Bhagya Rekha - final part......page 84 - Page 64

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Posted: 17 years ago
Prags i got heartattack..not your ff part..but comment part..next part was last part.. 😭 😭
i know your writing two FF together..i hoping after finish KArvan you going to start for YURA..you can't ignore them..if you ignore me but don't & better not YURa.. 😳 You are Fabulous Writer 👏 👏 ..
i always waiting for write next FF..
now for FF..rani gave real good ans.dono equal pyar karte hai..yudi aanke rani ko har time dhudti hai..ab yudi samja raha hai shadi ka matlab..jo usko kam aane wala hai..

Big Thanks to you 👏 👏 👏tumne hamari baay manke bhude ke sath kiss li..
visitor yukta ka rocord dene aaya tha..how gross 🤢 yukta..he try to frame yudi aur kudh phas gayi..
best of the FF promod thanks to YURA..he call rani to Bhabhi..that good yukta heard..now she figure why yudi did to her..
thanks god Yukta 😡 out of pic. even old king knows wht he made mistake..
old king talk about Rani..say usko mahel se nikalo..yudi ki kya halat hogi..
ranimama kuch karo..yudi rani ke piche gaav jane wala hai..

waiting for last big part.. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sahib29

Oh parggg yee tune kya likh diya ??😭...yee nahi ho sakta 😭...i know ki two FF likhna mushkil hota hai ..par tu nahi janti ki main teri FF se bahut jayada attach thi 😭.......main ab pagal ho jaayungi 😭..main tujhe aache comment toh nahi de pati thi ..lekin kabhi tu mujhe milti toh dekh pati ki kis tarah teri FF read karke Manpreet ki ankhen meh chamak aa jaati hai ...really main bahut hi upset ho gayi hoon 😭😭😭....Main toh iss section par aayi hi teri aur teri FF ki wajah se thi ......ab main kya karu ??😭

Pragg Main tujhe Na toh end karne ke liye keh sakti hoon ..aur na hi continue karne ke liye ......main fir likhungi ..cos ab mere se kuch bhi type nahi ho raha !!

OH god😭

Mannu meri aisi halat hai..lekin ham prag ko force nahi kar shakte.. we going wait for her to start new FF after she has free time(done with RK)

aur ohy tu ka bol rahi hai me teri FF se forum me aayi hu..mujhe bahut dhukh husa😭😭

ab tu RKAB forum me nahi aayegi..😭😭

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sahib29

Pragg Main tujhe Na toh end karne ke liye keh sakti hoon ..aur na hi continue karne ke liye ......main fir likhungi ..cos ab mere se kuch bhi type nahi ho raha !!

OH god😭

mannu....I am sorry! 😕 Sent you a pm

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

Prags i got heartattack..not your ff part..but comment part..next part was last part.. 😭 😭
i know your writing two FF together..i hoping after finish KArvan you going to start for YURA..you can't ignore them..if you ignore me but don't & better not YURa.. 😳 You are Fabulous Writer 👏 👏 ..

Sorry Payal....but please don't think i am sacrifcing this for the other FF!! Its just that I thought this is the most practical point to stop the FF at this point........

i always waiting for write next FF..

I know 🤗, wonderful readers like you have helped me to write this long!!!
now for FF..rani gave real good ans.dono equal pyar karte hai..yudi aanke rani ko har time dhudti hai..ab yudi samja raha hai shadi ka matlab..jo usko kam aane wala hai..
aag toh dono taraf lagi hai......ekdum equal! 😆
Big Thanks to you 👏 👏 👏tumne hamari baay manke bhude ke sath kiss li.. The pleasure is all mine! And I should also thank you for taking the time to read this!
visitor yukta ka rocord dene aaya tha..how gross 🤢 yukta..he try to frame yudi aur kudh phas gayi..
best of the FF promod thanks to YURA..he call rani to Bhabhi..that good yukta heard..now she figure why yudi did to her..

I am glad you liked that part! 😃
thanks god Yukta 😡 out of pic. even old king knows wht he made mistake..
old king talk about Rani..say usko mahel se nikalo..yudi ki kya halat hogi..
ranimama kuch karo..yudi rani ke piche gaav jane wala hai..
Next part will be up by Monday!
waiting for last big part.. 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Sorry Payal....but please don't think i am sacrifcing this for the other FF!! Its just that I thought this is the most practical point to stop the FF at this point........

No prags i don't think .. its too hard to justify two FF..you putting lots of time for FF..actully you i started watch show for cinderella concept..but your FF gave me more intrest than real show.. i really want you to start again when you have time. i am still reading Karvan...

ham jante hai ke Hamare bhich me ek acha writer hai aur usko sirf likhana hi aacha lagta hai..aur aage bhi wo waise hi YURA ke liye likhati rahegi..|

ye dil ki baat hai ..

waiting for last part..

payal

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

OK friends............before I reply to the comments, need to give you all this message!
Next part is the last part of this FF! 😕
I really had a tough time taking this decision but I have finally decided on it! The only reason being time!!! For the next 3 months till September, I am going to be very busy and I will not be able to update regularly!
And I really hate leaving you all hanging around and not being able to update on time knowing that you are waiting for the update! And that adds a lot of pressure on me too which might make me write something mediocre, which I don't want to! 😊

Pragz I have not yet read the part which I want to do at leisure on Monday but I heard thru mannu that u would be finishing off this ff so I thought I will reply to ur post. I wont say I am very happy about your decision as this ff is so different in flavour ...very gripping story line and the way you solve Yura's problem is much more appreciable than how the show is going. But closing it in next part seems too hurried ..I was expecting some twists and turns before the royal family accepts Rani. The time constraint I can understand fully well....considering the fact how punctual you are in your updates!👏 If you feel there is nothing more you can add and you are solving Yura's problem then I am Ok with ur ending this ff!

