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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: simran1285

Praggu that was brilliant and gosh even I felt embarassed for Rani bechari pyar mein kya kya sehna padta hai 😭 Thank god Yudi and Rani Ma believed her
Sehnaa toh usse bahut padh rahaa hai! But most importantly he is with her in all these situations, it would have been worde if she had to deal with them alone!!!
so is sukhiya turning negative now 🤔 I am just saying since he was the first to bring up Rani's name 😡
No....Pradhan is not turening negative. He was just being practical in bringing her name up! 😊
Yukta-- erm no commments!
😆 😆.........Are you sure??? 😉 😆
I hope Bhavayata starts liking Rani
We will have to see about that! 😊
Nammo is too sweet! but the the last bit was the best I read 4 times, the whole mehndi part and him going after her, what can I say about the last line...I was simply floored! 😳

Thansk a lot! 😳 I am very very happy to see that you liked it soo much! 😃

Please update the next part soon until then main yeh part dus-barah baar toh pard chuki hongi!😆

That is too cute. I did promise the next part on Wed, but could not deliver on my promise! But I will be posting the next part in a couple of hours! Sorry for the delay in replying back to you!

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

It was a mindblowing part and I was sitting at the edge thru out...the tension was too much. Yukta 😡 😡 😡 ..she is so cheap yaar! Yes I am waiting for you to kick her out! 😆 I am really curious to know how you will solve this mystery!

Thanks a lot Paddu!!! 😃 Yukta unfortunately does not have the class and dignity though she has the birth! The mystery will be solved in the coming part.....and she will be bid goodbye!

The advice ..too good..Cant help but agree with you on the strengths of a woman..very well put in Pragz! 👏 I just love Ranimaa..she is always at the rescue of Rani-Yudi. I could so well understand Yudi's predicament.

Thanks again Paddu! Its the same advice several of us have been given 😆. But the part about women being stronger than men, that is my reasoning ! Because everytime women are asked to be patient, I wanted to feel a strong reason for following that advise 😆 😆 , hence came up with the above reason!!! 😆 And yes, Rani maa is just too good!

the last part was mind-blowing...Rani is too good...and Yudi must have been overwhelmed by her behaviour. Cant wait for the next part...just to see yukta thrown out! 😈

Well, the wait is almost over, the next part will be up in a couple of hours! And sorry for the delay in responding back!

PS: looks like they are copying many things from ur ff...there is a dark secret of bhooomi...loooks like something about her affairs just like in ur ff Pragz!😆

oh is it!!! Man.....I would love to know more about it! I think from this week I will be able to get back to the serial, hopefully!

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bsingapury

excellent prag hats off to you i can see the maturaity in your writing. the way you have convayed our values it's amezing ,now a days in this fast life our values have been deminised and you have done great job by writing them here so our young generation can learn something from that

Thanks Beena!!! That's a wonderful compliment! 😳 I know the advice is really good but to follow it, is not at all easy!!! 😊 And what you say about values getting lost is true which is why it becomes all the more important to hold onto them!

i don't know how old are you 😉 but your writing is too good 👏 👏
and i totally agree with the line you wrote about women's strength and have courage to bear all . awesome
something for you

"Taarif karu jinse woh alphaz nahi milte
aap woh phool hai ees chaman ke
jo baar baar nahi khilte...."(it has been writen by some unknown shayar)

Aahhhhh that is beautiful!!!! I am really touched 😳 Thanks a bunch

and yar manuu kitni der se hum kah rahe hai ki apna sandle istmaal karo yaar...

and prag end was simply wow i also love your yura yar 👏 👏

Thanks Beena! You are yourself a very imaginative writer and so I can really feel teh importance of your comments!!! 😃

Originally posted by: india14

All the parts have just been amazing. and I waiting for the next part that you said you will update on wednesday, but its alreadi thursday where is the part. I am dying here. 😭 😭 😭 . this waiting is killikng me. 🤢 🤢

india............sorry my bad!!! I shot my mouth off and promised by Wed evening! But could not finish it till today! I will be posting it in another couple of hours 😊 and thanks a lot for liking all the parts! 😃

Originally posted by: nightstriker

hey prags ur most welcome....
n once again...
awsm.... i m totally flat..
initially i thought k sa log rani ko blame karenge...

Actually, they found the jewellery in Rani's room so there was no way Rani could have escaped persecution but for Rani maa and Yudi's help and support! And Rani also knows that and so she was not angry with Yudi but acutally very touched that he saved her! 😊
so yudi will have to tell the truth.....
bt by the end.... jst loved the ending..
tht mehndi part... tt cute Y... n tht question...ap hamse itna pyar kyun karti hn.. so so so cute.. 👏 👏 👏

Yudi is a very romantic guy and so that dialog fits on him perfectly!

yudi - bhavy relation is so nice.....

Yes, in recent times, their relationship has improved!

n tht evil yukta....... i hate her i hate her i hate her...😡
bt atleast this showed k yudi rani k beech kitna pyar n kitna vishwas h...😊😊
That's ture, a very positive way of looking at it! 👏 👏 😃
ab jaldi se next part likh do na..
u rite so gud no matter how much u rite v crave for more....

