Bhagya Rekha - final part......page 84

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Zuzana

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Paddu..........this is going to be tough!! 😭 Twists and turns can always be created to continue but the point of concern is that at this time I cannot continue!
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Pragz I can understand yaar! I thought for a minute that you are ending this which had me wondering ki how can u finish off the story so fast as there is so much to tye up....but if you want to continue after a period of time then I am fine with it! I really think this ff has potential for atleast another 10 parts. So I will look forward for new fresh ideas when you continue. Yes as you said September is not far...time flies.

Btw I am very curious to see how you will put the break for this ff!😍😆

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: Bee3nazz
thnks sweety!!! fab part!!! very dramatic!!! i wonder how u will temporarily end this!!! (i say temporarily as i hope that u are able to continue it in september!!! that would bve a WKD b-day pressi coz my b-day is then!!! but plz donmt think of this a pressure!!! we understand ur feelings and appreciate ur work!!!)
Thanks Bee!!! Ah so your birthday is in September!😃...will keep that in mind!

thnks for keepin mine in payals thought in ur head!!! 👏

The pleasure is all mine 😆

u rock n ur loved!!! 👏 🤗

Thanks! 🤗

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: green_eyes88
hi...i jus recently started watching the show randomly when i ws flicking channels and decided to look it up on IF where i found ur fanfic and read all of it...i must say it is reli reli good and its a shame that u cannot continue it till september...so i guess will jus hav to wait till then to see wats in the future for YuRa....

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Hey green_eyes88.......glad you got to read my FF! 😃 And thanks a lot for liking it! Yep, I am ending it......for the time being! Future will tell what the future holds for YuRa! 😃

Do read the last part..........which will up soon!

Originally posted by: RK_fan111
I really think this ff has potential for atleast another 10 parts. So I will look forward for new fresh ideas when you continue. Yes as you said September is not far...time flies.
Btw I am very curious to see how you will put the break for this ff!😍😆

You are right.........there is still a lot of potential in the FF! In fact my last 2 parts itself could have been stretched into 5 parts! 😆 😆 😆 😆

I hope you will all like the way I am ending it! 😊

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago

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pop77

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Posted: 17 years ago

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prags tum FF hold per kar rahi ho? aur after sept. tum phir se start karne vali ho. tum phir se start kar rahi ho to first me intazar karugi..
did you read my post? i write one line for you..i hope you like it.

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: pop77
prags tum FF hold per kar rahi ho? aur after sept. tum phir se start karne vali ho. tum phir se start kar rahi ho to first me intazar karugi..
did you read my post? i write one line for you..i hope you like it.

"ham jante hai ke Hamare bhich me ek acha writer hai aur usko sirf likhana hi aacha lagta hai..aur aage bhi wo waise hi YURA ke liye likhati rahegi.."

I loved it Payal and am very touched too! 🤗 Thanks a lot! Haan, jab mei phir seh shuru karungi, tunhe zaroor pm karungi! 😊

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#646

Hello all..............Here is the final part. Sorry, if I am making it feel rushed!

PART - 40 : THE STORY BEGINS....

"Rani bitiyaa, jaraa hamraa chasmaa toh deti jaa" says Daadi maa. She is sitting on the cot outside the house. Rani comes out with her glasses and makes her grandmother wear them. 😊 The glasses will immediately bring Rani into focus for daadi and she looks up at Rani, her eyes lighting up! 😃 Rani was the light of her eyes and she has become even more dependent on Rani in the past two years.....since the time Rani had come back from the palace! Rani says to her grandmother with a smile
Rani : Daadi, pathshaala ke liye der ho rahi hai. Ab hum chalte hai! 😃
Daadi : Acchi baat hai.....bitiyaa, saam maa tanik jaldi aa jaiyo! Phir seher jaane ki tayyari bhi toh karni hai!
Rani blushes slightly and says obediently : Ji, daadi! 😳
She takes her bag and several copy notebooks that she had brought home for correcting and starts her long walk to school. She could not believe that almost two years have passed by so quickly!!! 😲 When her grandmother and Rani maa had told her the samething an year ago, she had not believed them! But ofcourse her grief had been so overpowering that she had not believed anyone or anything!! 😕 She was on the verge of even loosing her trust on GOD! 😒

