IF SRGMP Feedback - Round 1 - Page 5

^^ Thanks, will work on the sur more for next time!

Originally posted by: 2smart4u

Kitiji - ⭐️ apart from 1 or 2 places you too were simply superb😳

Thanks a million Dia 😊 pls keep the comments coming 😊

Originally posted by: 2smart4u

Ani - ⭐️ machaae're' in the begining sounded weird... other than that it was good... waise, it's not 'fir' it's 'phir'. i've noticed other singers do it too isiliye i've decided to take Javedji's job😉😆 next week se, i'll be VERY STRICT in diction😉😆

thank u for ur nice comments naani......tere muh se meri tareef sunke achcha lag raha hai.....😆...thanx for correcting the diction......I am not very good with pronunciation of Urdu words....Ms javedji 😉let me know if there are any other mistakes....😃

Originally posted by: 2smart4u

Suhanaji - ⭐️ I have become a fan of your voice😳 the only thing that i have to point out is..you could had ended the last word a little bit better.

omg, so many stars! Thanks so much. I know exactly what you mean about ending the last word better...I am afraid to stretch it out because sometimes my voice shakes if I do that, so instead I cut it short, which obviously doesn't sound as good. Will keep working on it. Btw, please don't call me "ji"...Suhana is fine.

I know I promised to post feedback too, and I haven't forgotten...Tomorrow is my last day at work and things are a little busy. Will definitely post it by the end of the week!

Originally posted by: rock&roll

thank u for ur nice comments naani......tere muh se meri tareef sunke achcha lag raha hai.....😆...thanx for correcting the diction......I am not very good with pronunciation of Urdu words....Ms javedji 😉let me know if there are any other mistakes....😃

nah, there weren't any other mistakes(at least my ears didn't think so). loved the energy though. and buraaee toh mein BOHUT karna chah rahi hoon per tum ho ke besura gaa hi nahi rahi ho😡😆

@ everyone, you're welcome😳

@suhana, dropped the 'ji'😃

Originally posted by: 2smart4u

nah, there weren't any other mistakes(at least my ears didn't think so). loved the energy though. and buraaee toh mein BOHUT karna chah rahi hoon per tum ho ke besura gaa hi nahi rahi ho😡😆

sabr karo...aage aage burai karne ke bahut mauke milenge......😆

OMG...our nani also start 2 judge 🤣 😆 😆 .

Originally posted by: Rasny

OMG...our nani also start 2 judge 🤣 😆 😆 .

How about you Rasny ? listen to the songs and please give your feedback. The participants will appreciate a listeners comment...😊

Okay here's my feedback. Baring my gharana I'll give for all. But have a general comment to make for all the contestants. One thing that is drastically missing from the songs by most of you is the feel. Technical faults are there but feel is lacking too much in the songs. Either its lacking or its hyper feeling 😆 as in couple of cases.


1. Arun

Your rendition I would one of the best. Give bit more attention to the diction. Listen to the word Main when you saying Main Hakikat hu. Its Main but yu are saying Meinn. All the lines when you are ending its getting really nasal. Technically you are maybe the best but please get the feel into the song. The romantic feel was absent somehow.


2. coollama :

Please give attention to your low notes Nik. This song is such that unless you are perfect in the low notes the feel of the song will be gone. Hear the part "Sajan asuwan mein.....kya zor hove" This part is very low and you are unable to keep control on the notes. My personal feeling is if you had started the song at say one note high it would have come out perfect.


3. evileye

You are really good technically. But in this song you lacked the energy, the masti that is needed. I don't know but I have a feeling that you can do much better with soft songs rather than these. Please try it maybe in the next round. And try singing at bit higher note. I am 100% sure you'll do better that way. Open out. Don't get too conscious while singing. I am getting a feeling you sing too seriously 😆 without actually enjoying while recording. Don't do that. Sing freely just keeping in mind the technical aspect. Enjoy singing and not sing as if you are giving an exam. 😆


4. Kalpa

There's a distinct diction problem. You are saying Chandan too fast. One song where I felt the feel part was there. 😊 But at many places you are going bit too fast. "Tan bhi sundar, Man bhi sundar" hear the Man bhi... part. It gives a feel you are slipping.