Next part, do-teen ghanton mei post kar doongi! Hopefully you will like that too! 😳

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Re-cap : Bhavyata's wedding preparation are in full swing. Yudi gifts her a very unique gift! Yukta steals it and tries to oush the blame on Rani.

PART - 39 : TIDE HAS TURNED

Rani answers Yudi's question with great difficulty as she herself is very overwhelmed! 😭
Rani : Agar yahi prashn hum pooche toh?? Aaj subah saare saboot hamaare virrudh the.....magar phir bhi aapne humpar seh apnaa vishwaas nahi khoya.....uss pyaar ke aage toh yeh kuch bhi nahi hai! 😳
Yudi tightens his hold on her and thanks his stars for having found the most compatible soul-mate!! 😳 After a few moments, she separates herself and tells Yudi
Rani : Ab hame angya deejiye.........Rani maa neh hame Raajkumaari Bhavyata ke vidaai seh sambandhidh kuch kaam saumpa hai jo hame prabhand (arrange) karnaa hai.
Yudi relents and lets her go. 😊 Rani goes to get the work done while Yudi walks back to the function hall.

That night Bhavyata cannot sleep for long!! On the one hand she is very excited about the next day and the new beginning in her life! On the other hand she is very sad at having to leave the family with whom she had spent her whole life! She and Namrata stay awake for a long time talking and remembering the fun times they had, growing up! That night, they were like any 2 ordinary sisters and not two princesses!!!
Soon...........its sunrise, the whole palace is up and running excitedly!! It was going to be a beautiful day! 😛 The ceremonies start from the morning itself. The actual wedding muhurat was going to be at 6.30 PM in the evening. The palace looks virtually like a heaven! It is most beautifully decorated!! All the palace staff have been distributed new clothes to wear and everyone is excited and happy to be part of something so special!
That morning Yudi has a visitor. The visitor insists that it was very important that he meet the King and so Yudi grants him an appointment! Yudi and the visitor are closetted in his office for almost an hour. After the visitor leaves, a slightly shocked Yudi continues to sit in his office, lost in thoughts! And then he walks over to his grandmother's room to share the information with her! Soon the matters of the day take precedence and he soon gets busy.

Rani does not wear what she has been given as being a member of the palace staff 😳 .........Rani maa understands Rani's need and wish to maintain her dignity as an individual intact, and so does not consider her not wearing clothes gifted by the royal family as a misdemeanor on her part. Instead, Rani wears a simple yet elegant saree that she had bought herself and the only jewellery she wears is the chain that the King had gifted her 😳 and the jhumkas her mom and dadimaa had gifted her!! 😊

Soon its time for the bridegroom and family to arrive and they arrive with a lot of pomp and splendour! 🥳 They are given a royal welcome by the Queen and ex-King and soon they come in and are comfortably settled!! Bhavyata is getting ready in her room under the guidance of some of the best beauticians of the city. She was looking breathtakingly beautiful in an all red, heavily gold-embroidered wedding dress and no one in the room can take their eyes away from her exquisite appearance! 😳 And another person who is taking everyone's breath away with her beauty is Yukta! She is looking gorgeous herself, almost rivalling the bride! But the rakhri that Yudi had gifted Bhavyata, has brought a special glow to her appearance which could not be duplicated by anyone!! Bhavyata had insisted that her brother help her wear the rakhri the first time, since he had gifted it to her! So Yudi comes to Bhavyata's room. He puts the rakhri on Bhavyata's forehead and an emotional Bhavyata leans down to touch his feet and seek his blessings! Yudi lifts her and embraces her, wishing her the best! It is a very emotional brother and sister moment! 😭 🤗

Yudi looks around for Rani but he does not see her there and so makes his way for the mandap hall. He has not seen her yet this evening and was really wanting to see her! 😛 Rani was already gone to the mandap hall, accompanying Rani maa to ensure that Rani maa is comfortably seated during the several hours of rituals that the wedding was going to comprise of.
The sensation of being watched by someone will make Rani turn in the direction of where Yudi was standing and watching her, while he was on the phone. Yudi was on the phone but had no clue what he was saying.......she simply took his breath away by her simplicity and grace! 😳 😳 She seemed to be the most beautiful woman in the whole palace and she stood apart from everybody else!!! 😳 His eyes check her out from top to bottom and Rani blushes as his eyes travel on her! ☺️ In that ink blue colored saree with a red border, she looked so royal and his eyes fall on the chain!! He is very happy to see that she treasured that more than anything else and that she did not the feel the need to wear anything other than what he had gifted her!! 😃 When his eyes reach her's, she raises her eyebrows questioning him what he was looking at?? Yudi smiles and signals her back indicating she was killing him!!! 😃 Rani blushes and quickly turns away with a smile lest anyone from the crowd observe their interaction! ☺️☺️

