Unravelling- A SwaSan TS- The Comprehension Series, Part 1

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb..

Thanks a lot Sneha

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nimmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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😔..
been meaning to write about the dream kiss sequence. had entire OS planned on it. then i remembered this series😆.

Man we so think alike Shruti.
i would be accused of plagiarism i start writing now.

just dropped in to tell i absolutely love reading your stories girl.
i am sort of bad in commenting so i usually don't comment.. but want you know that i really truly love your works.😳.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Banjaaran...
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😔..
been meaning to write about the dream kiss sequence. had entire OS planned on it. then i remembered this series😆.

Man we so think alike Shruti.
i would be accused of plagiarism i start writing now.

just dropped in to tell i absolutely love reading your stories girl.
i am sort of bad in commenting so i usually don't comment.. but want you know that i really truly love your works.😳.
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Nimmi xoxo
I'm so sorry for this really late reply, just noticed your kind comment on this! Awww, you were going to do a piece with a dream kiss?! Please do,of love to read it! And yes! I can so tell from the writing and our comment interactions about the same wave length:)! Thank you so so much for your kind words about my stories! The feeling is entirely mutual as I hope you know and it gladdened my heart to read this, a very nice end to my Sunday! Lots of love xoxoxo

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Hey Shruti!! It was just amazing. Wonderfully written.👏 U explained Swara's emotional turmoil so aptly. Even if she is in love with Sanskar bt she can't see that right now and even if she is having feelings for him, she is nt facing the reality.[God knows why?😭] Specially loved the last bit of the part 1. SwaSan kiss😳[even though it was a dream of Swara]. 😆 Bt hoping for a real kiss between SwaSan in the next part.😉 Plzzz cont and update the next part soon.😭

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Awesome 👏

Thanks Sujay! 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Humnava
Hey Shruti!! It was just amazing. Wonderfully written.👏 U explained Swara's emotional turmoil so aptly. Even if she is in love with Sanskar bt she can't see that right now and even if she is having feelings for him, she is nt facing the reality.[God knows why?😭] Specially loved the last bit of the part 1. SwaSan kiss😳[even though it was a dream of Swara]. 😆 Bt hoping for a real kiss between SwaSan in the next part.😉 Plzzz cont and update the next part soon.😭

Hello dear! Thank you so much for this! What is your name btw, if you don't mind sharing? I am so pleased you liked this! It was dream here yes, an attempt to get Swara to move towards her realisation. This is a series of 3 and all 3 are posted. You can find them on my index under The Compression Series as Parts 2 and 3. It will end your wait as to whether they ever got a real kiss or not?! 😉. This was written at a time when Swara was simply not realising her feelings in the show:).

Thank you for reading and commenting 😃

Love,

Shruti

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Yes dear. My name is Aheli. 😊 And yes I want to read part 2 and 3. Will u plzz do me a favour Shruti?? Can u plzz share the link of those two parts with me? Or will u plzz PM me the link so that I don't face any difficulty in finding those parts bcoz I desperately want to read the next parts. Plzz its a request.😳

- Aheli.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Humnava
Yes dear. My name is Aheli. 😊 And yes I want to read part 2 and 3. Will u plzz do me a favour Shruti?? Can u plzz share the link of those two parts with me? Or will u plzz PM me the link so that I don't face any difficulty in finding those parts bcoz I desperately want to read the next parts. Plzz its a request.😳

- Aheli.

Hey Aheli- lovely to "meet" you 😃

Of course- here are the links:

Unthinkable - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/128051069

Undone - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/128294490

Also, in case you are interested there is a whole list of work- it's on my index which is at the bottom of my siggie on posts? At present, most of my time is spent on an on-going FF that you might enjoy if you like the undercurrents in Unravelling 😃. Let me know if you do read anything more and the above 2 parts:)

Best wishes,