AsYa FF: BITFSBH-Thread 2 link on Page 117 :) - Page 7

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Dear,

I think 'burning in the fire' suits its title.

How rude is this Asad😡. He is a jerk😡

Continue soon.

Thanks for the pm😃

Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

i think title 1 will be the best n most suitable...
amazing start!!
continue ASAP...

Originally posted by: rakshaanra

2 please

Asad is too rigid deserve Tanu

Originally posted by: royalsgirl93

when are u contining the story!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: KReyAS

awsome concept

and updt

loved it

thnx fr pm

A/N: Guys, I think dis vl be 1st ever story if I don't know where Zoya vl hate even Dilshad n insult her always. She vl think dat she trapped her wid Asad for her own benefit n never thought abt her feelings. In d show too, during Dilshad n Shirin's showdown she was mostly caring abt her 10 day challenge. Dilshad vl not hate Zoya a bit but vl understand her anger 2wards her. I hate cvs for showing Zoya's character as too mahaan. Girls like Zoya r not actually too mahaan. Here, Zoya is shown just like a normal girl like all of us who is getn angry on everyone n blaming them for spoiling her life. As for Zoya n Najma's character, 4m now on either u vl hate them very much or love them very much. While reading dis story, one sud forget dat they r watching Qubool Hai, they sud think dat they r either watching a movie or watching some Channel V shows😊.

Part 2

Next morning, Zoya is wearing a high neck maroon top. Tanveer is dressed in a green salwar kameez wid a dupatta over her head.

Zoya's top: http://www.jabong.com/meira-Maroon-Solid-Top-518912.html

"Zoya bhabhi, nice top ha," Najma wid a smile.

"Thanks Tamatar," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Wats so nice in dis?" asked Asad, "Tanveer is d one who is dressed nicely."

"Asad, Zoya is ur wife not Tanveer," said Dilshad.

"But Ammi, she does not luk like my wife," said Asad.

"Jammy, lets eat. V sud hv d breakfast peacefully," said Tanveer sweetly.

"Ya, I don't want to spoil my mood cuz of her," said Asad.

All ate breakfast.

After breakfast, Asad n Zoya go to their room. Najma who was passing Asad n Zoya's room stops wen she senses some tension.

"Asad, now dat v r married. V sud share our secrets. Can u tell me abt ur other family. I mean Ayaan's family?" asked Zoya.

"I am not at all interested in sharing my secret wid u So, just don't interfere in my matter," said Asad rudely.

"Fine, if u don't want then don't tell me. Wen u feel like then tell me. Anyways, u did wrong yesterday by tearing my dress n hurting my feelings. I did a lot of efforts in designing dat dress. I vl work as a fashion designer for which I did a lot of efforts," said Zoya.

"U vl not work. U vl stay @ home. I don't want people to say dat my wife is a fashion designer who wears disgusting clothes on d ramp," said Asad angrily, "U sud learn some manners on how to live like an ideal woman rather than doing these awful works."

Zoya had enough.

"Enough is enough," yelled Zoya angrily giving him a karate chop wid her hand on his stomach causing him to cry n fall on d bed.

"Zoya, wat hv u done u done?" asked Asad angrily rubbing his stomach.

"Its not me but its u who sud learn manners," said Zoya firmly.

Najma who was still outside was getn worried.

Asad got up 4m d bed n asked, "Y do u think dat I need to learn manners?"

"Cuz u need it," replied Zoya angrily, "U r d same old fashioned regressive man like others. U r d same Male Chauvinistic Pig like others who don't treat women equal. U need to learn manners cuz u never talk properly to me. Wat's my fault? I am an NRI. I wear jeans, skirts, dresses. I am modern. I want to work n be independent. I want to create my own identity. Is dis all a crime? In wat world u r living? U call urself an educated man n an successful businessman but u behave like a rural illiterate man. U always judge people by their clothes. How can determine dat a person is good or bad just by their clothes? From d day, I came here u always insulted me for no reason. Even after marriage, u hv not changed. Y u even agreed to marry me wen u hated me? Y u even agreed to marry me wen I was not ur type? Y u even agreed to marry me wen u hated girls like me? Just cuz ur ammi put pressure on u. Can't u just say 'No' to her n convince her? If ur ammi hv made u to marry a criminal n u knew abt her then wud u hv agreed? Who r u to control my life? Who r u to decide wat I sud do n wat I sud not do? Will u be able to take it if I do d same to u? U hv insulted n taunted me every time. Yesterday, u even tore my dress. Wat if someone tampers wid sumthn u made it wid lots of efforts? As for Akram, I ran 4m my wedding cuz he was not a proper guy. I felt dat he was not a good guy cuz his relatives n friends were not lukn proper. I found sumthn fishy. I refused to marry n my jiju told me to run. Akram's friends were goons. They ran after me to make me forcibly marry him."

