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Burning In The Fire Set By Himself

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D story is set some days after d college fashion show. Dilshad makes Asad n Zoya marry each other thru emotional blackmail n in d hope dat Asad changes due to Zoya. Asad agrees due to his mom's pressure n Zoya agrees thinking Asad vl change after marriage n start respecting her as she is. Zoya tries to be friends wid Asad but Asad always ignores n insults her taunting her for many things like wearing jeans n being so loud n messy. He always tries to oppress n dominate her teln her to be like d wife he wanted. Zoya does not changes herself n tells Asad dat he is doing wrong. Asad calls her names like disrespectful n shameless. Unknown to anyone, Zoya was setting up her fashion business as a fashion designer. She then tells it to Dilshad n Najma who r happy. She also happily tells to Asad abt it n shows him a gown dat she vl wear @ a fashion show as d designer. Asad gets angry teln her dat girls don't work in dis house out but only manage house. In anger, he also tears her dress. Zoya gets sad n tells him dat he did not done right. Zoya is very angry wid Asad thinking he vl never change n he does not even respects her. Asad's childhood friend Tanveer arrives. She dresses up traditionally n covers her head. Asad always compares Zoya wid Tanveer teln dat she sud learn 4m her n be like her. He also tells dat he is ashamed to call her his wife outside as she vl ruin his reputation. Asad also gets to know dat she ran 4m her wedding 4m her Akram n insults her for dat. He does not listens to her explanations. Zoya again tells him dat he did wrong by tearing her dress n hurt her feelings. She also tells him dat she vl work for which she did a lot of efforts. Asad does not likes it n tells her dat she vl not work. He also tells her dat he don't want people to say dat his wife is a fashion designer who wears such disgusting clothes on ramp. He tells her dat she sud learn manners. Zoya has enough of it n blasts him saying how he is like other old fashioned regressive man n many things. She also tells him y she ran 4m her wedding. She tells him dat she vl leave d house. She packs her bags while Asad luks on shockingly. She was to leave but Dilshad comes in her way. Zoya tells him abt Asad but Dilshad requests her to stay saying dat he is not bad @ heart n he vl change. Zoya losts it n blasts Dilshad addressing her 'Mrs. Dilshad Rashid Ahmed Khan' n 'Aunty' instead of 'Ammi'. She tells her dat all in her house r selfish. She only thinks abt her son n not abt her on wat she wants n how she is feelings. She tells her many other hurtful things dat Asad vl never change n he needs a psychiatrist instead of a wife. She tells her all men r same n Asad just became like his father. She also tells him dat she hates everyone n get his son d type of wife he wants. Zoya then leaves d house. She left d house nearly 2 weeks after d wedding. Asad who hears everything gets shocked n also feels bad dat Zoya behaved rudely wid his mom. Dilshad talks to Asad teln dat cuz of him, Zoya left n it was her fault by making Zoya to marry him in d 1st place. Zoya is living in a house in Bhopal brought by Anwar n Zeenat. Zoya tells everything to Anwar n Zeenat who comes to Bhopal. Asad realizes dat he was wrong. He, Dilshad n Najma tries to call Zoya many times but she does not picks it up. 2 days later, everyone is shocked wen Zoya arrives in KV wid AnZee wid divorce papers. Dilshad n Najma tries to convince Zoya not to divorce Asad. Asad too tries to convince Zoya not to divorce him. AnZee blasts them for ruining Zoya's life by making her marry such a man who does not respects women n their wishes. Zoya emotionally blackmails n threatens Asad into sign d divorce paper. D court says to Zoya to live wid Khan family for 3 months till d divorce is finalized. 2 more divorce signing is remaining to finalize d divorce. AnZee also lives in Bhopal's house to be near to Zoya. Zoya has changed a lot. She does not talks n ignores everyone. She does not even talks to Najma teln her dat she does not want to be blamed for being a wrong influence to her. She spends most of d time of d day in office or locking herself in her room while doing her office work. She even does not eats anything made by them. She cooks food on her own be it good or bad. All including Asad r missing her n her old behaviour. Dilshad n Najma ignores Asad blaming him for Zoya getn changed. Najma even blasts him dat he always interferes in everything n acts bossy wid everyone. Najma even tells him he even interferes wid her dressing sense n hairstyle. Asad feels ashamed by dis realizing how he hurt everyone. He tells Najma dat to wear wat she wants n he vl never interfere in all matters of anyone where he is not needed. Asad thinks dat he did wrong wid Zoya n never respected her cuz of his own ego n regressive thinking. He thinks dat he became like his own dad. He tries to talk to Zoya teln her to change her decision of divorcing him n tells her dat he vl try to become a good husband. Zoya tells him dat he can only try but never be d one. She tells him dat no woman can live wid a man like him n also tells him before becoming a good husband he sud become a good human being. Asad is hurt by it. Tanveer tries to get close to Asad n tells him dat Zoya does not understands him n she is not like d girl he wanted. Asad is not happy wid her talking abt Zoya like dat. As d time passes, Asad realizes n greatly regrets for always insulting Zoya n hurting her feelings. He tries to tell Zoya not to leave him but she tells him dat he sud be happy he is finally getn rid of her dat he always wanted n he only married her due to his mom's pressure n never treated her like human being let alone be wife. She also tells him dat he never wanted a modern n western clothes wearing girls like her n he always judged her by clothes n her being modern NRI. Asad feels guilty. As d times passes, Asad misses Zoya a lot who only ignores him. He even sometimes eats a little part of food made by her whether it is good or bad wen no one is lukn. He is falling wid her while Zoya hates him n always insults n taunts him. Zoya even hates his step-siblings n all people in SM. She also gets to know d man she met @ mazhar is Rashid's dad n she hates him too by taunting him dat his son has followed his dad's shoes. Tanveer tries to get more close to Asad n sometimes touches or clings to him. Asad does not likes dat. He ignores her most of d times n thinks abt Zoya. Zoya finds some changes in Asad n sometimes talks to him normally but makes it clear dat she vl not change her decision of divorcing him. She tells him she lost her faith in love n marriage n she vl never trust any men. Wen there r some days left for signing of 2nd divorce papers arrive, Asad n Zoya gets more friendly. But there r some problems due to which Asad is blamed, Zoya angrily signs d 2nd divorce paper too n making Asad do d same. Asad, Dilshad n Najma r shocked n hurt by it but Tanveer is very happy. Tanveer is d real cause behind d problems. (I cannot disclose d problems here as its suspense) Asad prays for Zoya to return back in his life. Asad realizes dat sumthn is not right n someone does not wants him n Zoya to reunite. He tries to talk it wid Zoya but she ignores him. Tanveer is exposed by a mystery person(I cannot disclose as dis is suspense) Tanveer's exposure is like a slap on Asad's face as he always judged women by their clothes n wid them being modern or traditional. Asad hopes dat she refuses to sign d final divorce paper n trusts him dat he vl never repeat his mistakes. A lot of things happen before d final divorce date. Will Zoya sign d final divorce paper or vl give another chance to their marriage by trusting Asad?



