SwaSan OS: 'The Colors of Love'

Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Hi Viji. Thank you for the PM and sorry for the very late comment!
This OS was as usual brilliantly penned! I loved how you described the weather to match the characters' moods!
My fav part of the OS, like everyone else's, is Lakshya getting scalded by hot milk and then Swara's thoughts about his idiotic excuse to AP!
The slight resemblance to ArShi's holi was great to read and the chemistry between SwaSan in that paragraph was beautifully written.
Looking forward to your next OS/TS/SS...

Hey Vyshu 😊 Thanks so much, am very glad you liked it.

I really enjoyed writing about how Lakshya gets a special "Scalding milk facial". He deserves it! 😆 And that excuse to AP as just about as idiotic as his one on the show about his cut wrist---while slicing apples, for crying out loud! 😃

Thanks for your feedback on the climax Holi scene. Wanted to show an intense yet subtle romance there---with the promise of more to come. 😉

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Anya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Anya. 😊 Thanks so very much. Glad you liked it.

BTW when are you updating your SS? Do PM me.

I honestly don't know ya... too busy with exams these days...

add to it my mom and sis hunterwalis they have become

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Originally posted by: xoanyaxo

I honestly don't know ya... too busy with exams these days...
add to it my mom and sis hunterwalis they have become

Good luck with your exams!

Haha about your Mom and Sis becoming Hunterwalis! 😉 Do they watch Swaragini as well, BTW?

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Anya

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#104

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Good luck with your exams!

Haha about your Mom and Sis becoming Hunterwalis! 😉 Do they watch Swaragini as well, BTW?

I started watching Swaragini recently too actually at dinner time. So, they are kindoff left with not much of an option but to watch with me.

Honestly, this last week they would watch it just to annoy me("Revenge for making them watch it previously" my sisters words exactly) and I would keep asking them to change...too much heartbreak for me too handle.. They are aware of my Sanskari crush you see😳

Thank you for the luck will need it soon😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: xoanyaxo

I started watching Swaragini recently too actually at dinner time. So, they are kindoff left with not much of an option but to watch with me.
Honestly, this last week they would watch it just to annoy me("Revenge for making them watch it previously" my sisters words exactly) and I would keep asking them to change...too much heartbreak for me too handle.. They are aware of my Sanskari crush you see😳

Thank you for the luck will need it soon😃

Haha. Well family members always add some some fun to Swaragini. At my place, my mom in law and I watch it with avid interest. My Hubby and Dad in law therefore have no option but to watch. 😊 They give some fascinating running commentary at times. 😉

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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Isha...😊 Thanks a ton for that very detailed and lovely comment, am really glad you liked this OS.

As I was saying in the intro, I really don't get why the CVs have dumbed down Swara's character, just to make her look "mahaan". She was such a spirited, courageous and smart girl at the start. That's the problem, when they try to make a character too "goody two shoes", then somehow they also feel compelled to make them so martyr like and dense. I flatly refuse to accept this version of Swara. 😆 Am just going to keep writing based on the earlier (and much better!) version.

As I see it, Swara's childhood growing up without a stable paternal influence (and Shekhar's and Lakshya's later perfidy) are the reasons that have thoroughly dented her belief in Love that a man can feel for a woman, and all the trust and faith and loyalty, that go with it. I mean, what other earthly reason can there be, for her refusing to even consider Sanskaar's feelings for her, or to acknowledge that she may herself be starting to feel the same? 😊

Sanskaar only loves adrak & elaichi chai made by Swara. That's the rule. 😆 And Swara only loves Sansku's fragrance. 😆

Sujju: I wanted to show in all her "Sujjuness" 😉 I see this happening in the future on the show also, where she will make a show of grudgingly accepting Swara for her son's happiness. Typical saas drama! It will be in the spirit of "making the best, of the least objectionable alternative"! 😆 😆

Oh no...please don't compare Lakshya to Snape yaar. Snape was revealed to be at least striving to be on the good side in the end. 😊 And he did try to make a sacrifice to ensure Lily was safe---though his efforts proved futile. Lakshya would never do that. It will be all "Tum meri ho, tumhe meri zindagi mein waapas aana hi hoga!" type of thing. Its scarily reminiscent of a dialogue in a movie called Dhadkan, which goes "mein tumhe bhool jaoon, ye ho nahi saktha, aur tum mujhe bhool jao, mein yeh hone nahin doonga!" Yikes! That man deserves the scalding milk facial and more!

Haha, you liked that para huh? Where Swara almost laughs hysterically at Lakshya's stupid excuse, since he never does anything useful anyway! 😆 Neither at office nor at home!

Thanks for saying you liked the Swara--Sanskaar hug at the end. Wanted to make it subtle yet meaningful---a very precious moment presaging more to come. 😳 I find cheek rubs very romantic. ☺️

Oh--about Lakshya--I was just meaning he was trying to put that vermilion color on Swara's cheeks. And Swara associated that color with Sansku (because of the maang filling, twice! 😉) and so she obviously didn't want Lakshya to come anywhere near her. (She wouldn't have wanted him to anyway, but with that color, Hell No!) I hadn't really thought of making Lakshya attempting to fill her maang for this scene---but with that obsessive guy, anything is possible, I suppose! 🤢

Thanks again Isha. Loved your review. 🤗

I agree completely, having a character be good and smart does not entail her being Mahaan and all forgiving. It means that she has a backbone and she will fight the good battle but not make rash decisions. The show is losing touch with the Swara they had in the beginning of the show, who was brave and stood up for what was right.

