Unravelling- A SwaSan TS- The Comprehension Series, Part 1 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow awesome..👏
really shruti u r an amazing writer..😳 loved this OS.
swara's mahanta nature is annoying me now. like your OS i want her to realize his pain and how she taking him for granted..
end scene was cute..
happy dashera to you and your family..🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow dear,I just loved ur OS a lot ur detailed layout of Swara's internal and chaos and her emotional turmoil that she detains in her mind was soo very deep and added sensitive flavour to ur wonderful piece of artistic work,it was splendid to read ur awesome personified work dude,loved it a lot👏👏
Edited by rerose - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. You penned Swara's inner turmoil so beautifully.. She was disgusted at Lucky and in love with Sanskaar.. 😳
but not ready to accept it.. The end was fantastic.. A fasinating dream indeed.. !Loved your writing.. Write more.. I'm always hear to read and comment..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kulsum_5

wow awesome..👏
really shruti u r an amazing writer..😳 loved this OS.
swara's mahanta nature is annoying me now. like your OS i want her to realize his pain and how she taking him for granted..
end scene was cute..
happy dashera to you and your family..🤗


Thanks so much Kulsum, your very kind to me about my writing. Glad you liked this, at least in our imaginations we can get what we want eh?! 😉 Happy Dushera to you and yours too xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice..
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Loved swara dream😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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[B]ohhh wow beautifully written...u mangaged to capture sawar's inner turmoil superbly...i loved your os very much..
Edited by kriti_sologar - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"And what did you say and do to that Sanskaar? Shame him for his actions so brutally? Why should he speak up for you now, especially with Lakshya, whom you once loved?"
These lines describe almost exactly what Sanskaar would be feeling right now IMO. He knows and realizes that there was nothing to be gained from him being honest about his feelings except probably more heart break. His mind almost always reminds him how his love for her is always going to be considered a "dhoka".(that FB when Lux asked him if he loved her) What sense does it make to fight for something that he feels for someone when that "someone" clearly doesn't even wish to think about it, forget about ever being able to accept it. His was not going to make his love for her some kind of a joke. He would never accept anything other than love of the same kind in return for his. Definitely not pity from her. He can handle all the hate that she can throw at him happily but pity is something he would definitely not be able to stand. I know everyone's going mad about Sanskaar lying about his love for Swara and how he should stop caring about his good for nothing , disgustingly shameless piece of trash of a brother. I am actually happy he said he wanted divorce. I also loved how DP had the sense of mind to ask him if his opinion would change if Swara wanted to remain in the relationship and loved that he immediately said yes with that really adorable nod.❤️ Gah! this guy has ruined other guys for me forever! When it comes to her, he makes sure he never makes a mistake. He knows this decision is as much his as it is her's. And if she would want to give this a chance, he would happily accept it . He would accept it if it is her decision ONLY. If that was what Swara wanted only then was it okay for him to continue with their relationship. I love this wonderful man so soo much that it is seriously breaking my heart to see him suffer this way especially for a girl who I believe(my opinion only) doesn't deserve him especially after everything she has put him through. Unless of course I see her suffer and redeem herself to earn the right to be by Sanskaar's side.

I really want Sanskaar to realize her reasons for taking a step ahead in their relationship and put his foot down. I really want to see him trying to argue and free himself from this unending path of destruction and heartbreak that Swara clearly has kept in store for him. I have seriously come to hate that girl. How can some one be so bloody selfish? She has got to be the most infuriating , illogical, blind female that I have ever had the pleasure to care about.

"I am still only doing this for Ragini", struggling valiantly to crush down the burgeoning awareness that she was perhaps using this as some form of convenient excuse so she didn't have to totally tear herself away from it all, from him.


I really wish this could be the reason but Swara on screen definitely has no time to think about our Sanskaar, and even if she did,the chance of those thoughts being anywhere near as romantic as these is zilch! I have lost my hopes for her redemption in my eyes. Oh I know she would eventually fall in love with Sanskaar and SwaSan will definitely happen . She might even suffer and redeem herself for Sanskaar but I think her redemption in the soap would definitely not suffice to make me love her . Unless she really suffers as much as Sanskaar is right now. But my Sanskaar is not as cruel as she is so I seriously doubt it but I really hope I can see it. I really am a sadist. Can't help it😆

I loved the OS as always Shruti. You know I always do. I know I will always continue to love them. It's an absolute treat to read your take on the situation in the show and your Swara and Sanskaar are always a pleasure to read about. This Swara I can easily forgive . That Swara has some real redeeming to do before I can even consider forgiving her. Of course my forgiveness doesn't matter to her lol but it does to me.😃
Not just anyone can be Mrs Sanskaar Maheshwari. They have to earn the right to own that name!


And yes! I want a 3 shot at least.😃 Like I said I like your Swara and love your Sanskaar as much as Sanskaar on the show.

Edited by misaki - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rerose

Wow dear,I just loved ur OS a lot ur detailed layout of Swara's internal and chaos and her emotional turmoil that she detains in her mind was soo very deep and added sensitive flavour to ur wonderful piece of artistic work,it was splendid to read ur awesome personified work dude,loved it a lot👏👏


Hey thanks for this! Don't think we have chatted before? Really pleased you liked it and could relate to how I think Swara should be feeling, something we unfortunately are not getting in the present track in any detail!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Purbishona

Wow.. You penned Swara's inner turmoil so beautifully.. She was disgusted at Lucky and in love with Sanskaar.. 😳
but not ready to accept it.. The end was fantastic.. A fasinating dream indeed.. !Loved your writing.. Write more.. I'm always hear to read and comment..


Thank you Purbi for your consistent support, appreciate it. Yes Swara is denying her feelings and it will take time for her to come to the realisation of love and I hope I'll be able to explore that further in other pieces. My current idea is to have this in 3 parts so let's see:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice..

👍🏼

Loved swara dream😉


Thanks Jidnyasa, glad you like the dream 😉

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