Note
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1. Gaffur n Shirin r real siblings.
2. Shirin is evil n selfish like Tanveer.
3. Digangana Suryavanshi is Nuzhat.
4. Rishabh Sinha is Ayaan.
5. 1st Imraan is Imraan.
6. Nisha Nagpal is Tanveer.
7. There vl be a wardrobe malfunction of Zoya on d ramp.
8. Zoya has no scars on her right hand.
9. Zoya vl be wearing short n revealing clothes along wid jeans.
10. Gudiya Factory Story too vl be there but wid a little change.


So, dis d concept. Do tell me if I sud continue or not😊.


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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3948446/asya-ff-bitfsbh-thread-2-link-on-page-117

Part 1
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3948446/asya-ff-bitfsbh-thread-2-link-on-page-117?pn=3

Part 2


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Poll 1
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Part 4

Note

Part 5

Part 6


Part 7
Part 9(A)

Part 9(B)

Promo 2


Part 10


Part 11


Promo 3

Promo 4


Part 12(A)

Part 12(B)

Promo 5


Part 13(A)

Part 13(B)

Part 14(A)

Part 14(B)

Part 15(A)

Part 15(B)


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Posted: 11 years ago
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One point to note that in Islam once you are divorced you can not get remarried to the same person unless the girl...so in this case Zoya marries someone else and divorces him.
So you may have them sign the third divorce papers but not submit them to court as once it is final and over there is no going back.
Even after the second divorce in Islam there are certain conditions that need to be met before any reconciliation

Apart from this one thing it looks really interesting you should definitely write it


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

One point to note that in Islam once you are divorced you can not get remarried to the same person unless the girl...so in this case Zoya marries someone else and divorces him.

