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Lumos_18

@Lumos_18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

It was beautiful 👏👏⭐️

Both Sanskar and Swara seems to be in so much pain.

You've penned their thoughts beautifully.

I really hope they clear whatsoever issues they have and finally be with eachother.

Brilliant job.👍🏼

And I really loved Sanskar's thoughts at the part where Sanskar can see Swara and she can't.😭

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sun_shine18
It was beautiful 👏👏⭐️
Both Sanskar and Swara seems to be in so much pain.
You've penned their thoughts beautifully.
I really hope they clear whatsoever issues they have and finally be with eachother.
Brilliant job.👍🏼
And I really loved Sanskar's thoughts at the part where Sanskar can see Swara and she can't.😭

Ahh thanks Paro! I'll try to bring out what brought them to this point and how they eventually deal with it in the next parts. Glad you liked Sanskaar's reactions etc- I wanted to bring out that he wants to stay away and in reality he should as it should be up to Swara but in their equation I feel she still can't take charge like he can 😊

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Shruts 🤗
You took me in an another world The song selection first of all wow, it's one of my fav song ❤️
Both seems in a painful situation But i'm sure everything will be sort out in the coming parts 😳
The way you described their emotions, hats off to you 👏
You are a brilliant writer Shruti ⭐️
Jaldi se update the next part, can't wait more

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Shruts 🤗
You took me in an another world The song selection first of all wow, it's one of my fav song ❤️
Both seems in a painful situation But i'm sure everything will be sort out in the coming parts 😳
The way you described their emotions, hats off to you 👏
You are a brilliant writer Shruti ⭐️
Jaldi se update the next part, can't wait more

Ahhh thank you so much Preeto 🤗. You love this song too?! Yayyy. Writing the next part but it's hard as there's so much angst in it . Hopefully I will be able to do it soon!

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Very interesting start...Sanskaar has become moody, an authoritative businessman...that's a transformation...very well written too...loved it...

Now awaiting for the next chapter when they meet each other...

On a side note, did you complete the Water 3 shot OS series...I have been away...loved the 'Water' portion of the OS...please let me know...

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Wow!

But where is continuation ..m waiting ..its unfair to stop at this point :(

Cont soonn

Plzz do PM me

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Very interesting start...Sanskaar has become moody, an authoritative businessman...that's a transformation...very well written too...loved it...
Now awaiting for the next chapter when they meet each other...

On a side note, did you complete the Water 3 shot OS series...I have been away...loved the 'Water' portion of the OS...please let me know...

Hey! Thanks for liking it so far, that's really nice of you.

Oh- the Water OS in the Elements series is by Viji i.e. CogitoErgoSum- she is an awesome writer and after Water she has written the next one Fire. I commented on that earlier today so you should be able to find it in the first few pages:).

I'm writing my next chapter on the SwaSan meeting but it also needs to deal with the background so is rather long; hopefully it won't take too long 😊

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-
Wow!
But where is continuation ..m waiting ..its unfair to stop at this point :(

Cont soonn

Plzz do PM me

Haha! Writing now! I'll PM you for sure, thanks for being interested 😊

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey! Thanks for liking it so far, that's really nice of you.
Oh- the Water OS in the Elements series is by Viji i.e. CogitoErgoSum- she is an awesome writer and after Water she has written the next one Fire. I commented on that earlier today so you should be able to find it in the first few pages:).
I'm writing my next chapter on the SwaSan meeting but it also needs to deal with the background so is rather long; hopefully it won't take too long 😊

Thanks dear. Apologies for the mix-up...

Your taken is totally different and it reeks with passion... This OS is going to be super...just waiting...