Asad n Najma were shocked as they heard it. Asad recalled d goons dat attacked him n Ayaan. He also recalled Zoya crying crying in d mazhar in her wedding dress.

"Zoya...," Asad was abt to speak but he was cut off by Zoya.

"I don't want to hear anything 4m u, Asad Ahmed Khan," said Zoya angrily, "U never liked me na. U never wanted to marry me na. I just wanted to be ur friend after our marriage. I knew neither u loved anyone nor me. But still I tried to be ur friend every time but u treated me like an object. U never cared abt my feelings. I can't live wid u anymore. I am leaving dis house forever. (Zoya removed her engagement ring n threw it angrily in d room) U r a selfish jerk who only thinks abt himself. U only care abt urself n wat u want. U never think abt others feelings. I wish Allah calls me to him rather than me hvng to live u forever."

"Zoya, wat r u saying?" asked Asad shockingly not knowing how to react.

"I am saying right, Asad," said Zoya angrily giving him a karate chop on his shoulder making him fall on d ground, "Wat d hell u thought ha? I vl hear n tolerate ur nonsense? I didn't said n reacted much cuz I thought u vl change but u men can never change. U hv crossed all ur limits. U hated me so much dat u treated me like dis n u wanted to snatch all my happiness. U wanted to snatch my dreams. Wat kind of a husband r u? U r not even worth called a human being. U don't hv heart. D truth is dat u hv become just like ur abbu."

Asad was shocked as she said dat. He got up n faced her.

"Don't say all dis things, Zoya," said Asad wid frustration.

"Y I sud not say dis?" asked Zoya wid frustration wid tears cumn 4m her eyes, "R u not able to accept d truth? Ur abbu left ur ammi for another woman n cuz of u I am leaving u just after 12 days of our marriage. U hv spoiled my life. D toy u called stupid was given to me by my ammi who left me wen I was 5. My abbu left ammi for another woman. From 20 years, I am living like an orphan. U at least hv ur ammi. (opens d cupboard n removes some clothes) Dis dress I hv worn on my engagement n dis dress I hv worn on my wedding. Wats d need of dis? (Zoya angrily tears both d clothes n throws them on d floor) Dis attire u hv worn on ur engagement n dis attire u hv worn on ur wedding. Wats d need of dis? (She tears them angrily too. Asad n Najma r getn shocked. Zoya then removes some jewellery.) Some of these jewelleries I worn on my engagement n wedding n some were given to me as gifts. (She angrily threw them on d floor. She removes some gift items.) These gifts were given to us on our engagement n wedding. Now, its not needed.(She threw d gift items angrily on d floor breaking them.) Now, r u happy wid it? U hv tried to ruin my life by forcing me to change according to ur stupid wishes n beliefs. U never respected me. I can't live wid someone who don't respects me, my feelings n my wishes."

Asad was shockingly watching Zoya ruining all their wedding stuffs. Zoya threw her suitcase on her bed n started packing her clothes n things while Asad n Najma luks on shockingly. Najma has tears in her eyes. Zoya finishes wid her packing.

"Goodbye, Asad Ahmed Khan. Now, u can live ur life happily as u want. I vl not be there to trouble n irritate u. Our relationship is over," said Zoya angrily n went out of d room.

Asad is not able to react. Zoya came in d hall. Dilshad comes in her way.

"Zoya, where r u going?" asked Dilshad.

"Ammi, I am leaving dis house. I can't live wid Asad anymore. U see how he treats me. He does not respects my wishes n he wants to ruin my dreams," replied Zoya.

"Zoya, Asad is not bad @ heart. He vl change. Give him some time," said Dilshad.

Zoya lost it. She cud not believe her still supporting Asad.

