SwaSan OS: 'The Colors of Love' - Page 10

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update that superb hug was beautiful seriously laksh deserve more than that milk treatment

Originally posted by: ssroomani

Viji, it is lovely! I wish to see Swara like this in the show...when will it happen? sigh!

Was the hot milk splash in return for all the cold water splashes Sanskaar got from him? 😃

You have a way with words! 😊

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Viji :)

This came to soothe all the pain I've taken after last epi .

I mean how swara be so unreal and dumb . how badly her fall in the river effected her. She is no more the same swara from the initial days of the show.

Three parts . her realisation, her missing him her fears her ache for him so beautifully written

Him missing her . their is no doubt abt him n his love I love this guy . from which planet is swara from can't she see his uncontional and undying love which seems to ggrow everyday? How can she be so immune to his presence. ? There is a big locha :P

Second part I love it :D that was best part swara scalded himwith hot milk.aww dil vich thand pay gayi :D

He is absolute idiot surviving on this planet. He should be chained or should be under medical guidance.

And finally the milap .shameless devar never seems to get the hint ..neither the reaction how blind can he be ? Like always Knight in shining ArMaani comes to her rescue

Best ever holi .

Loved it.

Har karwat pe Teri aahat mehsoos karti hoon

Teri khushboo ko khud main dhoondti hoon

Loved it

Originally posted by: .Regal.

Thank you so so much for this absolutely enchanting OS Viji! 🤗

First things first, if the show showed an ounce of what you wrote of Swara's inner thoughts about how she can't trust love again because of the inability of the men of her lives to properly show love it would elaborate why Swara is so hesitant in accepting Sanskaar's love. But the show lack the depth that you so gracefully put into words 👏!

Sanskaar only loves Swara's chai, these two are two much 😳

Oh Sujata, always looking out for yourself. "Sundar and Susheel", me and my sister call them the 3 S's of stupidity, "Sundar, Susheel, and Sanskaari" 😆. It is sooo typical of Sujju to play the "my toy is better than you toy, even if I didn't want this toy in the first place". Sometimes I wonder how AP handled her for these many years😕.

The "sniveling, whiny voice..." of Laksh 🤣. This gave me an immediate Harry Potter flashback. I mean, Snape and Laksh have so much in common. Trying to get their unrequited love - by any means necessary🤢. And then being rude to people for no reason! 😡

I really want this Swara in the show. Someone who throws boiling milk on Laksh's face! You actually dedicated a paragraph talking about how Laksh LITERALLY does nothing, from work to home. I think this takes the cake!! Laksh can never get on Sansku's level!

Laksh has clearly gone off the deep end if Ragini pities him. Shame that he is so blinded by "his love" for Swara than he doesn't even notice how he is being manipulated. But Laksh seems to lack common sense, and basic rationality so I can't really expect much...

THAT HUG, I WANT THAT HUG. I read that scene like 12 times. ❤️☺️. And Sanskaar rubbing his cheeks against hers to apply the color. 😳. I think I went into shock!😆

Wait, so was Laksh gonna fill her maang or like her cheeks? Was he really going to that, despo much?

Thank you so much for the awesome story Viji! In a time where I want to break the TV, this is the light at the end of the tunnel😆!

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Hey Viji🤗

I m a genuine follower of ur beautiful stories n I know u writes so well but I don't know why...this OS is the best👏

You have written it so beautifully n the scenes n words u choosed were so apt n beautiful...may be i really liked devar ji's pachka🤣

Swara n sanskaar both were feeling so restless😆

The way they both r missing each other was so awesome n the way u have written that scene was I actually felt ki m watching the show n seeing their restlessness their feelings matlab that was so soo nice...the way swara was missing sanskaar trying to feel him through his things was so amazing😳

Sanskaar too was missing her through that adrak elichi wali chai😳

N the best part was the way u described suju's situation...no doubts she hates bangalan bahu but she is also a mother n for her the most important thing is her children's happiness n she is ok with swara too after all her son loves her n the way she demanded almond flavored milk was so saas wala order😆

But the best part was when laksh was irritating swara n then she threw the milk on him🤣so swatalicious n then laksh's excuse to badi maa😆

N again ragini manipulated him...such a brainless creature he is😆

N then sanskaar's entry on holi wasa gya apna hero

Swara applied colors on sanskaar's cheek n he too did the same but in a twisted way☺️

Devar ji ki ho gyi tai tai phisshh🤣

Beautifully written OS Viji

Loved it so much

Do write more

Thanks for the pm dear😃

Originally posted by: xoanyaxo

Viji, 🤗

Everytime I would start reading this my mom would call me for some or other reason. Just finished reading the entire thing. Read the three parts at three different times.

And as much as I want type a long detailed comment you've probably heard it all loads of times already by now so I wouldn't want to bore you and most likely I won't have anything new to add to it anyways. So I'll just say the following

I know I probably sound like a broken tape recorder to you but I really loved it.

Love,

Anya