Rani is passing the village temple on her way and stops to visit the temple. She sincerely thanks GOD for having given her the strength to pull through some of the toughest times of her young life! 😊 And also prays that his grace be always bestowed upon her and the King, in the same manner! When she opens her eyes, Panditji is standing in front of her, waiting to give her prasad. He says
Priest : Kaisi ho, Rani bitiyaa? 😊
Rani replies with a smile : Hum acche hai Panditji! Aur aap kaise hai? 😊
Priest smiles and says : Sab bhagwaan ki krupaa hai! Maasi ne bataaya ke tum parson sheher ke liye nikal rahi ho?
Rani replies : Haan, panditji....
Priest says wistfully : Hum tumhe bahut smaran karenge, bitiyaa! Bhagwan tumhe hamesha sukhi rakhe! 😃
Rani bends down to touch his feet when he quickly stops her saying
Priest : Arre bitiyaa... yeh kya kar rahi ho! Mere paanv mat choo.....tum toh hamaari Maharani banane jaa rahi ho! 😲
Rani says : Aisa kehkar hame paraaya na banaiaye, Panditji!! Hum pehle bhi aapke Rani bitiyaa the, aaj bhi hai aur kal bhi rahenge!
She touches his feet and seeks his blessings! The Priest's eyes fill up with tears and he blesses her wholeheartedly saying
Priest : Raaja saahab bahut hi bhagyashali hai jo unhe tumhaari jaisi vinamr aur susheel patni mil rahi hai! 👏 👏
Rani thanks him and takes his leave.

She continues to the school and thinks that the Priest was one of the only genuine people who had always supported her, most of the rest of the village had banned her and her family and had really ill-treated them!!! 😔 Specially her chacha and chachi.....they had made her life a living hell!!! 🤢 Suddenly she is jerked out of her thoughts when her cell phone rings. It must be him! She checks the phone, it IS him! A huge smile spreads on her face as she answers the call 😃 ......Yudi comes directly to the point
Yudi : I am missing you like crazy!!! 😃 Pataa nahi aur do din kaise bitaayenge!!
Rani faking anger : Na koi hello, na namaste....yeh kaisi baat karne ki paddhati hai? Agar hamaara phone koi aur uthaata toh?
Yudi says : Toh kya hota?? Jo bhi phone uthaata usse bhi pataa chal jaata, hum aapko kitnaa miss kar rahe hai! 😉 😆
Rani says : Sab baatein sabko pataa nahi chal sakti!
Yudi says : Aur kuch baatein chupaane seh bhi chup nahi sakti!
Rani gives up : Aapseh jeetnaa hamaare bas ki baat nahi............specially jab aap aise romantic mood mei hote hai! 😊
Yudi laughs and says : That's my girl! 😆 Sab tayyariyaan ho gayi?
Rani says : Haan, lag-bhag......aap aa rahe hai na??
Yudi says apologetically : Nahi Rani, hum nahi aa paayenge, lekin gaadiyaan hum kal raat ko hi bhej denge. Taaki parson subah hi aap nikal padhe! Ab aur prateeksha nahi hoti!! 😳
Rani smiles : Theek hai. Aur....Rani maa kaisi hai?
She can hear his tone turn solemn and he says : Woh bhi aapki prateeksha kar rahi hai! Ek baar aap aa jayengi toh sab theek ho jaayega!
Rani pushes back the tears 😭 that are threatening to start to flow and says : Ab kewal do din ki baat hai.......phir unki poori dekh-bhaal hum hi karenge! 😊
Yudi hears the bell ringing and he says : Lagtaa hai aap School pahunch gayi hai.....ab hum phone rakhte hai, jab aap free ho jaaye tab call kariyegaa.
Rani agrees. They bid goodbye and disconnect the call. Rani had continous classes to teach the whole morning till later in the afternoon. In her last class of the day, Rani has given her students a test and while they are doing the test, Rani sits quietly in her chair monitoring them. Her thoughts wander to that fateful day about two years ago!