5. Lavanya

Again maybe the feel was not there. The song had something missing. Didn't feel technically you were too amiss. Please make your song selection properly.


6. Minirulz

You were also really good. But again the feel was missing. Loved the Phool Hansa part. 😊 At places the lines when you were ending, its somehow loosing the connectivity. The flow is lost at places due to that.


7. rock&roll

You need to open your mouth and then sing. Technically you are okay. Because you are not opening up and singing, you are ending into going into falsetto. Diction needs attention. Work on the "Aakaar" of your songs. You lack there.


8. Saara

Your basic problem is lack of practice. 😆 You have a good voice so please work on the riyaaz part. Low notes theek se kahi bhi nahi laga hai.


9. SuhanaSafar

You are another who has a wonderful voice. Give more attention to the scales. One more rendition where I found the feel was there. But please please work on the scales. "Yeh bahare yeh fiza" you will find you suddenly change the scale. Its there at many places.


10. Summer

Don't shake your voice. Flat notes keep them flats. Again same scales problem with you too. Practice practice and practice a lot. Thats the only way to avoid this scale change problem. Almost in every line you changed the scales.


11. Tabu

Loved it but looks even you recorded without good practice, scale problem at places. Do sing with open mouth and not in falsetto. Open up... come on!!! This song needed that openness and masti which is missing. Please throw away inhibitions and then sing with full masti


12. the_charm

Please make proper song selection. And please do practice before recording. Finalise the song as soon as possible with your mentor and then just practice on that. Then record. There was lot of scale problems.


AND for my own gharana ones. 😡 You all were not up to the mark that I feel you all should be. Pull up now and start working hard.

I think I was bit strict. 😳 But really wanted to be so that you all can improve and we all get to hear some real treats from all of you. PLEASE give attention to practice. Do it as much as you all can and then record the songs. Also please give attention to song selection. Songs that cannot go well without music please don't try them. It will sound weird even if you are technically perfect.

Originally posted by: Morgoth

Saara - I want to hear you sing a female song next time =P Sur thode kachche hai, but otherwise it was a pretty good attempt.

I will try my best to choose a female song this time..😆...Trying best to cook my sur's properly this time..!!! Thanks..!!!😳

Originally posted by: Nishtha

Saaru's voice is very comforting and touches your soul 😃 👏 👏 Saaru Take a Bow..Sonu jee 😳

*faints* ☺️ *faints*

*takes a bow*☺️...

TenQ Nishu ji..☺️..for the lovely comments...itni tareef toh meri awaz ki aaj tak kisi ne nahi ki☺️😆☺️...this time touched soul na next time will take it out...😆😆😳

Originally posted by: advil

Saara COMB

Avoid going nasal at certain places. Sur slipped in a few places and u fumbled on lyrics at a place. Get some more feel, overall it was a good one.

Thanks Munna for the comments...😳...I'll try and work on the nasal thing...and sur ko bhi will hold tight this time..!!!Thanks for liking it..!!!

Originally posted by: 2smart4u

Saara - ⭐️ Apart from one or two places you were veryy good!

Ustaad Dia Aamir Khan is here..😊..Thenkoo ji...😳..badi ganeemat hai ke aapne itne stars deh diye...☺️..Good to know ke you liked it..!!!😃

Originally posted by: Bhaskar.T

8. Saara - Your basic problem is lack of practice. 😆 You have a good voice so please work on the riyaaz part. Low notes theek se kahi bhi nahi laga hai.

Problem mein hi solution hai....😆

Problem = Lack & Solution = Practice

I think my low notes are weak...will work on them....and try to hit them on the correct spot...!!!

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Thank you everyone for taking out a few minutes from your precious time and giving this feedback. Really appreciate it..!!!

And for this round, jo bhi good comments i got...all the credit goes to Bhaskar Bhai..!!! As my mentor ji was a bit busy...he guided me in this round...and beared with my besure trial recordings..😆...Thanks BB..!!!