The high-raised mandap is towards the front of the huge hall. On the left side of the mandap, very comfortable seating arrangements have been made for the royal family. On the right side, seating arrangments have been made for the groom's family and straight ahead in front of the mandap are the seats for all the invitees, guests and everyone else! Soon the priests ask Pramod to come and and sit at his ordained seat. They start the rituals. Its time for Bhavyata to take her place in the ceremony and she is brought down to the mandap with a lot of fan fair by Namrata, her cousins, Yukta and several other ladies. She goes and sits besides Pramod to his left in front of the fire that is lit. The priest continues the chanting of the mantras. Namrata sits besides her sister in the mandap while Yukta goes and sits besides Yudi. She did not want the heat and fumes from the fire spoil her makeup! 🤪 Namrata has ofcourse pulled Rani to be with her and so Rani stands behind Namrata. Bhavyata's face is covered in a ghunghat and so Pramod does not even get to have a glance to see how beautiful she is looking! 😕 But no such restriction existed for YuRa and they are unable to look away from each other! 😳 Every few seconds Yudi's eyes wander to where Rani is standing and the intensity of his gaze was more fiery than the fire that was burning in front of her! She invariably ends up looking at him and several feelings are shared by them! ☺️ ☺️ The fact that they were in the midst of a wedding ceremony only added to their longing to be with each other forever!!! 😍 Rani maa was watching them and she had a smile on her face! 😊 She had also observed the chain that Rani was wearing! Realizing that Yudi must have gifted it to her, she is very happy to see them so happy! 😃 Rani maa thinks that whoever had said that beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, was so right!!! There were so many beautiful women in that assembly today, most beautiful among them was Yukta...... but Yudi had eyes for nobody but Rani!!! 😳

The priest that was conducting the Pramod-Bhavyata wedding was not simply marrying them, he was slowly inculcating them into this sacred and powerful bond of lifelong partnership! And so he was explaining the relevance of each ritual to Pramod and Bhavyata before performing it! Pramod-Bhavyata were benefitting from this explanation anyway, another couple that were silently benefitting were YuRa!!! Yudi had never really had the interest or time to observe the rituals and to understand the importance and meaning of these rituals. But today it was different! He felt a surprising interest to know more about the wedding rituals and to understand their relevance! The customs seemed more meaningful today than ever because he had someone to relate them to! He and Rani cannot help but be influenced by the sanctity of this moment and dream of a beautiful future together! 😍

Soon all the rituals are complete.......and Pramod and Bhavyata step down to seek the blessings of their elders. And then they move over to a reception hall where all the guests come to meet them, congratulate them and wish them! After which the royal dinner is served. Yudi and Nakul are standing together and watching over and welcoming the guests. Yukta sees Yudi finally by himself and decides to try to get close to him. He had been trying to avoid her the whole day and Yukta wanted to show before her parents, who were visiting for the wedding that she was making a lot of effort! 🤢 She slowly slides up to Yudi and says to him
Yukta : Aap toh bahut busy lag rahe hai Raaja saahab?
Yudi asks : Koi kaam tha aapko, humseh?
Yukta says : Ji. Hum aapseh kuch baat karna chahte hai......magar yahaan nahi. Kya aap thodi der keh liye baahar aa sakte hai? 😳
And she points to the balcony outside the huge hall. Yudi says
Yudi : Aap jaiye. Hum dus minute mei aate hai!
Yukta leaves and waits in the balcony. She turns towards the garden and is enjoying the fresh breeze. Soon she hears Yudi behind her and he clears his throat to let her know he is here. Yukta turns slightly towards him and with her eyes down cast, putting on a fake act of a very shy woman and says
Yukta : Aap itne door kyun kadhe hai, paas aaiye na!
She feels him move closer to her. She extends her hand, her eyes still downcast and takes his hand! Slowly bringing it to her mouth, she kisses it and whispers
Yukta : Hum yeh baat kai dinon seh aapko bataana chahte the ke ham aapseh bahut pyaar karte hai.......
He lets out a yelp and says : Hame bhi aapseh bahut pyaar hai....... 😲
Someone clears his throat just as Yukta thinks......this voice does not belong to Yudi! She looks up shocked!!! 😲 Yes, the voice did not belong to Yudi but to the 50 year old alcoholic husband of one of Yudi's aunt who was a second cousin of the ex-king!!!!! 😡 This pervert had been leering at her the whole day and apparently had followed her to the balcony!!!! 😡 😡 😡 Not only is Yukta shocked at having kissed his ugly hand and telling him that she was in love with him 😲 😲 BUT this shameful mistaken act of her's was witnessed by Pradhan, who was standing there staring at them!!! 😲 Yukta drops his hand like a hot iron and screams
Yukta : How the hell did you get here????? 😡 😡
That man quickly stumbles away shocked at her anger and a fuming Yukta turns to Pradhan and stares at him furiously!!! 😡 😡 😡 Pradhan clears his throat and says awkwardly
Pradhan : Raajkumaari Yukta..😳...hum Raaja saahab kaa sandesh lekar aaye the! Unhone hame yeh bataane ke liye bheja ke woh iss samay aapseh milne nahi aa sakte!

