on hearing that she might have to go underground for a while, her smart retort when Sanskaar asked her if she had a spare house made me laugh out loud.

And she is one tenacious girl wouldn't leave him until she got a promise from him that he would let her cover his story.

Saam; Daam; Dand; Bhed. That's our girl. though she has no idea what she had signed up for.
and our guy had no clue how she will turn his world upside down.

The teary parting of two great friends gave me a heartache too I felt their pain..

they do share a beautiful friendship.

In all i loved this chapter..

Keep writing and update this one soon I'll be waiting for the next chapter and pm me if it's possible for you..
thank you so very much once again Kashmi.
updating soon and will pm ya buddy.

Hugs*
love.

Love,

Kashmi

Originally posted by: ArshAanya

Nice update..

Love ur work

Continue soon

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

I loved it Nimmi, 👏👏. I am at loss of words when it comes to say exactly how good the update is ... So I just say what i loved in this update 😆😆.

Nita..
🤗.

aww.. thank you so much dear girl.
love ya.

So i totally forgot Bozo has no clue it was Gabriel , as you said his reaction to the news was just like Bozo and i loved it.

😆 good old Bozo. he never fails to entertain us.

Poor Gabriel is so confused when it comes to Swara and her impulsive decisions. I never thought she would ask to accompany him , i thought it would be in reverse order and Gabriel would decide to stay not Swara would join him in the hunt .😉😉.

that's our girl. she keep throwing surprises at her and keep shocking our guy.

Also loved the small scene where he confirmed the guy he is going to kill is Bad, so Swara doesnt feel bad about letting it happen . But i am sure Swara is going to be more of in the way then he would have imagined. Atleast they are together and that what matters to me.

thankh ku.
We know her so well😆. Gabriel surely has NO idea.

Where is Laksh 😆😆, i sure hope i dont regret asking for him but i would love to see his reaction when he comes to know Gabreil is alive.

you will like his reactions😈. he will make his entry soon. we are missing him.😆

So now onwards it going to be twice a week😭😭 . Well okay but make sure it longer 😆😆that i dont find myself wanting to read more...

this is so sweet.
pakka..
or i may drop in more than twice.. as you know i get violently attacked by creative streaks in between.

P.S Thanks for the PM dear and let me know when you update .

will do Nita..
lots of love..🤗

Originally posted by: -Ros-

Nimmi 🤗

Loooved this update!!!

Meri Ros is back and how..
🤗

Soo the news has reached Apte. Laksh is going to find out that Gabriel is out and about from one of one of Apte's men isn't he? What is going to be Durga Prasad's reaction when he finds out his son has been after his pride possession. Can't wait to see him venting out his wrath on Laksh... will he ask Gabriel to forgive Laksh for his stupidity?

pitfalls of writing a thriller.
can't share anything with friends..
showie girl cant tell anything now.. but i promise you will like what is gonna happen in future.

Every time Gaby calls Swara Kitten, I'm just like Omfgkhdjf . Idk, there is a different kind of charm in adorable phrases such as these coming out of a deadly assassin, especially when it's meant to tease a very adorable & fascinating lady.

so adorably put Ros.❤️.

🤣 Every interaction between Bozo and Gaby is PRICELESS. ⭐️

haha.. two of our favourite men.. and the sparks that fly between them😆.

That moment Bozo & Swara had before she left was really touching. ❤️ Neither of them said bye or that they will miss each other... I guess they didn't really have to. 😳 I have a feeling Bozo is going to be joining her on the journey very soon... he's associated with Swara & they'll be after him now right?

they are such a good friends that they really don't need words. i so love this bond.
nopes.. cant tell about this one too.😳.

Aaand I was half right... she's going to live his story. Still can't believe he actually gave in to her! 😲

haha.. i don't think our guy believes it either. he surely is horrified about what he has done.

I was also right when I said she'll blackmail him.. muahaha! She's damn good at it! The girl does have a way with her words... she's a journalist after all. Again, I hand it to her for being such an opportunist... even though her life is on the line, she still doesn't let any chances go & asks for permission (she has good manners! 😆) to record his life. I still don't think she fully knows what she's getting herself into though, I wonder how she's going to cope with the sheer brutality of the world she will discover soon enough.

Saam! daam! dand! bhed... that's our girl. blackmail karo par shaan se.
she definitely has no idea what she has signed up for.
but the question is.. how will Gabriel cope up with her light?

