~*~*FF-Hum TuM~*`~*-EnDinG iS Up!

So YEs...I decided to write a FF!😆I totally love writing, and I thought maybe I could create something for all of us to enjoy...so if you don't like it, lemme know....I'm not looking forward to boring you guys😳

Anyways, the FF takes on Campus where the gang studies. Here's the character sketch😳

Manya Sharma: Shy yet very intelligent girl. Her best friend is Roopa, and she secretly likes Akash.

Akash Rathod: Same as he is now (I love him that way😉)

Om: Has a very decent accent!😉Knows Manya likes Akash; loves to tease her.

Rehan: Finds Kiran very pretty but annoying😆

Goppu: Secretly likes Roopa (new twist?) And is more on the "cool side"😎

Sanju: No more tomboy. Happens to be the life of the campus with her funny jokes😉

Kiran: Called the prettiest at college...till Manya showed up😃😉

Roopa: Secretly finds Akash very attractive; huge jealousy problem; spoiled

So here was the character sketch guys. I only want to start the FF if you guys approve☺️So plzz let me know so I could begin it!😉

yea like the idea very much start it soon

cool amazing should definatally rite

Thanks 4 the Comments guys 😳 So I guess I'll start right now 😃

Part 1:
The whole gang was seated in the canteen, drinking milkshakes as it was pouring wet outside. Manya stared at her milkshake, listening to Akash's voice from the other table as the boys joked around with each other. Roopa flipped her cell phone, sipping a drink of her milkshake.
R: Manya, kahan khoyee hui ho?
M: Uh...nowhere...main tho bas...
Meanwhile, Om turned to look at them from the other table.
Om: Main jaanta hoon yeh kahan khoyee hui hai. Kisi ke khyaloon mein...kyun, Manya?
M: Om, tum bhi na... As she says this, she looks at Akash who bend over on his table and looks at her closely.
A: Tho hamari Manya kisi ke khyaloon mein gum hai? He says this flirtatiously, smiling at Manya.
R: Is mein kya hai Akash? Har ladki akhir kisi na kisi ke baare mein tho soch sakti hai na?
A: Roopa, tum mere baare mein soch dho tho main kehta hoon zindagi ban jaye!
Manya frowns at Akash's flirting with Roopa. "Kitna bada flirt hai yeh!" She thinks to herself. MAnya stands up and walks outside in the rain. She holds out her hands as the water slowly falls on her hands.
Sanju realizes this and goes to the door. S:Guys, look at Manya! Manya, bimaar hona hai kya? Come inside!"
M: Mujhe baarish bahut pasand hai, Sanju!
The gang gets up and follows Sanju to the door where they watch Manya sort of dance in the rain. Akash looks at her, a confused look on his face. He follows Manya out in the rain and goes to stand near her. MAnya looks up at him, surprised. Om realizes this and laughs. He turns to the guy working at the cashier and whispers something.
Just as Akash is about to say something, the song "Saansoon Ko Saansoon Mein..." comes on from Hum Tum.
Manya feels a bit embarrassed and is about to walk inside. As she is walking, Akash grabs her hand.
A: Ab beeg hi chuke hain tho, kyun na is raat ko poora ker dhein?
Manya lokos at him, surprised. Akash holds out his hand with a smile. Manya places her hand in his hand as the song comes on.
"Saansoon Ko Saansoon Mein Dalne Dho Zaara...
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko..Badne Dho Zara...
Lamhoon Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh..
Paas Ajayein...HUm...Hum Tum..."
Manya and Akash hug stand closely next to each other, swaying to the song. They look into each other's eyes. Akash smiles flirtatiously while Manya looks at him adorably... 😳

Hope You Guys Like It...Let Me know if I should continue... 😛

Thanks guys...i hope i get more comments 😭 😉

that was really awesome
..are there any more ff's in salaam zindagi except this one..ishq hua and pyaar to hona hi tha???

OMG!!! That was sooooooo cute!! Plz Continue soon and longer parts plz!! 😆

*Riya

Originally posted by: soccorgirl1015

that was really awesome
..are there any more ff's in salaam zindagi except this one..ishq hua and pyaar to hona hi tha???

Yepp Ishq Hua and Pyaar To Hona Hi Tha are there😃Thanks by the way😉

Thanx for the comments...Hope I get more! 😆☺️ HrM thiS looks pretty long 😆 :

