SwaSan OS: 'The Colors of Love'

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
You always write so beautifully. .I simply look forward to each of ur works. This one is fabulous...holi is still so far away n such a swasan scene would be most welcome. ...but i do hope they dont prolong the actual confession in show so long tho!!!

Hey...thanks so much for reading and for this lovely comment 😊Very glad you liked it. Oh I also hope very fervently that they do not drag confession till March 😉 Can't bear the pain and MU.

I had just changed the setting for my OS, so as per my imagination in this one, Ragini's initial truth expose itself happens only months after it was shown on the show. More time for SwaSan to stay together and bond. 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Hey Viji🤗

I m a genuine follower of ur beautiful stories n I know u writes so well but I don't know why...this OS is the best👏

You have written it so beautifully n the scenes n words u choosed were so apt n beautiful...may be i really liked devar ji's pachka🤣

Swara n sanskaar both were feeling so restless😆

The way they both r missing each other was so awesome n the way u have written that scene was I actually felt ki m watching the show n seeing their restlessness their feelings matlab that was so soo nice...the way swara was missing sanskaar trying to feel him through his things was so amazing😳

Sanskaar too was missing her through that adrak elichi wali chai😳

N the best part was the way u described suju's situation...no doubts she hates bangalan bahu but she is also a mother n for her the most important thing is her children's happiness n she is ok with swara too after all her son loves her n the way she demanded almond flavored milk was so saas wala order😆

But the best part was when laksh was irritating swara n then she threw the milk on him🤣so swatalicious n then laksh's excuse to badi maa😆

N again ragini manipulated him...such a brainless creature he is😆

N then sanskaar's entry on holi wasa gya apna hero

Swara applied colors on sanskaar's cheek n he too did the same but in a twisted way☺️

Devar ji ki ho gyi tai tai phisshh🤣

Beautifully written OS Viji

Loved it so much

Do write more

Thanks for the pm dear😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

You know when I was reading this I was picturing Arnav Khushi and Shyam ...but very well written

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Awesomely written...

Can't describe how am feeling now...

It was so superb...

Loved it so much...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: hp_2006
Vijiii🤗 I just want to play holi with Swasan🥳
To splash all kind of romantic colours over them
Lovely beautiful fantastic awesome outstanding OS dear...⭐️👏
Lakshya 😆 scalded with hot milk..I should have been there with swara..I would have pressed his face on to the ignited burner of the gas stove..😡😡😡
Swara is not dumb as in the serial, all thanks to you😃😃
And you dedicated this to Swasan kids..awww😳😳😳 that was cute, by the way..😊😊
I loved the way Sujata thought, "Jiji ki sundar susheel marwari bahu"😆
When she hit Sanskaar's chest while she ran from Lakshya☺️ Man..I was like..wow..kya timing hain..😃
the way Swara coloured him with the colour and the way he rubbed his cheek on hers..😳😳😳
It reminded me of IPKKND and then you were telling so in the end..It was my favourite scene too😃😃

thank you sooo much Viji...for this story🤗

PS : I always send PM s to you dear..But I don't know how you didn't get the PM of HP+Swaragini story..And I had sent two PM's today also..One a personal msg..and other as a PM for my todays update..Hope you got them..If you didn't please tell me..😊

Naina dear...🤗 🤗

Thanks for this awesome, awesome comment. It made my day on Sunday morning, 😊 Am so very happy, to hear that you liked this OS.

I was thoroughly enjoying myself when I wrote the part about Swara giving a "scalding milk facial" to Lakshya. He really deserves it!! 😆

This is dedicated to lots of love, to SwaSan kids, They will be the cutest, aakhir bachche kiske hain!! 😉

Thanks for saying you liked the SwaSan romance in the end. I was completely lost in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that. 😳 ☺️

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: The-Heart
Thanks for an lovely os😊
Swara missing sanskar very much( I am waiting to see this kind of day in show)
Entire holi scene is superb( Especially Swasan hug)😳😳

As usual ragini is clever and laksh is very irritating😡 He assumed "No" means Try Harder🤢
For me the favorite scene is swara throwing hot milk on psycho lakshya face
Brainless laksh again came with lame reason😆
Where on earth face will burn instead of hands while boiling milk and even no one doubted him ( Its confirm now no one have brains in MM)🤣 🤣

Ending is fabulous 👏

Finally thanks a lot for not giving devar bhabi romance🤗

Thanks so much for this lovely comment. 😊 Am very glad you liked this OS. I wanted so badly, to show Swara pining for Sanskaar, missing him intensely when he's away. I dearly hope we get to see these emotions on the show also, in the very near future.

