~*~*FF-Hum TuM~*`~*-EnDinG iS Up! - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
THAT WAS AWESOME I LIKED THIS PART THE MOST....wen are you going to update next
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^^Thank you, part 4 will be up soon!

Dress Manya was Wearing:


Shoes:



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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
awesome...Luv the heels! 😆 continue ASAP! 😆

*Riya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
i love how the way he drops her. lol. that was really good!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
i loved it..it was amzing..wen is the next update?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
thanks everyone! Like promised, here's the next update!

Part 4:
Manya's heart fluttered as she felt Akash's body lean against hers.
A: MUjhe kuch tumse kehna hai, Maanya...
M: Tho kaho...?
Akash stared into her eyes, speaking in his flirtatious voice.
A: Manya...
M: Bolo na...
A: Tumhari earring..!
Manya's eyes dropped open.
M: WHAT?
A: Tumhari earring! (Raises one of Manya's earrings in his hand} Gir gayee thi!
M: Akash, tum....
Akash bent close to Manya again, smiling.
A: Kyun, Manya? Were you hoping for something else?
Manya's cheeks flushed.
M: Nain...main kyun...
A: Cinderella, tum mein koi na koi baat tho hai!
Manya looked at him curiously.
M: Kaun si baat?
A: (Laughing)Kyun? Tumhe kya?
M: Akash, bathao bhi!
A: Why are you so anxious, Manya?!
M: AKASH!
A: Okay, baba, okay! Tum mein--
Before he answered, Roopa clapped her hands on his shoulders.
R: AKASH!!!!!! Congrats, you're the winner!
A: What winner??
R: The dance, yaar! Tum jeet gaye! Manya ko tumse acha partner nahin milega!
Akaash looked at Manya.
A: Ab yehi baat Manya keh dhay!
M: Main? KYun?
A: KYunki, Cinderella...tumhe Om per bahut confidence tha. Tho ab kaho na, that Akash is the best?!
Manya crossed her arms.
M: I don't think so, Akash. I still think Om was better.
Akash looked at her confusedly.
A: But I won!
M: Un sab ki nazroon mein. Akhir dance main ker rahi thi; I should know better. Om ke saath...mera ek comfort level tha!
Rehan: (Whistling)Oy Hoy, Manya! Om ke saath...?!
A: Shut up, Rehan. Uska yeh mathlab nain tha!
M: Tumhe kaise patha?
A: You mean, tumhara yeh mathlab tha?
M: MAybe, maybe not...
A: Oh please! MAin jaanta oon that you liked my dance better. Ab tumhara ego--
M: MERA EGO? Tum mein kuch zyada self-confident hai Akash!
A: Aur tumne denial!
M: W/e...I think Om did better!
A: Manya!
M: AKASH!
K: Stop it guys! Akash, agar Manya ko lagta hai Om was better, so be it!
Akash's cheeks grew red in anger.
A: Fine then!
He walked out of the gym, giving Manya one last look. Many giggled at his anger. As everyone parted, Om grabbed Manya's arm.
Om: Agar tu ussai itna chahti hai, tho ussai pareshan kyun kerti hai?
M: Kyunki...kyunki hum dono hain hi aise!
Om: Lakein mujhe tho idea mil gaya!
M: Kis cheez ka idea?!
Om: Tumhare aur Akash ke "ekraar" ka idea!
M: Ekraar?
Om: Haan! Tune dekha na, Akash ko kitna ghussa aya jabne Rehan na hum dono ka kaha?
M: Haan, tho?
Om: Tho...he was clearly jealous! Meaning, he likes you...but just doesn't want to admit it...even to himself!
M: Soooo??
Om: MAnya, tum bhi na! All we have to do is get Akash jealous and he'll definitely admit ke woh tumse pyar kerta hai! AUr tu tho vaise hi uspe mer mitti hai!
Manya giggled.
M: Mer mitti nahin hoon!
Om: Please, Manya! Don't even go there!
M: Acha, acha, ab ussai jealous kaise kerna hai??
Om linked his arm through Manya's.
Om: AISE!
M: ...Tho??
Om: Oof, yeh ladki! Just follow my lead!
M: Okay...
Om: Manya...!
M: Yes?
Om: I think you're...you're very beautiful!
Everyone's heads turned.
Om: And the chemistry we shared during that dance...I think yeh oopar vaale ke ishaare hain...
M: (Following along)I also think so, Om...
Giggling, they both walked out of the gym as everyone stared at them in surprise.
Rehan: MAINE KAHA THA NA!!

So...will Manya and Om pretend to be in love to make Akash jealous? If so...will he BE jealous? Stay tuned for Part 5...!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
THAT WAS AMAZIN..YOU SHOULD DEFINATALLY BECOME A RITER..so wen's the next update 😆 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
plzzz continue.....its getting real good!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
plzzz putt parts 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 its reallyyy nicee amazingg storyy About Manya and Akash
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Posted: 17 years ago
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The whole gang walked out of campus, laughing and playing around. Akash was teasing Roopa while she giggled.
M: (to Om)Kya, Om? Woh tho jealous bhi nain ho raha...
Om: Tu dekhti ja, Manya! Aray, what's wrong? You love him that much?
M: Shut up, Om!
Om: Come on, Manya! I got an idea!
Om clapped his hands and the rest looked at him, including Akash.
Om: I have an idea guys. Agay ek mandir aata hai. There's a tree there, and they say that if you tie a string with someone you remain together for a lifetime; even if you're just friends. Let's all go there!
They all headed to the mandir, while Akash kept giving Manya irritated glances.
A: Roopa, yeh Om aur Manya kuch zyada hi close nain ho rahe hai?
R: So?
A: Nain, main tho bas vaise hi..you know...
R: I think its cute. Yesterday Om called her beautiful and they both walked out together. Itne cute lag rahe thay!
A: WHAT?
R: Kya hua?
A: Nain, woh...
Akash sighed angrily at Manya who took no notice and pretended to flirt with Om.
A: MANYA!
M: Yeah?
A: Tum ek bahut badi flirt ho, you know that?
M: WHAT?
A: Yeah. Bechare Om ko pansa liyA!
M: I was not flirting!
A: Yeah yeah...pagal khud ko pagal bhi nahin kehta...
M: HOW DARE YOU, AKASH?
Akash laughed.
A: Relax, MAnya. Mandir agaya hai, chalo.
M: Kyun? MAin tumhare saath kyun chalun?
A: Oh, so tum meri dost nahin rehna chahti?
M: Nain, woh tho...
A: Fine then. Mujhe bhi koi shauk nahin hai tumhari insaneness ko jailne ka!
M: Oh please! Chalo!
A: No, leave it.
M: AKASH!
A: MANYA!
M: Akash...
A: Fine, man. Tum tho meri dosti ke liye--
M: Just shut up.

A: Whatever...chalo...

They both walked alongside in the mandir, pretending not to look at each other but gave each other glances in between. So...kya yeh hai pyar ki shuruvat? Yaan kuch hoga...jo Akash ko shiyad acha na lage? Stay tuned...

Edited by sonikudi1 - 17 years ago

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