OMG..!!!Viji you have out done yourself with this one
I seriously have no words to praise this one..you said u were nervous at attempting this genre...you shouldnt b my friend. ..You nailed it.
The moment I realized that it was going to b mystery...I put my Watson hat on!! but poor me I was expecting annapoorna to b the mastermind of this game.
The opening set a environment of a mystery and secrecy.
The opening was a perfect start giving a Gud warm up for a roller costar ride.
The swason parts were so beautifully written.Their emotions,fears,insecurities,and care blended into words were perfect.The "all is well" but "something amiss" feeling came instantly..You are hugely talented Viiji
The mystery part was just phenomenol .I truely couldnt comprehend that this whole could be Lucky doing.I think I underestimated him..considering how much spineless he is!
I too feel there is someone among the MM clan who is responsible for kavita's murder...I am so glad you exploired this .
You provided hints from the start that Lucky is the one...but I wasn't too clever to connect the dots.
The last part where sanskaar was mourning for kavita and attaining support from swara was superb.
Sanskaar is a wise person...I won't call him intelligent...there is a huge difference btw the two.Glad that he sensed the danger and arranged for security of his beloved
I want to write so much to praise this masterpiece of urs Viji...but believe me am short of words.You are a writer of great caliber...do write more..its a request
The Zero hour n sense n sensiblilty are now on my list..
Was reading a poem..and it so aptly describes sanskaar
Of our relationship, what should I say?
In the language of love nowhere is it inscribed.
Much has been written of love's joys and pains
But my state of mind has never been
described.
This love, where absence and presence
entwine,
This pain, an old friend, which since years is
mine,
A love that I've concealed from all and so
apart,
An age has gone since I pressed it to my heart.
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Edited by samiya.059 - 9 years ago