(This was added for Bee and Payal........they wanted to see Yukta embarassed! 😆)

A fuming, shameful, embarassed and angry Yukta walks away in a huff! 🤢 Pradhan looks at her going and understands that she was upset with his presence at such an awkward moment! He thinks maybe he should go to her and apologize to her.....but before that Yukta has already left the balcony! Yukta has just entered the hall again and she goes and sits in her chair, angry and ultra upset! 😡 Just then her personal servant comes to her and says
Servant : Rajkumaari ji.....hum kuch kehnaa chahte hai!
Yukta asks irritatedly : Kya hai??? 😡
Servant : Rajkumaari ji, mujhe bahut darr lag rahaa hai!!! 😭 Sunaa hai Pradhan ji bahut jor-jabardasti seh pooch-taach kar rahe hai!!! Kahin....kahin mere muh seh kuch phisal na jaaye! 😭 Aap kuch keejiye.....krupayaa aap unhe rokiye!
Yukta turn to her and says : Paagal mat ban! Issmei itne darne ki kya baat hai? Kisi koh pataa nahi chalegaa ke woh chori humne karvaai hai! Poochte hai toh poochne de...tu bas ek hi utaar deti jaa ke tujhe iss baare mei kuch nahi pataa!
Servant : Magar Rajkumaari ji...
Yukta : CHUP! Ab hame aur mat sataa....waise hi hamaara sar bahut dukh rahaa hai! Ab tu jaa yahaan seh! 😡
The servant leaves dejectedly while Yukta gets up and goes to her mother and a shocked Pradhan just stares after her!!! 😲 After contemplating for a few moments, Pradhan had decided that he needed to apologize to Yukta and so he had walked over to her. He was walking up from behind and so she had not noticed him and neither had her servant! Pradhan was shocked at what a witch Yukta was!!! 😲 He cannot believe his ears and he wonders WHY in the world would she do this to get Rani in trouble??? 😲😲😲 He feels he needs to inform the King immediately about this!! But the King is so busy that he does not get a chance to reveal anything to him!! 😕

Soon the dinner is complete and it is time for Bhavyata's vidaai! It is a very emotional and stressful affair! 😭 😭 😭 While Bhavyata is being prepared for her trip, Pramod turns to his brother-in-law and says
Pramod : Yudi, mei ek baar Rani seh milnaa chahta hun...........aur tum seh bhi! 😊
Yudi looks at him surprised but does not ask why. They both make their way to the balcony while they send a servant to inform Rani to come to the balcony. Rani comes to the balcony and finds both the men waiting for her. As soon as she comes near them, she does Pranaam to both of them and says to Pramod
Rani : Pramod ji, aapko bahut bahut badhaai ho! 😃
Pramod thanks her and says feelingly
Pramod : Rani, meine issliye aapko yahaan bulaaya hai taaki mei ek saath aap donon ko dhanyavaad kar saku! Agar aap donon ka niswarth saath nahi hotaa, toh aaj yeh din mere jeevan mei kabhi nahi aata! Mei apne jeevan ki yeh kadhi kaa aarambh aap donon ko dhanyavaad diye binaa nahi kar sakta tha! 😊 😳
He turns and embraces Yudi dearly! 🤗 Rani looks at him shocked and seeing her shock, 😲 😲 Pramod says
Pramod : Haan Rani, mei sab kuch jaanta hun! Aur mujhe bahut aanand bhi hua yeh jaankar, ke aap jaise susheel, vinamr aur samajhdaar vyakti ko chuna hai Yudi neh! Mujhe poora vishwaas hei ke aap har kadam peh Yudi kaa saath dengi!!! 😃
Rani thanks him, a shy smile spreading on her lips and her face radiating happiness! 😳
Pramod then says with a wink: Accha bhabhiji, ab angya deejiye! 😉 Meri patni, meri prateeksha kar rahi hai!
They all laugh 😆 😆 😆 and saying bye to Rani, they both leave. Rani also makes her way back into the hall not noticing a shocked and dumbfounded Yukta standing rooted to the ground in the balcony!!!! 😲 Yukta CANNOT believe what she just saw and heard!!! NO!!! This could NO WAY be true!! So Rani was the reason because of whom Yudi had always ignored her?? So Rani, the lowly servant was whom he loved even after being engaged to her??? How COULD he??? Yukta feels like she is choking!!!! 🤢 🤢 She leans against the balcony railing shaking with extreme anger! 😡 😡 😡 All her interactions with Rani flash past her eyes and suddenly she sees Yudi's support to Rani in a new light! Suddenly she understands why Yudi had made her apologize to Rani!!! 😡 Yukta feels repulsed at the thought of having been played by Yudi and Rani all along 🤢 and vows that she will make Yudi's life hell and she knew exactly how to do it! She storms into the palace! 😡 😡 😡