When the old King suffered another heart-attack, he was immediately transported to emergency care and he was struggling for his life! Very soon Rani had come to know that it was because of her, that he was fighting for his life!!! 😲 While a distraught Yudi 😕 was spending all his time with his father at the hospital, Rani maa had quickly called Rani and had appraised her of the situation!! 😕 Rani was extremely shocked to hear Yudi's father's reaction.......that he wanted her out of the palace!!!! 😲 😲 😲 Her extreme fears that she had buried deep down in her, came rushing up!!! 😔 😒 The initial fear of her's, because of which she had not revealed herself to Yudi, was back in full force! 😔 😒 The next couple of days and nights were virtual hell....she could not get in touch with Yudi and to top it was the antagonistic behavior of the staff in the servant quarters!!! 🤢
Unfortunately.......Rani maa could not stop the truth from slipping out 😔........and within no time the news had spread like wildfire!!!! Whoever had first spread the word around must have revealed the truth. But by the time it travelled around and reached Rani's ears, it took the shape of an illegitimate, licentious affair between the King and Rani!!!!! 😒
Rani was hurt in the most deepest way at such talk and at the reactions of people who had been seeing her day in and day out for the past year and a half! 😔 😒 Each person had reacted differently to her! Some were jealous, some were very angry, some did not believe the news, some showered her with contempt and disgust!! But invariably it was a huge shock for everyone! 😲 😲 😲 Rani had never been subjected to such censure and so not knowing how to react, she had broken down.....completely!!! 😭 😭 The only people to support her were Rani maa, Namrata and Lakshmi maasi! But Rani maa and Namrata were themselves very tensed and worried about the ex-King's health and situation! They could not give her as much support as she needed! Rani was left to fend for herself and she could not do a good job of that! 😭 So, finally Rani maa had moved her out of the palace to another house belonging to the royal family. Rani had spent a most miserable week there before Yudi had gotten a chance to visit her! The ex-King had survived the ordeal and was recuperating!

Finally, Yudi and Rani had gotten the chance to share their grief and spend some time together! His father was still recovering and the doctor had strongly advised them against subjecting the sick ex-King to any kind of stress!! He was in a deep dilemma as to what is to be done! At the first possible opportunity, Yudi had called for a meeting of the staff and had warned them to stop spreading any more rumours about Rani. 😡 😡 He had also warned that anybody found to still persist in assaulting Rani's character was going to be thrown out of the palace!! 😡 😡 He had given strict instructions to Pradhan to be zero-tolerant on this front!! 🤢

Rani had continued to live in the city and continue her studies while Yudi kept meeting her. He was hoping that when his father recovers, he will try again to convince his father! There was no way he was giving up on Rani!!! Four, trying and stressful months pass! Rani had just finished her 2nd year exams when an article in a local newspaper catches the media's attention and things blow up on the royal family's face!!! 🤢
Yudi's zero-tolerance towards the servants in regards to Rani had led to several of them being fired and kicked out of the palace! And one such bitter servants 😡 .......taaye ji (the kitchen cook) had opened her mouth for a local gossip columnist and this whole affair was printed in the local newspaper. From here, it was but a jump for this whole issue to be splashed across pages of all the scandal-hungry magazines and weeklies!!! 😲 Rani was called a gold digger, a sl**, a scheming woman who had trapped the King!! 😔 😒 The King was painted as a womaniser and a casanova that had affairs with every woman that he met!!! 😔 😒 And Yukta had made full use of this opportunity to get back at them and had fuelled the story further by representing herself as the suffering, beleagured ex-fiancee of the King, who, unable to stand his infidelity had broken her engagement with him!!! 🤢 🤢 🤢

