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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Thank you to each and everyone who has commented so far and for your encouragement to continue. I already have the next parts mapped out in my head, it is just finding the time to write them down. I'll be trying to do it asap so hope it will be worth waiting! I'll try to reply in detail later but for now, thank you so much!

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Eeehhh.. It was so powerful.. The pain hs been felt here too, dearest !

plz update the nexr parts real soon 😳 M super excited to see the passion n anger n hurt n LOVE !

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

shruti...🤗

i will not be writing in detail as of now..because i want you to hurry up and finish the story...and reading my huge compliments would only slow you down.

let me just say one thing my friend. often when i read a lovelorn hero looking at his love singing away or doing anything...and yet unable to go and meet her coz he wants to keep his distance the unfocusedness of the descriptions irk me to death. i skip the parts. i know its not very nice of me to do that, but i do. (most other people do too, and then they say awesome and leave.i cannot complain because at least they say it, as opposed to just leaving.😆)

but i could not in this part...because it was so well written. there was no ott dreaminess.

so, loved it. and bechara producer.

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Ughh I hate u for this!! grrr This is the last thing I read ystrdy night before gng to sleep and it was wreaking havoc on my poor brains!!! u left in a cliffhanger!!!!!!! 😡😡

But seriously ❤️ya!

Okies but now be a doll and continue asap

and this is for u dearie--> 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: medhasarkar
shruti...🤗
i will not be writing in detail as of now..because i want you to hurry up and finish the story...and reading my huge compliments would only slow you down.

let me just say one thing my friend. often when i read a lovelorn hero looking at his love singing away or doing anything...and yet unable to go and meet her coz he wants to keep his distance the unfocusedness of the descriptions irk me to death. i skip the parts. i know its not very nice of me to do that, but i do. (most other people do too, and then they say awesome and leave.i cannot complain because at least they say it, as opposed to just leaving.😆)

but i could not in this part...because it was so well written. there was no ott dreaminess.

so, loved it. and bechara producer.

Media 🤗 When I first started reading your comment, my heart sank as I thought- oh no, it's overdone but then read the whole thing- phew!! 😆 Usually I don't like OTT lovelorn-ness too but on this one, I hope that by the time the whole thing comes together it will gel. Problem with writing in parts- you see the full picture but have to convey in stages. I just didn't have enough hours to do the full thing in one sitting. Thank you for this, it reassures me enough to continue!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful
Ughh I hate u for this!! grrr This is the last thing I read ystrdy night before gng to sleep and it was wreaking havoc on my poor brains!!! u left in a cliffhanger!!!!!!! 😡😡

But seriously ❤️ya!

Okies but now be a doll and continue asap
and this is for u dearie--> 🤗

😆😆 I know sweetie- I'm too cruel na?! I'm already thinking of when I'll be able to pen the next part so hope you won't have long to wait BUT i warn you, the next part isn't all nice and fluffy so you might curse me again before the end of all 3 parts so be warned! 😆 Thank you for keeping me motivated!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Wonderfully written! Waiting for the next parts...take ur own time but plz plz plz do not leave it incomplete.

Thank you so much- don't worry, I can't leave it incomplete for my own sanity- it must all be poured out 😆

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11
Eeehhh.. It was so powerful.. The pain hs been felt here too, dearest !

plz update the nexr parts real soon 😳 M super excited to see the passion n anger n hurt n LOVE !

Thanks Pihu- I sincerely hope you won't be disappointed by the other parts 😃. I like how you have guessed all the elements I hope to build in to it!

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

😆😆 I know sweetie- I'm too cruel na?! I'm already thinking of when I'll be able to pen the next part so hope you won't have long to wait BUT i warn you, the next part isn't all nice and fluffy so you might curse me again before the end of all 3 parts so be warned! 😆 Thank you for keeping me motivated!

@ blue: Oh huny dun worry I love my angst monsters! 😆 My 2nd fav genre after murder mystery! 😉😆 Romantic fluff comes quite later on my list actually, so no cursing ONLY BLESSINGS! 🤗🤗

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

@ blue: Oh huny dun worry I love my angst monsters! 😆 My 2nd fav genre after murder mystery! 😉😆 Romantic fluff comes quite later on my list actually, so no cursing ONLY BLESSINGS! 🤗🤗

Ahhh- another one like me, especially when I'm in that sort of mood! Thank you for the blessings- mmmwah 🤗