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plzzz put more partss of ur story of Akash and Manya

Thanks guys 😳 I'll update Part 6 later, promise 😃 I had to rush the ending of Part 5 bc something came up but I'll make it up to my loyal fans 😆 😃

Manya excitedly ran to the tree and bent down, picking up a beautiful red string. She waited as Akash made his way up the stairs and then stood in front of her from the tree. He took half the string in his hand, suddenly to have it knocked out of his hands. Akash looked up, surprised to see Om.
A: Om, kya yaar? String choot gaya mere haath se!
Om: Tu ja na, Roopa ke saath string tie ker.
A: What?
Om: Aur nain tho kya? Tu hamesha ussi se tho flirt kerte...Manya ke saath string main tie karun ga!
A: Om, tu teek tho hai?
Om: I'm fine! Mujhe Manya ka saath...zindagi bhar ke liye chahiye...(He looks at Manya, smiling)
M: How sweet, Om!
A: Sweet? Pagal ho tum dhono? Main yeh string tie kerne aya hoon, aur main ker ke jaoon ga!
Om: Tho fine, tum akele karo.
Om took Manya's hand.
Om: Manya, hum wait kerein ge, phir yeh string hum dhono tie kerein ge.
A: Om, tumhara damag teek hai?!
Om: Haan hai. Come on, Manya, let's wait by the other tree...
Manya reluctantly was walking with Om just as someone tugged her hand. She stopped and turned around. Akash was holding her wrist, staring into her eyes.
A: Manya...tum ja rahi ho?
M: Woh...
A: Kya meri dosti tumhe nahin chahiye?
M: Nain, Akash, aisi baat nain ai...
A: Tho phir ao na, Manya. Yeh string tum meresaath bhi tie ker sakti ho...
M: Uh...yeah...fine...Om, main tumhare saath baad mein tie karun gi...
Om: WinkingYeah, okay...
Akash smiled. "Main Manya ke saath ek string tie kerne ke liye itna anxious kyun ho raha hoon? What's happening to me?"He was thinking this just as Manya stepped in front of him again. He looked at her, a bit confused about his feelings.
M: Akash, let's go!
A: Huh? Oh, yeah...
Manya held the string in her hands, putting it on the tree. Akash took his hand and put it on top of Manya's so they could both circle the string and tie it around the tree. MAnya looked up as his hand touched hers, and he looked at her. They both suddenly looked down as the song plays...
Kab wo dil mein hai ayee.
banke kushboo wo meri,
zindagi mein samayee.
uski har baat mujhko
ab to lagti bhali hai
main kisi raah pe jaoon
lagti uski gali hai...
meri yadoon mein rahe
ho.......ho........
wo mere saath chale
banke mere parchayeen
Thoda sa pyar hua hai
Thoda hai baaqi
The string came to end as Manya looked at Akash, who looked up at her with a smile. He suddenly realized how beautiful she was, especially when she smiled. They both tied the string. Akash looked up at her, smiling flirtatiously.
A: Soch lo, Cinderella. Ab tho mera saath tumhe zindagi bhar ke liye mil gaya hai!
M: I know yaar, main bhi yehi soch rahi hoon. Shiyad yeh string mujhe khol dhaina chahiye...
Manya teasingly bent over to the recently tied string as Akash snatched her hand away.
A: Pagal ho!
M: Akash, why? Kya tumhe meri dosti itni important hai?
A: Manya...
M: Come on, Akash. Bolo! Itni important hai?
A: Tum sirf apni tareef suna chahti ho.
M: Shiyad...
A: See? Main jaanta tha!
M: Oh please, jaise tumhari tareef koi mainay rakhti hai!
A: You know its important...
M: Why would it be? Hum aapke hain kaun?
A: Manya--
Sudden lighting shook as heavy rain poured on them.
A: Lo...tumne khud ko khoobsurat kya samja, asmaan bhi hil pera!
M: How dare you, Akash?
A: How dare I? Apni shakal se tumne poora asmaan hila diya, aur mujhe keh rahi ho how dare I? How dare you, Manya?!
M: Akash..tum...
A: What? Huh?
Manya's eyes suddenly popped open.
M: AKASH!
A: What?
M: Where is EVERYONE else?
Akash looked around. A bus was being pulled away, Om waving his hands frantically at MAnya and Akash. Manya ran to the bus but it had already gone.
Om: SORRY YAAR!
M: Ugh!! Iss baarish mein--Akash!
A: What?
M: WHAT? Tum sirf WHAT keh sakte ho? Main beeg gayee hoon!
A: WHAT? NO WAY! MAin tho..like..bill kull dry khera hoon, Manya. Its not like...its not like its RAINING or something...
M: AKASH! STOP IT!
A: Maine kya kiya? Tum hi tho ho jo..boli ja rahi ho...
They both walked alongside, trying to reach the college. Lightning struck as they walked. A man from the mandir shouted at them.
Man: Beeg jao ge, bacho! Paas mein ek cottage hai, udhar jao!
M: Let's go Akash. College abhi door hai!
A: Are you kidding me? Tum totally filmy ho gayee udhar tho?
M: What?
A: Yeah...you know, movies mein aise hi baarish mein pans jaate hain..aur phir ladki apne baal dry kerte kerte ladke ko pansa laiti hai. Na, baba, na! Main baarish mein hi teek hoon!
M: Tho teek hai phir. Main tho ja rahi hoon!
She raced across the street and disappeared behind the mandir and into the little cottage. Akash, rolling his eyes, followed.
M: Bachke rehna Akash. Main kisi bhi time tumhara rape ker sakti hoon...
A: Please, Manya. Ek akele ladke ki izat per hath daalo gi tum?
Manya laughed. She grabbed a towel and dried her hair.
A: Agaya filmy scene. Main jaanta tha!
M: Oh shut up!
As Manya dried her hair, Akash stared at her.
Maula Mere Maula Mere Maula MEre Maula MEre...
Aankhein teri...kitni haseen...
ke inka ashiq...main ban gaya hoon...mujhko basa le in mein tu...
Haan..zulfein teri...kitni gani...dekh ke inko...sochta hoon...saye mein main inke rahoon...
Manya looked up and saw Akash staring. She went to him and placed her hands under the towel, and the towel on his hair. She laughed and wiped his hair. He grabbed her, laughing, from the waist. He raised her in his arms and they joked around. LAughing, Manya ran to another room in the cottage which was fully furnished. She grabbed a pillow from the bed and hit Akash with it. Akash laughed and grabbed the other pillow, and they both hit each other with it, laughing and running around. The music of Hum Tum came on as all the pillows shattered into feathers...