Yudi weathered this storm with great fortitude!!! 👏 👏 He protected his family and Rani throughout! Every day brought a new rumor and the pain and hurt were severe 😔 😒 ........but he did NOT break nor did Rani maa!! But finally one day........Rani broke!!! The papparazzi had managed to capture pictures of Yudi when he had come to meet her and the next day they were splashed across the front pages and stories were written about their clandestine meetings and it was declared that Yudi was waiting for the ex-King's death so he could marry his sweetheart!!! 😲 That was the last straw for Rani!!! Such a wonderful man being accused of murderous intentions towards his own father was something that Rani could not handle anymore and she had given up fighting! 🤢 🤢 🤢

Any amount of effort from Yudi and Rani maa could not change her decision and she had walked away from him leaving him broken-hearted, for his own good!!! 😲 😔 😒 When she reached her home, the news had already reached her family and Sumitra refused to give shelter to Rani and had kicked her out of the house! 😡 But her grandmother had saved her!! Her grandmother believed her and had sheltered her! Life in the village was equally miserbale with everyone spitting venom on her and her family, 🤢 foremost among them being Chacha, Chachi and Munshiji! They had tried everything to break the family but under Daadi's watchful eye, they had survived and slowly her mother had also believed her truth and had come around to support her!! 🤗

2 more months had passed. Not one day of those months had Yudi been able to smile 😭 😭 . Unable to let him suffer so, one day Rani maa had decided to talk to her son! 😕 She knew she was taking a huge risk with her son's life, but she could not see her grandson wither away either!! It was 6 months since his heart-attack and she hoped that he would be able to stand what she was going to tell him. She requests everyone, including the servants to leave and when she and her son are alone, She starts by telling him about his father who had died before he was born. She says
Rani maa : Betaa, hum jo abhi kehne waale hai, uske liye apne mann ko thaam ke rakhnaa! 😕 Agar yeh samay ki maang nahi hoti, toh hamaare hothon seh yeh baat kabhi nahi nikalti! Yeh baat hamaare sang, hamaari chitaa tak jaati!
Her son looks at her surprised. Seeing the firm lines on his mother's face he realizes that what she was sharing with him was of the utmost importance.
Rani maa : Aap toh apne pitaaji ke baare mei wahi jaante hai jo aapko bataaya gayaa tha! Magar jo aapko bataaya gayaa tha, woh sach nahi hai! Sach toh woh hai jo humne bhugtaa hai! 🤢
Rani maa's husband was a womaniser and an alcoholic!! 😲 She had been married very young and by the time she had developed the courage and authority to question him, he was already on his deathbed due to illhealth because of his excessive drinking!! 🤢 🤢
Rani maa tells the above and says : Hamaare vivaah ke sirf paanch saal hi hue jab aapke pitaaji kaa swaasthya poori tarah seh bigad gayaa! 😔 😒 Unhi dinon hame ek aur aghaat bhari (shock) samaachaar mili!!! 😲 😔 😒
Rani maa pauses. This was going to be very difficult for her! 🤢 But she pushes herself 😔 😒
Rani maa : Aapke pitaaji ke kai striyon ke saath sambhand the, unmei seh ek stree......garbhavati thi!
Rani maa closes her eyes. She was reliving a very difficult past! 🤢 Her son was staring at her shocked!!! 😲 Rani maa opens her eyes and looks at him and continues
Rani maa : Aapki daadiji neh saari duniyaa ko yeh bataaya ke hum garbhavati hai! Aur phir cheh mahinon ke baad jab baccha janmaa toh poori duniyaa ko bataaya gayaa ke woh shishu hamaara hai!
Both of them stare at each other!!! The shock registers slowly and starts to show on her son's face! 😲 😲 😲 Rani maa gets up from her chair and walks over to him. She sits besides him and takes his hand into her's and says softly
Rani maa : Woh stree mehel ki ek naukraani thi aur unki garbh seh jinhone janam liyaa.........woh aap the!
The King shivers involuntarily at this revolting news!!!! 🤢 🤢 🤢 Tears roll down Rani maa's eyes! 😭 😭 😭 Her son was seeing her cry for the first time in his life! His strong-willed, wise and caring mother was crying today! Rani maa squeezes his hand and says
Rani maa : Aap hamaare putr hai!!! Har tarah seh hamaare putr hai.........kewal aapka janm kisi aur ke garbh seh hua hai!!! 😭
The King takes a long time to recover from this news.......Rani maa can see the struggle he was going through at finding out such a devastating truth after living for 55 years under an assumption!!!! 😔 😒 🤢 She tries hard to pacify him and calm him down. She talks to him for a long time and tells him that the reason why she revealed the brutal truth was because she had promised her mother-in-law that she was NEVER going to let her children suffer in anyway!!! But today, seeing her grandson suffer, she could not let her promise go broken and so she had to open her mouth! Rani maa finally tells him
Rani maa : Beta, janm kaun saa hai yeh mehetvapoorna nahi hai, magar.....mrityu kaisi hai.....yeh bahut mehetvapoorna hai!!! Hamaare baad log hame shraddhanjali de.....aisi mrityu honi chahiye.....aur tab janm ke baare mei koi nahi poochta!
Rani maa slowly gets up and walks away leaving the King to his thoughts!