I have no expectations of rational behavior from Lakshya. 🤢 But I must say, I thoroughly enjoyed writing how Swara gives him a special "Scalding hot milk facial". 😆 🤣 He deserves that and more!!

That excuse I made him give in this OS, was almost as dumb as the excuse he gives for his cut wrist--slicing apples!! 😆 And of course AP believed her laadla.

Thanks again! Have a nice weekend. 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Viji dearie this is specially for u --> 🤗 for writing this awesome piece of fiction!!

I absolutely adore the way u describe the colors! I'm one of those persons who like all the colors and believe every colour in nature is equally gorgeous... and hearing/reading ur descriptions of the various colors and all their exotic names give me some untold pleasure, imagining them all in my mind's eye... It's like u literally painted a gorgeous picture in my eye! The blue color is still swirling somewhere... N incidentally Blues is one of my fav genre of music too! 😃

Now coming to the wickedly satisfactory italic bits which made me grin like a Cheshire cat..😈. Well done gal! 👏 👏 U just conveyed very artfully what we all wanted to say, but cudn't! 😉

N then finally coming to the Holi sequence... all I can say is I was blushing imagining our Sanskari Sanskar ditch his stpd sanskars for once and playfully rubbing his stubbled cheeks on his beloved swara... a very interesting way of 'ranging ur beloved in ur rang' indeed! ☺️

On the whole u hv left me dreaming of swasan n holi now... Wow what a beautiful combination indeed! ❤️

- Luv Niki

PS: BTW I absolutely loved the King Tut's ref here... He is one Mummy I will happily marry if he comes to haunt me!😆😆

Niki dear...🤗 🤗

Your comments are always so deliciously wicked and funny, they invariably make me grin like---yes---the Cheshire cat! 😆

Blue is my absolute favorite color, though like you so rightly said, each shade has its place in the spectrum--I am very fond of orange and green too.

I did my best to make the Swara in my tale, treat Lakshya exactly the way he deserves to be treated. 😉

And the ending SwaSan scene--he he. That was me taking a flight of fancy into SwaSan dream land. 😳 I go there a lot, these days! ☺️

I am a total history buff too. Ramesses and Tut are my pet obsessions from Egyptian history! 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Viji I really love you for writing this! This One shot is my current love but attaining it was so hard. My net connection has decided to play Lakshya for me and was saying that No web page existed with the address I had typed. Then My computer has decided to play Swara in her quest for true love and said there was no network available. Hence it took me four hours to finally read this.
Can I hug you for that burning milk you decided to throw on Lakshya's face? I seriously wanted to do him some bodily harm for so long but had no scope of that in my writing but you have just fulfilled that wish of mine.
Then the part where SwaSan were missing each other! So masterfully done. Soft, smooth and utterly innocent yet deep with the longing of love! I adore it to bits!
What I love is the holi scene of cause. Just salt in Lakshya's wounds, the exact amount to be a painful reality check as well as the most deserving medicine! That I miss you was so heart touching! It was a wonderful accomplishment to a master piece!
I absolutely adore this one!

^^^ Bold above: 😆 😆 Saku my dear, please try your hand at writing some witty, satirical pieces next (after Elixir, perhaps). This was too good, the wry sarcasm at the expense of both Lakshya
(🤢) and Swara (I love that lady, but seriously she's acting too naive now).

Thanks for your lovely comment. I was really enjoying myself when I wrote the scalding milk facial part. 😉 So I am just too happy to hear you loved it, too. The way I see it, Swara had two important reasons to do this. One, of course, this guy has been harassing her to no end. And second, she gets to take an indirect revenge on him, for all the times he's thrown water in Sansku's face. 🤣

The ending part--Again, I took great pleasure in giving SwaSan some lovely together time, where they could, as usual, say a lot to each other, without really speaking much. And get Lakshya to witness that too---my, writing that gave such peace to my tormented heart. 😉

Glad you liked it Saku! 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: anu91
Awesomely written...
Can't describe how am feeling now...
It was so superb...
Loved it so much...

Thanks a lot Anu. 😊 Glad you liked it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: msin
You know when I was reading this I was picturing Arnav Khushi and Shyam ...but very well written

Thanks a lot. Very glad you liked it 😊

For the Holi scene I took some inspiration, as mentioned, from the IPK Holi scene between Arnav--Khushi and Shyam 😉. That was my favorite serial earlier , before Swaragini.

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