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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
Thanks guys 😳 So I'll take up the precap suggestion, and this is a precap after part 8:

Akash and Manya are in a jewelry store, and Akash raises up a necklace on Manya's neck as Manya stares at him...Hum Tum music is playing in the background as Akash tells the clerk to pack the necklace. Manya stands up and says,
M: Hey!!
A: What?!

So stay tuned ,guys 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
omg!!!! thats soo cute!!! i cant believe they r getting married. seriously, u shud become a writer. ur damn good! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
you are sooo goodd reallyy in writing story about akash and manya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
awesome ;]

waiting for a relationship like this one for a while...please make the parts long...everyone loves this ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
Thank youuu sooo much everyone!! Okay, part 9:

--After about 2-3 hours----
Manya and Akash stared at their parents talk in the living room. Akash was sitting on a table, his head down.
A: Manya?
M: Hmm?
A: Shaadi ke baad...tum mujhe haath lagane dho gi?
Manys stood up, staring at him disgustingly.
M: YOU FREAK!
A: No! Not that way, MAnya! I swear mera...woh mathlab nahin tha!
M: Haan haan! AUr tumhe kisne kaha hamari shaadi hogi? Tum inkaar karoge, Akash!
A: Manya, main--
From inside the room, Akash's father, Mr. Rathod, called him.
AF(Akash's father): Akash! IDhar ao!
A: Yes, papa?
Akash's mother made Manya sit down next to her, laughing.
AM (Akash's mother): Bachpan mein itni moti hoti thi!
A: No way! MAnya moti hoti thi?
Manya glared at Akash as he laughed.
A: Moti Cinderella!
M: AKASH!
Akash chuckled.
AM: Akash, tum meri bahu ko thung kerna chod dho!
Akash stopped laughing.
A: BAHU?
AM: Haan, bahu. Jab humein patha chala tum dhono vaise hi itne ache dost ho, humein tho aisa laga jaise ki kismat hi aap dhono ko milana chahti hai!
Manya gave "ishaare" to Akash to speak up.
AM: Akash, tumhe iss shaadi se koi problem nahin hai, na?
A: Actually, Mom...
AF: (strictly) Problem kaisi? Isse mere saath future mein kaam kerna hai tho Manya hi mere ghar ki bahu bane gi!
Akash stared in disbelief, scared of his dad.
A: Uh...yeah, Dad...Manya tho vaise bhi meri--bahut achi dost hai...
Manya stared at him, then smiled.
M: Akash, kya main tumhe kitchen mein zara dekh sakti ho?
MM: Beta, ab tho isse hi tumne dekhna hai! Kyun, Akash?
Akash smiled and followed Manya to the kitchen. The moment they were in the kitchen, Manya grabbed a knife and put it on his throat.
M: Tumne khud ko samaj kya rakha hai!
A: Aye, Cinderella, satya gayee o? Knife neeche karo!
M: Mere saamne tho itna hero bane phirte ho! Aur andher? Apne dad ke saamne kuch nahin ker paate!
A: Aye, Cinderella, mujhe koi shauk nahin hai ki apni zindagi tumhari jaisi chipkali ke saath nikalon!
M: OH?! Chipkali! Isse liye andher shaadi ke liye haan keh dhi?!
Akash smiled deviously. 😈
A: Cinderella, ek baat bathao. Kya tumhari Ma tumhe kisi...awara ladke ke saath baandhna chahe gi? Ek aisa ladka jo ek flirt ho, ek...saand ho?
M: Akash, I'm so glad you're admitting this to yourself. Tumhare liye denial mein rehna unhealthy tha!
A: Oh shut up! My point is, na Aunty yeh pasand kerein gi, aur nahin Mom and Dad koi awara, shaatir ladki ko apni bahu banana chahein gi!
