IF SRGMP Feedback - Round 1 - Page 2

Originally posted by: kabhi_21

My comments will be updated here. These are completely my views. I understand its just first round, however I would give the opinion as if its semifinals 😉😆:

Minirulz: Overall the song was really good. You have a lot of control on surs though there was occasional slip. I felt you can give better finishing to some words like "Chupke se".

thank you for ur comments.will keep in mind what you said and try to improve.😳

Originally posted by: kabhi_21

Suhana: Wonderful mindblowing rendition 👏

Wow, thanks Abhi! I'm glad you liked it...but don't I deserve some constructive criticism as well? I know for sure that at least a few of the singers you offered advice to were better than me...Where's mine? 😕

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Wow, thanks Abhi! I'm glad you liked it...but don't I deserve some constructive criticism as well? I know for sure that at least a few of the singers you offered advice to were better than me...Where's mine? 😕

When I heard it i felt it was a great rendition. I felt taal and sur were good and i could enjoy the song throughout. Did nt feel it going offkey anywhere. The song had a little soft touch and that touch did nt affect the voice quality. So i felt it was indeed a very good rendition of this song😊

Here's my feedback. I apologise if anyone finds it offensive

Arunsampath - Loved it. You need to work on your diction though. Some words were mispronounced in the antara.

Lavanya - I don't think this song was the best choice for you especially without orchestration. No major problems technically, but the spooky feel of this song was lacking.

Summer - Nice voice, but you need to work on your surs. The antara is totally off-key - i think it was probably because you could not hit the high note. Next time, start the song at a lower note.

The_Charm - Sur bahut kachche hai, dear. You really picked a tough song for yourself. Next time dont pick something this hard - take an easy song and do justice to it.

Mini - Very nice. It needs a little more romance/feel.

Tabu - Cant hear the song.

Nik - Cant hear the song.

Suhana - Very good. The antara was a little sharp, but otherwise no major problems.

Padmaja - Cant hear the song.

evilseye - Nice voice. Tempo was not steady. With this song especially you have to be very careful with the rhythm - it can be difficult without orchestration. Your surs were also a little off here and there.

rock&roll - Kya bindaas performance hai =) I enjoyed it.

Saara - I want to hear you sing a female song next time =P Sur thode kachche hai, but otherwise it was a pretty good attempt.

kiti - Lovely. Though there was some strain in your voice. Take care of it.

Amma ji - Good, you kept rhythm; I can hear you clicking your fingers. Your voice sounds suppressed for some reason. Are you trying to modulate it? If so, dont. The song will sound better if you sing it thoda khul ke; let your natural voice flow.

Aseel - This was better than your last performance, but you still need to work harder on your surs.

Mala - Very good. Antara was much better than the mukhda - you need to bring the same kind of pain to the lyrics in the mukhda.

Originally posted by: Morgoth

Suhana - Very good. The antara was a little sharp, but otherwise no major problems.

Thanks for the feedback Tanaz! Will try to improve.

Originally posted by: Morgoth

Here's my feedback. I apologise if anyone finds it offensive

Mini - Very nice. It needs a little more romance/feel.

thanx for your feedback.i will keep in mind to bring some more feeling to my songs.I don't think any of us participants should feel any comments offensive.all the reviews can only make us more aware of our shortcomings and our plus points.😳

Originally posted by: Morgoth

rock&roll - Kya bindaas performance hai =) I enjoyed it.

thanx a lot 😃😃.......thoda constructive criticism bhi dijiye...Hum bura nahin maanenge....😉😆😆

i am having a problem with youshare links..
i only manage to listen Sam n Donny's songs..others link are not working 😭 ..
Is there any way to upload in zshare?..if possible.. 😃

Originally posted by: Morgoth

Amma ji - Good, you kept rhythm; I can hear you clicking your fingers. Your voice sounds suppressed for some reason. Are you trying to modulate it? If so, dont. The song will sound better if you sing it thoda khul ke; let your natural voice flow.

Arghh, couldn't even figure out you were talking to me... Amma ji 😆
Yeah i was clicking my fingers (in fear of losing the flow, mostly)... 😳 Should i not click, or is that good? You didn't tell. =) Yeah i was suppressing a bit, but not modulating... Khulke *notes it down* -- Thank youuu!

@Huzi: Ahem ahem. Aren't you forgetting to comment on Donny n my songs??

should the contestants post feedback as well?