SwaSan OS: 'The Colors of Love'

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Posted: 9 years ago
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How nice to wake to this Viji 🤗
A lovely OS as ever from you, no surprises there. But what a nice surprise for heart sore readers to read of a (yayyy!) unbelievably sensible Swara who respects her boundaries and has sense enough to not be stupidly trusting of snakes in the grass. What is my favourite thing about this is -shock of shock at ME saying this- Laksh- OR to be more accurate, the treatment accorded to our dear Devar ji! 🤣🤣 Repulsion, scalding tea and a running away to Sanskaar's arms and playing such delicious Holi with one's HUSBAND rather than creep devar- has improved my Saturday considerably. 👏👏
I loved the end too- the way Sanskaar put colour on her and their wordless communication was so heartwarming. I got the IPK similarity but this was still done so differently, it felt very nice.
Oh and I love Man- have bought it for hubby in the past. Like quite a few of Boss fragrances and also the clothes.
Thanks for the soothing balm this felt like Viji. Am currently considering a piece which in my head is sounding too torturous to Swara, a reaction to her stupidity on the show so I enjoyed this thoroughly. Love you xoxo
Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Viji🤗🤗

This piece is just BEAUTIFUL! ( I know, the word beautiful seems so cliche, but , despite an array of synonyms to the same, my mind just refuses them! Simply because, this is just Beautiful!!!)

The current track of Swaragini...naa Swar hain naa Raag hain..sirf Bakwaas aur Lakshya hain!
Stupid Swara..* No adjective can probably describe right* Lakshya and Astute Ragini, makes me skip the sheer torture!🤢

This piece is like the first drops of rain that provides hope to the barren land! Something, i am very sure, the entire Swasan fans are eagerly awaiting!
Loved the intro part where you have voiced what most of us are feeling and what we want to be , instead feeling and ofcourse, hands down on the Swasan kids dedication! I truly appreciate your dedication regards this (in either ways, u take.😛).

PART 1- An amazing flow of emotions and full of nostalgia.👍🏼
* The description of the Sun rise, i could visualise the gradual change of colours and magenta seeping in!
*The different words to blue. 👏 Blue happens to be my favourite as well😊
You teach us so many words along with your beautiful writings! Vocabulary enhancer as well a thorough pleasure, your works are.
*I truly wish Swara on the show could be as absorbing and observant with her brains intact!
*In any other man, perhaps, the final emergence of his formerly barricaded heart, would have accompanied with the unreasoning, mindless need for the one who made his heart beat again. - How I wish, this simple fact could pass through to even the most brainless!
* Lines like - For Swara, he was a die-hard loyalist; ...his potent adoration for Swara, was destined to his salvation and damnation, both; ...He knew one thing, he could cleave himself into two... Transpires the depth of emotions that a heart deep down carries!
*Loved your tea references and melancholy case of the blues...Just the way u draw an entire scenario that befits your character description👏


PART2- The mending of relations, in true sense!
*Sujatha's lips curved in a derisive smile-- Jiji's "Sundar ,susheel Marwari bahu!" - How Sujatha's it is..I could read that in her animated way 😆 . And her attempts to be a ruling saas, getting sevas from bahu..😛
* Hands down on writing my most favourite part of the story- "Scalding of Lakshya!"😉
Here, you have kept your Swara a little mellowed..I wish she was more outrageous u know, like probably spilling the hot milk entirely on his body..not just the face!
His assumption on "NO" meant "Try harder" - So typical a mindset of people like Lakshya!
Reminded me that, maybe, Lakshya is entirely not a fictitious character.😲😡


PART3- The true colours arise!😊
Very well written, dreamy and creamy (soft and gentle)
*The romance is seen from the very beginning. I have always been a fan of subtle romance and this was just a treat for me!🤗⭐️. The way Swara reminisces about Sanskaar and waits for him to the emotions evoking her heart when he hugs her. (Like Swara and Sanskaar, I too just chose to ignore Lakshya😆)
*The amused tolerance of the Maheshwaris.😳 Wish this scene plays out in the serial , as well, someday!
*..."He held his whole world within his arms" - It felt so satiated to read that!
*The sun choosing that very precise moment to break through the clouds just the way warmth seeps in to their hearts!😊
*"Sometimes,after all, the most powerful things are the ones you can say, without really saying anything at all..."- I loved this line, Viji🤗

The way u have written this piece as a realisation of Love and how it has been voiced out without words and Yes, 'I love you' would be on the way ,but, till then let us leave them to bask in glory of their new found colours!

An exceptionally heart-warming piece⭐️. So subtle and yet clear! Also loved how your titles were not just apt, but, were rhyming as well👍🏼. My favourite was "Green eyed goons and scarlet wounds"😆

As always, keep writing more and more and many more!
Edited by vaishnavi77 - 9 years ago
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superb os... Loved it... Awsm wrk... Thnk u so much for this wndrful SwaSan OS. These day really annoyed with SR epi & u guys with ur SwaSan stories making our mood gud & happy...

loved ur os vry much..

