beautifully written.. totally apt description of swara's turmoil...⭐️
please do write about sanskaar's feelings.. 😳
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beautifully written.. totally apt description of swara's turmoil...⭐️
please do write about sanskaar's feelings.. 😳
"And what did you say and do to that Sanskaar? Shame him for his actions so brutally? Why should he speak up for you now, especially with Lakshya, whom you once loved?"
These lines describe almost exactly what Sanskaar would be feeling right now IMO. He knows and realizes that there was nothing to be gained from him being honest about his feelings except probably more heart break. His mind almost always reminds him how his love for her is always going to be considered a "dhoka".(that FB when Lux asked him if he loved her) What sense does it make to fight for something that he feels for someone when that "someone" clearly doesn't even wish to think about it, forget about ever being able to accept it. His was not going to make his love for her some kind of a joke. He would never accept anything other than love of the same kind in return for his. Definitely not pity from her. He can handle all the hate that she can throw at him happily but pity is something he would definitely not be able to stand. I know everyone's going mad about Sanskaar lying about his love for Swara and how he should stop caring about his good for nothing , disgustingly shameless piece of trash of a brother. I am actually happy he said he wanted divorce. I also loved how DP had the sense of mind to ask him if his opinion would change if Swara wanted to remain in the relationship and loved that he immediately said yes with that really adorable nod.❤️ Gah! this guy has ruined other guys for me forever! When it comes to her, he makes sure he never makes a mistake. He knows this decision is as much his as it is her's. And if she would want to give this a chance, he would happily accept it . He would accept it if it is her decision ONLY. If that was what Swara wanted only then was it okay for him to continue with their relationship. I love this wonderful man so soo much that it is seriously breaking my heart to see him suffer this way especially for a girl who I believe(my opinion only) doesn't deserve him especially after everything she has put him through. Unless of course I see her suffer and redeem herself to earn the right to be by Sanskaar's side.I really want Sanskaar to realize her reasons for taking a step ahead in their relationship and put his foot down. I really want to see him trying to argue and free himself from this unending path of destruction and heartbreak that Swara clearly has kept in store for him. I have seriously come to hate that girl. How can some one be so bloody selfish? She has got to be the most infuriating , illogical, blind female that I have ever had the pleasure to care about."I am still only doing this for Ragini", struggling valiantly to crush down the burgeoning awareness that she was perhaps using this as some form of convenient excuse so she didn't have to totally tear herself away from it all, from him.I really wish this could be the reason but Swara on screen definitely has no time to think about our Sanskaar, and even if she did,the chance of those thoughts being anywhere near as romantic as these is zilch! I have lost my hopes for her redemption in my eyes. Oh I know she would eventually fall in love with Sanskaar and SwaSan will definitely happen . She might even suffer and redeem herself for Sanskaar but I think her redemption in the soap would definitely not suffice to make me love her . Unless she really suffers as much as Sanskaar is right now. But my Sanskaar is not as cruel as she is so I seriously doubt it but I really hope I can see it. I really am a sadist. Can't help it😆I loved the OS as always Shruti. You know I always do. I know I will always continue to love them. It's an absolute treat to read your take on the situation in the show and your Swara and Sanskaar are always a pleasure to read about. This Swara I can easily forgive . That Swara has some real redeeming to do before I can even consider forgiving her. Of course my forgiveness doesn't matter to her lol but it does to me.😃Not just anyone can be Mrs Sanskaar Maheshwari. They have to earn the right to own that name!And yes! I want a 3 shot at least.😃 Like I said I like your Swara and love your Sanskaar as much as Sanskaar on the show.
Shruti ...may I call you that...😃
Wow..WOW...wow...!!!!!Like Mind-blowingly Awesome👏Can I just say I love love love your Swara Sanskar as much as I love the ones we see in the show...Geetha aka Misaki above...has said it all that I wanted to say...The lines that you used to describe Sanskar's feelings are just Perfect...Its what he must be thinking when Laksh started blabbering...that who is he to stop Laksh...that Swara would not like him interfering in between them...or maybe that she still has a torch burning for Laksh...as she did love him ...You have showed us Swara's turmoil in her feelings in regards to Sanskar ...which I hope we get to see it in the show...because its so needed ..and so real too...Till now we haven't been shown any at all from her side other then her remembering the love confession...The CV's could have showed us more...but maybe they are saving those for later...like him being the shoulder to cry on...him being the reason for her laughter during those cruel grueling period of disappointment...him being the reason for her Triumph...As for the kiss...Loved...beautifully written and even her emotions after shes awakened from her dream...Loved it all...Am off to read the next part...😃
Originally posted by: ros_aavir
This is totally awesome ! 😃
I loved how you portrayed how messed up Swara's mind would be, yet her thoughts probably the most clearest they have ever been when she begins to realise how good Sanskaar has been to her despite her horrible behaviour towards him.Really liked how it was HER who kissed HIM in the dream! Shows she totally knows that Sanskaar is a true gentleman.😳
Very very tantalizing.
I missed this one and just realized its existence when I read The Comprehension Series, Part 2.Swara's turmoil on her new found feelings was exquisitely described...The ending...enticing...
That kiss was Swara's dream lolz & I was like wow! So it happened :P This dream should become reality soon. Swara is so lost, She wants to accept Sanskaar but her ego is not letting her do that. After facing a heart break she is afraid to love.
This was written Amazingly! <3.I'm your new fan of writing now!
Going for next chapter of this series & m already excited. Kitna series likhti ho yaar tum 😆