Bhavyata is bid a tearful goodbye and after wrapping things up, the whole palace goes to sleep. Several people cannot sleep that night! Each one of them is awake for a different reason.........
Namrata is extremely tired and so cannot sleep,
the old King and Queen are missing their daughter and so cannot sleep,
Rani maa has the constant tension and concern for her grandson and so cannot sleep,
Rani is excited at the fact that slowly but surely their relationship is being accepted by everybody and so she cannot sleep,
Now that Pramod-Bhavyata wedding was over, Yudi wants to convery his intentions to his father and he is formulating a way of doing this and so he cannot sleep,
Yukta and her parents.........not only can they not sleep for a specific reason but they are also desperately waiting for dawn.......And the reason they cannot sleep is the shocking and disgusting news that their daughter had conveyed to them just a couple of hours before!!! 😲 Yukta had burst into their room, livid with rage 😡 and disgust 🤢 and had started to scream away!! 😭 😡 After calming her down, Raja Manickhchand had inquired what the matter was...
Yukta : Pitaaji, baat yeh hai ke, jinn Raaja saahab ki prashansa karte karte aapke honth nahi thakte, jinn Raaja saahab ko lekar aap baar baar humseh kehte hai ke, hum bahut hi saubhagyashaali hai jo hame unn jaisaa pati mila hai, jinn Raaja saahab seh aapko itni aasha hai ke woh aapke baad aapke Rajya ko sambhaalenge...... 😡 unn Rajaa saahab ko humseh nahi, ek naukraani seh pyaar hai, meri tulnaa mei unhe ek naukraani acchi lagti hai aur weh uss naukraani ko apni Maharani banaane jaa rahe hai!!!!
Raja Manickchand and his Queen look at her shocked and stupefied! 😲 What the hell was she saying! They make her sit, calm her downa and get the truth out of her. Both the King and Queen are shocked beyond words at the turn of events!!! How could Yudhistir do something so unsavoury?? How could he have an affair with a lowly servant??? How could he be so irresponsible and shameless........bringing such shame and disgrace to his family and ruining their reputation like that!! 😲😲😲
Yukta wants to go and complain to Yudi's father immediately, but Raja Manickchand stops her and tells her to wait till the morning, as the old King must be too tired from the exertions of that day!! With great difficulty they stop Yukta for that night!

The next day morning arrives, fresh and crisp but YuRa have no idea what the day was going to bring forth for them! At around 10.00 in the morning, Yudi gets summoned to his father's chambers. When he is going there, he is accosted by Pradhan who conveys to him his findings about the theft! When Yudi hears who was behind the theft, he is disgusted!!! 🤢 But he was not too shocked....after what he had heard the previous morning, this did not seem out of character for her!!! He thanks Pradhan for the effort and tells him that he will take care of this issue from this point on!

When he reaches his father's chambers, he sees Yukta and her parents and Rani maa are also present!! Yudi is a little suprised 😲 to see them, but he does not attach much importance to it.........till he sees his father's face!! The rage on the ex-king's face 😡 makes Yudi realize that everything was not hunky-dory! He immediately suspects what might be the issue. Before he can say anything, his father bursts out
Old King : Ek naukrani........EK NAUKRAANI!!! 😡 😡 🤢
Yudi : Raaja saahab.........Rani sirf yahaan naukri karti hai, isskaa matlab yeh nahi ke woh naukrani....
Old King : BAS!!! Aise moorkh aur buddhi-heen baatein mat keejiye!!! 😡 Jo yahaan naukri kartaa hai usse naukar hi kehte hai! Aap itne besharam kaise ban gaye???? 😡 😡 Aap kaise bhool gaye ki aapki mangni Raajkumaari Yukta seh ho chuki thi???? Mangni ke pashchaat aap neh aisa giraa hua kaarya kiyaa???? 😡
The old King's face is red with anger. Yudi gets worried for him but realizes that he cannot back off now! It was too late!!! He says to his father
Yudi : Raaja saahab.....yeh baat, mangni seh pehle hi ho chuki thi! Mangni hame dabaav mei aakar karni padhi....
The old King interrupts him shocked
Old King : KYA???? Toh uss naukrani seh rishta rakhte hue bhi aap mangni ke liye tayaar ho gaye???
Yudi winces at the choice of words by his father! 😒 They were giving a really bad derivation to the pure love that he shared with Rani. He tries to reason again
Yudi : Raaja saahab.....aap jaisaa samajh rahe hai, waisa kuch bhi nahi hai! Yeh sach hai ke Raajkumaari Yukta ke saath hamaari mangni hui hai! Aur hum neh pehle prayatn bhi kiyaa inke saath nibhaane ki............magar hame kshamaa keejiye...hum inseh vivaah nahi kar sakte!!! Hum kisi aur ko vachan de chuke hai! 😳
Yukta and her parents stare at him angrily 😡 and the Old King taunts him
Old King : Aur uss vachan ka kya? Jo aap neh humseh kiyaa tha??? Shishodaya vansh ke Raaja hokar, aap apnaa diyaa hua vachan todh denge?? Iss Raaj-vansh ki maryaada kaa aisaa apmaan karenge?? Aap keh khoon mei Rajpoot hone kaa koi bhi pramaan hai ke nahi???? 😡

