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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: samiya.059
Amazing...!!
How did I miss this awesome story
Such a wonderful piece of writing...I must say there are very good writers on forum.I am quite sure that u can b a successful writer.You and Viji have a unique way of writing...not the usual prose...but somewhat lyrical
Swason are the only couple I adore in whole telly world.Their story is so unique...The way you described sanskaarz feelings were so like the character sanskaar maheshwari...not even one sentence I could pin point and say "oh this reaction is so unlike sanskaar maheshwari"I so like it that while writing stories on them u don't change their character.Their persona remains same.It brings the essence of originality to it...
Have read your other works also..and they were absolutely brilliant but this one is my personal favorite
Sankaar's love is pure and patient..Recently I read a verse.."love asks for patience and lust is restless"
And abruptly sanskaar came to my mind and ragini too...how aptly your story too describes it
Keep writing more
I can see a fantastic writer in making in u
Samiya

Samiya- you really made my week! Thank you so much for the lovely comments! I am an aspiring writer and one day I hope to jack the full time job in and do this for a living so reading your comments made me feel so nice despite knowing I am a long way from that point 😳. I adore SwaSan and like you, they are the only indian tv couple I ship at the moment, this is the only indian show I am watching. Oh yes, I like to follow the current track usually although sometimes I diverge but I do like to keep the essence of the characters the same, it then flows much better for me:). I love that quote you used- even I heard that recently and yes, it so relates to Sanskaar and Ragini right?! Thanks so much again for encouraging me like this! 🤗

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
lovely ending

Glad you enjoyed it:)

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

what a fabulous story⭐️.

read it all in one go..
gives me all gooey mushy feelz.
very very beautiful story with such a lovely ending.

Thank you!😳

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">what a fabulous story⭐️.

read it all in one go..
gives me all gooey mushy feelz.
very very beautiful story with such a lovely ending.

Thank you!😳
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Your so welcome and thank you for your very kind words!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome..👏

Thank you again!

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Loved the 3s so much...Sanskaar in all business mood and so intense was a treat to read...I have always wanted Swara to become a good singer, after all this show is about music also...and u fulfilled my wish thank you so much...😊

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: rg0782
Loved the 3s so much...Sanskaar in all business mood and so intense was a treat to read...I have always wanted Swara to become a good singer, after all this show is about music also...and u fulfilled my wish thank you so much...😊

I have just realised you had replied to this! Thanks so much for liking this and yes, I wish we saw more of the music angle in the show:)