Bhagya Rekha - final part......page 84 - Page 67

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

Sorry for the delay pragz! 😳

No problem at all Paddu! 😃

Part 39:

The flow was excellent and there were lots of surprises, twists and sudden revelations which made to a very very gripping part👏👏👏. Thanks! I was trying to tie up as many ends as possible! I liked the way you explained the wedding rituals intervined with Yura's actions be it a smile or gaze😳. Actually, I wanted to write this in more detail....Oh well, I will cover this when I get YuRa married!!! 😉 😆 Ranimaa looks to be the sutradharini of this story…if not for her Yura would never have been one. very trueYou gave Yukta the most deserving exit.👏 😆

Part 40:

Oh man! That was some real intense drama. The ordeal of pain and seperation you have described was very real👏. Thanks Paddu! My only worry was that it was too quick!You realise ..however rich a person is he cannot escape hardships. So true!!! Here it was ironical that the royal name tag behind yudi was making things so difficult for Yura. Unfortunately that was the case! 😕 I am very glad the way you took us thru their hardships and seperation very positively and without getting us too emotional. You were always showing us a bright light at the end.👏 Thanks! 😃

It was very beautifully written with flashbacks. Daadi was awesome yaar. She is a sweetheart! The media🤬🤬🤬

The truth about the old Kind had me😲 as I was expecting you to make Yudi's birth a mystery😆..this idea of yours has worked well…it really fitted well with the story and making it easier for the royal family to accept Rani. Ahhh! I am soo glad that the idea worked! I had always planned this to be the twist 😊....the only thing is, I had wanted to be more dramatic, using Rani maa's biography as the medium through which this truth will be revealed! But did not have the time too!

Wishing you happy holdiays🤗…and see you with back with a bang!😳😆 Thanks, Paddu! 🤗 Thanks for being with me!

Mannu........will wait for your comments! 😳

Originally posted by: nightstriker

nahiiiiiiiii...tum aisa nahi kar sakti...😭 😭
n sry for the late reply........

Hey, I am the one sorry to leave you all high and dry but it was getting tough for me! I am not going to have a lot of time in the coming few months. So, had to stop it!
bt ham apk itni jaldi vidai se atyadhik vyathit hain kintu ham apki stithi ko purnataya samajhte hue apk nirnaya ka samman karte hain prags....... 😕 😕 Thanks a lot for understanding 😊
now for the parts.....
part 39...as usual awsm... 👏 👏
loved all..but the best of all= rani's appearance n yura's silent love talks..
They are one romantic couple in this FF! 😳
tht yukta...maza aa gaya.. 😆 😆 😆
...she deserves it.... waise use sukhi k sath milati to aur bhi maza aata bt ye bhi mast tha.. 😆 😆 😆 Pradhan seh usko milaana mushkil tha, isliye I chose this other way to teach her a lesson!

n wht a twist... she deserved such exit..
it had a bang..
in d end i thought the old king is talkin abt bhoomi but no..😕he wasnt...bcoz of him yura had to bear so much.. That's true !

part 40...
thoda fast forward to tha but it was nice...especially wid ur time constraints.. 👏 👏

Yep...........that was my bone of contention too that I was rushng it up!!
wo raja ka secret yes yes yes i guessed it right in part 34.. 😛 ..isi prakar ka satya raja sahab ko rani ko sweekarne k liye viwash kar sakta tha.. Oh did you!!! 😆 Yep....that was the only way I could bring the King to his senses!
totally gr8 ff.. Thanks! 😳
bt yar jane se pahle itna batati jao how do u write so good...apart from such gr8 ideas n links.. ur writin style is very very gud..
i m ur fan..hats off... 👏 👏 👏 oh thanks soo much!! I feel so happy to think you liked it soo much! 😳
n yar ye serial walon ko thode tips de na.... wo apne serial k yudi ko bhi thoda active n romantic banae..bas sochta hi rahta h n ek bar me hi har man gaya rani ko bhoolne k liye...cant even recognise her voice....kuch lesson do unhe bi. avashya deti...........lekin meri kaun sunegaa!!! 😆 😆 😆