I can stretch this FF for another 20-30 parts by concentrating on the rest of the characters whom I had ignored like Choti Rani, Nakul, Namrata, Pramod-Bhavyata, Chacha's family and Rani's family............but I really only want to write about YuRa!! 😆 😆 😆

Yes I also want to read only about Yura😉 and I think you have given all directions to Yura romance also😆 ...Btw wanted to ask you if you are planning to stop why not give a c-night scene for Yura...Pullleeeaaassseee!😳😆

I loved writing this FF!!!! I thoroughly enjoyed it and am loathe to end it 😭 😭 Hopefully in September, if it works out I might continue this one from where I left off......but that is at a much later point and so do not want to think about it now!

I am all for a new ff on Yura when you find the time...maybe there you can make yudi as a cowboy and Rani as princess!😆

I sincerely thank you a lot for your wonderful support, appreciation and encouragement!!! 😃 It has given me a lot of strength in continuing to write!! And I hope if I write again in the future, I will get the same encouragement from you all! 😳 😊 And any thing that you feel I need to improve on, PLEASE...PLEASE let me know!!!! You can write it here or send me a pm too............your suggestions are most welcome and I look forward for them! Because I do strongly believe in the following

Hamesha tareef ho, yeh zaroori nahi,
Har tareef sacchi ho, yeh bhi zaroori nahi,
Jo tareef ki sacchai na jaan sake,
Aur aitraaz ki hakeekat na pehchaan sake,
woh mere hizaab se, tareef ke kaabil hi nahi!!!


Love you 🤗

I didnt understand the line aitraaz ki hakeekat.😆 I honestly didnt get what you want to convey thru this poem...! One thing I want to say is I am not too good at giving comments but whatever I say is what i feel truly!

And if you ask me to give a frank reply on how you can improve ur writing really I will not be able to tell you how you can improve but by the comments I think you will get a fare idea of how we are feeling and what we are liking. And the frequent requests for updates and now you see how many will tapkoafy on u😉 for ending this ff will show you how much everyone has liked it.

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Posted: 17 years ago
Paddu..........this is going to be tough!! 😭 Twists and turns can always be created to continue but the point of concern is that at this time I cannot continue!
C-night!!! Actually, if I say anything now then I will be revealing too much about the next part........So, you will have to wait till tomorrow for it and also I will have to take the risk of wondering whether you will like the way I am going to end it or not!
Because when I continue this, I want to continue from this point!

The meaning of the poem I wrote is something like this...

Its not necessary that I always be praised
It is also not necessary that all that praise is honest,
If I cannot recognize the sincerity behind my praise
And cannot understand the validity of why I am criticized,
Then I have no right to be praised! 😃

Mannu & Paddu.......why are you feeling you are not good at writing comments??? That is sooooo not true!!! I love reading your wonderful comments and always look forward to it!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tough.cookie

Naaaaaaahiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!.....aisa nahi hosakta! 😭 😭 Aaahhh! I am feeling so guilty 😕

aapne toh bilkul atom bomb hi gira diya!!!...*sniff*....main kya kahoon mujhe toh samajh nahi aaraha hai...***shaking her head in disbelief***

I know Ritu....this is a bit sudden! Actually I had decided when I was typing the last part.....that is why I made changes to it to kind of wrap things up and so took longer to complete it!

i know i am adopting a very selfish attitude here...par kya karoon....aap likhti hi itna acha hain!...issi ummeed ke saath jeena padega ki aap september ke baad phir se iss story ko continue karengi **gosh sept seems so far awaay! 😭)

Agar continue karungi toh zaroor isi FF ko continue karungi! Kyunki yeh FF mere dil ke bahut kareeb hai! And september is really not that far away.........the way time flies, it will be here before you know! 😃

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
thnks sweety!!! fab part!!! very dramatic!!! i wonder how u will temporarily end this!!! (i say temporarily as i hope that u are able to continue it in september!!! that would bve a WKD b-day pressi coz my b-day is then!!! but plz donmt think of this a pressure!!! we understand ur feelings and appreciate ur work!!!)

thnks for keepin mine in payals thought in ur head!!! 👏

u rock n ur loved!!! 👏 🤗

xXx Bee

xXx
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi...i jus recently started watching the show randomly when i ws flicking channels and decided to look it up on IF where i found ur fanfic and read all of it...i must say it is reli reli good and its a shame that u cannot continue it till september...so i guess will jus hav to wait till then to see wats in the future for YuRa....

xxx

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