Swara missing her Sanskar vry much... Sanskar warned Swara about Ragini & She didnt trust him...

Hot milk on Laksh's face... I really loved dis Swara... And d reason Laksh gave to AP.. 🤣

Ragini is so cleavar... Wt a plan she done to ruin swara's image in front of AP.. & that moment she realized her lovely sis's plan..

Ragini supporting Laksh...

On holi , whn running away frm Laksh , Swara hit on wall & about fall , but our hero catch her...
SwaSan hug was so wndrful & so romantic...
And Swara take the color frm Laksh's hand & put it on Sanskar's face... Awww... Such a scene I really wanted in show too... "bura na mano holi hei..." & the way hw Sanskar put color on her cheek... Was so romantic...

SwaSan missed each other vry much..

Really superb OS...
Edited by iam-in-love - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey,

Another beautiful fanfic.! I can't get enough of these! U just made me love SwaSan all over again. Your author's note at the beginning literally made me laugh out loud and I had to look around to make sure no one saw me 😛. The story! What to say about it! I'm speechless! I am sooo happy you made Swara pine for Sanskaar 😃 It made my day! Your description of surroundings and emotions was as usual fantastic!! You've got an art for describing the most simplest of things in the most incredible fashion.!

Thank you for making Swara 'not so naive'. I needed that. The recent spoilers have seriously killed any hopes for SwaSan moments in future. This one shot lifts my spirits!😊

Sanskaar's entry! ❤️❤️ and the way they put colour on each other!! My heart is sooo happy with that scene that I'm grinning like an idiot at the computer screen while writing this post. 😃

Thank you for writing this amazingly fabulous one shot and thank you for the PM.

Awaiting more fabulous one shots! :) Keep writing.

-V
Edited by bwvianna - 9 years ago
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hi viji🤗
u never fail to impress ⭐️
those levels are renewing each time😃
u vl write in such a way that itseems everything happening infront of our very eyes
great job👏
in the beginning itself when saw that its dedicated to swasan kids
brought a broad smile ...thankyou😊
part 1- of velvet sighs and cerulean skies -
firstly viji blue is my favourite colour❤️...i dint know that there are so many words for the color
the description of why she liked blue is marvellous⭐️
very conviniently and strikingly u gave the difference between inglorious men and our ever glorious sanskaar maheshwari ⭐️
swara's inwards passion towards sanskaar is very much visible
awww pretty lady missing her cutest husband...u explained it very sweetly🤗
and dammm he z also missing her ...evenmore than swara
for swara he was a diehard loyalist
he would cleave himself in two, to give her the happiness and security that she deserved
those words are glorious
part 2 - of green eyed goons and scarlet wounds
sujatha rocks...⭐️👏
sanskaars cautionary warnings kept ringing in her eyes...thankgod ...atleast she started doubting her...happy for this...waiting for this moment in the show
bahu knows what sasuma likes...😉
lakshya ragini hate them...obsessive pair😡🤢
swara missing sanskaar in every instant...cute
so according to swara laksh z useless😆😆
part 3- of vermilion passion and a gilded realization
lakshya y r u so stubborn...sanskaar came at the right time for her recue😊
awww that hug and both applying colours to eachother was very beautiful...
and the way she reciprocated his ' i miss u' z tooo good
on the whole it was a treat to read this ss...thanku for the pm




Edited by suhasini2727 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing...
So beautifully written ..
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Viji🤗
Just when I wanted to read something... I found this... Perfect!
Swara as always wants Sanskaar to understand her silence but Our Sanskaar here does not know the extent of feelings Swara has for him.. (Even does not realise that😆) andd so he always misinterprets her silence..

Reading the emotions Swara was feeling in the absence of Sanskaar was absolutely a treat😳
and also Swara throwing hot milk on Devarji's face was hilarious😛
and my God Devarji seems to bee over persistent does not understand the meaning of 'NO'😲
and also the holi start scene (The convo between Swara- Lakshya) was scarry but Just then our hero steps in and the end was aaawww😳

Again Thank you so much Viji for writing this...😃

P.s Thank you for the ref of my story😆😛


Edited by manasie23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent as always. And such a soothing balm to everyone who wants swasan NOW but instead are being tortured with you know what!

I liked that idea of them sharing the same sky. Reminded me of "tu jaha main waha, sang sang yu chalu tere jaise tera aasma" lines from salaam namaste.

Scalding milk 👏 perfect, just perfect!

Whenever you mention laksh slinking away i am reminded of those hyenas from the lion king. No insult to the hyenas intended.
Edited by The.Lannister - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh My God Viji!
I've no words to describe this one.
I'm really horrible at appreciation and thus saying ki I reallyyy loved it.
It was such a sweet one.
And the way u described Swara's feelings in her heart and her ignorance was awesome.
The Holi SwaSan scene was so cute. The mere imagination of it gets me blushing hard.
And I just loved it when Swara threw that hot milk on Laksh's face!
Awesome..

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