FF|| Raaz- The secret(Completed||)

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Gavina

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi everyone😊,this is Jess here, well I've made an FF on Saras and Kumud. I wanted to write it before but I was a little busy so I did it now.

My other work on Samud:

Ek Villain (FF) (On-going)

Phir Mohabat Karne Chala (SS)(Completed)

Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago

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Jasmine

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Posted: 11 years ago

i've commented there.but plz post the ff in this thread if u want d readers 2 c it

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

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Posted: 11 years ago

I had posted it i the fan fic section but I'm posting it here so that'll it be easier for you.

Raaz- The secret

What happens when a group of students in archaeology decide to dig the secrets of an old mansion which is abandonned and is totally isolated from civilization? What happens when strange things begin to occur?

Character sketch:

Saras Vyas: 23 years old, student in archaeology

Kumud Desai: 20 years old, student in archaeology

Danny Vyas: 22 years old, Saras's brother, student in archaeology

Anushka Gupta: 22 years old, Kumud's best friend, student in archaeology

Sunny Malhotra: 21 years old, student in archaeology, hates Saras

More characters coming...

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Gavina

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Posted: 11 years ago

Introduction - page 1

Part 1 - page 2

Part 2 - page 3

Part 3 - page 4

Part 4 - page 6

Part 5 - page 8

Part 6 - page 9

Part 7 - page 10

Part 8 - page 12

Part 9 - page 13

Part 10 - page 14

Part 11 - page 16

Part 12 - page 17

Part 13 - page 19

Part 14 - page 20

Part 15 A - page 22

Part 15 B - page 24

Part 16 - page 25

Part 17 - page 27

Part 18 A - page 29

Part 18 B - page 33

Part 19 - page 36

Part 20 A - page 37

Part 20 B- page 39

Part 21 - page 40

Preview to part 22 - page 43

Part 22 - page 44

Part 23 - page 47

Part 24- Page 47

Part 25- page 47

Thank you + final note - page 47

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Gavina

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Posted: 11 years ago

Introduction:

A bus is shown going towards a forest. Inside, a heeled shoe had been thrown at a guy but he dodged and it it he window.

"What is wrong with you?"
"You dirty dog! You threw my sunglasses outside."

It was Kumud and Saras fighting. They had been enemies since the day they met. Kumud was sitting in the cafeteria with Anushka and Sunny. They were talking when suddenly, Kumud felt something hot and sticky on her, she touched her hair and found noodles there. She was angry and saw the person who did that. It was Saras.

"You Jerk!"
"Hey, calm down girl, I slipped, right Dan?" He looked at his brother who nodded.

"Slipped,My foot!" she gave him a tight slap.

"How dare you raise your hand on me!" He looked at her in anger. Everyone present there stared at them. She was scared when she saw anger in his eyes. Fortunately for her, Sunny came to her rescue.

"Come on, get out of here now."

Saras got out of there furiously accompanied by Danny.

Since then, they had been fighting and on top of that, they were both students in archaeology. They had a project to do on abandoned regions. They were allocated an old mansion which was far from the city or any village. They were heading there.

Edited by Jess2014 - 11 years ago

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 11 years ago

samud fighting like hell...this is so diff.nice

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Gavina

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
samud fighting like hell...this is so diff.nice

Yeah, I wanted to try something different😊

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Kiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ok when is the update, a young Saras is something new I am looking forward to. Thanks for the change in characterisation.

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Gavina

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kiranpreethee
Ok when is the update, a young Saras is something new I am looking forward to. Thanks for the change in characterisation.

The next update is tonight, I guess😊 Thnx for commenting.