Part 2:
Roopa glared at Akash and Manya sway in such a romantic way.
R: "Kya ker raha hai yeh? Kabhi tho mere se aisi baat kerta hai jaisi ki-"
Roopa was thinking this just as a hand placed out in front of her. She looked up and saw Gopu smiling.
G:"Care to dance?"
Roopa just stared at him.
R: "Baarish mein?"
Gopu:"Aur ni tho kya? Akash Manya bhi tho ker rahe hain na..."
-----------------Meanwhile outside-------------------
Manya suddenly stopped dancing and looked at Akash.
M:"Yeh..." she began.
Akash stopped dancing and frowned.
A:"Kya, Cinderella!" he said teasingly. "Dance ko kharab kerna tho koi tumse seekhe!"
Manya put her hands on her hips.
M:"Acha? Tho dance ko maine kharab kiya hai?"
A:"Aur nain tho kya!Tum hamesha koi acha kaam ko kharab kerti ho!"
Manya smiled at him and waved her hand.
M: "Thank you thank you! Main jaanti hoon ke mere saath dance kerna tumhare liye bahut ehm hai, Akash, per..." she said teasingly.
Akash began to blush slightly.
A: "OH, please, okay!"
M:"KYa please?" Manya asked, wiping water from her eyes. "Tumhe tho abhi itna afsos tha ke hamara dance kharab ho gaya!"
A:"Haan...because I was enjoying the moment!"
M:"Because of me!"
Akash looked at her, a confused look on his face.
A:"Nain...main tho..."
Manya burst out laughing.
M:"Tum itna nervous kyun ho rahe ho Akash?!"
A:"Main...nain tho...woh tho bas..."Akash stopped talking and stared at MAnya.
"Main itna nervous kyunho raha hoon?" He thought to himself.
Manya looked at Akash and realized he wasn't answering. The rain fell on both of them, hard. Manya raised her hand to Akash's face and wiped the water out of his eyes. Akash closed his eyes at her touch. Manya breathed a bit louder as she wiped the water off his face, although more kept coming down.
Just as she was doing this, loud music burst through the garden and the whole gang came out dancing. The song "Deewangi Deewangi" from Om Shanti Om came on, and everyone began to dance in the rain.
Akash stared at Manya who was being pulled away by Om to dance. Manya laughed and began to circle around in the rain, laughing and dancing. A hand on his shoulder startled him, and it turned out to be Roopa.
R:"Dance, Akash! Come on!"
Akash smiled and danced alongside Roopa and Gopu. In between he stole glances at MAnya.
Manya suddenly turned around and caught him staring. He rolled his eyes at her and she went upto him.
M: Stop being jealous, Akash!
A: Me? Jealous? Kise?!
M: Om se!
A: KYA?!
M: Haan, kyunki main oos ke saath dance ker rahi hoon and woh mere liye acha dance partner hai...
A: Oh please! Mere se acha dance partner tho tumhe kabhi mile ga bhi nain!
Everyone had stopped dancing and listened to them. Kiran stepped in between them.
K: Okay, okay! MEre paas ek solution hai...yeh decide kerne ke liye ke Manya ke liye acha dance partner kaun hai!
Rehan: Aur woh kya?
K: Manya Om aur Akash dono ke saath dance karegi! Aur hum decide kerein ge!
S: Haan, that's a good idea! I want to be a judge!
Om: Tho teek hai phir! Kyun, Akash, ho jaye?
Akash looked at Manya, smiling flirtatiously again.
A: Kyun, Cinderella, ho jaye?
He winked at her 😉
Manya smiled, crossing her arms.
M: Agar tumhe khud per itna yakeen hai, Akash, tho phir ho jaye!

Well that's it for now! 😉 Hope you guys like it! Plz do leave comments 😳

Thanks for the replies everyone! Part 3:

------------------------the next day------------------------------

Everyone was waiting in the gym. Om kept giving teasing looks to Akash, whereas Roopa gave annoyed looks. Gopu kept smiling at Roopa😆

S: Where's Manya, yaar? Hamari dancer missing hai!

A: (with a laugh) Ussai patha hai ki woh apni shart haar jayegi...main Om se acha partner hoon!

Om: (whistling) Dekhein ge, yaar, dekhein ge!

K: Oh God, guys, look!!

Everyone turned their heads to the door where Manya was coming down looking more goregous than ever. She was wearing a silky black dress and matching jewelry. Her black sexy heels tapped the gym floor as she walked to them.

Rehan: Wow, Manya, you look fabulous!

S: Haan, definite dance spirit in the dress!

Manya looked at Akash who was staring at her. He suddenly looked away, blushing slightly again.

M: "So...who's first?"

Om: Main main! (to Akash): Watch and learn, yaar!

A: Yeah, man, show me what not to do!😆

(This is for Omaanya fans😳) The lights went dim as Om bent down on his knees.

Om: Can I have this dance, Maanya Sharma?

M: (places her hand in his) You may, Om!

Om and Manya slowly started swaying

*~*~*~Yeh Dua Hai MEri Rab Se...Tujhe Ashiqui Mein Sabse...*~*~*~

Om spun Manya around, letting her back lean against his chest. He held her by the waist as they slowly swayed to the song. Pulling her straight again, they danced to the end of the song......................

Everyone clapped as they finished dancing.

R: You two are tooo good yaar!

S: Om, wow, yaar!

M: (walking to Akash)Kya hua, Akash? Darr gaye?

A: Cinderella, iss PRince Charming ka jadoo tho tumne abhi dekha bhi nahin!

M: Oh really? Tho phir dikhao na mujhe...apna jadoo...Prince Charming!

A: (standing up) Lets go for it, Cinderella!

The song came on but Akash put his hand up.

A: Acha dancer woh hota hai jo apni dun mein naachna jaanta hai...

M: Mathlab?

A: Mathlab yeh.............

The lights went off. Manya stumbled in the dark, trying to find out where Akash was. Suddenly one blue spotlight went to Akash and one pink spotlight to Manya.

A: (singing)Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
While singing, he crept behind Manya, stretching her arm. He let his hands wander to the top of her arm, resting his head on her shoulder. He put his hands on her waist and she covered them with hers. They slowly went from right to left....

A:Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan
While singing this he held Manya by the waist and spun her around so they face each others. Manya and Akash stared into each other's eyes as he sang the song...Manya put her arms around Akash's neck and he held her from the waist, picking her up slowly in his arms...

~*~*~*Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan~*~*~*

The lights flickered back on as everyone hooted and clapped, including Om.

G: What a chemistry, man!

Manya and Akash stared at each other. Akash was still holding Manya in his arms.

A: (whispering in a flirtatious way)Manya...

M: Mmmm??

A: TUM BAHUT BAARI HO!

He dropped Manya down, and she landed on the ground.

M: You animal! Jaanwar kahin ke!

A: (Laughing) Tumhe Cinderella kya keh diya, tum tho sir per hi cher gayee!

M:Shut up!

Akash walked to Manya who backed away against the wall...

A: Manya...?

That's it for now😳