Stay tuned...for part 7... 😃

dis was awesome!!!!
i rilli cant wait for the next update...
cont sooooooon!

^^Thanks 😳 I will continue soon... 😃

THAT WAS ABSOULOULY AMAZING...do continue soon

i just read the whole thing.... this sz forum doesnt hve many FF'S this one is nice romantic and some comedy i like it =] continue 😃

that was amazing! n the good thing is that there r no nasty parts like kissing n all that crap. that stuff makes it gross 🤢 but anyway, ur FF is awesome. keep up the good work. 👏

plzzz put more parts of Akash and Manya storyyy

Thanks everyone 😳 Part 7:

Manya fell on the floor on her knees, laughing hysterically.
M: Akash--bas!
A: (laughing)That was too much fun!
M: Yea...
Akash looked at Manya and smiled.
A: Cinderella, I think yeh kuch pal thay ke hum dono ne fight kiya bughair nikale...
M: Yea! I mean..tum hamesha ek fight start kerte ho..
A: Aray oh Cinderella!! Fight main nahin, tum shuru kerti ho!
M: Dekha? PHir se chilane lage! Tumhari problem kya hai, Akash? Tumhare saath tho main apni zindagi ke kuch pal bhi spend kerna JAHANUM samju!
A: Oh really? You'd be lucky to have me in your life, Manya!
M: Oh yeah? Kyun? Tum mein itni kya khaas baat hai?
A: Sab khaas baatein mujhi mein hai, Manya!
M: Haan haan, tum tho Romeo tehre..! Pyar ka mathlab jaante bhi ho?!
A: Jaanta THA! Jabse tum meri zindagi mein ayee lakein, sab kuch khatum ker diya!
M: AKASH!
A: MANYA!
M: Shut up! Tumhe pyar kerna aata nahin, aur ghussa mujhe pe nikaal rahe ho. Tumhari biwi pe tho mujhe thers aata hai!
A: Oh please, okay? Jo ladki meri biwi bane gi na, woh iss dunya ki sab se khush kismat ladki hogi!
M: Kyun? Chaand taare tod ker lao ge oos ke liye?
A: Nahin. Ek naya asmaan banaoon ga...aur ussai khud chaand sitaroon se bhi khoobsurat sajaa dhoon ga...
Manya stared at him.
M: Aur...?
Akash smiled and looked out the window at the pouring rain.
A: Aur...aur ussai itna pyar karun ga..ki apni jaan oos ke liye dhaite hue khud ko khush kismat samju ga...
M: Aur...?
A: Aur...oos ki har khwaish ko apni khushi maan ker poora karun ga...iss dunya ki har khushi uske aanchal mein samait dhoon ga...
M: Aur...?
A: Aur...oos ki ek muskurahat ko..apni jannat bana loon ga...
M: Aur..?
Akash bent close to her face...
A: AUR TUM THO PAGAL HO GAYEE HO!
Manya jumped back.
M: WHAT?
A: Aur nain tho kya? Mind you, Manya, mein apni hone vaali BIWI ki baat ker raha hoon. Tumhari nain! Tum tho sapnu mein hi kho gayee!
M: Oh please! Jaise main KABHI bhi tumhari biwi bana chahoon gi...!
A: You'd be lucky, Manya.
M: Nain...mujhe aisa luck nahin chahiye...
A: Kyun? Tumhe...Om chahiye?
M: What?
A: Haan..tum dhono..zyada chipke chipke rehte ho..
M: Akash...are you...JEALOUS?!
A: Jealous?! Of what?!
M: Me and Om!
A: Yea...like mujhe aur koi kaam nahin hai!