Manya raised the knife again.
M: Aye, shaatir kise bola?!
Akash grabbed the knife and put it down.
A: Shut up, MAnya. All you have to do is act all like a bad girl and all I have to do is act like a clever boy. Got it?
M: I guess...
A: Exactly. Tho phir woh rishta khud hi tod dhein ge!
M: Oh! I get it! Lakein tumhare liye tho yeh koi mushkil kaam nahin hoga na?
A: Exact---hey!!
Manya giggled.
-----Meanwhile, the parents--------
Mr. Rathod bent up, nodding.
AF: Acha! Tho yeh plan hai in dhono ka!
They were listening to the conversation of Manya and Akash.
AM: Mathlab, Akash aur Manya iss rishte se raazi nahin hain!
MM: Main Manya ko achi tarha jaanti hoon, Rukmani. Woh Akash se pyar kerti hai. Uss ke chehre pe likha hai!
AF: Of course likha hai! Akash bhi ussai chahta hai-lakein yeh baat saaf hai ki un dhono ko apni feelings admit kerne mein problem ho rahi hai. Agar na hoti, tho bina kisi darr ke humein bata dhaite.
AM: TRue...
MM: So yeh ab hamara kaam hai...in dhono ko kareeb laana...
AF: And I know just the way! AKASH! MANYA!
Akash and Manya stepped out of the kitchen and into the living room.
A: Ji?
M: Ji?
AF stared at Akash.
AF: Engangement hogi pehle, aur phir shaadi...
A: Oh...I see...
He nudged Manya to start the acting, and MAnya stumbled.
M: Uh...yea...dhoom se hogi na? Like, with music and a big party?
Akash smirked and bent to her ear.
A: Aur acting, Manya, aur acting!
M: Tum karo na!
A: Uh...Dad, main soch raha tha ki engangement mein...kisi dancer ko hire kerein. You know, dancer?
Manya shot him a dirty look as he smiled teasingly.
AF: Pehle shopping tho karo.
M: (Acting)Good idea, uncle. Kyun na Akash aur mein apni shaadi ki teriyan khud kerein? Like, the clothes and jewelry?
Akash looked at her and also continued acting.
A: MAnya, hamari family mein shaadi se pehle istherhan--
AM: Kya shaadi se pehle? Its a young generation now, Akash.
Akash stared in disbelief, unknown to the fact that their parents were aware of the fact that Manya and Akash were acting.
MM: Aap dhono college mein akatai, ek campus pe rehte ho! Come on now! Jao, tum dhono shopping karke ao...
A: But, Dad..ladki tho...saas ke saath...
AF: Are you mad, Akash? Lagta hai tum family movies dekhne lage ho...
--Jewelry store----
Akash and Manya were in a jewelry store, and Akash raisd up a necklace on Manya's neck as Manya stared at him...Hum Tum music played in the background as Akash told the clerk to pack the necklace. Manya stood up and said,
M: Hey!!
A: What?!
M: Zyada chipko muth, Akash. Door raho!
A: Main tho bas necklace dekh raha tha...
M: Main khud dekh loon gi!
A: Aye, Cinderella! Tameez se paish aao. Main tumhara hone vaala pati hoon!
M: Haan, haan! Kya kerlo ge tum? Shaadi tho tod nahin sakte tum--
A: Shut up, Manya!
M: Mujhe bookh lagi hai, Akash.
A: Sit. Abhi shopping hogi.
M: MUJHE KUCH KHANNA HAI!
Akash stared at her.
A: Chalo!
Manya giggled as they walked.
M: Akash, tumhe meri kitni care hai!
A: Oh please!
M: Admit it Akash.
A: MAnya!
M: AKASH!
Akash stopped and stared at her...

Precap:
Manya came down the stairs in a wonderful dress as Akash, wearing a tux, stared at her. Om nudged him, laughing.
Om: Abhi dulhaniya ko dekh ker heraan ho gaye?
A: Dulhaniya? Yeh tho bas engangement hai. Shaadi se pehle yeh sab kuch khatum ho chuka hoga!
But secretly, he looked at MAnya come down, looking gorgeous, and wonder if he even wanted to break it off with her...