Yudi is angered, frustrated and humiliated!!! He wanted to tell his father that Yukta was no way fit to be a Queen of the Shishodaya clan but he could not bring himself to humiliate and disgrace a lady so publicly and so silently bears the insults!!! But Rani maa speaks up! She had been sitting quietly for the most appropriate moment and it has arrived! 😳
She says authoritatively to her son
Rani maa : Aap apne bete ke khoon ki garmi peh prashn uthane seh pehle, yeh jaan leh toh accha hogaa, ke kya yeh Raajkumaari iss Raajvansh ki Rani banane ke laayak hai bhi yaa nahi!!
Everyone except Yudi look at her shocked! 😲 😲 😲 Rani maa stares coldly at Raja Manickchand and says
Rani maa : Raaja saahab, aap seh aisi apeksha (expectation) nahi thi!!! 😡 Itnaa badha dhoka?? Aap neh aisi baat humseh chupaayi kaise??
Both Raja Manickchand and his wife look terribly guilty and shocked!!! 😲😲 How in the world did Yukta's truth come out in the open??
Rani maa coninues looking at her son : Yeh jo raajkumaari aapke saamne khadi hai....woh stree hone ki har maryaada laangh chuki hai!!! Inkaa sambandh kisi aur purush seh rahaa hai jiski wajah seh, yeh ek baar garbh bhi dhaaran kar chuki hai!! 😲 Inhe aap iss Raajvansh ki maryaada banaayenge???
Yudi's father and step-mother are shocked and shaken by this revelation! They stare at a fuming Yukta!! 😲😲😲 Raaja Manickchand hangs his head in shame!!
Rani maa continues : Aur jo iss Raajkumaari kaa mangalya/suhaag banane jaa rahaa tha, usspeh teen baar hathya ka prayatn hua.......jo inke premi neh karvaai thi!!!!
Everybody looks utterly shocked at this piece of news............including Yukta!!!! 😲😲😲
Rani maa says : Kal subah Commisioner saahab aaye the..........Police ne uss aadmi ko pakad liyaa hai jo ek contract killer hai aur jisneh Yudhistir ki jaan peh teen baar dhaava kiyaa............ek baar night club mei, ek baar gaanv mei aur ek baar accident karvaake!! Agar ek bhi baar woh aadmi safal ho jaata toh aaj aapkaa betaa aapke saamne khadaa nahi hotaa!
Rani maa continues : Aur Yudhistir ki pasand, Rani.......woh mehel mei naukri karti hai toh kya hua, atmaa-samaan aur gaurav seh jeeti hai!! Ek kisaan ji beti hai !! Susheel aur guni hai! 😊
Yukta interrupts viciously : Aur chor bhi hai!!!! 😡
Yudi finally raises his voice against her : Raajkumaari Yukta!!!!! Asli chor kaun hai, yeh hum bhi jaante hai aur aap bhi!!! Aap ka janm raaj-gharaane mei avashya hua hai....magar aap meh naa hi raajsi darja (class) hai aur naa hi woh gaurav (dignity)!!! Accha hogaa, agar aap apnaa aur apne maata-pitaa kaa aur apmaan nahi karvaayengi!!! 😡 😡
On that cue, Raaja Manickchand gets up and so does his Queen. He goes to the Old King and says
Raja Manickchand : Raaja saahab, Hum bahut hi lajjit hai!!! Beti ke moh mei humne aise mehetvapoorna baat aap sab seh chupaayi!!! Agar ho sake toh hame kshamaa keejiye!!! 😔 Ab aur aapke saamne khade rehni ki shakti nahi hai hum meh!!! Raaja Yudhistir ko yeh poora adhikaar hai ke ve yeh mangni todh de!! Aur mei bhi iss mangni ko todhtaa hun!!!! 😒
He does pranaam to the old King, and Rani maa and glances at Yudi for a moment and grabbing his daughter's hand, walks out!!! Yukta protests but Raja Manickchand warns her to shut up and they immediately walk out leaving a confused and upset royal family behind!!! Rani maa turns back to her son, reverts back to the issue and
says softly
Rani maa : Aur Betaa, sabseh badi baat yeh hai ke woh ladhki Rani, Yudhistir ki praan-daata hai!! Do-do baar ussneh Yushistir ko maut ke muh she bachaaya.....aisi ladhki ko thukraana ghor anyaay hogaa..........
Suddenly the old King slips down from his chair and falls on the ground!!!! 😲 😲 😲 Yudi rushes to him while the Queen screams for help! A couple of servants rush in and togther they place him on the bed! Yudi is worried sick for his father and so is Rani maa! 😔 The servants rush to call the doctor!!!!
The old King's face is all puffed up!!! He is suffering from another heart attack! He is breathing erratically and he whispers loudly holding on to Yudi's hand tight
The old King : Uss ladhki koh mehel seh nikaal doh!!.. Uss ladki......nikaal.....doh!!
Yudi looks at his father shocked and grief-stricken!!! 😭 How could he give such a promise to his dad??? 😭 How could he do such injustice to Rani???
He does not open his mouth and Rani maa gives her word on his behalf.....
Rani maa : Jaisaa tum kahoge, waisaa hi hogaa! Hum Rani ko mehel seh bhej denge!!! 😕