So you may have them sign the third divorce papers but not submit them to court as once it is final and over there is no going back.
Even after the second divorce in Islam there are certain conditions that need to be met before any reconciliation

Apart from this one thing it looks really interesting you should definitely write it



I vl never hurt Islam here n researched on dis. Somewhere its written dat d court gives chance for reconciliation till d final divorce. D old forms of 'talak talak talak' is banned as its misued many times. So, dis procedure is followed n I read it 4m some sites abt muslim divorce in India. In Hindu divorce, d duration of finalization is 6 months. If Zoya signs on d final divorce paper then she can't marry Asad before marrying someone else😊.
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Even though it will be hard for me to read all the scenes with Asad and Tanveer, and Asad insulting Zoya, I still really badly want you to continue and when you do please please please PM me
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Amazing concept dear. I would love to read it. I admit that its realy hard for me to read asad tanu scene and asad insulting zoya. But i m eager to read zoya's outburst. Its nice to read that zoya hate asad's step siblings. I hope there is no crap like zoyan or their so called mona rabert friendship. One request i hope u dont make asya get divorce. Because i heard that in Islam if a girl get divorce then if she wants to remarry her first husband she must have to marry someone else first. Which i cant bear. Apart from this i m excited to read this story. Pls update soon.
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I send u my buddy request. Plz acpt it and do pm me when u update plz
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Originally posted by: Hophop1456


Even though it will be hard for me to read all the scenes with Asad and Tanveer, and Asad insulting Zoya, I still really badly want you to continue and when you do please please please PM me



There vl be another way round wen Zoya vl Asad's life hell wid taunts n insults. As for Asad n Tanveer scenes, it is needed for d story cuz Asad vl later see d proper difference in Zoya n Tanveer. Zoya vl not neglect Asad lik dirt while Asad vl not be happy wid Tanveer getn close to him. Asad vl badly yearn for Zoya. I vl start it after some days n vl PM u too😊.
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Originally posted by: zoyaah


nice start

interesting story
continueee



Yaa, I vl continue soon😊.
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Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

I send u my buddy request. Plz acpt it and do pm me when u update plz



I accepted it n I vl surely PM u😊.
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Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA


Amazing concept dear. Glad u liked it😃

I would love to read it. I admit that its realy hard for me to read asad tanu scene and asad insulting zoya. There vl be other way round where Zoya vl ignore, taunt n insult Asad neglecting him like a dirt. Asad n Tanveer scenes r necessary cuz Asad vl later see d proper difference in Zoya n Tanveer. Asad vl pine very badly for Zoya feeling bad dat even being so close(in d same house), they r so far. Asad vl lose 3 important persons dat is Dilshad, Najma n Zoya n vl only be left wid Tanveer wid whom he vl start to get irritated wid her n vl wish her to go away which vl not be easy as Tanveer vl play games to get Asad for herself.

But i m eager to read zoya's outburst. Zoya vl hate everyone in both d Khan families even Dilshad n Najma cuz Dilshad was concerned abt her son to get married n Zoya vl think dat she used her wid her sweet behaviour n ruined her life eventhough knowing dat Asad hates a girl like her. Zoya even tell her dat she cud not survive in her own marriage.

Its nice to read that zoya hate asad's step siblings. Cuz her step-siblings too vl only be worried for Asad n not think Zoya's feelings n y she may be divorcing him.

I hope there is no crap like zoyan or their so called mona rabert friendship. There is no question of Mona n Rabert cuz its set some days after college fashion show. Zoya vl hate Ayaan also cuz he is one of d male Khan. She vl even go to d extent of calling him womanizer cuz he runs after many girls. She vl call him his bhaijaan's chamcha to insult him.

One request i hope u dont make asya get divorce. Because i heard that in Islam if a girl get divorce then if she wants to remarry her first husband she must have to marry someone else first. Which i cant bear. Dats d main theme of d story where all vl be worried dat if divorce happens then everything vl be finished. Asad vl be pained @ d thought of losing Zoya forever so he vl make several attempts to get Zoya back but she vl make him suffer like hell.

Apart from this i m excited to read this story. I am fed up of d serials where women r shown tolerating idiot husbands n its shown dat women changes her husband wid her love. But here, it vl be different. It vl be a husband trying hard to melt his wife's heart dat has become hard due to him. It vl be wife who vl make her husband suffer n regret badly for his mistakes.

Pls update soon. Yaa, I vl update soon.

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