Bhagya Rekha - final part......page 84 - Page 66

Originally posted by: bsingapury

welcome back aksn i was very happy to see you back after so many days

yes ..long weekend i want to spend with my IF friends..😃

thanks

Originally posted by: bsingapury

wow prag first i will give comments on this last(may be we wish for that) part
oh boy that was very surprising and very intens , fact about ex-king and raani maa's truth was mindblowing 👏 👏

Thanks Beena! 😃 I had figured this was the only way to get the ex-King to reason! If not he was never going to accept Rani!
i loved the way you potrait rani and yudi's feelings and as a very self respected person the rani took decision to ga back to village was very true ....i must say it was commendable..

Rani and Yudi had to go through some really trying times 😕 but they came out stronger! If I had the time, I would have written it in even more detail!
and now their wedding and most importantly their meeting it was very intense and we can feel their passion 😳 😉
Thanks Beena........so I assume you are fine, with the way it ended 😳
and about your stop writing FF i respect your decision though i am sadden to know that we will not have our wonderfullyura for time being.i understand how we all are busy so we will wait for september and for your excellent peice of work..please do keep visiting Forum so we will have your valued comments and have great time together..your company will make time fly fast
Actually, now I will be able to take part in this section! Because the time I used to spend writing the FF will now be spent on the section! 😃 So, I am not going anywhere, I will be very much here in the section!

Originally posted by: swit2weet

Hey prags, yeh kya tussi ja rahe ho? tussi na jao.😭

Oye.........mei kahin nahi jaa rahi!!! 😆 Bas FF end kiyaa hai! Ab toh section mei bhaag le saku, iske liye time mil gayaa hai!
Well, We will miss your writing...i am hoping you will still be visiting the forum..so not saying that we will miss you...I hope... 😉 But We understand work comes first...well, i wish you finish work well and fast. and september is close by...so we will wait... 😉 for you. 🤗
I am going to be very busy and will not be able to spend hours on the FF, but I will be definitely visiting this section! I am not going anywhere!
About the parts, they're Best as usual...last part, i was soo sad that they had to go thru soo much and with 2 years away from each other...but i liked the end...that finally they're together...UNITED ALAS 😳 👏 ....

Thanks a lot Nishi! Yes, they had to go through a lot! But all that is behind them now 😆

Pooja!!!......Good to see you!!! 😃 So have you settled down in your new place?

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Pooja!!!......Good to see you!!! 😃 So have you settled down in your new place?

Good to see you too..Prags i only come back for oneday to read your FF..yes i settle down and i like it too..

maybe i see you after you restart FF again...before i told you don't stop the FF..now i feel you make good decision..😃

i miss all my friends..

awsome last part..i think story jayada fast lagti hai..lekin kyu ae malum hai.yudi and rani going too much trouble..rani ko kuch jyada shehna pada lekin taklif dono ko hui..that's good rani finish her study..her dad dream ko pura kiya..wow raja bhi chup chpke pyar karta tha..ranima ne past open kar diya..thanks god old raja ishiliye yudi ki shadi karne ko raji ho gaye..last line was the best line..'khushi ke aashoo' 👏 👏 👏

me itni sad ho gayi after read this part.. 😭 😭 ab kab 😭 tum ise aage likhogi aur naya FF likhogi..
waiting for Next time..

pragz so nice yaar, i am reading it as a story book 👏

very well done ending too, as you mentioned it isreally not a ending but a new begining for your FF if ans whenever you restart 👏


but sad part is i started reading just two weeks ago and by the time i finished all the part FF just got over 😭 😭 😭 hope you will restart as soon as possible 😳

Hey Pragg part post kar diya ..chal free hote hi read karti hoon 😳

Manpreet

nahiiiiiiiii...tum aisa nahi kar sakti...😭 😭
n sry for the late reply........
bt ham apk itni jaldi vidai se atyadhik vyathit hain kintu ham apki stithi ko purnataya samajhte hue apk nirnaya ka samman karte hain prags....... 😕 😕
now for the parts.....
part 39...as usual awsm... 👏 👏
loved all..but the best of all= rani's appearance n yura's silent love talks..