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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oh poor yudi and rani after going through so much please prag rani ko mat nikalo lekin rajaa saheb kaa matlab honaa chahiye ki yukta ko nikaaldo woh bhi to ek ladki hain 😭 😭
and wow it was full of action so many truth came and that yukta i hate her
i loved that embarrasing scene 😆 😆 that was really very funny first i thought ye yukta kya kar rahi hai yudi ke saath kya iraada hai ooska 😉 😉

but loved the way u yoshows yura's feelings, their talk via their eyes loved it.....
hopefully old king doesnot take anykind of vachaan that will make yura's life miserable 😭

excellent i can understand why you took long to update .but it is worth waiting as it needs lots off thinking and ideas to compose all together that can give masterpiece like this
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Praggggg What a part yaar ..What a part 👏...Goshhh tu kesse likh leti hai ???...kis tarah tune ek ke saath ek lardi jord di ...and yukta ka agla pichla chitta sab samne laa kar rakh diya 😆😆

yukta embarassing scene 👏👏....wow ..wesse toh isse aur bhi aacha mazza chikhana chahiye tha 😉..par chal ab toh Mehel se hi out 😆

mujhe wo scene bahut aacha laga jab yudi marriage ke ritti riwaz ko bahut dhyan se sun raha hai 😳..tumne bahut hi aacha likha hai ..actully sach meh hi essa hota hai ki aggar dil meh koi baat ho toh khud hi dhyan uss taraf chala jaata hai ....😳...

Old king ko Maloom ho gaya ??😲....and i love rani maa ki usne yudi ko suport kiya 🤗rani maa meri taraf se big hug hai apkoooooo😳...

ab yudi kya karega ??,,,kya wo rani ko nikal dega ??...yaa abhi bhi rani ka saath dega ??..really mujhe jaldi se bata na ki aagge kya hoga ??? bechara fass gaya hai ab 😭

Praggg loveeeee u yaar 🤗...thanku dear for lovely FF 😳...ab jaldi bata ki tu next part kab likhegi ??😆..i know ab next part meh love scene nahi hoga😆 ...pehel tu jaldi se problem solve kar phir love scene likh daal 😉

Manpreet

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Pragz...only one question..."uss ladki." is it really Rani he is talking about?
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OK friends............before I reply to the comments, need to give you all this message!
Next part is the last part of this FF! 😕
I really had a tough time taking this decision but I have finally decided on it! The only reason being time!!! For the next 3 months till September, I am going to be very busy and I will not be able to update regularly!
And I really hate leaving you all hanging around and not being able to update on time knowing that you are waiting for the update! And that adds a lot of pressure on me too which might make me write something mediocre, which I don't want to! 😊

I can stretch this FF for another 20-30 parts by concentrating on the rest of the characters whom I had ignored like Choti Rani, Nakul, Namrata, Pramod-Bhavyata, Chacha's family and Rani's family............but I really only want to write about YuRa!! 😆 😆 😆

I loved writing this FF!!!! I thoroughly enjoyed it and am loathe to end it 😭 😭 Hopefully in September, if it works out I might continue this one from where I left off......but that is at a much later point and so do not want to think about it now!

I sincerely thank you a lot for your wonderful support, appreciation and encouragement!!! 😃 It has given me a lot of strength in continuing to write!! And I hope if I write again in the future, I will get the same encouragement from you all! 😳 😊 And any thing that you feel I need to improve on, PLEASE...PLEASE let me know!!!! You can write it here or send me a pm too............your suggestions are most welcome and I look forward for them! Because I do strongly believe in the following

Hamesha tareef ho, yeh zaroori nahi,
Har tareef sacchi ho, yeh bhi zaroori nahi,
Jo tareef ki sacchai na jaan sake,
Aur aitraaz ki hakeekat na pehchaan sake,
woh mere hizaab se, tareef ke kaabil hi nahi!!!


Love you 🤗

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bsingapury

oh poor yudi and rani after going through so much please prag rani ko mat nikalo lekin rajaa saheb kaa matlab honaa chahiye ki yukta ko nikaaldo woh bhi to ek ladki hain 😭 😭

Sorry to disappoint you Beena......the ex-King was talking about Rani, not Yukta!
and wow it was full of action so many truth came and that yukta i hate her
i loved that embarrasing scene 😆 😆 that was really very funny first i thought ye yukta kya kar rahi hai yudi ke saath kya iraada hai ooska 😉 😉
Haan........issmei bahut action that and you know the reason why......😕 I was kind of trying to wrap things up! Glad you liked the Yukta embarassing scene 😆
but loved the way u yoshows yura's feelings, their talk via their eyes loved it.....
hopefully old king doesnot take anykind of vachaan that will make yura's life miserable 😭
All that will be revealed in the next part
excellent i can understand why you took long to update .but it is worth waiting as it needs lots off thinking and ideas to compose all together that can give masterpiece like this

Thanks a lot Beena........😳 That was very kind of you!

Originally posted by: sahib29

Praggggg What a part yaar ..What a part 👏...Goshhh tu kesse likh leti hai ???...kis tarah tune ek ke saath ek lardi jord di ...and yukta ka agla pichla chitta sab samne laa kar rakh diya 😆😆

😆 😆 Haan........Yukta ka poorta account settle kar diyaa!!! 😉 😆 Mannu, sba kadiyaan toh jodni hi thi, ab FF jo khatam kar rahi hun! Thanks a lot mannu! 🤗

yukta embarassing scene 👏👏....wow ..wesse toh isse aur bhi aacha mazza chikhana chahiye tha 😉..par chal ab toh Mehel se hi out 😆

actually aur mazaa chakhaane ka time nahi hai, nahi toh zaroor karti! 😆

mujhe wo scene bahut aacha laga jab yudi marriage ke ritti riwaz ko bahut dhyan se sun raha hai 😳..tumne bahut hi aacha likha hai ..actully sach meh hi essa hota hai ki aggar dil meh koi baat ho toh khud hi dhyan uss taraf chala jaata hai ....😳...

