IF SRGMP Feedback - Round 1 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Naughty_n_nice

@Huzi: Ahem ahem. Aren't you forgetting to comment on Donny n my songs??

I was expecting this from him...see proves my shak right...he is cheating on Vaibs and is busy with Sujata...😡😆😆...Not good Huzi...!!!😊...Now let the comments come in...!!!😛

Originally posted by: Bhaskar.T

9. SuhanaSafar

You are another who has a wonderful voice. Give more attention to the scales. One more rendition where I found the feel was there. But please please work on the scales. "Yeh bahare yeh fiza" you will find you suddenly change the scale. Its there at many places.

Thanks for the comments and compliment. Man, if you thought the scales need work in this rendition, I'm glad you didn't hear my first attempt. Scale is something I've always had trouble with (probably because of my lack of training), but I think with my mentor's help, I'm starting to understand a little better. Will try to continue improving in future rounds! Thanks again. 😃

Originally posted by: Bhaskar.T

7. rock&roll

You need to open your mouth and then sing. Technically you are okay. Because you are not opening up and singing, you are ending into going into falsetto. Diction needs attention. Work on the "Aakaar" of your songs. You lack there.

Firts of all,thanx a looot for ur feedback....very detalied feedback and very well written 👏..will help me a lot......😃Ah...the third/fourth time my diction and "Aakaar" gets pointed out......thanx a lot for bringing it up..I never realised it sounded so obvious.....😳...am working on it and will put in more effort.....and if the lacking of opening my mouth makes it sound like falsetto,then i should certainly work on it fast 😛.......I know how bad falsetto sounds...and have written pages of feedback against it earlier....😆😆😆.......

Plz continue giving ur feedback......😃

Originally posted by: advil

How about you Rasny ? listen to the songs and please give your feedback. The participants will appreciate a listeners comment...😊

sahi farmaya.......naani(the female Sloth) ne bhi feedback de diya......to tum kya kar rahe ho.........jaldi feedback do warna........😡😡 .......😆😆😆

@Adi...that will have a bettr effect on Rasny.....😉

Ok...After contemplating over the idea for a looong time,I have decided to take the plunge...Yeah,I am actually going to take the risk of posting feedback about my fellow contestants' singing....(i know that's a bad idea😉)....so if anyone is offended,my apologies in advance...U can PM me if u still have problems.....(i promise i'll read the PM😉).....And last but not the least,just bcoz i have posted some comments doesn't mean I am perfect......i have a 1000 things to work on........par kya karun...feedback post kiye bina reh nai paayi...aadat se majboor hoon.......😆

Arun: Easily one of the best performances👏👏👏.Get better control on ur breath and try to avoid the slight nasal touch.Otherwise u sounded gr8

Lavanya:I think the choice of song was not a very good one.The song didn't have much impact without the background music,though u sang well.

Summer 89 :there was some problem with the sur.the feel of the song was also lacking

the _charm: There were problems with the sur.The feel could have been better.Also the impact of this song is majorly from its background music and picturisation.without them,the song doesn't generate the same impact

Minirulz:well sung....👏👏.Add a li'l more feel to the song .The antara was very good,the mukhda is such that it sounds kind of abrupt without the music.....but very good.

Tabu:the sur was off li'l here and there.Some notes need to be sustained a li'l more .Add a li'l more more feel.Also i felt u could have sung half a scale lower,the higher notes sounded a li'l strained and too soft..... concentrate more on rhythm.

coollama : good performance.👏👏...open ur mouth fully while singing and try to add a li'l more feel to the song,otherwise,it was gr8

Suhanasafar: U have a very sweet and lovely voice.pay more attention to the scale.there is a very minor change in scale at many places.....u have to open ur voice more.The harkats are not clear esp in places like "thandi hawa","kaali ghata"....."bin tumhare kuch nahin"...the mukhda is sung is two/three slightly different ways with slightly different nuances each time......So a more attention to accuracy would make the song sound better.

kalpa56:u have a very good and clear voice.there are some small slip ups in sur,esp in the higher notes.U have to concentrate more on the taal..Some places it gets ali'l fast.The way the lines "chandan " and chanchal " "man bhi sundar" are sung are slighlty different from the original.But the feel of the song was intact,which gave it a very good impact 👏

Evilseye
Pay more attention to sur .Open ur voice more.

saara:A good attempt.There were some slight slip ups in sur.Pay more attention to the accuracy in the tune.

