SwaSan OS: 'The Colors of Love'

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Isha

@JilyPotter

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Thank you so so much for this absolutely enchanting OS Viji! 🤗

First things first, if the show showed an ounce of what you wrote of Swara's inner thoughts about how she can't trust love again because of the inability of the men of her lives to properly show love it would elaborate why Swara is so hesitant in accepting Sanskaar's love. But the show lack the depth that you so gracefully put into words 👏!

Sanskaar only loves Swara's chai, these two are two much 😳

Oh Sujata, always looking out for yourself. "Sundar and Susheel", me and my sister call them the 3 S's of stupidity, "Sundar, Susheel, and Sanskaari" 😆. It is sooo typical of Sujju to play the "my toy is better than you toy, even if I didn't want this toy in the first place". Sometimes I wonder how AP handled her for these many years😕.

The "sniveling, whiny voice..." of Laksh 🤣. This gave me an immediate Harry Potter flashback. I mean, Snape and Laksh have so much in common. Trying to get their unrequited love - by any means necessary🤢. And then being rude to people for no reason! 😡

I really want this Swara in the show. Someone who throws boiling milk on Laksh's face! You actually dedicated a paragraph talking about how Laksh LITERALLY does nothing, from work to home. I think this takes the cake!! Laksh can never get on Sansku's level!

Laksh has clearly gone off the deep end if Ragini pities him. Shame that he is so blinded by "his love" for Swara than he doesn't even notice how he is being manipulated. But Laksh seems to lack common sense, and basic rationality so I can't really expect much...

THAT HUG, I WANT THAT HUG. I read that scene like 12 times. ❤️☺️. And Sanskaar rubbing his cheeks against hers to apply the color. 😳. I think I went into shock!😆

Wait, so was Laksh gonna fill her maang or like her cheeks? Was he really going to that, despo much?

Thank you so much for the awesome story Viji! In a time where I want to break the TV, this is the light at the end of the tunnel😆!

Edited by .Regal. - 10 years ago

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Hey Samiya...🤗 🤗thanks so very much for this amazingly lovely comment. I am literally floating after reading it yaar, I am so, so very touched and humbled by what you have written. Can only say, it is always a pleasure and privilege for me to have your feedback.

I completely agree with you on feeling good that Swara is pining for Sanskaar, missing him so badly. I really want this to be shown on the serial also, and I attempted to portray that in this OS. Sanskaar has been wearing his heart on his sleeve for so long na? Its time that Swara also reciprocated his emotions with equal intensity.

And I really, sadistically, enjoyed writing the treatment she gives Lakshya, with the scalding milk. 😉 Lakshya used to keep on throwing water in Sansku's face na, well Sansku's patni indirectly took revenge for that on her Devar ji, while of course punishing him for his obsessive harassment!

As for the ending--I wanted to show SwaSan having a romantic, companionable time together for Holi---slowly coming to realize the depths of their emotions for each other. Am very happy that you said you liked it. 😊

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Hey Viji ...how can I forgot laksh throwing water on sanskaar...Abh toh am feeling more happy for the scalding milk treatment u gave him...totally justified...I hope someday Mahanta devi swara stands for sanskaar and give an earful ...eerrr I won't mind few punches ,to laksh and make him realise its sanskaar first and sanskaar last for her...

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inlieu

@inlieu

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Vij! Much as I loved this piece, a very small part of me wishes I hadn't read it, especially the bit in the kitchen. 'Cause you know right, that every time I see Lakshya on screen now I will have this really strong desire to scald him with something? And mind you, it won't be his face! 😆 Where's the Swara that blackened his face in public? He really could do with a second dose of that treatment!

I really loved the ending, especially the emphasis on the unspoken communication at the heart of their little world.

You have spoiled me rotten to such an extent that I wait for your pieces more than the episodes themselves nowadays, and especially on weekend mornings. Keep writing, my dear! 😃

Edited by inlieu - 10 years ago

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a_uma

@a_uma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

awesum... I totally love your writings.. you bring each scene and emotion to life.. 👏👏👏👏

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
beautifully written

Thank you. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: a_uma
awesum... I totally love your writings.. you bring each scene and emotion to life.. 👏

Thanks so much, Uma 😊 Really glad that you liked it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: medhasankar

I am not that easily scandalized, when it comes to guys like Laksh who ask for it.🤢 and i like this treatment better.
BTW..that would actually mean there will never be any ongoing RagYa bloodline. Thats one bloodline which needs to be safely outbred into oblivion.🤢

imagine the RagYa kid.
blackmailing his/her mom."Aap hamare saath aisa kaise kar sakte hain?? If you do not approve of my bf/gf..I will push you from that bridge, where u pushed masi"😈

in babyhood."SwaSan baby stole my toy. SwaSan baby..did this not me. Sab usssne kiya."

"Papa toy doh na...owww gawwd.mujhe toy chahiye. SwaSan baby has that toy"

I like kids...but still...they learn from their parents.😕

Did we have that rule? okies. replace them with jhappies.😃

Medhu...😆 the RagYa kiddo saying "Ohhh Gaaawwwddd " cracked me up. No yaar, please. One person saying that is more than enough. 😉

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: swa291
More than anything i loved the portion where swara throws hot milk at lakshya . I want to throw lots of stuff at him but yeah bhi chalega
Thanks for giving a bit sensible swara

Hey...thanks so much for your comment. 😊 Glad you liked the sensible Swara and her giving boiling milk facial to her Devar Ji 😛

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Messi2
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unres vijji wat an os yaar amazing ...hot milk on ji ...taliyaaan viji keliye loved dis part sooo much ...swara realisation ...kichidi making ... 👏

thanks for pm do write more

Hey Messi.😊 Thanks yaar. Very glad you liked it. I also enjoyed writing about Lakshya Ji getting boiling milk facial 😆

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: misaki

@ Bold - Medhu 🤣 hahaha.. priceless

Viji - I meant to tell you I so wish you had gone through with the cojones blow! It would solve everything . Seriously! No fight for haq, meaning no psycho Ragini plotting and ruining SwaSan life. SwaRagini' s happy ending is in Laksh's impotence😆

Geethu...😆 i was typing out a rather risque revert to this one...but then I thought better not risk it, with the threat of possible complaints from a certain section of fans. 😳 but you can guess on what lines I was thinking, on reading your awesomely funny line above. 🤣

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 10 years ago

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