IF SRGMP Feedback - Round 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Very well then. Here is my honest feedback. If anyone does not like the comments made for your song, then my apologies in advance.Please dont take it personally. the comments are made on the song and not you....and let me say upfront, I will be a very strict critic...😳 (also let me tell you, I am worlds biggest besura)

Alaap Gharana :

Arun:

You have a great voice. Get a better grip on your breath control. You are breathing too heavily into the mike.You tend to go a bit nasal at the ending notes…try avoiding that. Overall, it was one of the good performances of this round.

Lavanya

The song selection was not right. Without the background music, the impact was lost.

You sang pretty well, but something was amiss, the impact was lacking!

Summer89

The sur taal and feel somehow failed to merge. Next time select a song you are comfortable with.

The_charm

Same comment as that for summer 89. Please select a song that can be carried on without background music . Pay attention to sur and feel.

Bandish Gharana

Mini_rulz

You slipped on sur at certain places and pronounced some words too fast. Add more feeling to the lyrics. Other than that it was a good performance.

Tabu

The song continuity was lacking. The high notes were off key. So were the low notes and the ending notes landed too fast. Over all, the song sounded different from the original. It sounded too jumpy. Please concentrate on sur, beat and feel more.

Coollama

Nik, that was a good performance. Try to open your voice and mouth fully to get the words out fully. Add a tiny little more feeling. You have a very nice voice. a good attempt.

Suhanasafar

I really enjoyed your performance. It sounded so sweet. Good song selection and your voice matched it well. You went a little nasal at the high notes, try avoiding that. The high notes sounded a bit strained too. Except for little hiccups here and there, the rest sounded good.

Jhankaar Gharana

Kalpa56

You have a very sweet voice. It was a good performance. There was some sur slip here and there. Try to clean up the diction a bit, a few words sounded a bit rumbled and wasn't clearly audible. Get a little more feel. Overall, its a good attempt.

Evilseye

Sur ,beat and feel went all over the places , try to get them right and hold them tight .Best of luck.

rocknroll

You have a good voice. In this song, you did not open your mouth fully , that's why some words did not come out properly and that impacted the sur also a bit at places. Avoid falsetto. Get the diction right, some words sounded very different. Overall, a good attempt.

Saara COMB

Avoid going nasal at certain places. Sur slipped in a few places and u fumbled on lyrics at a place. Get some more feel, overall it was a good one.

Sur Sangam

Kiti_g

Your voice is sounding a bit heavy as if you have a cold and that's why a few harkats sounded a bit jarred. Sur slipped in a place or two, but it is a very good attempt and that too for such a tough song. Totally enjoyed it….

Naughty_n_nice

Some words came out sounding different, like paani, zindagaani… it seemed a bit stretched… sur slipped in a few places and especially at the ending notes , and at places you sound very self conscious. Avoid singing falsetto and stop getting self conscious. You fumbled on lyrics once, but overall it sounded good. Good attempt.

Aseel

Something was amiss – sur, taal, feel, voice, lyrics did not merge at all. Please pay attention to these things. Best of luck .

Mala_sss

You have a lovely voice, its powerful and has a punch. Work on your diction,some of the words were not clear. Add more feel , then it will be perfect. Good attempt.

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Thats it folks.

Best of luck !

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: advil

Bandish Gharana

Suhanasafar

I really enjoyed your performance. It sounded so sweet. Good song selection and your voice matched it well. You went a little nasal at the high notes, try avoiding that. The high notes sounded a bit strained too. Except for little hiccups here and there, the rest sounded good.

Thanks Adi bhai! I really appreciate your feedback. Will work on the high notes in the future.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Morgoth

kiti - Lovely. Though there was some strain in your voice. Take care of it.

Thanks a mil for your comments Tanaz 😊 much appreciated 😊 pls keep them coming for all rounds! And yup trying hard to take care of my voice 😳😊

Originally posted by: Nishtha

and i loved Kiti_g singing..you are too good...loved your song 👏 👏 👏

Thank you very much for your comments Nishtha 😊 ! Much appreciated!

