Unravelling- A SwaSan TS- The Comprehension Series, Part 1 - Page 4

Originally posted by: kriti_sologar

[B]ohhh wow beautifully written...u mangaged to capture sawar's inner turmoil superbly...i loved your os very much..

Hello! Thank you so much for reading and liking it!

Shruti 🤗
You have such an amazing ability to portray the character's emotions and turmoil. This was mindblowing👏
A Swara i would love (and not only me) to see in the serial.
In the final part she started finally(🥳) to realize her feelings for Sanskar, and i loved that.
And Happy Dussehra to you and your family🤗

I know I have so many lovely comments to reply to, which I'll do this evening, promise! Just at work on mobile so it's difficult to write properly but thank you all and keep your feedback coming! Some nice new ideas to work on so that's great!:)

Shruti... read this piece in morning but was not logged in at that time so didnt replied. Really liked the way you delved into Swara psychic. Her actions now-a-days are so dis-concentrating. She keeps on jumping conclusions and making rash decisions without a thought about Sanskaar who was her partner in everything till now. This is something I would definitely like to see in the show.. And the last part.. 😆 fan girl in me is in love with you... ❤️🤣. But really.. you have written that part so beautifully...Just the perfect amount of sensational, romantic and dreamy I want Swara to hallucinate about Sanskaar in the show too...It will be treat to watch ..isn't it...?

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Shruthi 🤗 My God this was one helluva introspective piece u got here!! And the intense ending? Cherry on top! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Shruti 🤗
You have such an amazing ability to portray the character's emotions and turmoil. This was mindblowing👏
A Swara i would love (and not only me) to see in the serial.
In the final part she started finally(🥳) to realize her feelings for Sanskar, and i loved that.
And Happy Dussehra to you and your family🤗

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Shruti... read this piece in morning but was not logged in at that time so didnt replied. Really liked the way you delved into Swara psychic. Her actions now-a-days are so dis-concentrating. She keeps on jumping conclusions and making rash decisions without a thought about Sanskaar who was her partner in everything till now. This is something I would definitely like to see in the show.. And the last part.. 😆 fan girl in me is in love with you... ❤️🤣. But really.. you have written that part so beautifully...Just the perfect amount of sensational, romantic and dreamy I want Swara to hallucinate about Sanskaar in the show too...It will be treat to watch ..isn't it...?

Originally posted by: anu91

Loved it...

beautifully written.. totally apt description of swara's turmoil...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

please do write about sanskaar's feelings.. 😳