Haan......bilkul sahi kahaa tumne!

Old king ko Maloom ho gaya ??😲....and i love rani maa ki usne yudi ko suport kiya 🤗rani maa meri taraf se big hug hai apkoooooo😳...

Rani maa was always planning to support Yudi! Unke support ke binaa toh Yudi shaayad hi kuch kar paataa! Aur agli part mei ek aur twist aayegi, jis seh sab settle ho jaayega!

ab yudi kya karega ??,,,kya wo rani ko nikal dega ??...yaa abhi bhi rani ka saath dega ??..really mujhe jaldi se bata na ki aagge kya hoga ??? bechara fass gaya hai ab 😭

Haan, thoda phas gayaa hai.....next part mei pataa chalega ki woh kya karegaa! Aakhit pitaaji ki jaan khatre mei hai!

Praggg loveeeee u yaar 🤗...thanku dear for lovely FF 😳...ab jaldi bata ki tu next part kab likhegi ??😆..i know ab next part meh love scene nahi hoga😆 ...pehel tu jaldi se problem solve kar phir love scene likh daal 😉

Mannu...........ab problem solve karnaa hi bachaa hai....jo next part mei ho jaayega, kyunki next part mei yeh end ho jaayega! 😭

Manpreet

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jinc118

Pragz...only one question..."uss ladki." is it really Rani he is talking about?

Yes! It is Rani he is talking about 😕

Originally posted by: tough.cookie

arey sorry mat boliye!...i can appreciate the fact that you do have a life outside of the forum!...aap aaraam se apke liye jaise convenient ho waise likheye! (lekin utne bhi aaraam se nahi haan! 😆 )

Ritu.....ab toh iss baat ki gunjaish hi nahi rahi, kyonki mei FF samaapt kar rahi hun 😭 !! But time was the biggest culprit behind my taking this decision!

coming to the update....the pace of the events was so fast...kept me on the edge of my seat! 👏...bahut hi dhmaakedaar tha!

And now you know why!!! 😆 😆 😆

Ek ek kar ke sab cheez pe comment karti hoon!...pehle Yudi aur Rani ke innocent romantic moments...awww they were so cute..."When his eyes reach her's, she raises her eyebrows questioning him what he was looking at?? Yudi smiles and signals her back indicating she was killing him!!!"...i could visualise this scene so vividly!...would love to see this side of yudi on tv too...woh wala toh kuch jaida hi uptight hai!😕

Ekdum sahi kahaa about Yudi being uptight! But you know in the FF too, Yudi relaxed gradually............as he became more familiar with Rani, he let some of his inhibitions go and tried to move away from the restrictive lifestyle he was following.......maybe the same thing will happen for serial Yudi too, once he gets to know Rani 😉 😆

Woh Yukta ka scene bhi kamaal tha! 😆...aapne iss forum ke bahut logon ko bahut khush kar diya hai!😃

😆 😆..........that's the best I could come up with, probably it will not be satisfactory enough!

Aaaaargh!!...yukta ki bachi!!😡..NALAYAK BADMAASH CHUDAIL!!..uske aage i will refrain from saying anything...i am glad she was put in her place by rani maa and yudi...

Yes, she WAS put in her place......infact she was begging for it!!! I could not make Yudi stoop to her level and make it an all-out confrontation and so toned it down a bit. I hope it had the desired impact!

Kahani mein Twist!...Old-raja ne ladki ho mahal se nikaal dene ko kaha!...mujhe bahut ummeed hai ki he didnt mean Rani...maybe he was talking abt yukta!**fingers crossed**...

No Ritu..........he was talking about Rani!

The update was totally worth the wait! 👏...agla update jaldi likhiyeha 😆

Thanks a lot!!! 😃 next update will be up by Monday

Love

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Oh parggg yee tune kya likh diya ??😭...yee nahi ho sakta 😭...i know ki two FF likhna mushkil hota hai ..par tu nahi janti ki main teri FF se bahut jayada attach thi 😭.......main ab pagal ho jaayungi 😭..main tujhe aache comment toh nahi de pati thi ..lekin kabhi tu mujhe milti toh dekh pati ki kis tarah teri FF read karke Manpreet ki ankhen meh chamak aa jaati hai ...really main bahut hi upset ho gayi hoon 😭😭😭....Main toh iss section par aayi hi teri aur teri FF ki wajah se thi ......ab main kya karu ??😭

Pragg Main tujhe Na toh end karne ke liye keh sakti hoon ..aur na hi continue karne ke liye ......main fir likhungi ..cos ab mere se kuch bhi type nahi ho raha !!

OH god😭

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