*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1) - Page 109

Originally posted by: Princess.S786

Just caught up
Awesome updates nivi
rachna is in pain:(
Thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Wow Nivi, a Tale of two Updates😊

I read chapter 53 with a smile on my face the entire time. Hard to pinpoint what I loved more than any other, but the smile did get a little bigger with the Old Spice reference, solely for personal reasons. Very descriptive and thoroughly enjoyable. Love, love, love Kabir in this chapter.

And now Chapter 54...I get it I really do, but like RaBir wrote, it was so painful to read, but totally understandable that Kabir has these feelings. I'm certain though that you will have our couple work through their issues in advance of their vow renewal.

Looking forward to the next update Nivi!

Originally posted by: hangok

ohhh my god,
what a beginning, he couldnt think about what she is talking he was busy in checking her out😆

how can you describe it soo well, poor kt schocked to see his wife in this situation...
im not suprised, you are just tooo good👏
now back to story, 😊
i can understand rachna , i had the feeling that she is thinking about kt more than herself, because she want to give him this happiness to be a father...even when he didnt mentioned it she knows him too well what he feels...
dont know why but i liked it how he said, that Having a child isn't what defines us..

and loved it more how she said You and me makes us but it doesn't make a family..

great way to write it like this...
sooo at last it is out from him, how he feels in all this, about his mother, brother about all his family members...

but i didnt like it how he said, if she is blind to everything besides her own feelings,
i dont think that she deserved it, because we could see in this part, all her fears is just that she cant give this happiness of a child to kt, im tooo excited to know how they will clear this air..
dont let us wait tooo long...

its always a pleasure to read your work😉

Originally posted by: nividances

Hi Poonam! Thank you so much!

I know it was hard to read about the fight, but they both can't always be so understanding to each other. Every couple fights and with everything that Kabir has gone through in the past few days, you can't expect him to only think about Rachna. She of course is feeling bad about the miscarriage because she can't give him the happiness of a child, but he is frustrated that he has already addressed that issue with her multiple times and she is still not getting it. Him losing his temper and saying all that was only natural, was it not?

The fight will definitely end, but they both have to deal with their issues first and you can definitely expect a happy wedding.😊

Originally posted by: nividances

Thanks Sharlene! A happy wedding is certainly on the cards, though they first have some issues to deal with individually. You definitely suggested correctly that they need to communicate and clear their inner turmoil, which is what I plan to do of course, but with my own little twist.😉😆

Originally posted by: nividances

NOTE: Thank you so much for the amazing response to the last few updates everyone! 😃

I'm truly feeling over the moon seeing that this thread has almost reached 150 pages which means that I will have to open thread 2 in order to finish the story. This is something I never could have imagined in my wildest dreams! 😕 An FF opening a thread 2?? 😲😲 I've seen it happen on another forum but with my own FF...I am still in shock.

I started writing this story thinking that it would finish in a few parts but now that I have written more than 50 chapters, I don't know how to feel. All I can say is THANK YOU for tolerating my writing, appreciating my work, and encouraging me to continue. I have deliberately added more things to the plot of the story to prolong it because people wanted to see a full-on Rabir wedding. I hope that I continue to meet your expectations with future updates as well.

I am kind of busy on the school and personal front right now so I don't have as much time to devote to this story as I did in the past few weeks while I was on vacation, so the updates will be less frequent but I will try my best to post whenever I can. Thank you once again for reading, liking, and commenting! 🤗

❤️ Nivi

Originally posted by: RaBir

You right every couple fight. Kabir Rachna correct for own reason but I just no like fight. Happy ending wait but I want fight to over soon. Update soon if time.