Overpowered by Love- SwaSan Three Shot - Page 3

Originally posted by: sun_shine18

It was beautiful 👏👏⭐️

Both Sanskar and Swara seems to be in so much pain.

You've penned their thoughts beautifully.

I really hope they clear whatsoever issues they have and finally be with eachother.

Brilliant job.👍🏼

And I really loved Sanskar's thoughts at the part where Sanskar can see Swara and she can't.😭

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Shruts 🤗
You took me in an another world The song selection first of all wow, it's one of my fav song ❤️
Both seems in a painful situation But i'm sure everything will be sort out in the coming parts 😳
The way you described their emotions, hats off to you 👏
You are a brilliant writer Shruti ⭐️
Jaldi se update the next part, can't wait more

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Very interesting start...Sanskaar has become moody, an authoritative businessman...that's a transformation...very well written too...loved it...

Now awaiting for the next chapter when they meet each other...

On a side note, did you complete the Water 3 shot OS series...I have been away...loved the 'Water' portion of the OS...please let me know...

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Wow!

But where is continuation ..m waiting ..its unfair to stop at this point :(

Cont soonn

Plzz do PM me

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey! Thanks for liking it so far, that's really nice of you.

Oh- the Water OS in the Elements series is by Viji i.e. CogitoErgoSum- she is an awesome writer and after Water she has written the next one Fire. I commented on that earlier today so you should be able to find it in the first few pages:).

I'm writing my next chapter on the SwaSan meeting but it also needs to deal with the background so is rather long; hopefully it won't take too long 😊