Originally posted by: advil

Sur Sangam

Kiti_g

Your voice is sounding a bit heavy as if you have a cold and that's why a few harkats sounded a bit jarred. Sur slipped in a place or two, but it is a very good attempt and that too for such a tough song. Totally enjoyed it….

Adi, thanks a lot for taking the time and posting detailed feedback! i did hv a cold 😳... will keep your comments in mind ... thnx once again ...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: advil

Naughty_n_nice

Some words came out sounding different, like paani, zindagaani… it seemed a bit stretched… sur slipped in a few places and especially at the ending notes , and at places you sound very self conscious. Avoid singing falsetto and stop getting self conscious. You fumbled on lyrics once, but overall it sounded good. Good attempt.



Thanks Adi!! Will definitely keep in mind, and work on the sur, and i should really work on the suppressing thing. Thanks again!!

@Nishtha 🤗 Thank you soooooo much Nishh!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
Thanx a lot everyone for ur valuable feedbacks...will definetly work harder in the next round!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: advil

rocknroll

You have a good voice. In this song, you did not open your mouth fully , that's why some words did not come out properly and that impacted the sur also a bit at places. Avoid falsetto. Get the diction right, some words sounded very different. Overall, a good attempt.

thanx a lot for ur feedback Adi...will keep ur comments in mind for the next round 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: advil

Bandish Gharana

Mini_rulz

You slipped on sur at certain places and pronounced some words too fast. Add more feeling to the lyrics. Other than that it was a good performance.

thanx adi.appreciate all feedback and comments about my song.will try to put more feeling in songs/lyrics.thanx for listening.😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: advil

Sur Sangam

Aseel

Something was amiss – sur, taal, feel, voice, lyrics did not merge at all. Please pay attention to these things. Best of luck .

Thanks for your feedback

the missing thing is that the song itself doesnt have any feelings 😆

anyway thank u and i will give my best in the next weeks insha'allah 😊

Edited by Asseel - 17 years ago
advil thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Asseel

Thanks for your feedback

the missing thing is that the song itself doesnt have any feelings 😆

anyway thank u and i will give my best in the next weeks insha'allah 😊

In that case why choose such a song? 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#40

i'm gonna be giving stars too.

Arunji - ⭐️ u were just simply TOO GOOD!

Lavanya - ⭐️ u were in sur but there was no feeling...i didn't get that ghastly feeling at all.😳

Summer - ⭐️⭐️⭐️ you were too shaky😃

Charm - ⭐️⭐️ you have a cute voice but you were wayy off in sur. keep practicing.

Mini - ⭐️ you were good. but keep riyaazing.😃

Tabu - ⭐️ jaldi mein the kya aap?😆

Nikji - ⭐️ good job but utna maza nahi aaya.😳

Suhanaji - ⭐️ I have become a fan of your voice😳 the only thing that i have to point out is..you could had ended the last word a little bit better.

Kalpaji - ⭐️ your voice is a bit sharp...other than that you were good! loved the way u ended(this was what i was talking about suhanaji).

Evilseye - ⭐️ You were good but why didn't you sing the entire song?

Ani - ⭐️ machaae're' in the begining sounded weird... other than that it was good... waise, it's not 'fir' it's 'phir'. i've noticed other singers do it too isiliye i've decided to take Javedji's job😉😆 next week se, i'll be VERY STRICT in diction😉😆

Saara - ⭐️ Apart from one or two places you were veryy good!

KEEP IT UP JHANKAAR GHARAANA!👏😉

Kitiji - ⭐️ apart from 1 or 2 places you too were simply superb😳

Sam - ⭐️ you need to work a bit sur and if there's high notes, do try to reach 'em next time.😳

Aseelji - ⭐️ do you have a sore throat? you were off at times and were very scratchy... hope u feel better soon😃

Malaji - ⭐️ you started off a little bit shaky but then u got hold of yourself. 1extra point for the way u said 'sirf tumse judaaii ka darr hai'😳

that's it..FINALLYYY...sorry for the delay guys...kya karoon aadat se majboor hoon... hamesha late entry maarne ki aadat hai...😆...anyhow, der se aae per durust aae right?😉😳

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