Praggg ..pehle mujhe jee bhar ke ro lene de 😭...yee tu janti hai kyu ??😭

Back to FF ...Pragg kya kahu yaar ..kesse kahu ??...am just speechless ..ki tune itna aacha likha hai ki main bata nahi sakti ..and end mujhe bahut aacha laga ek toh wo mil gaye ...aur dusra ki mujhe poori umeed hai ki tu phir se aage continue karegi 😳....

and jis tarah tune old raja ka raaz bataya ki wo rani maa ka beta nahi tha ..kabhi main soch bhi nahi sakti thi ki kuch essa hoga 😆....but u know lekin jiske saath hota hai na essa ..uss par kya betati hai uska toh hum andaaza bhi nahi laga sakte !

and rani ki study bhi complete ho gayi 👏...and iss part meh everything is perfect ...jis tarah tum ek dun past aur present ko likha ..really bahut aacha laga ..

tumhari iss FF ka every character mujhe bahut aacha laga ..isliye nahi wo aache hai ..balki isliye kyu ki tum unhe bahut aacha bana deti ho 😳...u are best dear 👏

ab jesse hi tum free ho jayogi jaldi se continue karna 😳

Thankuuuuuu Pragggg for Lovelyyyy FF 🤗...

Manpreet

Originally posted by: simran1285

Wow Praggu I can't believe you ended it!! Here I was expecting a gazillion more updates and it's already over, now what will I do???

Yes....unfortunately I had to stop! 😕

Part 39- Loved it! I am so glad Yukta's truth was out in the open like that, her and her parents deserved what came to them. I really love the way you make Rani's simplicity shine, making her to be more beautiful than the rest. Beauty is not what is seen from the outside, but what lies within; you have really given that statement a reality. Very true! And something that I solidly believe in! 😊 I did feel bad for Yukta's parents but they were equally wrong in covering their daughter's bad deeds!!! For a moment I thought the King was referring to Yukta when he said "uss ladki ko nikaal do" but of course that was untrue, poor Yudi I am so glad he had Rani Ma to share his pain. Rani maa is like the beacon of light for him in his dark world! Bless her heart! Totally love that old lady!! 😃

Part 40- what I can say, I was absolutely floored by the way you wrapped everything up. Oh thanks Simran......because I felt that I was rushing it up! But I did want to wrap all the ends up! At first I was disappointed that Rani was back in her "gaon" and now the king will come and ask for her hand…but you surprised me by showing that the wedding was taking place in about a week or two! Yeah........I skipped the part where he again comes to the village and all that. All that would have stretched the part out to 50 KB!!!! 😆 😆 The converse between the Pandit and Rani was really heartwarming. Though I am not a big fan of hers in the show but I really loved Rani's Dadi in your story, the way she stood up for Rani and believed her was really praiseworthy. Thanks! Actually I like Rani's daadi too! She is very worldly-wise! Actually I am missing her in the show!

The Kings past had been the most shocking to me, Rani Ma is a very magnanimous person! She sure is! I would have really shown this side of her character in more depth if I had continued! Oh well lets see...maybe in the future! Never once could I suspect "sautelapan" in her "vivhaar" towards the king. I am glad Yudi took after her and not his father, that is why somewhere deep down I was glad the king died..he he but thank god he gave his blessings on the match before he "parlok sidharing" (going to heaven) True!!! 😃 Even I was not very sad about the King leaving us!

I am still a bit astounded over the ending I guess it hadn't sunk in yet, the part was just getting intense as YuRa were getting intimate and BAM it was the end. Mera saara blood pressure jo high hua tha ek dhum se gir gaya due to shock. Sorry! 😆 😆 😆 But it was an ideal ending for future continuation; you left the reader to dream what may lie ahead and as much as I hate it admit I think that was a fabulous way to end it. Phew.........Thanks a bunch!!!! I was very worried about how that would go down with ya'll 😃

Prags I have really become a huge fan of your work, I truly and sincerely hope you continue from YuRa wedding…sometime soon in the near future hopefully!
😳 I really hope so too!!!! And Thanks for all the wonderful comments!!!

Originally posted by: tough.cookie

firstly, sorry for the late reply!...