"Mrs. Dilshad Ahmed Khan, wat do u think u r trying to do ha?" asked Zoya angrily, "All r selfish in ur house. U were always sweet to me so dat u can trap me for Asad. U always only thnk abt ur son. U always care abt him dat how he vl change. Hv u ever care abt me me dat how vl I live wid such a person who hates girls like me? Hv u ever thought abt my feelings? U tuk advantage of me being orphan. U even betrayed aapi n jiju who thought u as their friend. U ruined not only mine but ur son's life too by emotionally blackmailing us to get married. U said dat Asad vl change if he gets a wife like me. He vl never change whoever he gets as his wife. His world only revolves around himself. Asad needs a psychiatrist instead of a wife. He always say dat my parents never taught me ant any manners n etiquettes. But d truth is dat its u who never taught him any manners n etiquettes 4m his childhood. If u had taught him any good things then he wud not hv been like dis. I don't want to get stuck wid ur regressive thinking n MCP son n spoil my entire life. My ammi, aapi n jiju hv not made me to for dis day to get married to such a man. U were not able to save ur marriage so u want to show off to everyone dat u got ur son married to an NRI girl. U never loved me. U people only know how to get someone married n then change d girl according to u. U people r only interested in making women a baby giving machine. I trusted u very much but u broke my trust. I thought dat u were like my ammi but u can never take my ammi's place. I vl never forgive u all for hurting me n ruining my life. I hate u all. All men r same n Asad just became like his abbu. U sud better get him d type of wife he wants. Even yesterday, I was an orphan n even today, I am an orphan."

Zoya left d house wid her trolley bag. Asad n Najma who were listening to everything got shocked n felt bad @ how Zoya talked to their ammi. They came in d hall.

"Ammi, how can Zoya talk to u like dat?" asked Asad restlessly.

"Dis was expected, Asad," replied Dilshad calmly, "All dis happened cuz of u. Cuz of u, Zoya left. It was my fault for putting pressure on u to get married to Zoya. Now, she even hates me. She thinks dat I trapped her wid u. I genuinely liked her n thought dat she vl be best for u. I thought u vl start liking her after marriage n u vl change. But I was wrong. U can never change. There was sumthn wrong wid my upbringing. In 2days time n being an educated n highly successful businessman how can u be so regressive? How can crush Zoya's dreams to become a fashion designer? Zoya did a lot of efforts for it. Wat answer vl v give to her aapi n jiju? Wat they vl think abt us especially u? U don't deserve her. She deserves better. I made a mistake by making Zoya to marry a guy like u. U can't be my son. U only luk like Shirin's son cuz her family is only regressive like u. U became lile abbu. U became worse than him. Rashid at least loved n respected me but u never loved n respected Zoya. U always hurted her. U only loved ur ego n regressive thinking."

Asad thinks abt abt all d times he hurt Zoya especially after their marriage. He thinks abt Zoya's outburst in their room n how she ruined all their wedding stuffs.

"Ammi, Zoya was very hurt. She is really fed up of bhaijaan. Now she left us cuz of him. Bhaijaan, even u made a lot of efforts to set up ur own business then how u can crush Zoya's dreams. U even tore her dress. Now, Zoya angrily ruined all her n bhaijaan's wedding stuffs. I saw it wid my own eyes," said Najma wid tears cumn 4m her eyes.

"Ammi, don't tell me dat I am like Shirin's son," said Asad in a hurtful voice.

"I am teln wat luks like truth. If u had really been my son then u wud hv accepted as Zoya is," said Dilshad, "U sud support her in her dreams but u told her dat women don't work outside d house. R u really her husband? Are these wat I hv taught u all these years?"

"Ammi, I want to improve my mistake. I hv realized dat wat I did was wrong. I vl call her now to come back. I vl try dat I never hurt her," said Asad.

"Bhaijaan, wat do u mean by trying?" asked Najma in a cold voice, "After so much, u r still thinking of trying not to hurt her. Can't u just be happy to see her happy?"

"Najma, I know wat u mean. I really want to improve my mistake," said Asad.

"Then call her," said Dilshad.

Asad calls Zoya. Zoya who was in taxi sees Asad' as d caller. She cuts d call.

"Ammi, she cut d call. She really wants to leave us forever," said Asad.

"She is fed up wid u n she is very angry. V sud keep on trying," said Dilshad.

Zoya reaches a house in Bhopal dat was brought by Anwar n Zeenat. A maid-servant comes to take d luggage.

"Zoya bitiya, u here?" asked d maid-servant.

"Khala, plz make tea for me," requested Zoya.

"Okay bitiya, u get fresh. I vl go n make tea," said d maid-servant.