Stay tuned... 😳


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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
aawwwww that was so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so cute I LOVED IT
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
Thanks...part 10 will be up soon...and its important for our couple 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
PLEASE POST PART 10 SOON!!!!!

very anxious 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
Part 10:

M: Aise kya dekha rahe ho? Bolo na...
A: Manya, kya hamara plan kaam karega?
M: Akash, tum question ko avoid ker rahe ho!
A: Cinderella, mujhe tumhari care kyun hogi, yaar? Tumhi ne kaha tha na, hum aapke hain kaun?
Manya giggled.
M: Aap hamare hone vaale pati hain, Akash ji!
A: Oh please, don't ever say "aap" to me!
M: Why? Pati ko aur kya kahun?
A: MANYA! Iss shaadi ke hone se pehle tumhari mom aur mere mom and dad hum dhono ko ek doosre ki shakal bhi nahin dekhne dhein ge!
M: So...we're not going to be friends anymore?
Akash looked at her.
A: Cinderella, kya tumhe meri dosti itni important hai?
M: Shut up! YEh sab tumhara kasoor hai! Jaante ho, agar woh string tumne mujhe Om ke saath tie kerna diya hota, tho aaj yeh museebat na aati!
A: OM KE SAATH?! Tumhe lagta hai ki jo string humne tie kiya yeh oos ki wajjah se hai? Hamara lifetime ka saath?
M: Of course! Verna oopar vaala mere saath itni burra na kerta!
A: Burra? Tumhari kismat ka sabse acha din hoga jab tumhe main milun ga!
M: JAane dho, jaane dho, mujhe aisi patti hui kismat nain chahiye...
A: Kyun, tumhe Om chahiye?
M: Akash, tumse koi aur mil jaye tho koi bhi chalega!
A: Acha? Aye, Cinderella, dhiyan rahe! Shaadi ke baadh ke sirf Akash hi hoga, samji?!
MAnya stopped and stared at him.
A: Mera--mera mathlab hai--agar...shaadi ke baad...I mean...
Manya laughed and linked her arm through his.
M: Tumhe anxious hone ki koi zarurat nahin hai, Akash. Hamari shaadi jab honi nahin hai tho...its all good, right?
Akash nodded.
A: All good....