M: Admit it, Akash, your jealous!
A: MANYA!
M: AKASH!
Akash leg suddenly started to vibrate. Manya laughed and pointed.
M: What the heck?!
A: Shut up, Cinderella! Mera cell phone hai!
M: Yea...(giggles)
A: (on the phone)Hello?
(From the other end)Om: Akash..kahan ho tum dono?
A: Oh...hum yahan cottage mein tehre hain...
Om: Wahan kya ker rahe ho?
A: Since tum log hume chod ker baag gaye na, hum baarish se bachne ke liye yahan hain!
Om: Manya...teek hai na?
A: Nain. Uska main rape ker chuka hoon!
M: AKASH!
Om: Akash!
A: Kya? Akeli ladki ko maine dekha, tho main toot pera!
Om: Akash! PAgal hai tu? MEri Manya se baat kerra!
A: Nain...woh andher ro rahi hai!
M: AKASH!
A: Dekha kaise cheekhein maar ri ai...
M: Akash!
A: Okay, bye, Om..baarish ruke gi tho hum ayein ge!
Om: AKAS----
A: Bas. Ussai sirf tumhari fiker hai!
M: Its cutee!
A: CUTE? Its pathetic Manya.
M: Oh really? Tho agar tum Om ki jagga hote, lakein ussai ZYADA care kerte, tho kya kerte?
A: MAin--main baarish mein beegta hua aata. Aur tumhe apni baahoon mein leker vappas jaata...
In the meanwhile Manya stood up and sneezed. She quickly made coffee, and just as she pulled the cup to her face, she said,
M: Akash, ab humein chalna chahiye. Its getting late. Agar hum dorm rooms mein nahin pohnche tho--
A: Tho mujh per tho rape ka ilzaam laga!
M: Akash!
A: Haan haan, chalo. Its getting dakr as it is...
M: Yeah...
Manya was about to put the coffee cup back down when it dropped from her hand. Akash was wearing his jacket as he turned around and gasped.
A: MANYA!
M: Ugh...yeh cup!
As Manya and Akash both bent down to pick up the pieces, Akash grabbed Manya's ankle.
M: Ouch!
A: Manya! You're bleeding!
M: Ouch, Akash, mujhe dard ho raha hai!
Akash stared at her.
A: Hum already late hain--
M: Tumhe late hone ki perhi hai? Mujhe dard ho raha hai Akash!
Akash looked at her blood and took off his jacket. He took off his shirt as MAnya gave him a dirty look.
A: Relax, Cinderella!
He quickly tied his shirt over the blood and wore his jacket over his simply white T shirt. Manya watched him carefully as he placed his hands under her legs and picked her up in his arms. Manya looked up at him, surprised. Akash opened the cottage door and entered in the pouring rain.
M: College door hai, Akash...
A: Tum kya kehna chahti ho? Ke main strong nahin hoon?
M: Nain-
A: Oh tum kehna chahti ho that you're heavy? Well, yeah, that's damn true...
M: Akash!
Akash laughed and walked in the pouring rain, clutching Manya in his arms as she rested her head against his chest and her arms around his neck. The song played,
Aankhon Mein Humko Utharne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum…
Tum… Hum Tum…

So...is this the beginning of love? Stay tuned...because love is just around the corner for our couple... 😉