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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

Hmmm interesting story totally different for others
Loved Sara's care for kumud
Gotta admit also like kumud n Sara's fights
Looks like that sleeze Sunny is after kumud n is wanting to scare her n make her think the rumours r true
Thing is is it a prank or is he meaning to hurt her ???????
Oh no he's planning against Sara's now
Wonder whats gonna happen now
Thanks to my buddy for recommending
Could u plz send me future updates would love to continue reading

Thanks dear
of course i will send you
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Awesome... 🤗
Keep writing 😳 You are a good writer. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Thanku Jess, i am loving it

waiting fr the next update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
interesting update...jess...🤗
u r creating mystery after mystery...
sunny is planning sumthing with sum1... his target is kumud but saras is saving her... & he knows sumthing...👏👏
loved danny's expression & shouting wen he found samud 2gether...🤣🤣
so danny proposed to kusum.. kumud's sis...gud...
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kusum04

Awesome... 🤗

Keep writing 😳 You are a good writer. 😃

thanks 😊
How can I stop writing now?😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Gul.S_Ef


Thanku Jess, i am loving it

waiting fr the next update 😊

You're welcome 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

interesting update...jess...🤗
u r creating mystery after mystery...
sunny is planning sumthing with sum1... his target is kumud but saras is saving her... & he knows sumthing...👏👏
loved danny's expression & shouting wen he found samud 2gether...🤣🤣
so danny proposed to kusum.. kumud's sis...gud...
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...

thanks dear..🤗
@ bold: When I read what I had written I was like😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Part 8:


Previously; "We must get rid of him."

Sunny said," Are you sure that we have to do this? Can't we take other ways?"

"Are you on my side or theirs? Don't you remember what they did to us, and that jerk is getting in all this unnecessarily? I've waited for it, don't break my dreams now, you're the only one I have."

"I'm sorry, it's just that why is she to be punished for something that isn't her fault?"

"I only want justice, and I'm going to get it by hook or by crook."

Sunny's cell rang. He saw Kumud's name.

"Put it on loudspeaker."

He did as he was told.

"Sunny, where are you?"
"I'm out for some important work.."
"What work could you possibly have over here?"
Sunny looked at the person who was in front of him.
"Actually, I have a distant relative in the village, so I've meet him."
"Oh..come fast, we will go to a lake near the mansion at about 4, it'll be so much fun."
"Mm..ok, I'll try to come."

He disconnected the phone.

"I'll get going."

"Wait!"

Sunny stopped and walked back.

"I know which lake they are talking about, Sunny, make sure that whatever you do, don't go in the deep edge, it's dangerous, many incidents have been reported over there." "And here's the plan to get rid of that guy...later on, we'll decide for her."

Sunny listened to the plan carefully.
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"What should I wear?"
"Anything you want, and remember, we'll not be swimming, we will stay in the boat only."
"What do you think of this swim suit?"
"I'm going nuts! I've been telling you since the last 15 minutes that we're not going to the beach and you are not even listening to me," Anushka slumped on the sofa.

After half an hour, she finally found something to wear.


Everyone's eyes were on her as soon as she came downstairs. They had been waiting for her.
"I'm ready, let's go." she said cheerfully.

She started heading to the door but no one moved. Everyone stood there with their mouths opened.

Danny leaned and whispered to Saras," Hot choice." Saras gave him a deadly look and told him to shut his big mouth.

"Why are you still here?' Kumud said annoyingly now.

They all then went out after her.
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"This is so boring."
"I had told you Kumud that we'll only be sitting in a small boat."
"No need to add salt to my wounds Anu."

Sunny was unaware of all the conversation taking place. He was lost in his thoughts.

"Some people like living in their own world." Saras said to Danny.
"What did you just say?"
"I was not talking to you."
"You were talking about me, so I have every right to know."
"Where am I stuck? Oh god, please show some pity."
"Argh..Go to hell."
"Tell me the address." he grinned.
"Jump in the lake and you'll directly be there."

"Careful guys, Ramu told us to be careful over here."

"Danny, I'm always in danger when this wild cat is with me."

"How dare you stupid jerk!"

"I dared! What will you do now? huh?"

"I swear to god that I'll kill you some day."

"Oh please before you do that, I'll kill myself."

"Oh, then I'll cry."

"I didn't know that you cared so much."

"I'd certainly cry but out of joy. By the way, when is your funeral, I'm very eager."

"I'll not give you that pleasure so soon."

Both of them were standing by now.

Saras had reached the end of the boat along with Kumud. They were fighting with each other. Danny was trying to get network on his mobile as he urgently neede to talk to Kusum and Anushka was listening to music while Sunny was still lost in his thoughts.

The boat tilted. Sunny's eyes immediately widened, they were at the deep edge...

They suddenly heard a huge splash...


Hey guys,😊 I'm giving really short updates right now coz' I'm busy. Keep liking and commenting as it really encourages me to write more. I cannot reply to all your comments as IF lets me post only a number of posts, I'll definitely reply to them when I get time.

P.s: If you want Pms add me to your buddy list.

Take care

Bye🤗

Love Jess❤️









Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Kumud's dressing is cool.try 2 paste pic here.the story is becoming adventurous.Hope there is no danger
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful update... jess🤗
loved it...
kumud's dress is 😎
samud fight was 😆😆
continue soon...

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