tht yukta...maza aa gaya.. 😆 😆 😆
...she deserves it.... waise use sukhi k sath milati to aur bhi maza aata bt ye bhi mast tha.. 😆 😆 😆

n wht a twist... she deserved such exit..
it had a bang..
in d end i thought the old king is talkin abt bhoomi but no..😕he wasnt...bcoz of him yura had to bear so much..

part 40...
thoda fast forward to tha but it was nice...especially wid ur time constraints.. 👏 👏
wo raja ka secret yes yes yes i guessed it right in part 34.. 😛 ..isi prakar ka satya raja sahab ko rani ko sweekarne k liye viwash kar sakta tha..
totally gr8 ff..
bt yar jane se pahle itna batati jao how do u write so good...apart from such gr8 ideas n links.. ur writin style is very very gud..
i m ur fan..hats off... 👏 👏 👏
n yar ye serial walon ko thode tips de na....
wo apne serial k yudi ko bhi thoda active n romantic banae..bas sochta hi rahta h n ek bar me hi har man gaya rani ko bhoolne k liye...cant even recognise her voice....kuch lesson do unhe bi..

Wow Praggu I can't believe you ended it!! Here I was expecting a gazillion more updates and it's already over, now what will I do???

Part 39- Loved it! I am so glad Yukta's truth was out in the open like that, her and her parents deserved what came to them. I really love the way you make Rani's simplicity shine, making her to be more beautiful than the rest. Beauty is not what is seen from the outside, but what lies within; you have really given that statement a reality. For a moment I thought the King was referring to Yukta when he said "uss ladki ko nikaal do" but of course that was untrue, poor Yudi I am so glad he had Rani Ma to share his pain.

Part 40- what I can say, I was absolutely floored by the way you wrapped everything up. At first I was disappointed that Rani was back in her "gaon" and now the king will come and ask for her hand…but you surprised me by showing that the wedding was taking place in about a week or two! The converse between the Pandit and Rani was really heartwarming. Though I am not a big fan of hers in the show but I really loved Rani's Dadi in your story, the way she stood up for Rani and believed her was really praiseworthy.

The Kings past had been the most shocking to me, Rani Ma is a very magnanimous person! Never once could I suspect "sautelapan" in her "vivhaar" towards the king. I am glad Yudi took after her and not his father, that is why somewhere deep down I was glad the king died..he he but thank god he gave his blessings on the match before he "parlok sidharing" (going to heaven)

I am still a bit astounded over the ending I guess it hadn't sunk in yet, the part was just getting intense as YuRa were getting intimate and BAM it was the end. Mera saara blood pressure jo high hua tha ek dhum se gir gaya due to shock. But it was an ideal ending for future continuation; you left the reader to dream what may lie ahead and as much as I hate it admit I think that was a fabulous way to end it.

Prags I have really become a huge fan of your work, I truly and sincerely hope you continue from YuRa wedding…sometime soon in the near future hopefully!
😳

Originally posted by: pop77

awsome last part..i think story jayada fast lagti hai..lekin kyu ae malum hai.

I know Payal.....it was too fast!

yudi and rani going too much trouble..rani ko kuch jyada shehna pada lekin taklif dono ko hui..that's good rani finish her study..her dad dream ko pura kiya..

Haan Payal.......I wanted to show Rani as being a self-sufficient person, an achiever before she settles down in matrimony 😊

wow raja bhi chup chpke pyar karta tha..ranima ne past open kar diya..thanks god old raja ishiliye yudi ki shadi karne ko raji ho gaye..last line was the best line..'khushi ke aashoo' 👏 👏 👏

Thanks Payal! 😃

me itni sad ho gayi after read this part.. 😭 😭 ab kab 😭 tum ise aage likhogi aur naya FF likhogi..
waiting for Next time..

I know Payal.........YuRa tumhe bahut pasand hai! Lets hope I can come back to it quickly enough! 😃

Originally posted by: lwfw

pragz so nice yaar, i am reading it as a story book 👏
Cindrella story is very much a story book romance! 😃

very well done ending too, as you mentioned it isreally not a ending but a new begining for your FF if ans whenever you restart 👏
Thanks Shara!

but sad part is i started reading just two weeks ago and by the time i finished all the part FF just got over 😭 😭 😭 hope you will restart as soon as possible 😳

I know Shara, I was thinking the same! You just started to read it and I am finishing it up!! Well, we still have Kaarvaan 😳