And I am sorry too for the late response!

Aakhri part 😭 (but only for now!)...as usual bahut shaandaar tha...Ex-Raja ko line par lane ka idea bahut acha tha! 👏 Thanks! Glad you liked it! ....Rani maa is the most wonderful person!...such a great example of the innate ability of a woman to be able to love someone selflessly!..She is truly a modern day Yashodamaiya!... Wow Ritu!!!! Very well said 👏 👏 and you are right.........she is an awesome personality!

I am glad things have fallen in place for YuRa...i am happy with the end...coz i know that this is not the end...and u leaving it at this point gives me hope that u will be resuming it in the future 😃 ...and wat a start that will be... 😉 True......😆 😆........it will be a great start!

Btw i had to ask u...i remember u telling me u r writing a FF in another section...are u continuing with that one....i might go and read that one in my hols... 😊 Oh that will be awesome if you can read it! I will pm you the links!!! Thanks Ritu for reading this!!! I am going to miss ya''', FF-wise!

I hope i see u on the forum when I visit...aap bilkul gaayab mat hojayega ...Tc.. Nahi...gaayab nahi ho jaungi....I am gonna stick around 😃 🤗

Love and hugs
Ritu 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: bsingapury

hi prag it was very nice end though i can see that still you can start new story from the same point and web more intresting story . so that way i liked your story as you only told that their wedding is going to happen but it has not happened yet so more twist can take place before marriage so that way i loved your ending
haaaas so your are only ending your FFbut keep coming to forum that is good news
take care

That's right Beena..........more twists and turns can be added if we so desire..........but when I start it again I will start straight with the wedding!!! 😉 😆

Originally posted by: sahib29

Praggg ..pehle mujhe jee bhar ke ro lene de 😭...yee tu janti hai kyu ??😭

Ahhhh mannu.... 🤗!!!

Back to FF ...Pragg kya kahu yaar ..kesse kahu ??...am just speechless ..ki tune itna aacha likha hai ki main bata nahi sakti ..and end mujhe bahut aacha laga ek toh wo mil gaye ...aur dusra ki mujhe poori umeed hai ki tu phir se aage continue karegi 😳....

Mei bahut khush hun ke tujhe end bahut accha lagaa! Mei thoda uske baare mei darr rahi thi!!!

and jis tarah tune old raja ka raaz bataya ki wo rani maa ka beta nahi tha ..kabhi main soch bhi nahi sakti thi ki kuch essa hoga 😆....but u know lekin jiske saath hota hai na essa ..uss par kya betati hai uska toh hum andaaza bhi nahi laga sakte !

I am glad ke woh tere liye ekdum surprise tha! 😆 😆

and rani ki study bhi complete ho gayi 👏...and iss part meh everything is perfect ...jis tarah tum ek dun past aur present ko likha ..really bahut aacha laga ..

Haan........mere liye yeh bahut important tha ke Rani apne pairon pe khade rahe! And thanks for liking the style of switching between past and present! 😃

tumhari iss FF ka every character mujhe bahut aacha laga ..isliye nahi wo aache hai ..balki isliye kyu ki tum unhe bahut aacha bana deti ho 😳...u are best dear 👏

Thanks a lot Mannu!! Jo tum aur Paddu mere saath pehle seh iss safar mei rahe ho! 🤗

ab jesse hi tum free ho jayogi jaldi se continue karna 😳

OK

Thankuuuuuu Pragggg for Lovelyyyy FF 🤗...You are most welcome 🤗

Manpreet

Originally posted by: sagaa

hey prags! U ended it? I cant believe it. 😭 Hey Shruti!!!!! Sorry dear... I was running a bit short on time and so had to do it!
it seems that its fast forwarded for more 10 episodes. That is true....I felt the same when writing, but........ anyways you r the creator so whichever way u like it... ya i love the end somehow and the whole part. Thanks dear and sorry for doing it so suddenly! Its nice,Can I hope to see you restarting it later.... well written.. but i m sad that its over!!!!! I am really hoping to restart it around September but I really want YuRa in the serial to come together before I start so that we I will have a good basis for the next part of the story.....which is YuRa's married life!