3 months had passed after the ex-King has come to know the reality of his birth, when one day he summons Yudi to his chambers. The ex-King had contemplated for a long time about his life and was ready to make the required corrections to see his son happy! He wholeheartedly gives Yudi, his approval to marry Rani! 😳 The relief and happiness 😃 Yudi felt was immeasurable and he had embraced his father with all his heart! 😭 🤗 Immediately the royal family had travelled to the village haveli and the 9 long months of suffering had ended in a low-key but very memorable engagement of Rani and Yudi! 😳 😳 Everyone who had bad-mouthed them were made to eat their words!!! 😡 👍🏼

A month after the engagement, one night.....the ex-King died in his sleep, a peaceful death having known that he had taken the right decision!!!! 😲 😲
The shock of loosing his father at the point when he had finally started to bask in his father's love, leaves Yudi deeply saddened and incomplete!!! 😔 😒 For one year, it is a period of mourning for the royal family and in this one year, no celebrations can be held and so Rani-Yudi wedding is put on hold. Rani maa and Rani, both suggest Yudi to take a vacation and so Yudi travels extensively for a whole year, completely immersing himself in work and developing his business interests far and wide!! Meanwhile Rani had graduated with a degree fulfilling her father's dream and had joined her village school as a teacher while helping her mother out! 👍🏼 👏 👏

One year had passed by and about a week ago, Yudi had returned back and now she was going to meet him and soon they were going to be married! 😳 😳 The loud ringing of the bell, rudely brings her out of her thoughts! All the children were waiting for her to give permission so they can run away home!

