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Originally posted by: piccola1
😳 Viji...there you again, weaving the magic of your words on us..and making my day (OK night..since its way past day time 😆), yet again! 🤗I have come to love your love for colors.. Your OSs are so arrayed in multiple hues...the play of words so colorful, they color my imagination as I read up your stories😃..and this one, with its beautiful depiction of blue ..the ultimate color of eternity...is ethereal and enchanting.What a fine character sketch of our golden girl, Swara..(thankfully, the Swara that we knew before the CVs destroyed her intelligence in their bid to stretch the story😡) You've captured her insecurity, lack of faith, the trauma of a stigmatized childhood and her feeling of betrayal, beautifully. Am so glad you have had her share this with Sanskaar.. 👍🏼Loved her slow realization of our Sunny boy's true worth, his love❤️ and even more, what she feels for him 😳- is so welcome to parched Swasan shippers..The description of what she misses about him brought a smile to my face, its so real. When you miss someone, you miss their little things, their smile, their chit chat, their habits...reaching out for their belongings as a succour, happens automatically. And personal fragrance is the closest thing that kindles that identity and memories! So the Hugo Boss bit was perfect !👏 And TV playing cupid with Band Bajaa Baraat - a trigger that was spot on ! (I loved that duo in the movie)😳Sunny boy, feeling very unsunny in Mumbai (and rightly so..coz Mumbai tends not to be very sunny!) having his own fit of the blues about his salvation and his damnation! 😆He he..little realizing his lady luck was already working overtime! Loved the way you have dived in and explained his psyche..(the bit on Tut's curse was ominous..but you edged us out of there😊) Our Sunny boy is very very special, and dont we all know it ! (Hope the CVs know it too!) And that is why we love him!Hated that Part 2...cant stand that evil duo🤢..dont wish to talk about em and so will skip em. Except, a BIIIG HUG 🤗for the hot milk on you know who! Ahhh, what a massive feeling of satisfaction that gave me! Bravo Swara, Keep it Up..DP would be even prouder of you than he always is!😆I liked that Suju is taking to our girl ! Again, AP is definitely dubious here as well...haha..you cant let her be, ever! 😆 (BTW, was there a bit of Arshi here too...you know, emptying a cup of hot tea/milk over someone you think is a rakshas?)Loooved Holi..for him coming in at just the precise moment she most needed him, as her eternal knight in shining armor😃.. and her complete embracing of what he means to her...ummm 😳! You've repeated a line there, that I think came from one of your own OSs.- he held his whole world in his arms - I just fell in love with it again! It depicts so well his complete contentment and happiness.😳And what a beaut of a memory you have, to pull in that bewitching Arshi moment❤️ into Swasan's enchanting reunion! 🤗I can just imagine these 2 doing it...a truly droolicous moment ! 😳Their exchanged declaration on missing one another, hesitant on his part, ardent on hers, but uplifted by hope and faith, truly a touch of class!⭐️And of course, your nature touch..the sun breaking out of the clouds,,a true golden moment for our golden couple.😃😳Another gem to treasure and revisit whenever the angst and the dumbness gets overbearing.😊
Pic my dear 🤗 🤗
Thanks so much for this lovely, mood uplifting, delightfully detailed comment. Seriously, your analysis always makes my day, I look forward to it each time I write something. 😊
Blue is my absolute favorite color, love almost all its shades. I wanted to explore in this one, the similarity between this color of infinity and eternity, and the nature of Sansku's love for Swara. 😊 Am so glad you liked that part.
I wanted to show Swara in this OS, the way she was depicted earlier in the serial--kind, selfless and giving, but with tremendous determination, smarts and strength of character. The one being dished out now is a pale shadow of her former self. 😕 I really feel her insecurity and extremely poor impression of "love", is the only reason why she is holding back from Sanskaar---what other earthly reason could there be? 😆 She just needs to realize that Sunny boy is leagues away from her loser of a Dad and ex fiance. 😉
I really wanted to show a Swara missing Sansku intensely, and literally pining for him. In the serial the poor guy is wearing his heart on his sleeve all the time, he could do with Swara also feeling the same, na? 😳
Hugo Boss "Man" is the perfume my Hubby uses BTW. Have a weakness for that. 😉
The bit about Sunny boy's psyche--I just wanted to explore how he's really unique in the fact that his love is so selfless. Usually, a man who's held his emotions suppressed and barricaded for so long, might feel suffocatingly possessive of the girl who finally breaks through that barrier. But not our Sunny boy! 😉
How can I explain to you, what joy I took in writing that bit about Lakshya's "scalding milk special facial"? 😆 🤣 High time Swara did something like this in the serial. There was some indirect revenge there too, for all the times Lakshya had thrown water in Sansku's face. 😉
Pic, I was just so touched, that you remembered that line (holding his whole world within his arms) from my earlier OS "Their Future together". 🤗 Yeah, I do feel it reflects the enormity of Sansku's love for Swara.
I was lost in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that Holi sequence. Remembered that scene from IPK, while I was penning it down, that used to be my favorite serial before. Really felt it suited SwaSan. The tender romance, without really saying the "I Love Yous" at that point. Cheek rubs are so romantic na? 😳
Oh thanks for noticing the bits about the sky, the sun and the atmospheric setting . I am a huge fan of nature in general, and love writing about sunrises, sunsets, sun emerging from the clouds and so on. 😆 And when our Sunny Boy gets his Golden Girl, then the sun has to clear away the storm clouds! 😉
Thanks again Pic, for absolutely making this Sunday a sunny one for me. 🤗
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