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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#811

loved loved loved it. their entire interaction just clicked with their characters. so now swara is going to be accomplice ...interesting. i love how apte has gotten frustrated. looking forward to seeing things get worse for him. so swara and gabriel in close proximity...and alone finally. looking forward to this ride. sad to read that your kitty of updates is down. will miss reading them everyday.

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#812

Slow down speed racer!! I still have one more exam to go and this Angel is distracting me to no end...how on earth did you make me fall for an assassin?? Oh I so love my Gaby boy!!😆

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Jamina Mohammed

@Snowflakes.

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#813

Going Great...
Another mindblowing update 👏
Loved trio conversation
Continue soon

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#814

Nimmi..

I absolutely am in love with this chapter and officially in love with this story like seriously..

The plot is getting better and better with every chapter..

The way you described Apte's frustration, his pent up rage and his bloodlust for Sanskaar it was described with finesse..

Then the conversation between Swara Bozo and Sanskaar. Bozo is hilarious, he went on chastising Gabriel unaware that Swara's angel Gabriel and then his reaction on knowing the same lolwa.. Hehehe he is one funny man..

I loved how Swara convinced Gabriel to take her along with him for her safety and her absolute horror on hearing that she might have to go underground for a while, her smart retort when Sanskaar asked her if she had a spare house made me laugh out loud.

And she is one tenacious girl wouldn't leave him until she got a promise from him that he would let her cover his story.

The teary parting of two great friends gave me a heartache too I felt their pain..

In all i loved this chapter..

Keep writing and update this one soon I'll be waiting for the next chapter and pm me if it's possible for you..

Love,

Kashmi

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Arshleen

@ArshAanya

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#815

Nice update..

Love ur work

Continue soon

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#816

I loved it Nimmi, 👏👏. I am at loss of words when it comes to say exactly how good the update is ... So I just say what i loved in this update 😆😆.

So i totally forgot Bozo has no clue it was Gabriel , as you said his reaction to the news was just like Bozo and i loved it.

Poor Gabriel is so confused when it comes to Swara and her impulsive decisions. I never thought she would ask to accompany him , i thought it would be in reverse order and Gabriel would decide to stay not Swara would join him in the hunt .😉😉

Also loved the small scene where he confirmed the guy he is going to kill is Bad, so Swara doesnt feel bad about letting it happen . But i am sure Swara is going to be more of in the way then he would have imagined. Atleast they are together and that what matters to me.

Where is Laksh 😆😆, i sure hope i dont regret asking for him but i would love to see his reaction when he comes to know Gabreil is alive.

So now onwards it going to be twice a week😭😭 . Well okay but make sure it longer 😆😆that i dont find myself wanting to read more...

P.S Thanks for the PM dear and let me know when you update .

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#817

Nimmi 🤗

Loooved this update!!!

Soo the news has reached Apte. Laksh is going to find out that Gabriel is out and about from one of one of Apte's men isn't he? What is going to be Durga Prasad's reaction when he finds out his son has been after his pride possession. Can't wait to see him venting out his wrath on Laksh... will he ask Gabriel to forgive Laksh for his stupidity?

Every time Gaby calls Swara Kitten, I'm just like Omfgkhdjf . Idk, there is a different kind of charm in adorable phrases such as these coming out of a deadly assassin, especially when it's meant to tease a very adorable & fascinating lady.

🤣 Every interaction between Bozo and Gaby is PRICELESS. ⭐️

That moment Bozo & Swara had before she left was really touching. ❤️ Neither of them said bye or that they will miss each other... I guess they didn't really have to. 😳 I have a feeling Bozo is going to be joining her on the journey very soon... he's associated with Swara & they'll be after him now right?

Aaand I was half right... she's going to live his story. Still can't believe he actually gave in to her! 😲😲 I was also right when I said she'll blackmail him.. muahaha! She's damn good at it! The girl does have a way with her words... she's a journalist after all. Again, I hand it to her for being such an opportunist... even though her life is on the line, she still doesn't let any chances go & asks for permission (she has good manners! 😆) to record his life. I still don't think she fully knows what she's getting herself into though, I wonder how she's going to cope with the sheer brutality of the world she will discover soon enough.

Gaby my dearest is showing sympathy & compassion-- human emotions-- to Swara. What has gotten into this man? 😲 He loved being isolated right? Now he's sharing his life with someone. Has this got anything to do with all that unknown emotions he was feeling when Swara tackled him into a hug?

I was grinning & giggling throughout this update Nimmi! Hats off to your amazeballs humour & writing skills. 🤗

Unresed my replies on last two chapters too, like a good girl! 😳

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#818

OOOMMMGGG! What a freaking, racy, fantabulous FF! I saw the title Angel and I thought it will be something to do with goodness of Swara and what do I find??!!! I have been kind of marathon reading this FF .. and just finished it!!! Phew! Jai Hind to myself! 😆

Needless to say I abbbsolutely loved it! Loving the very macho Gabriel and the spunky Swara. Haha ..did Gabriel agree to take along Swara because she referred to his revered car as stupid or the kitten is making inroads to his organ located on his his left side of the chest!😆 His 'do not touch me without my permission' is kinda a giveaway! 😉

Well well now I am hooked with this Angel and will be eagerly waiting for your FF updates!

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ROSE

@rose1998

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#819

Nimmie
Once again superb chapter.
Yay Swara is gonna be with Gabby
She is gonna be all safe with him.
And don't rush with the story take your time.😃

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Anglaise

@Anglaise

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#820

Nimmie.. 🤗
Omg I enjoied the chap like anything.Amazing dear!. Awesome Update as always. 🤗
Bozo he s such a cutie and funny😆 . I was laughing throughout while reading his part with Gabrei😆l. Manh ur choice of words and discription are out of world.U make me fall over Anjel again,day by day Im liking the pace alot. Swara know how to kick Gabreil and she some how succeded. Nimmie I wished a hug and U fulfilled my wish. 🤗. First hug 👏 not complete but still 😳 and hey It affected Gabreil right?! Omg!! ❤️. Finally both on mission. Swara is unbelievable 😲 Again came up with recording and work😆.
Gabreil and his never ending rules. I feel like kitten wont follow any of his rules.btw I loved his last rule"Dont touch me"!. 🤣 hmm lets see! Seems like Swara will hav a fight with Gabreil regarding his car 🤣 This man s too much attached to it!
Oh last part was a bit touching. how much Im loving Bozo.such a sweetheart! I loved him re. his carings everything. hmm hop in Gabreil. Seems a long way to Gabreil and swara! Its really interesting! long way.right?!Hop apte wont play any dirty tricks towards gabreil and swara. And plz dont even make laksh near to swara.. Btw Im loving it!!
No worrie Nimmie..Take Ur time and space.will wait but be sure two update in a week.a long time! All the best..
BTW I read this chap 3times! me crazy! loved it.bas!
TC

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