SwaSan TS: 'Old Sins Cast Long Shadows' - Page 20

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

Reserbing my dibba.😳

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Haha. 😊 Thanks Nimmi, Do let me know what you thought about this.

And thanks for the PM of your recent OS's also. Will surely read and comment on those threads.

Originally posted by: anju10

woww lovely ts dear
all 3 parts were awesome nd wonderfully written
superb
thanxx for the pm
😊

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Hi Viji,

Finally got around to commenting on this wonderfully mysterious story of yours. A master-piece once again. Bravo! 👏 👏

I wont lie, I had my doubts from the beginning that Laksh is the man standing in the dark waiting for Swara Sanskaar to come and I was glad when I reached the end and realised I was right. 😆

I loved the progression of Swara Sanskaar's love story. It was beautifully done. The fight on the terrace, Swara's longing for Sanskaar, Laksh's interference and the fight scene - beautifully written. Also, loved the part when Swara realises that Sanskaar has left her in anger and she is genuinely worried for him and Sanskaar on the other hand tries to decipher Swara's words and comes back. Awww!

I also liked AP and Sujata's part where AP seemed to compare Sanskaar with DP. They are quite similar are they not?

Their first kiss, the confession - very well written. It was heart warming. I loved how this particular part was only about Swara and Sanskaar and their feelings. I so wish to see such real emotions in the show - but whatever, I felt warmth come over me as I read Part II of the TS. It is my favourite part! 👏

Loved the ending, the mystery to Kavita's death, Laksh's insecurities about Sanskaar, his psychotic behaviour - you were able to convince me of the reason of him turing this way. I will wish that in the show too, the creatives take a note from this TS and portray Laksh as such because this is how I see him too. Loved how Swara realised what Laksh is upto and for a minute there, I was creeped out by Laksh. Thankfully, Sanskaar was there to save the day. Trust him to think of everyone first.

Viji, as usual a lovely lovely TS. I am so very sorry for the delay in updating my comment. I read this when you posted this - but I was not able to find the time to update my comment. You know I love your writing skills - and I wait for anything you write for us. 😳

I never make requests, but is there a possibility you could write something on the bomb blast track that probably will be shown in the show and Swara's care for Sanskaar? Would love to read your take on it. An OS or an SS - anything. Would love love love to read it!

Cheers!

Anna

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Unreserved page 1!

Sorry for the delay Viji. 😳

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Hi Viji,

Finally got around to commenting on this wonderfully mysterious story of yours. A master-piece once again. Bravo! 👏 👏

I wont lie, I had my doubts from the beginning that Laksh is the man standing in the dark waiting for Swara Sanskaar to come and I was glad when I reached the end and realised I was right. 😆

I loved the progression of Swara Sanskaar's love story. It was beautifully done. The fight on the terrace, Swara's longing for Sanskaar, Laksh's interference and the fight scene - beautifully written. Also, loved the part when Swara realises that Sanskaar has left her in anger and she is genuinely worried for him and Sanskaar on the other hand tries to decipher Swara's words and comes back. Awww!

I also liked AP and Sujata's part where AP seemed to compare Sanskaar with DP. They are quite similar are they not?

Their first kiss, the confession - very well written. It was heart warming. I loved how this particular part was only about Swara and Sanskaar and their feelings. I so wish to see such real emotions in the show - but whatever, I felt warmth come over me as I read Part II of the TS. It is my favourite part! 👏

Loved the ending, the mystery to Kavita's death, Laksh's insecurities about Sanskaar, his psychotic behaviour - you were able to convince me of the reason of him turing this way. I will wish that in the show too, the creatives take a note from this TS and portray Laksh as such because this is how I see him too. Loved how Swara realised what Laksh is upto and for a minute there, I was creeped out by Laksh. Thankfully, Sanskaar was there to save the day. Trust him to think of everyone first.

Viji, as usual a lovely lovely TS. I am so very sorry for the delay in updating my comment. I read this when you posted this - but I was not able to find the time to update my comment. You know I love your writing skills - and I wait for anything you write for us. 😳

I never make requests, but is there a possibility you could write something on the bomb blast track that probably will be shown in the show and Swara's care for Sanskaar? Would love to read your take on it. An OS or an SS - anything. Would love love love to read it!

Cheers!

Anna

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

Reserbing my dibba.😳