Kiti g:excellent.👏👏👏.esp for such a difficult song .....loved ur songs,both this one and ehsaan tera hoga.....U have a lovely voice and sing very well.Ur harkats were good overall,but some harkats could have been better ....u sound classically trained which is gr8.... u have a slight tremor in ur voice,esp in higher notes(maybe bcoz of the sore throat)...If this tremor could be avoided it would sound a lot wonderful.u have also altered the pace of the song a li'l.the original is sung at a faster pace....

Aseel:Pay more attention to the sur

mala_ss1:A good attempt.👏there was lack of clarity in the lower notes.The antara sounded gr8.I personally felt u should have sung a half scale higher.The song would have sounded a lot better.A li'l more feel would've made the song sound very good.

naughty_n_nice : a good attempt.There were quite a few slip ups in sur.The notes also sunded a little stretched/dragged,esp the ending notes.The power in the rest of the singing was not there at the ending notes...they seemed to get weak.

Rock&roll:..U need to improve on a looot of things..they are too many to be listed here...I'll open a separate thread to point out ur mistakes....😡😡 😆😆.......but for starters work on the aakaar of the song....keep working on that...and i'll come up with the list 😡.

Originally posted by: rock&roll

Rock&roll:..U need to improve on a looot of things..they are too many to be listed here...I'll open a separate thread to point out ur mistakes....😡😡 😆😆.......but for starters work on the aakaar of the song....keep working on that...and i'll come up with the list 😡.

🤣 Aab muje sajmuj sun na padega😉😆😆

Originally posted by: rock&roll

sahi farmaya.......naani(the female Sloth) ne bhi feedback de diya......to tum kya kar rahe ho.........jaldi feedback do warna........😡😡 .......😆😆😆

@Adi...that will have a bettr effect on Rasny.....😉

i've listened 2 the songs, i'll listen again and give the feedback ASAP. (there is a big distance b/w me, sur and taal😆😆).

Originally posted by: Guardian Angel

🤣 Aab muje sajmuj sun na padega😉😆😆

I had no idea that this comment wld motivate u to listen to my song.....😉😆......ab aage se aise hi feedback doongi......that way ur curiousity factor will at least pick up and u'll listen to my song.😆... tum to naani se bhi aalsi nikli......😆

Originally posted by: Rasny

i've listened 2 the songs, i'll listen again and give the feedback ASAP. (there is a big distance b/w me, sur and taal😆😆).

good...finally u got to work......jaldi karo..kahin thread close na ho jaaye 😉

& don't kid me abt the distance between u and sur-taal..i know u have a good understanding of music😃......gaane nahin sunne ke liye aise bahane mat banao....😆

At last I'm landing here with my feedback (according 2 my poor music knowledge 😳 )
1. Arun:
* Gud Voice.
* Have 2 control ur breeth 😛
* small mistake on 'ishque masoom hain....' ending note 😛
* Feeling is missing.
* Over all gud 👏

2. Lavanya:

* personally I didn't like the song😳, but u sang gud.

* Have 2 add some more feelings.

* Be confirtable on ending notes 😛.

* Next time plz consider ur song selection😳.

3. Summer:

* Gud song selection.

* No feelings😛

* I felt u sang it bit slow version😳

* In some places u're bit nasal.

4. The_charm:

* Personally i didn't enjoy ur song😳

* U r not in sur at all.

* No feelings.

* Next time plz do much practice😛

5. Minirulz:

* Song selection is gud.

* U sang it well.

* Again, i was expecting more feelings. but u did a gud job👏👏

6. Tabu:

* Gud song selection.

* but u're missing ur sur in many places.

* Seems 2 be u r in hurry.

* Need lot of practice before recording.

* Need more feeling.

7. Coollama:

* U sang gud.

* need more feeling.

8. Suhana safar:

* masha allah what a luvly voice👏👏

* be confirtable in high notes.

* I've enjoyed ur song👏👏

9. kalpa:

* Gud voice.

* Got some prob in ur high notes.

* Feeling of hindi song is bit missing, i felt more south flavour( according 2 my ear😳)

10. Evilseye:

* In some places i felt u r bit nasal.

* Plz sing in a relax mood.

* u sang well👏

11. Anita jee:

* Kya perform hain?👏👏

* Gud voice, but some words're not clear.

* Masti was bit missing.

* I think u didn't miss ur sur👏👏

12. Sara:

* Nice voice.

* sur was missing in few places.

* But u sang well👏

more coming😆