SwaSan TS: 'Old Sins Cast Long Shadows' - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suhasini2727

my pleasure viji🤗
believe me dear...for me it was like i am watching a thriller as i told u before itself
hatsoff to ur effort
god bless



Thanks again, dear. Sincerely appreciate all the warm words of motivation! 😊


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Posted: 9 years ago

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Thanks again, dear. Sincerely appreciate all the warm words of motivation! 😊



🤗... looking forward for ur other stories...tc
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suhasini2727


🤗... looking forward for ur other stories...tc


I am presently writing my next OS. 😊 Will pm you as soon as ready and posted. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago


Read it Viji and enjoyed it so much! 😊 I recognized both the Christie and Austen...two of my favorites! and I liked that it had both romance and mystery...two of my favorite genres! Thanks for the PM.

If you ever write anything with humor and romance, please let me know...this is my fav combi for OS. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Read it Viji and enjoyed it so much! 😊 I recognized both the Christie and Austen...two of my favorites! and I liked that it had both romance and mystery...two of my favorite genres! Thanks for the PM.

If you ever write anything with humor and romance, please let me know...this is my fav combi for OS. 🤗



Thank you so much, Shobs, for those generous words. Am very glad you liked this piece. 😊

Well, as regards humor and romance, I have done a fair bit of that in my previous Os's. Mixed with Angst, too. 😉 You could refer my index (link in my siggy) for my previous completed work. None are FFs, the majority are OS's, with a 3-S and a 2-S, I guess. I like to post all parts at one go, one below the other, rather than update later.

Hope you like my other works. Please do read them at leisure, when time permits, and let me know what you thought.

Thanks again

Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago


Sure, Viji, I will try reading as many as possible...when time permits! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sure, Viji, I will try reading as many as possible...when time permits! 😊



Thanks! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swa291

With the way lux is now acting i think your story might be right explanation for his behaviour.

As always you have written an absolutly wonderful piece my dear.



Thanks dear for this comment 😊 Very glad you liked it. BTW, hope you had a chance to catch up with my recent Diwali themed OS for SwaSan "The Lights of Love". Do read and let me know what you felt.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks so much friends for all the warm comments and appreciation for this TS. 🤗 🤗 Really means a lot. I've replied to almost all of your generous reviews, if at all have missed any, I shall revert tomorrow for sure, as last couple of days have been a tad busy with Diwali preparations.
Happy Diwali to all my wonderful friends here. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
The title of this story is quite good "Old Sins Cast Long Shadows"
I enjoyed a lot reading all parts

@Part1 - I love the way sanskar admiring swaras beauty
This line is perfect - "This was a deadlock between his fear of losing his world, and her fear of facing hers."

@Part2 - I love the whole conversation after he returned from the 3 hours long drive.
Especially when swara telling sanskar how she tired being surrounded by lies,cheating and broken promises is superb.
Here you described the swara current situation in show very well ( poor swara😭 )

@Part3 - Swara trusting sanskar after laksh framing by showing some proofs is awesome👏👏.
The mystery part was just awesome, i never thought laksh will be the culprit of kavithas death.
I am glad swara protected herself using her brains.
He is suffering from a multiple personality disorder😆 ( At last its proved he is some what mental case)🤣

The ending is quite good and logical😊

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