2 days later, Rani and her family travel to the palace. After settling down a bit, she and her family go to meet Rani maa. Rani maa is so excited to see Rani that she opens her arms for Rani, who rushes into them! 😃 😃 They hug emotionally!!! 🤗 After a few moments, Rani maa separates Rani and stares at her for a long time! She sees that the innocence in Rani's face has been replaced with maturity! She sees that the cute girl Rani, has transformed into a beautiful and intelligent woman that has already seen enough of the world! And she also sees a quiet fortitude and strength in Rani's eyes which seemed to challenge the world to try and defeat her if it can!!!! 👏 👏 👏 And then Rani maa says
Rani maa : Tu bahut samajhdaar ho gayi hai Rani! Ab hame teri chinta karne ki koi avashyakta nahi! 😊 Tumhaari daadi tumhaare baare mei sahi kehti thi....tum ek fighter ho!!! 👍🏼
Sumitra and Daadi look on proudly at their child being so close to Rani maa! Rani maa turns to Rani's daadi and says
Rani maa : Vivaah ka muhurat, do saptahon ke pashchaat niklaa hai. Tayyariyaan shuru ho gayi hai. Bas aap logon ke aane ki prateeksha thi!
Rani says : Rani ma.....Namrata....?
Rani maa replies : Namrata, Nakul aur Rani sahibaa bhi apni yaatra sampoorn karke, kal laut rahe hai.
And then she says : Ab tum jaake Raaja saahab seh mil lo. We apne kamre mei hai.
Rani nods her head and gets up with a smile. Rani walks through the familiar corridors and rooms of the palace till she reaches Yudi's room. Most of the servants were new except Pradhan and Lakshmi maasi......and they all knew her only as the future Queen! Rani is very apprehensive about meeting him after a whole year! She walks in unannounced and finds Yudi at his desk working away furiously. They had arrived earlier than scheduled and so he did not know that they had already arrived!
Rani walks a little closer to him and clears her throat. Yudi turns around sharply to find Rani staring into his eyes!!!! They both are reminded of their first fateful meeting, 3 years ago, where Rani had similarly turned to look into his eyes! They stare at each other! 😳 😳 It has been such a long time and they are trying to see how much they have changed....or not! Rani seemed to look even more beautiful and mature than the first time he had seen her!!! 😊
A smile spreads through Yudi's face and he extends his left arm towards her! 😃 Rani takes his hand and he slowly pulls her to him! 😳 She is now standing right next to him trying to satisfy her eyes that were thirsting to see him for the past one year! 😳 He makes her sit on his lap and memories flood both of them of a similar situation from the past ☺️ and Yudi asks
Yudi : Kuch yaad aaya aapko?
Rani blushes and smiles ☺️. But says : Nahi!
Yudi pulls her closer to him and Rani wraps her arms loosely around his neck. They both were so comfortable with each other inspite of having stayed away from each other for an year!
Yudi asks again : Ab yaad aaya?
Rani again says mischievously : Nahi! 😆
Yudi smiles and says : Theek hai......phir mat kahiyegaa ke humne aapko sataaya! 😉
And he leans to her with an intention to kiss when Rani stops him and says : Yaad aa gayaa! 😆
Yudi laughs and says : 😆 Agar yaad aa gayaa hai toh phir hame bataaiye kya yaad aa gayaa?
Rani looks into his eyes and slowly leans into him and kisses him on his left cheek 😳 which is enough encouragement to Yudi and he takes over from there!! ( 😉 😆 ) He envelops her completely in his arms and all the loneliness, frustration and depression that they had suffered transforms into longing passion!!! 😳 They kiss knowing that the dark past was over and that the future was going to be bright and beautiful. Tears sting Rani's eyes 😭 and she turns to hug him despeartely 🤗 ....it had been a long and painful journey!!! Yudi knows what is going through her! He holds her as close to him as humanly possible and whispers into her ears
Yudi : Aaj jitnaa ronaa ho, ro leejiye! Hum nahi rokenge! Do hafton mei hamaaraa vivaah hai.........usske baad aapki inn aankhon mei aansoo kabhi nahi aayenge! Aur agar aayenge toh woh kewal khushi ke aansoo honge! And that's a promise! 😊

The ending is not exactly an ending! I hope you all will like it! 😳 I have ended it this way so that when and if I restart this, it will start with a bang........with YuRa wedding! 😃

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago

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beena

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Posted: 17 years ago

#647

wow prag first i will give comments on this last(may be we wish for that) part
oh boy that was very surprising and very intens , fact about ex-king and raani maa's truth was mindblowing 👏 👏
i loved the way you potrait rani and yudi's feelings and as a very self respected person the rani took decision to ga back to village was very true ....i must say it was commendable..
and now their wedding and most importantly their meeting it was very intense and we can feel their passion 😳 😉

and about your stop writing FF i respect your decision though i am sadden to know that we will not have our wonderfullyura for time being.i understand how we all are busy so we will wait for september and for your excellent peice of work..please do keep visiting Forum so we will have your valued comments and have great time together..your company will make time fly fast

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Nishi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#648

Hey prags, yeh kya tussi ja rahe ho? tussi na jao.😭
Well, We will miss your writing...i am hoping you will still be visiting the forum..so not saying that we will miss you...I hope... 😉 But We understand work comes first...well, i wish you finish work well and fast. and september is close by...so we will wait... 😉 for you. 🤗

About the parts, they're Best as usual...last part, i was soo sad that they had to go thru soo much and with 2 years away from each other...but i liked the end...that finally they're together...UNITED ALAS 😳 👏 ....