----------------Three Weeks Later-Engangement-----------
Manya placed her last earrign on her ear and looked at herself in the mirror. Yeh sab singaar Akash ke liye hai...lakein jab woh yeh shaadi hi tod dhay ga...
Just as she was thinking this, the door knocked. Manya stood up, startled.
M: Kaun hai?
A: Open the door, Manya! Its me, Akash!
M: Akash? No, get out! I'm getting ready!
A: Dulhan ki tarha nakhre muth karo, dhervaza kholo!
M: Nahin kholoon gi!
A: Manya!
M: Akash, kya chahiye tumhe?
A: Okay, listen...engangement se pehle hum dhono kuch nain ker paye. Ab acting ko shuru kerna hi hoga!
M: Akash...
A: Haan, Manya, haan! We have to be done with this before three weeks, verna hum passai!
Manya sat down on the table.
M: Uh...yeah, Akash...
A: Okay, hurry up! Itna tyar hone ki koi zarurat nain ai, we both know this has no meaning!
A tear slipped down Manya's cheek. Woh tho mere saath shaadi kerna apni sabse badi bhool samajta hai...aur main hoon ki... She thought this, but wiped her tear and stood up.
---------------In the Hall-------------------
Akash greeted the gang, including Om.
Om: Tu Manya ko churra le gaya, yaar! Abhi tho hamari kahani shuru honi thi!
A: Aur yeh kahani adoori hi rahe gi, even after our marriage is broken.
Om: Broken? Mathlab?
Akash filled in Om about the truth of their relationship.
A: Ab tu agar bola na--
Om suddenly gasped.
A: What?
Om: Woh dekh...Manya...
Manya came down the stairs in a wonderful dress as Akash, wearing a tux, stared at her. Om nudged him, laughing.
Om: Abhi dulhaniya ko dekh ker heraan ho gaye?
A: Dulhaniya? Yeh tho bas engangement hai. Shaadi se pehle yeh sab kuch khatum ho chuka hoga!
But secretly, he looked at MAnya come down, looking gorgeous, and wondered if he even wanted to break it off with her...he hit himself on the head and laughed.
IT's not like Manya yeh shaadi chahti hai... He thought.
After meeting everyone and a bit dancing, it was time for the ring ceremony. Akash and Manya stared into each other's eyes, putting the rings on each other's fingers.
AF: Time for the couple to dance! Come on, bacho!
Manya looked at Akash and Akash looked at her.
A: Ab dekh kya rahi ho? Chalo!
M: Don't yell at me!
A: Bachu, yeh shaadi hone dho, itna maarun ga tumhe ki--
M: OH? So you're abusive?
A: Haan! Aur har raat kisi khaute pe jaoon ga! Kya karo gi tum?
M: Main?
Manya grabbed his collar.
M: Main tumhara chote chote tukre ker ke kisi aur ke saath bait ke dogs ko daaloon gi!
A: Kisi aur ke saath? Aye, Cinderella, tumne kisi aur ke baare mein socha bhi na!
M: Kya karo ge tum? Hmm?
A: Main ussai maar daaloon ga! You're mine, and only mine!
Akash and Manya suddenly let go of each other and blushed. AF grabbed their hands and brought them to the dance floor.
AF: A song for our couple, please!
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum…
Tum… Hum Tum…

Akash held Manya by the waist, and Manya kept her arms around his neck. They slowly swayed to the song, staring into each other's eyes.
A: Manya?
M: Hmm?
Akash stared at her, and for a second, felt like whispering "I Love You."
Pagal hai tu, Akash? This is Manya! Tu tho iss ke saath sirf jagarta hai, aur ab....
M: Kya hua, Akash?
A: Uh, never mind...
Manya laughed.
M: Ab acting shuru karein ge. I got a plan...
Manya let go of Akash and clapped her hands.
M: Come on guys, hum dhono tho forever dance kerte rahein ge. Let's party!
She went over to the table of drinks, and instead of a soft drink, ordered champagne. People looked at her as she got the glass. She betn over and pretend to drink it, but in reality, let it fall down.
She turned around and giggled, pretending to be drunk as she threw down more glasses of champagne.
M: Who's the lucky guy who wants to dance?
Om raised his hand.
Om: ME!
Manya walked over to him, almost falling on top of him. They both danced, a bit closer than Akash and Manya had. AF, AM, and MM stared at Manya.
AF: Yeh acting hi ker rahi hai, na?
MM: Of course! Manya kabhi bhi drink nahin kerti. Oos ka zaroor yeh plan hai Akash ke saath!
AM: Aur hamara plan kaam ker raha hai! Look!
They looked on as Akash stared at Om and Manya danced. He suddenly cut through the people and went upto them, holding Manya's arm gently.
A: Chalo, Manya!
Manya frowned and whispered,
M: Akash! What are you doing? Its working!
A: Maine kaha chalo, Manya!
A hint of jealousy sparked through his voice as he held MAnya's hands and cut through the party again, sitting her down on the swing. He sat down with her and whispered,
A: Stay, MAnya!
M: Akash! I'm not a dog!
A: Manya! TUm kisi aur ke saath dance nahin karo gi!
M: Kyun?
A: Because--
M: Were you jealous, Akash?!
A: Manya!!

Stay tuned for Part 11 😳
Edited by sonikudi1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwww so so so cute...i was waiting for this part...it was sooo awesome

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