SwaSan TS: 'Old Sins Cast Long Shadows' - Page 18

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Shab. ...thanks so much for reading and for this lovely comment 😊 Very glad you liked it.

Thanks for saying you liked both the aspects of this TS I wanted to portray: the mystery / suspense aspect as well as the SwaSan relationship angle.

Also I loved the couplet you had quoted. It so beautifully delineated the difference between love and hate; between acceptance and stubbornness. 👏 👏

You seem to be a fan of urdu poetry. Do you write poetry, too? If so, please write some on SwaSan and share with us. 😊 Looking forward to reading them.

Thanks again, dear.

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

This was indeed beautiful to be ignored.

I love ur writing.SwaSan to me is magical ne my most fav 3 writers brings out the best. Shruti medha n u .

N coming back to Urdu poetry I love reading n writing Urdu poetry. Urdu brings out the best emotions I personally feel.

I shall write some on SwaSan ..for DAT I need a peaceful mind for now m unwell and drenched in loads of wrk. That's why I limited myself to one stry a day 😆

And sanskar is indeed Knight in shining ArMaani ..armour is way to mainstream ;)

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome..superbly written.. 👏

Originally posted by: suhasini2727

😊🤗

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

😊 Just to add to my last comment, I just wanted to say how glad I felt with your lovely words, about the clues I'd inserted pointing to Lakshya as the culprit. I had tried to trail a few red herrings, also throwing some suspicion on AP and Sujju. 😉 And then of course, those pointers to Lakshya, the homework writing and the mimicry.

About Sanskaar's request that Lakshya's references to his parents' supposed role in fueling his insecurity driven psychosis, that's something I very much see Sanskaar doing. He would want to shield them from this blame, especially since psychosis has been shown to be owed to medical reasons, not nurture. Plus, Sanskaar is shown to be so respectful and caring of his bade papa and badi ma.

Thanks again for your lovely comments on this piece. 😊

Originally posted by: inlieu

Hey Vij! Thanks for delighting us again with such an intriguing and well planned TS! I loved the twist in the tale and the way you portrayed and justified Lakshya's character and madness. To be honest, given the current track, if the CVs were to reveal him to be the main villain as you have, I would not be suprised at all. I'm really glad you decided to explore this possibility and the best part was that it blended seamlessly with the past, present, and future tracks of the show. If only the CVs had the courage to take such an ambitious stance!

Kudos to you and your creativity!

A big hug from my side for your efforts!

🤗

Originally posted by: .Regal.

Interesting, I didn't suspect AP or Sujju. Maybe I was too caught in Swara and Sanskaar - or being annoyed at Laksh. Definitely need to read it again!