Zoya goes in her washroom n washes her face. She has tears in her eyes thinking how Asad always treated her. She wipes her face n comes out of her washroom. D maid-servant brings her tea.

"If u need anything else then tell me," said d maid-servant wid a smile.

Zoya starts sipping her tea. Asad, Dilshad n Najma tries to call Zoya many times but she does not picks it up.

"Ammi, Zoya bahot gusse me hai," said Najma, "Bhaijaan sud be happy now."

Asad gets shocked.

Zoya calls her aapi. Zeenat was sitting wid Anwar on a sofa in d hall.

"Hello Zoya," said Zeenat.

"Aapi," said Zoya n started to cry.

"Zoya, wat happened? Y r u crying?" asked Zeenat worriedly.

Anwar also got worried.

"Aapi, everyone played wid my feelings. Dilshad Aunty trapped me," replied Zooya.

Zeenat was shocked to hear Dilshad Aunty' instead of Phuphi' or Ammi'.

"Zoya, tell me dear. Wat happened?" asked Zeenat.

Zoya tells her everything dat happened to her 4m d time she 1^st met Asad till now. Zeenat got angry as Zoya told her everything.

"Zoya, don't cry. V vl talk later," said Zeenat n hung up.

"How dare they ruin my Zoya's life? How dare they make her cry?" asked Zeenat angrily.

"Zeenat, wat happened?" asked Anwar worriedly, "Is there any problem?"

"Anwar, v need to move Bhopal right now," replied Zeenat as she told him everything.

Anwar also got angry.

"They hv hurt our Zoya. Dilshad Bi told us dat our Zoya vl remain happily but her son always hurt her. He even tried to stop Zoya 4m following her dreams. V vl go Bhopal to our house where Zoya has come. V vl not let her get hurt again," said Anwar angrily.

Zoya removed her music box 4m her bag n started playing it. She remembered her ammi giving her on her 5^th birthday which was d last birthday she celebrated wid her ammi.

"Ammi, y did u left me?" asked Zoya wid tears in her eyes.

Scene shifts to KV where Asad, Najma n Dilshad r seeing d mess Zoya made of d room in anger. They r very shocked to see how Zoya expressed her anger. Asad's eyes fell on d engagement ring dat was thrown by Zoya. He picks it up n luks @ it. He recalls himself putting dat engagement ring on her finger. He then luks @ d torn clothes n recalls his engagement n wedding. He luks @ d jewellery n recalls them worn by Zoya. He luks @ d gift items n recalls them being given by people on their engagement n wedding.

"I am calling her again," said Asad.

Asad calls Zoya but she cuts it.

"Zoya again disconnected d phone," said Asad.

"Now Asad, u sud sit quietly n ask urself whether wat u all thought abt Zoya ior behaved wid her was right or wrong? Wat got in ur mind before doing all these things?" asked Dilshad, "U urself hv 3 sisters. Imagine their husband hurting them d same way."

Asad got shocked @ wat Dilshad said.

"Bhaijaan, u must not hv forgot wat type ofguy Nikhat had got n how is her family who demands a lot. Now, weneva u vl see Nikhat's hurt face then Zoya's hurt face too vl come before u. U vl never be able to forget wat u all did wid her," said Najma firmly.

Asad got more shocked @ wat Najma said.

In d evening, Anwar n Zeenat arrives home.

"Khala, plz make tea for aapi n jiju," said Zoya who was sitting on a sofa in d hall.

"Okay bitiya," said d maid-servant.

Zoya hugs her aapi n jiju wid tearful eyes.

"Aapi, jiju, u both came here for me?" asked Zoya wid tears in her eyes.

"Yes, my dear," replied Zeenat wiping her tears, "Who else v vl come for?"

"Zoya, now v vl solve all ur problems," said Anwar.

Zoya smiled @ her aapi n jiu who smiled back @ her.

Precap: #Zoya comes in KV wid AnZee after 2 days wid divorce paper. AnZee blasts them for ruining Zoya's life by making her marry such a man who does not respects women n their wishes. D trio gives divorce papers to Asad n makes him sign it.

#Next day, Zoya arrives in KV teln dat till d divorce is finalized she vl live wid them for 3 months n they sud not interfere in her matters. Asad, Dilshad n Najma calls Zoya on d dining table to hv food but Zoya angrily pushes her share of food off d table. She tells them dat she vl not eat anything made by them but she vl cook her food on her own. All r shocked. Asad recalls how he pushed Zoya's food off d table n insulted her.

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