Gaby my dearest is showing sympathy & compassion-- human emotions-- to Swara. What has gotten into this man? 😲 He loved being isolated right? Now he's sharing his life with someone. Has this got anything to do with all that unknown emotions he was feeling when Swara tackled him into a hug?

gonna write about that in a moment. more and more monologues for him will pop up now. and maybe will get to know what is making him tick now.

I was grinning & giggling throughout this update Nimmi! Hats off to your amazeballs humour & writing skills. 🤗

Thank you so very much dearest one.
love ya bas!

Unresed my replies on last two chapters too, like a good girl! 😳 .
that's my girl.
love ya again.
❤️

Originally posted by: rose1998

Nimmie
Once again superb chapter.
Yay Swara is gonna be with Gabby
She is gonna be all safe with him.
And don't rush with the story take your time.😃

Originally posted by: Anglaise

Nimmie.. 🤗

Amie..
🤗

Omg I enjoied the chap like anything.Amazing dear!. Awesome Update as always. 🤗

Thank you so much buddy. *big hugs*

Bozo he s such a cutie and funny😆 . I was laughing throughout while reading his part with Gabrei😆l. Manh ur choice of words and discription are out of world.U make me fall over Anjel again,day by day Im liking the pace alot. Swara know how to kick Gabreil and she some how succeded. Nimmie I wished a hug and U fulfilled my wish. 🤗. First hug 👏 not complete but still 😳 and hey It affected Gabreil right?! Omg!! ❤️. Finally both on mission. Swara is unbelievable 😲 Again came up with recording and work😆.

thank you once again. hope you will keep on loving this guy.
Swara surely knows all the tricks of the trade😆.
first hug yes.. he is affected.. but hey .. abhi lot many opportunities in the story. you will get errr... more than hug. pakka.


Gabreil and his never ending rules. I feel like kitten wont follow any of his rules.btw I loved his last rule"Dont touch me"!. 🤣 hmm lets see! Seems like Swara will hav a fight with Gabreil regarding his car 🤣 This man s too much attached to it!

car part is coming soon. updating about it.
and yes.. we know our girl so well. she is a born rebel. rules kya cheez hai.

Oh last part was a bit touching. how much Im loving Bozo.such a sweetheart! I loved him re. his carings everything. hmm hop in Gabreil. Seems a long way to Gabreil and swara! Its really interesting! long way.right?!Hop apte wont play any dirty tricks towards gabreil and swara. And plz dont even make laksh near to swara.. Btw Im loving it!!

Bozo is indeed a sweetheart.
and now Swara and Gabriel are together. unfortunately can't tell anything more re. will ruin the surprises in the story.
hopefully you will like the further updates too.


No worrie Nimmie..Take Ur time and space.will wait but be sure two update in a week.a long time! All the best..
Thankh ku Amie.
love ya girl..

BTW I read this chap 3times! me crazy! loved it.bas!

This is so sweet..
love ya again..🤗

TC

Originally posted by: jasw

OOOMMMGGG! What a freaking, racy, fantabulous FF! I saw the title Angel and I thought it will be something to do with goodness of Swara and what do I find??!!! I have been kind of marathon reading this FF .. and just finished it!!! Phew! Jai Hind to myself! 😆

Needless to say I abbbsolutely loved it! Loving the very macho Gabriel and the spunky Swara. Haha ..did Gabriel agree to take along Swara because she referred to his revered car as stupid or the kitten is making inroads to his organ located on his his left side of the chest!😆 His 'do not touch me without my permission' is kinda a giveaway! 😉

Well well now I am hooked with this Angel and will be eagerly waiting for your FF updates!

Originally posted by: M_Annu

hey dont say thanks..by the way u deserve it..i must say u just awesome..love!!

Originally posted by: TRPS

haha!! Jai hind Nimmi. Nimmi!! you are way better than me in expressing feelings. in former days of IF I was guilty for being a silent member, as sometimes I don't know what to comment. :P so, you are much better as overwhelmed of emotions is sounding much better than being wordless. and I am so glad that I made you day. 🤗 the one who should thank is me to you for writing such masterpiece. :) Thank you Nimmi for giving us this piece on Swasan. and Keep writing. :))
PS- Seriously yaar, every time I imagine this "Jai hind" scenario, Gabriel imitating Kitten, A chuckle escapes from my mouth. 😆 Only Our boy can find humour in such situations. :)) You write so well Dear. 🤗

Originally posted by: princess2791

Amazing awesome marvelous episode. Loved conversion between gabriel and bozo. I was laughing for hole chapter. Gabriel is affected by 1st hug. Waiting for next update. Please update soon. Take care.