Swara doesn't consider Sanskaar's feeling, but somehow still manages to trample all over them. She seems to live in her own separate world where everything happens to her wish, and that her word is the final word. Not that I like Laksh, but he has reason to believe Ragini's intentions arent good. But Swara says she is good, then she must be good. 🤢 What logic? 😆

Sujju makes everything better. Even her melodrama is more entertaining than other stuff they present on the show.

Oh no! Snape and Laksh seems to revolve in the same world for me. Highly inconsiderate people who only care about "me, me and only me." I love that Snape turned out to be fighting the good battle in the end, but I felt it never truly excused his behavior to Harry and others people of Jame's crew. And just like Snape only became against Voldy because Lily died, I feel Laksh only is against Ragini cause he lost Swara. I think you can tell that I never liked Snape 😆.

The cheek rubbing killed me in the best way possible. Dying cause i couldn't handle the cuteness they were emitting. And without even trying making Laksh jealous. I live for making Laksh jealous. The peeping tom needs a BIG reality check!

Ahhh I see why Swara didn't want it to happen. I felt that was the reason, because she associates it with Sanskaar, but i felt like she was thinking Laksh might fill her maang. Especially with the creepy line, "mere rang mein rangne waali ho". I can't think of what crazy thing this guy will do next! 🤢

Thanks for replying in equal amount of detail! 😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: kubare
Vij ...Vij...Vij...Beautiful...Outstandingly Superfantabulously amazingly perfectly awesome...
From beginning to start...you described an array of colours and their connotation with Swasan life perfectly...

From the different hues during sunrise depicting the dawn of a new chapter in Swasans life...with her realisation... Introspection...about her feelings for Sanskar... too her missing his smell to the beautiful way you went about depicting the different meaning of blue in ones life...from it being associated with peace...calm and also melancholy...

Then we had the shade of green play its part in Swasans love story in the form of jealousy...with Ragini & Laksh...

To you taking us to Holi day ...starting with grey and bringing in the light when they both know ...accept...realise each others love...and the red Vermilion...depicting...Happily Ever After of ones Love...

The name was perfect...Colours of Love...

Very true one does not have yo say I Love You to show one ...ones love...the eyes...smile can do the talking too before words are needed...

As for your description of Laksh...lol...great...😉😆

Thanks so much, Krishna for that lovely, warm and beautifully colorful review. 😊

Blue is my favorite color---so I wanted to bring out the significance associated with this hue---infinity, eternity and vastness---and tie it in with the love Sanskaar has for Swara, and which Swara is now developing for Sanskaar too. 😊

Am really glad you liked that part of the sunrise I had depicted--showing the beginning of her realization, a new dawn in their lives---and then the hindrances in their path in terms of the green eyed monster in the form of Ragini and Lakshya. 😊

I really enjoyed making Swara treat Lakshya the way she did here---with the special "Scalding milk facial". It was long overdue. 😆

And the ending, I wanted to show the overcast, grey skies reflecting Swara's mood when Sanskaar is not with her---and the brightness of the day when they finally meet again.

Am so happy to hear you liked it, Krishna. Loved your review. 🤗

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kaku17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Viji...🤗..

this was so enchanting 😊...I loved the way you portrayed swara...she is actually supposed to be smart though emotional...here in the show they have dumbed down swara a lot...😡

this story in a very subtle way dished out your immense dislike 😉( I could have used the word "hate" but then decided against it as its too strong a word...😛) for lakshya...you took out your frustration as well as ours ( I might as well add ) by making swara throw the hot milk on his face and scalding it ...(I jumped with joy at that...wicked I am..😈)...but what takes the cake is even after such a direct action Ragini is able to convince the pea brained character🤢 that swara has feelings for him and he bought that 😲...this reflected your total disdain for this pathetic character...and I thoroughly enjoyed it...😎😆😆

looking forward to more gems from you...

cheers

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ketty84

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Love the way how swara missed sanskaar

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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I agree completely, having a character be good and smart does not entail her being Mahaan and all forgiving. It means that she has a backbone and she will fight the good battle but not make rash decisions. The show is losing touch with the Swara they had in the beginning of the show, who was brave and stood up for what was right.

Swara doesn't consider Sanskaar's feeling, but somehow still manages to trample all over them. She seems to live in her own separate world where everything happens to her wish, and that her word is the final word. Not that I like Laksh, but he has reason to believe Ragini's intentions arent good. But Swara says she is good, then she must be good. 🤢 What logic? 😆

Sujju makes everything better. Even her melodrama is more entertaining than other stuff they present on the show.

Oh no! Snape and Laksh seems to revolve in the same world for me. Highly inconsiderate people who only care about "me, me and only me." I love that Snape turned out to be fighting the good battle in the end, but I felt it never truly excused his behavior to Harry and others people of Jame's crew. And just like Snape only became against Voldy because Lily died, I feel Laksh only is against Ragini cause he lost Swara. I think you can tell that I never liked Snape 😆.

The cheek rubbing killed me in the best way possible. Dying cause i couldn't handle the cuteness they were emitting. And without even trying making Laksh jealous. I live for making Laksh jealous. The peeping tom needs a BIG reality check!

Ahhh I see why Swara didn't want it to happen. I felt that was the reason, because she associates it with Sanskaar, but i felt like she was thinking Laksh might fill her maang. Especially with the creepy line, "mere rang mein rangne waali ho". I can't think of what crazy thing this guy will do next! 🤢

Thanks for replying in equal amount of detail! 😃

^^^ Bold above, what you said about Swara's current portrayal in the serial---sad, but true. No logic whatsoever. And this is the smart, courageous girl they started the show with. 🤢 I get being empathetic and warm and considerate. But why be a doormat, begging people to tread on you? Its beyond me. 😕

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