Unravelling- A SwaSan TS- The Comprehension Series, Part 1

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Loved this and loved how confused Swara is. Above all I loved how she slowly realizes her feelings for Sanskaar, at leasr subconsciously, as evidenced by her dream. Is there any possibility of you continuing it? If not then do write more SwaSan fics please. I am looking forward to reading them all.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hey Shru...🤗 Lovely piece. While I still don't agree with several of Swara's current actions, your OS portrayed her turmoil well. It was very good to see her irritation and disgust at (Un)Lucky/ Yucky. That guy gives me the heebie jeebies! What did Swara ever see in him in the first place? 😊

Plus, I liked the part in your work where Swara is at least becoming aware of the undercurrent of her feelings for Sanskaar. In the serial she's just like, "No, I don't love him. I don't want to stay married to him"...errr...I was totally like 😕 today. I'm sure Madam will then want to shelve the divorce with Sansku, just to reunite her suicidal behna with her crazy stalker jeeju...Is it just me, Shru, or does Sansku seem the only sane person left in the show (apart from DP, and just maybe, on strength of present behavior, AP?). I like Shomi, but she's half insane, for having loved Shekar, so she doesn't count! 😊

The ending of the O.S was very, very tantalizing. 😳 I wonder when that dream will turn to reality (at least on screen)?

Hey sweetie 🤗

How is your trip going? Reached well and all na? Net hai? So glad you liked it, like I said a bit of experimentation. I get very annoyed by Swara currently and although she really made me happy in most part yesterday with the Lux put-down, she just isn't consistent and I feel like she is not introspecting much at all. Having now seen today's epi- I think they are starting to show that process but still lacking yet. See, how can she not notice how attractive Sanskaar is?! 😕. Exactly like you say- what on earth is up with her reasoning or lack of? I wish they'd show some sense. I felt hope flare today when she admitted her was the perfect life partner but then it stopped a bit short of what I'd have liked. As for Yucky- you can imagine why I have coined that name for him 🤢. Oh totally Sansku and DP- only people with brain cells. I too like Shomi and today she did us proud, but they did mess with her big time during the SwaSan wedding drama so...AP- again, you just aren't sure are you? Sometimes she irritates me e.g. with how blind she is about Ragz and also partiality to her pathetic son.

That last part- I don't usually tend to write that much of the tantalising stuff and I hate dream sequences in shows especially when people are awake and dreaming, but this seemed to be the way I could make Swara actually connect to her subconscious. Felt a bit weird writing it but seems no one is minding it! 😳.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Good work Shruti.

Thank you name twin 😃 and OMG- those siggies or banners or whatever we call them ❤️

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Loved this and loved how confused Swara is. Above all I loved how she slowly realizes her feelings for Sanskaar, at leasr subconsciously, as evidenced by her dream. Is there any possibility of you continuing it? If not then do write more SwaSan fics please. I am looking forward to reading them all.

Hey! Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I'm glad you mentioned the continuation- I am so confused! Do you think it would benefit from more parts, making it a 2 or even 3 shot? Does that make you think a Sanskaar part and and something to conclude? Or perhaps I will write new ones exploring the growing realisation from Swara more. Hmmm I'll think it over. Ah how kind- you have read my other ones right? There's a small list of them, I've posted an index link to them below if you fancied reading some 😳. Thanks again!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
very well written

Thanks a lot 😃

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

I haven't managed to watch either yesterday's or today's episode Shruti. I will have to "res" this one until I have got the chance to do it while I am not in this almost zombie state that I am right now. Working on weekends is bad. Working on a festive weekend is even worse😭

I do not need to watch the episodes to tell you this though! I would really like for you to continue exploring Swara's POV and her realization. I'm tired of having to watch Sanskaar always being the one to give and get zilch in return. I really want you to continue this . At least a 3 shot😃

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Natsy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

This is beautiful. ❤️
Absolutely loved it,like always. 😛

Can I please request you to continue it? ** makes puppy face **

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: misaki
I haven't managed to watch either yesterday's or today's episode Shruti. I will have to "res" this one until I have got the chance to do it while I am not in this almost zombie state that I am right now. Working on weekends is bad. Working on a festive weekend is even worse😭

I do not need to watch the episodes to tell you this though! I would really like for you to continue exploring Swara's POV and her realization. I'm tired of having to watch Sanskaar always being the one to give and get zilch in return. I really want you to continue this . At least a 3 shot😃

Geetha 🤗 Hope you can catch the epis soon, yesterday's was really good, today's- hmm, not so much! Sympathise re the work- same boat here most days! Today took the cake- bad news from home but had to carry on, hence the writing to take my mind off too! I will be thinking over as to whether to extend this or do a new one. Haha- 3 shot eh?! 😉

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: natasha-
This is beautiful. ❤️
Absolutely loved it,like always. 😛

Can I please request you to continue it? ** makes puppy face **

Thank you so much Natasha, you are too kind 🤗. Ah- you want a continuation too? Some others have asked too. I may well do that or I will write something new but hopefully try not to disappoint 😳