FF: Angel. (Request : Page: 140) - Page 83

Originally posted by: manishasatpathy

amazing read all the parts in a go
its beautiful
cant wait for more plzz update soon
by the way i had one confusion is it swasan ff and if it is then whr is sanskaar?
by the way just curious to know will laksh and swara meet and will he fall for her?

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi Nimmie,

Saku..
🤗

okay...let me confess the truth I wasn't going to res.two posts but IF played some trick with me and it happened. Anyway I will use it to comment on the update I missed. Sorry dear I wasn't home then and couldn't comment.

It alright girl. happens to me all the time. err mostly my doing. getting confused between edit and quote.
and hey.. good to have you back.

coming to that update it was one mind blowing piece of writing and I really adore the chase and the action you squeezed in was too good!

Thankkkhhh ku😳

Actually I did know she would call and he would come told you right?

So now since G killed the entire chasing team it would be apparent he was with Swara right? Good I can see another of my predictions coming true here.

haha.. your predictions are always bang on. i need to buck up and pull a rabbit out of my hat to shock you. someday!😆.

Too good, let me read through this update and tell you about it in the next post!😊.

Thank you dearie..
love.

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Aha! It's party time🥳 Didn't I tell you the story will be on the run now? I was right! Oh!!!! I'm so happy. I had the slight idea that this is how Swara is gonna get her story! Now she would be right in the middle of the action!

Saku..
Hugs again.
Yo! you really guessed it all before😆. but then again you are a mystery writer. a terrific one at that.

So Apte got the news, huh? Knew it wouldn't take much time to reach his ears. He knew both about the car blowing up and the house hunt? Hmm...now he knows G is back in action. Let's see what he does now.

I do feel sorry for the Apte. poor guy made a devil of a choice and had to live by it.
and the question is .. what will Gabriel do to him?

I was wondering...what would Durga's stand be when he realizes his blue eyed boy is out to hunt his own boy? Would he try to save Lakshya and stand against G or would he take G's side or, or, would he stay neutral enjoying the fight and waiting to see who emerges the winner between them?

Nopes; nada; nahiii.. Me not telling anything...
na and na and phir se na..

I really enjoyed the conversation between, Bonzo, Swara and G, which took up most of this update. Bonzo is one witty guy, even G admits that. I loved how Swara has a way with her words, after all she is a media personal, this is supposed to be their gift! I thought she had it when she said can I record our journey...but G is kind of going easy on her now.

Swara is a charmer alright. Saam, Daam; Dand; Bhed. our bholu hero didn't stand a chance😆.
wait till he catches up with her.

So from next onward it would be you me on the run?

something like that..
Fast and furious.

Continue soon!

ps; Bonzo waving good bye was heartwarming...he really does care for her a lot right?

yeah... Bozo truly cares for his little friend. i started adoring their friendship now. (though i created them at the first place).

Thank you so much Saku for reading the updates and liking them and your wonderful comments.
🤗

Originally posted by: ANfan_1810

Hi.

i have read your ff in one shot. 27 chapters 😆


love it. And now when the real love story starts ... will be waiting
for your updates very eagarly.

pl add me to your pm list.

thanks ... and happy writing. U r amszing...

Originally posted by: Messi2

res sorry nimmo busy but sab parts ke replys dungi

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Swara want to record the story of how a assassin plans to kill his enemy..

great..

So like swara..

Poor Gabriel has no other way to listen to her..

Just hope swara is not hurt innthis process...

Scared for her!!!

Take you time to update..

Continue soon..

Thank you for the pm..

Originally posted by: abika

Nice update

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

MACHI...BIG JABBI... 🤗
Soo swara...and ..her...Angel are travelling together expected... She promised him that she won't touch him(winks)...
Machi can expect some...cozy..cozy..scenes...
Ha...ha..ha...give a try man...

I'm being abusy bee.can't comment in detail

Keep in touch...advance Merry Christmas..., Happy new Year...

Lol...

Originally posted by: simsen23

Nimmi...
Thanx a lot for this awesome chapter dear 😊
I just love the way u have described each character...
The convo between swara,gabriel and bozo-gabriel was amazing
n partly hilarious
haha..Bozo has a funny bone...
N wow a hug between swara-gabriel...cho cute...n gabriel's reaction n condition about no touch...
Swara..she is so cute and full of life...
M very excited to knw about this love story

n ya apte-what he thinks ...that he can kill The gabriel..no way man...

Finally..its ok nimmi...i knw we r so demanding about ur update..but we can wait too...its just dat we love ur writing so much dat..we ask fr an update again and again..u keep writing...n pm me dear...
N take care too
*Hugs*
Love
simi... 😊